| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 92.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1258 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1258 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "fleeting" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "effortless" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "complex" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "sanctuary" | | 10 | "predator" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1251 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 876 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Celtic | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.799 | | wordCount | 1251 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a question, but as a statement of fact" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 33.81 | | std | 23.91 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 108 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 67 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 60 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 83 | | 36 | 21 |
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| 92.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was tucked" | | 1 | "was wedged" | | 2 | "were struck" |
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| 99.75% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "was leaving" | | 1 | "was walking" |
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| 86.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "He was an information broker; knowing things was his trade." | | 1 | "The memory flooded back unwelcome—rain slicking the cobblestones, the weight of his stare on my back, the sickening mixture of terror and regret that had propelled me into the London night." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 554 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.036101083032490974 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010830324909747292 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 12.39 | | std | 7.85 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 47.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.32673267326732675 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "He stood on the landing," | | 1 | "He looked as if he" | | 2 | "My breath caught, lodging somewhere" | | 3 | "He said my name not" | | 4 | "His voice was the same" | | 5 | "I tightened my grip on" | | 6 | "His eyes, one the colour" | | 7 | "They catalogued the faded band" | | 8 | "I put my weight into" | | 9 | "It didn't budge." | | 10 | "I looked down." | | 11 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 12 | "He stepped over the threshold" | | 13 | "I took a step back," | | 14 | "He followed, his mismatched eyes" | | 15 | "He was a predator assessing" | | 16 | "he observed, running a gloved" | | 17 | "I crossed my arms, a" | | 18 | "He turned his full attention" | | 19 | "He took another step closer" |
| | ratio | 0.707 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The cheap lock gave a" | | 1 | "He stood on the landing," | | 2 | "He looked as if he" | | 3 | "My breath caught, lodging somewhere" | | 4 | "The name was a curse" | | 5 | "He said my name not" | | 6 | "His voice was the same" | | 7 | "A faint, almost untraceable French" | | 8 | "I tightened my grip on" | | 9 | "A corner of his mouth" | | 10 | "His eyes, one the colour" | | 11 | "They catalogued the faded band" | | 12 | "I put my weight into" | | 13 | "It didn't budge." | | 14 | "I looked down." | | 15 | "The tip of his polished" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 17 | "He stepped over the threshold" | | 18 | "The air in my small" | | 19 | "A low thud from" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked as if he had materialised from a different, far more expensive world and simply forgotten to leave." | | 1 | "The memory flooded back unwelcome—rain slicking the cobblestones, the weight of his stare on my back, the sickening mixture of terror and regret that had propel…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He shifted, and the door eased open again, his advance effortless" | | 1 | "he said, his tone shifting, shedding the layer of mockery" | | 2 | "He turned back, his expression unreadable" | | 3 | "Lucien continued, his voice devoid of all emotion" | | 4 | "I whispered, the word barely audible" | | 5 | "Lucien said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial murmur" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he observed (observe)" | | 1 | "Lucien continued (continue)" | | 2 | "I whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.128 | | leniency | 0.256 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |