| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.596 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1233 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1233 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "race" | | 15 | "kaleidoscope" | | 16 | "otherworldly" | | 17 | "dance" | | 18 | "echoing" | | 19 | "stomach" | | 20 | "grave" | | 21 | "trembled" | | 22 | "raced" | | 23 | "depths" | | 24 | "weight" | | 25 | "enigma" | | 26 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 75.40% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 5 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "d with excitement" | | 2 | "felt a tug" | | 3 | "felt a chill" | | 4 | "e with fear" |
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| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1228 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 977 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 20 | | Isolde | 11 | | Rory | 21 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.425 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to echo from the shadows" | | 1 | "patterns that seemed to shift as she moved" | | 2 | "as if sensing its prey had escaped" | | 3 | "as if listening to the very essence of the grove" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1228 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 25.06 | | std | 12.95 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | |
| 59.64% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the ethereal half-Fae seer who had led them here." | | 1 | "The water shimmered, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw visions swirling within—fragments of memories, shadows of the past." | | 2 | "The water surged, and a figure emerged from the depths—a shimmering silhouette, half-formed and flickering like a candle in the wind." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 982 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.020366598778004074 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004073319755600814 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 11.92 | | std | 4.87 | | cv | 0.408 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 57.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3592233009708738 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 1 | "She brushed her fingers against" | | 2 | "They glided beside her, a" | | 3 | "She glanced back at the" | | 4 | "They had come seeking answers," | | 5 | "she said, kneeling to examine" | | 6 | "She glanced at Eva, who" | | 7 | "She pointed to a hollow" | | 8 | "They pressed on, the path" | | 9 | "She felt alive, yet a" | | 10 | "It wrapped around them, pulling" | | 11 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 12 | "She glanced at Nyx and" | | 13 | "She grabbed Eva’s arm, pulling" | | 14 | "It hovered above the pool," | | 15 | "it intoned, a blend of" |
| | ratio | 0.19 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered as Aurora" | | 1 | "A soft breeze brushed against" | | 2 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 3 | "The grove pulsed with life," | | 4 | "Rory whispered, her bright blue" | | 5 | "She brushed her fingers against" | | 6 | "Nyx replied, their voice a" | | 7 | "They glided beside her, a" | | 8 | "Rory nodded, her heart racing." | | 9 | "She glanced back at the" | | 10 | "Eva’s eyes sparkled with excitement," | | 11 | "Isolde said, her silver hair" | | 12 | "Eva muttered, her voice laced" | | 13 | "Rory chuckled, but unease crept" | | 14 | "They had come seeking answers," | | 15 | "The grove felt alive, as" | | 16 | "Rory reached out to touch" | | 17 | "The petals shimmered like starlight," | | 18 | "she said, kneeling to examine" | | 19 | "Nyx warned, their form flickering" |
| | ratio | 0.94 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating." | | 1 | "She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the ethereal half-Fae seer who had led them here." | | 2 | "The grove felt alive, as if it were watching them, waiting for their next move." | | 3 | "She glanced at Eva, who had wandered a few steps ahead, her curiosity pulling her toward a cluster of ancient trees." | | 4 | "Eva hesitated, her hand hovering just above the glowing hollow." | | 5 | "The golden light dimmed, retreating into the hollow as if sensing its prey had escaped." | | 6 | "The air thickened with the scent of damp earth and blooming flowers, a heady mix that made Rory’s senses tingle." | | 7 | "It wrapped around them, pulling at their hearts, a siren’s call that beckoned them deeper into the grove." | | 8 | "Isolde closed her eyes, tilting her head as if listening to the very essence of the grove." | | 9 | "The shadows around them seemed to deepen, stretching and twisting as if alive." | | 10 | "She glanced at Nyx, who stood still, their glowing violet eyes scanning the surroundings." | | 11 | "The trees loomed overhead, their branches intertwining like fingers, creating a canopy that filtered the light into a kaleidoscope of colors." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her silver hair flowing like a river" | | 1 | "Nyx warned, their form flickering" | | 2 | "Eva called, her voice bright with discovery" | | 3 | "Nyx replied, their tone serious" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice low and melodic" | | 5 | "Isolde interrupted, her lavender eyes narrowing" | | 6 | "Rory suggested, her voice steady" | | 7 | "Eva asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "Nyx countered, their form flickering with uncertainty" | | 9 | "Eva asked, frustration creeping into her tone" | | 10 | "Isolde replied, her voice steady" | | 11 | "Nyx urged, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 12 | "Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 13 | "Eva laughed, her voice echoing in the stillness" | | 14 | "Eva protested, her eyes wide with fear" | | 15 | "it intoned, a blend of curiosity and menace" | | 16 | "Isolde spoke, her voice steady despite the tension" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 25 | | fancyCount | 13 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Isolde interrupted (interrupt)" | | 4 | "Rory suggested (suggest)" | | 5 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "Nyx urged (urge)" | | 7 | "Eva laughed (laugh)" | | 8 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 9 | "Rory shouted (shout)" | | 10 | "Nyx shouted (shout)" | | 11 | "Eva protested (protest)" | | 12 | "Isolde spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.532 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.52 | | effectiveRatio | 0.52 | |