Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YJRR7MNZA8QDPAGDZ72M

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Duration:
37.1s
Cost:
$0.035049
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The cheap lock gave a final, protesting click and the door swung inward. He stood on the landing, a ghost clad in a tailored charcoal suit, perfectly framed by the peeling paint of the corridor. One hand rested on an ivory-handled cane, the other was tucked into his pocket. He looked as if he had materialised from a different, far more expensive world and simply forgotten to leave. Lucien Moreau. My breath caught, lodging somewhere between my throat and my stomach. The name was a curse I thought I had forgotten how to speak. "Aurora." He said my name not as a question, but as a statement of fact. A claim. His voice was the same low baritone, smooth as aged whisky and just as dangerous. A faint, almost untraceable French accent clung to the edges of his words. I tightened my grip on the edge of the door, my knuckles turning white. "Get out." A corner of his mouth tilted upwards, a fleeting, humourless smirk. His eyes, one the colour of warm amber, the other a void of pure black, swept over me. They catalogued the faded band t-shirt, the worn jeans, the frantic pulse beating in my neck. "That is hardly a greeting for an old... acquaintance." "We were never acquainted, Luc. We were a mistake." I put my weight into the door, pushing it closed. It didn't budge. I looked down. The tip of his polished leather shoe was wedged in the gap, a silent, unmovable barrier. "An unfortunate turn of phrase." He shifted his weight, and the door eased open again, his advance effortless. "I prefer to think of us as an unresolved chord." He stepped over the threshold without an invitation. The air in my small flat immediately felt thinner, charged with the familiar scent of his cologne, something dark and complex with notes of old books and winter frost. A low thud from Silas’ pub downstairs punctuated the sudden silence. I took a step back, then another, the worn floorboards groaning under my feet. He followed, his mismatched eyes taking in every detail of my sanctuary. The overflowing bookshelves, the stack of takeaway containers from the Golden Empress by the bin, the half-finished cup of tea growing cold on the coffee table. He was a predator assessing a new den. "Cosy," he observed, running a gloved finger along the dusty spine of a book on Celtic mythology. "You have a certain fondness for chaos, don't you, Carter?" "What do you want?" I crossed my arms, a pathetic attempt to shield myself from his gaze. "Direct as ever." He turned his full attention back to me, and the compact space of my living room compressed around us. "I find it a refreshing, if somewhat brutish, quality." "I don't have time for your games." "No?" He took another step closer. I held my ground, refusing to retreat further. He stopped barely an arm's length away, close enough that I could see the fine silver threads in his platinum hair under the dim light. "What do you have time for, then? Delivering spring rolls? Hiding above a pub pretending the world can't find you?" The words were a physical blow. Heat flared in my cheeks. He knew about my job. Of course he knew. He was an information broker; knowing things was his trade. "My life is none of your business. It stopped being your business the night I walked out of your office and didn't look back." "Ah, yes. A dramatic exit." His amber eye glittered with something that might have been amusement, or perhaps something crueller. "Though you did look back. Just once. As you reached the end of the alley." I flinched. He remembered. The memory flooded back unwelcome—rain slicking the cobblestones, the weight of his stare on my back, the sickening mixture of terror and regret that had propelled me into the London night. "I need your help," he said, his tone shifting, shedding the layer of mockery. It was now flat, direct. It was the voice I remembered from dark rooms where dangerous bargains were struck. I laughed, a sharp, ugly sound. "My help? What could I possibly offer you? You're Lucien Moreau. You have spies and contacts and God knows what else spilling out of your pockets." "What I require is not something that can be bought or threatened into submission." He moved towards the single window that overlooked the rain-soaked street, his back to me. "I require a particular way of thinking. A mind that connects patterns others dismiss as coincidence. A mind that once untangled a Fae succession crisis with nothing more than a shipping manifest and a nursery rhyme." My blood ran cold. "That was a long time ago." "Was it?" He turned back, his expression unreadable. "Some skills, I imagine, are like scars. They do not fade." He glanced at my left wrist, where the faint, crescent-shaped scar was visible below the cuff of my sleeve. An involuntary shiver traced its way up my spine. "The answer is no." My voice was firmer than I felt. "Whatever it is, find someone else. I'm out of that world. I'm done." "Are you?" He let the question hang in the air, heavy and suffocating. He walked back towards the door, and for a wild, hopeful moment, I thought he was leaving. He paused with his hand on the knob, his gaze locking with mine. "You left Cardiff in a hurry. You told your friend Eva it was because of an argument with your parents over your law degree." A knot of dread tightened in my stomach. "That's..." "A lie," he finished for me. "A neat, convenient lie to cover a much uglier truth." He reached into the inner pocket of his suit jacket and withdrew a single, folded photograph. He didn't offer it, just held it between his fingers. "His name is Evan. He has a temper. And a habit of leaving bruises that don't always fade." My breath hitched. The pub noise from downstairs, the hum of the fridge, the tick-tock of the cheap clock on my wall, it all faded into a deafening roar in my ears. How could he know? Eva was the only person I had ever told. The only one. "You left because he put you in the hospital," Lucien continued, his voice devoid of all emotion. It was colder and sharper than the blade I knew he kept hidden in his cane. "You ran to London to disappear. To become someone else. To be safe." "Stop," I whispered, the word barely audible. "I can appreciate the desire for a quiet life, Aurora. Truly, I can." He took a slow, deliberate step towards me, closing the distance I had tried so hard to maintain. His shadow fell over me. "But the past does not simply vanish because we wish it to." He unfolded the photograph. It wasn't a picture of Evan. It was a picture of me, taken from a distance. I was walking down Brick Lane on my way to Eva's flat, a bag of groceries in my hand. I looked tired, but anonymous. Safe. But in the background, half-hidden in a doorway across the street, was a man. His face was in shadow, indistinct, but the build, the posture... I knew it. My heart hammered against my ribs, a frantic, trapped bird. "He's here, Aurora," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial murmur. "He's in London. And he's been looking for you."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.051
92.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"fleeting"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"complex"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"predator"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"fleeting"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"effortless"
5"charged"
6"familiar"
7"complex"
8"silence"
9"sanctuary"
10"predator"
11"unreadable"
12"traced"
13"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1251
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount876
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French1
Golden1
Empress1
Celtic1
London1
Evan1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Lucien3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Evan"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.799
wordCount1251
matches
0"not as a question, but as a statement of fact"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean33.81
std23.91
cv0.707
sampleLengths
068
12
224
31
444
514
62
745
89
941
1028
11108
1227
1317
1431
157
1659
1730
1824
1935
2035
2133
2232
2365
2410
2519
2628
2724
2867
299
3060
3148
3246
337
3448
3583
3621
92.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"was tucked"
1"was wedged"
2"were struck"
99.75% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs133
matches
0"was leaving"
1"was walking"
86.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences101
ratio0.02
matches
0"He was an information broker; knowing things was his trade."
1"The memory flooded back unwelcome—rain slicking the cobblestones, the weight of his stare on my back, the sickening mixture of terror and regret that had propelled me into the London night."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount554
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.036101083032490974
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010830324909747292
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean12.39
std7.85
cv0.633
sampleLengths
013
122
214
319
42
511
613
71
814
92
1015
1113
1214
132
1411
1518
1616
179
1819
193
203
2116
2218
2310
248
2529
2611
2714
2812
2926
308
3117
3210
3317
3422
359
367
376
388
3925
4020
416
425
435
444
4510
4624
4720
4815
492
47.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32673267326732675
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners33
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Of course he knew."
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences75
matches
0"He stood on the landing,"
1"He looked as if he"
2"My breath caught, lodging somewhere"
3"He said my name not"
4"His voice was the same"
5"I tightened my grip on"
6"His eyes, one the colour"
7"They catalogued the faded band"
8"I put my weight into"
9"It didn't budge."
10"I looked down."
11"He shifted his weight, and"
12"He stepped over the threshold"
13"I took a step back,"
14"He followed, his mismatched eyes"
15"He was a predator assessing"
16"he observed, running a gloved"
17"I crossed my arms, a"
18"He turned his full attention"
19"He took another step closer"
ratio0.707
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences75
matches
0"The cheap lock gave a"
1"He stood on the landing,"
2"He looked as if he"
3"My breath caught, lodging somewhere"
4"The name was a curse"
5"He said my name not"
6"His voice was the same"
7"A faint, almost untraceable French"
8"I tightened my grip on"
9"A corner of his mouth"
10"His eyes, one the colour"
11"They catalogued the faded band"
12"I put my weight into"
13"It didn't budge."
14"I looked down."
15"The tip of his polished"
16"He shifted his weight, and"
17"He stepped over the threshold"
18"The air in my small"
19"A low thud from"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He looked as if he had materialised from a different, far more expensive world and simply forgotten to leave."
1"The memory flooded back unwelcome—rain slicking the cobblestones, the weight of his stare on my back, the sickening mixture of terror and regret that had propel…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He shifted, and the door eased open again, his advance effortless"
1"he said, his tone shifting, shedding the layer of mockery"
2"He turned back, his expression unreadable"
3"Lucien continued, his voice devoid of all emotion"
4"I whispered, the word barely audible"
5"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial murmur"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"Lucien continued (continue)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.256
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.154
78.9077%