| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Their voice carried back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 82.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "depths" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "absolutely" | | 6 | "dances" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1121 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 850 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 16 | | Shadow | 1 | | Silas | 5 | | Isolde | 8 | | Kensington | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shadow" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.559 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 32.97 | | std | 18.38 | | cv | 0.557 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 68 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 65 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was tuning" | | 1 | "were moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "It was worse than that—it was gentle, like slipping from one dream into another without waking." | | 1 | "But now that he mentioned it, the air was thick with them—honeyed wildflowers, rich soil after rain, something spiced and indefinable." | | 2 | "Roses the colour of old wine grew beside flowers Aurora had no name for—star-shaped things in shades of silver and gold, bell-flowers that chimed faintly when the breeze moved through them." | | 3 | "Aurora saw it then—stones arranged in a perfect ring in a small hollow, older than the oaks, worn smooth by time or magic or both." | | 4 | "Not blown by wind—there was no wind—but as if they were moving aside, creating a path." | | 5 | "The pool at the centre of the stones reflected nothing—not their faces, not the sky, not even the glow of the moss." | | 6 | "The grove seemed to react to their presence—flowers curled slightly, as if uncertain." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 222 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.0045045045045045045 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 12.6 | | std | 7.59 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 63.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4157303370786517 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked at the stones" | | 1 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 2 | "It was worse than that—it" | | 3 | "She stopped and looked down." | | 4 | "Their form became more defined" | | 5 | "They made a sound like" | | 6 | "He closed his eyes for" | | 7 | "It made her dizzy, made" | | 8 | "They moved like they belonged" | | 9 | "Their voice carried back through" | | 10 | "He stopped at the edge" | | 11 | "She wore robes the colour" | | 12 | "It was like looking into" |
| | ratio | 0.197 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones emerged" | | 1 | "Aurora pushed through the final" | | 2 | "The world beyond the boundary" | | 3 | "The air shimmered, warped, as" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 5 | "Shadow clung to their edges" | | 6 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 7 | "The temperature dropped sharply at" | | 8 | "The bar owner had insisted" | | 9 | "He looked at the stones" | | 10 | "Aurora wasn't certain about anything" | | 11 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 12 | "The shift wasn't violent." | | 13 | "It was worse than that—it" | | 14 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 15 | "Luminescent moss that faintly glowed" | | 16 | "She stopped and looked down." | | 17 | "Nyx passed through the threshold" | | 18 | "Their form became more defined" | | 19 | "They made a sound like" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she carried a Fae" | | 1 | "Now she walked with a" | | 2 | "As if summoned by the" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Roses the colour of old wine grew beside flowers Aurora had no name for—star-shaped things in shades of silver and gold, bell-flowers that chimed faintly when t…" | | 1 | "The sky above was still afternoon-bright, but it had taken on a quality that made it hard to judge." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Silas confirmed (confirm)" | | 2 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.241 | | leniency | 0.483 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |