Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YHMNDMK5583JQ6BPGS6G

Run Details

Duration:
36.4s
Cost:
$0.001184

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary between the mundane world and the Fae Grove. A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating. She paused, taking in the vibrant colors that danced before her eyes. The grove pulsed with life, each flower a splash of color against the lush green backdrop. “Is this real?” Rory whispered, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. She brushed her fingers against a nearby flower, its petals soft and velvety. “Real enough,” Nyx replied, their voice a whisper that seemed to echo from the shadows. They glided beside her, a silhouette of living shadow, shifting between solid and incorporeal. “But tread carefully. The Grove has its own rules.” Rory nodded, her heart racing. She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the ethereal half-Fae seer who had led them here. Eva’s eyes sparkled with excitement, while Isolde’s pale lavender gaze seemed to pierce through the very fabric of reality. “Time moves differently here,” Isolde said, her silver hair flowing like a river. “An hour inside may stretch into days outside. Keep your wits about you.” “Great, just what we need,” Eva muttered, her voice laced with sarcasm. “A time warp on top of everything else.” Rory chuckled, but unease crept into her chest. They had come seeking answers, a way to confront the darkness that loomed over their lives. The grove felt alive, as if it were watching them, waiting for their next move. As they ventured deeper, the flora thickened, wildflowers blooming in impossible hues. Rory reached out to touch a cluster of blossoms that glowed faintly in the dim light. The petals shimmered like starlight, and she felt a warmth radiate from them, a pulse that matched the rhythm of her heart. “Look at this,” she said, kneeling to examine a flower with petals shaped like delicate wings. “It’s beautiful.” “Beauty can be deceiving,” Nyx warned, their form flickering. “Not all that glitters is harmless.” Rory straightened, a shiver running down her spine. She glanced at Eva, who had wandered a few steps ahead, her curiosity pulling her toward a cluster of ancient trees. The trunks twisted and turned, their bark etched with intricate patterns that seemed to shift as she moved. “Hey, check this out!” Eva called, her voice bright with discovery. She pointed to a hollow in one of the trees, where a soft, golden light pulsed from within. “What do you think it is?” “Probably a trap,” Nyx replied, their tone serious. “Or a lure. We should be cautious.” But Eva, undeterred, stepped closer. The light flickered, casting shadows that danced around her. Rory felt a tug of worry, but before she could voice it, Isolde stepped forward, her presence commanding. “Stay back, Eva,” Isolde said, her voice low and melodic. “The light calls to you, but it may not be what it seems.” Eva hesitated, her hand hovering just above the glowing hollow. “It’s so beautiful, though. Can’t we just—” “No,” Isolde interrupted, her lavender eyes narrowing. “The Grove tests those who enter. We must not be swayed by its allure.” Rory watched as Eva withdrew, a mix of disappointment and relief washing over her. The golden light dimmed, retreating into the hollow as if sensing its prey had escaped. “Let’s keep moving,” Rory suggested, her voice steady. “We need to find what we came for.” They pressed on, the path winding through towering trees and vibrant underbrush. The air thickened with the scent of damp earth and blooming flowers, a heady mix that made Rory’s senses tingle. She felt alive, yet a thread of unease lingered in the back of her mind. “Do you hear that?” Eva asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Rory strained to listen. A soft melody floated through the air, ethereal and haunting. It wrapped around them, pulling at their hearts, a siren’s call that beckoned them deeper into the grove. “It’s beautiful,” Rory breathed, entranced. “Or dangerous,” Nyx countered, their form flickering with uncertainty. “We must remain vigilant.” Isolde closed her eyes, tilting her head as if listening to the very essence of the grove. “The song speaks of secrets and shadows. It reveals what lies beneath the surface.” “What does that even mean?” Eva asked, frustration creeping into her tone. “It means we must tread carefully,” Isolde replied, her voice steady. “The Grove holds many truths, but not all are meant to be uncovered.” Rory felt a chill run through her. The shadows around them seemed to deepen, stretching and twisting as if alive. She glanced at Nyx, who stood still, their glowing violet eyes scanning the surroundings. “Stay close,” Nyx urged, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. “The shadows are restless.” As they moved forward, the melody grew louder, wrapping around them like a warm embrace. Rory felt her heart race, a mix of fear and exhilaration. The trees loomed overhead, their branches intertwining like fingers, creating a canopy that filtered the light into a kaleidoscope of colors. “Look!” Eva pointed to a clearing ahead, where the trees parted to reveal a shimmering pool. The water glowed with an otherworldly light, reflecting the colors of the grove in a mesmerizing dance. “Is it safe?” Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Only one way to find out,” Eva said, stepping forward. “Wait!” Rory called, but Eva was already at the edge of the pool, her reflection rippling in the luminous water. “Come on, Rory! It’s amazing!” Eva laughed, her voice echoing in the stillness. Rory hesitated, a knot of anxiety tightening in her stomach. She glanced at Nyx and Isolde, who exchanged a knowing look. “Be cautious,” Isolde warned, her tone grave. “The water may reveal more than you wish to see.” Eva knelt, her fingers skimming the surface. The water shimmered, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw visions swirling within—fragments of memories, shadows of the past. “Eva, don’t!” Rory shouted, but it was too late. With a sudden splash, Eva plunged her hands into the pool, and the water erupted in a cascade of light. The grove trembled, the melody shifting into a discordant wail. Shadows twisted and writhed, creeping closer, as if drawn to the disturbance. “Get back!” Nyx shouted, their form solidifying as they stepped between Eva and the encroaching darkness. Rory’s heart raced. She grabbed Eva’s arm, pulling her back. “What did you do?” “I just wanted to see!” Eva protested, her eyes wide with fear. The water surged, and a figure emerged from the depths—a shimmering silhouette, half-formed and flickering like a candle in the wind. It hovered above the pool, its voice a haunting echo. “Who dares disturb the waters of the Grove?” it intoned, a blend of curiosity and menace. Rory’s breath caught in her throat. The figure’s gaze swept over them, and she felt its weight pressing down, a challenge wrapped in enigma. “We seek knowledge,” Isolde spoke, her voice steady despite the tension. “We come in peace.” The figure paused, its form shifting like smoke. “Knowledge comes at a price. What are you willing to sacrifice?” Rory exchanged glances with Eva and Nyx, uncertainty swirling in her chest. The grove pulsed around them, alive with secrets waiting to be uncovered. But at what cost?
total_cost0.0011839700000000001

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.596
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"shimmered"
count3
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"whisper"
count4
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"scanning"
count1
14
word"race"
count1
15
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
16
word"otherworldly"
count1
17
word"dance"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
19
word"stomach"
count1
20
word"grave"
count1
21
word"trembled"
count1
22
word"raced"
count1
23
word"depths"
count1
24
word"weight"
count1
25
word"enigma"
count1
26
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"echo"
4"racing"
5"loomed"
6"warmth"
7"pulse"
8"down her spine"
9"etched"
10"intricate"
11"flickered"
12"chill"
13"scanning"
14"race"
15"kaleidoscope"
16"otherworldly"
17"dance"
18"echoing"
19"stomach"
20"grave"
21"trembled"
22"raced"
23"depths"
24"weight"
25"enigma"
26"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
75.40% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences84
matches
0"e with wonder"
1"d with excitement"
2"felt a tug"
3"felt a chill"
4"e with fear"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1228
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount977
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Fae2
Grove1
Eva20
Isolde11
Rory21
Nyx9
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Isolde"
3"Rory"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.425
windowScore0.167
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"whisper that seemed to echo from the shadows"
1"patterns that seemed to shift as she moved"
2"as if sensing its prey had escaped"
3"as if listening to the very essence of the grove"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1228
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.06
std12.95
cv0.517
sampleLengths
067
125
238
344
426
520
639
750
818
915
1047
1135
1215
1332
1423
1517
1621
1729
1816
1947
2012
2132
225
2313
2431
2512
2624
2734
2816
2947
3033
3111
3210
3320
3413
3521
3617
3727
389
3942
4016
4114
4212
4331
4416
4524
4615
4719
4828
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"were watching"
59.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences103
ratio0.029
matches
0"She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the ethereal half-Fae seer who had led them here."
1"The water shimmered, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw visions swirling within—fragments of memories, shadows of the past."
2"The water surged, and a figure emerged from the depths—a shimmering silhouette, half-formed and flickering like a candle in the wind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount982
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.020366598778004074
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004073319755600814
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.92
std4.87
cv0.408
sampleLengths
022
117
212
316
412
513
615
714
89
95
1020
1119
1213
1313
1412
158
168
1716
1815
1912
2016
2122
2216
232
249
256
268
2721
2818
2911
3018
316
328
337
345
359
3618
3710
3813
3910
407
417
4214
4314
4415
458
468
4712
4820
4915
57.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3592233009708738
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences84
matches
0"She paused, taking in the"
1"She brushed her fingers against"
2"They glided beside her, a"
3"She glanced back at the"
4"They had come seeking answers,"
5"she said, kneeling to examine"
6"She glanced at Eva, who"
7"She pointed to a hollow"
8"They pressed on, the path"
9"She felt alive, yet a"
10"It wrapped around them, pulling"
11"She glanced at Nyx, who"
12"She glanced at Nyx and"
13"She grabbed Eva’s arm, pulling"
14"It hovered above the pool,"
15"it intoned, a blend of"
ratio0.19
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The air shimmered as Aurora"
1"A soft breeze brushed against"
2"She paused, taking in the"
3"The grove pulsed with life,"
4"Rory whispered, her bright blue"
5"She brushed her fingers against"
6"Nyx replied, their voice a"
7"They glided beside her, a"
8"Rory nodded, her heart racing."
9"She glanced back at the"
10"Eva’s eyes sparkled with excitement,"
11"Isolde said, her silver hair"
12"Eva muttered, her voice laced"
13"Rory chuckled, but unease crept"
14"They had come seeking answers,"
15"The grove felt alive, as"
16"Rory reached out to touch"
17"The petals shimmered like starlight,"
18"she said, kneeling to examine"
19"Nyx warned, their form flickering"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating."
1"She glanced back at the others—Eva, her childhood friend, and Isolde, the ethereal half-Fae seer who had led them here."
2"The grove felt alive, as if it were watching them, waiting for their next move."
3"She glanced at Eva, who had wandered a few steps ahead, her curiosity pulling her toward a cluster of ancient trees."
4"Eva hesitated, her hand hovering just above the glowing hollow."
5"The golden light dimmed, retreating into the hollow as if sensing its prey had escaped."
6"The air thickened with the scent of damp earth and blooming flowers, a heady mix that made Rory’s senses tingle."
7"It wrapped around them, pulling at their hearts, a siren’s call that beckoned them deeper into the grove."
8"Isolde closed her eyes, tilting her head as if listening to the very essence of the grove."
9"The shadows around them seemed to deepen, stretching and twisting as if alive."
10"She glanced at Nyx, who stood still, their glowing violet eyes scanning the surroundings."
11"The trees loomed overhead, their branches intertwining like fingers, creating a canopy that filtered the light into a kaleidoscope of colors."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"Isolde said, her silver hair flowing like a river"
1"Nyx warned, their form flickering"
2"Eva called, her voice bright with discovery"
3"Nyx replied, their tone serious"
4"Isolde said, her voice low and melodic"
5"Isolde interrupted, her lavender eyes narrowing"
6"Rory suggested, her voice steady"
7"Eva asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"Nyx countered, their form flickering with uncertainty"
9"Eva asked, frustration creeping into her tone"
10"Isolde replied, her voice steady"
11"Nyx urged, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
12"Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
13"Eva laughed, her voice echoing in the stillness"
14"Eva protested, her eyes wide with fear"
15"it intoned, a blend of curiosity and menace"
16"Isolde spoke, her voice steady despite the tension"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx warned (warn)"
3"Isolde interrupted (interrupt)"
4"Rory suggested (suggest)"
5"Rory breathed (breathe)"
6"Nyx urged (urge)"
7"Eva laughed (laugh)"
8"Isolde warned (warn)"
9"Rory shouted (shout)"
10"Nyx shouted (shout)"
11"Eva protested (protest)"
12"Isolde spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.532
leniency1
rawRatio0.52
effectiveRatio0.52
65.7081%