Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YKDHZSGN3A8CTC9D1FNM

Run Details

Duration:
18.8s
Cost:
$0.009845
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones emerged from the mist like giants' teeth. Aurora pushed through the final tangle of bracken and stopped, her breath catching. The world beyond the boundary looked wrong in a way she couldn't quite name. The air shimmered, warped, as if viewed through heat-haze in the depths of winter. "This is it?" Nyx drifted beside her, their form more solid than she'd ever seen it in daylight. Shadow clung to their edges regardless of the pale afternoon sun filtering through the canopy. "Isolde said to pass between the stones at dusk." Aurora pulled her jacket tighter. The temperature dropped sharply at the threshold. "She said we'd know the grove when we saw it." Behind them, Silas stepped carefully over a moss-covered log, his weathered face creased with skepticism. The bar owner had insisted on coming, claimed he'd walked these woods for forty years and owed Isolde more favors than he could count. He looked at the stones now, at the way reality seemed to fold against them, and let out a low whistle. "You're certain about this?" Aurora wasn't certain about anything anymore. Three weeks ago she'd delivered pad thai to a quiet woman in a Kensington townhouse. Now she carried a Fae blade and a heartstone that pulsed like a second heartbeat against her ribs. Now she walked with a shade and a barkeep into invisible realms. "No," she said. "But we've come this far." She stepped between the stones. The shift wasn't violent. It was worse than that—it was gentle, like slipping from one dream into another without waking. The ground beneath her boots changed from hard earth to something softer, springier. Moss. Luminescent moss that faintly glowed where her feet disturbed it. She stopped and looked down. Nyx passed through the threshold as if the stones didn't exist. Their form became more defined on this side of the boundary, the edges sharper, the faintly glowing violet of their eyes brighter. They made a sound like satisfaction, like coming home. "The Veil is thinner here," they whispered. "Can you feel it?" She could. A pressure in her chest, a humming at the base of her skull like her brain was tuning into a frequency just beyond hearing. Silas came through last, and Aurora watched his shoulders drop slightly, some tension releasing. He closed his eyes for a moment. "God, I'd forgotten how it smells." Aurora hadn't expected smells. But now that he mentioned it, the air was thick with them—honeyed wildflowers, rich soil after rain, something spiced and indefinable. It made her dizzy, made her want to breathe deeper. The clearing revealed itself gradually as they moved forward. Ancient oaks formed a cathedral around them, their trunks thick as houses, their roots writhing across the earth like captured serpents. Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion. Roses the colour of old wine grew beside flowers Aurora had no name for—star-shaped things in shades of silver and gold, bell-flowers that chimed faintly when the breeze moved through them. "The time here," Silas said quietly. "It shifts. Don't lose track of it or you'll step back out to find the world's aged years." The sky above was still afternoon-bright, but it had taken on a quality that made it hard to judge. Aurora couldn't tell if they'd been walking for minutes or hours. The moss beneath her feet glowed brighter the deeper they went, leaving a trail of faint light in their wake. Nyx drifted ahead, sometimes solid, sometimes half-faded into the deeper shadows beneath the trees. They moved like they belonged here, like every element of this place welcomed them. Their voice carried back through the clearing: "There. The standing circle." Aurora saw it then—stones arranged in a perfect ring in a small hollow, older than the oaks, worn smooth by time or magic or both. The centre was a pool of absolutely still water that reflected no light. "The heart of the grove," Silas confirmed. He stopped at the edge of the circle, respecting some boundary. "This is where she meets those who seek her counsel." As if summoned by the words, the wildflowers shifted. Not blown by wind—there was no wind—but as if they were moving aside, creating a path. Isolde emerged from beneath an arch of flowering vines, her silver hair catching what little light penetrated this deep into the grove. She wore robes the colour of starlight and left no mark upon the moss as she walked. "You came," she said. No question in it. Aurora stepped forward, the Fae blade cold against her hip, the heartstone warm against her chest. "You knew we would." "I knew many things. Knowing and telling are different dances." Isolde's lavender eyes fixed on her with an intensity that made Aurora's skin prickle. "The question becomes: do you know why you came?" The pool at the centre of the stones reflected nothing—not their faces, not the sky, not even the glow of the moss. It was like looking into an absence. "We came for answers," Aurora said. Isolde moved to the edge of the pool and knelt, her movements fluid, graceful. When she looked up, her expression had shifted into something more severe. "A stone beats in your chest that doesn't belong there. A blade of our people rests in your hands. And your companion is a ghost trying to remember how to live. The answers you carry are heavy ones." Nyx drifted closer to Aurora, their form flickering. The grove seemed to react to their presence—flowers curled slightly, as if uncertain. Isolde watched them with the expression of someone observing something beautiful and dangerous in equal measure. "The Veil tears," Isolde continued, still addressing Aurora. "Not here. Not yet. But the weakness spreads like infection through water. Your heartstone knows this. It feels every failure in the barrier." "Then why does it warm?" Aurora's fingers found the pendant without conscious thought. "Why give it to me?" "That stone was given to someone else, in another age, for another purpose. It came to you through paths I cannot tell, though I feel their shape." Isolde's fingers trailed through the water without disturbing it. "But here is what I can speak: the bearer of a heartstone sees truth in Hel's domain. You could walk where others would be lost to shadow and hunger." The implications crashed over Aurora like a wave. Hel. The realms between. The dying places where the barrier had worn too thin. Silas shifted his weight, leather creaking. "That's not a gift, that's a death sentence." "Perhaps." Isolde smiled, and it was the most unsettling expression Aurora had seen from her. "Or perhaps it's an invitation. The question of which one remains to be answered."
created_at"2026-02-19T04:01:25.947Z" 2/19/2026, 4:01:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
1"Their voice carried back [back]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
82.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"depths"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"absolutely"
count1
6
word"dances"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"depths"
2"pulsed"
3"tension"
4"perfect"
5"absolutely"
6"dances"
7"intensity"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount850
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora16
Shadow1
Silas5
Isolde8
Kensington1
Fae2
Nyx4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Shadow"
2"Silas"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Kensington"
globalScore0.559
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1121
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean32.97
std18.38
cv0.557
sampleLengths
052
133
231
360
44
551
68
75
849
942
1011
1126
1227
1335
1468
1524
1650
1739
1838
1928
2064
218
2220
2333
2429
256
2664
2737
2831
2918
3065
3122
3214
3329
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was tuning"
1"were moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences89
ratio0.079
matches
0"It was worse than that—it was gentle, like slipping from one dream into another without waking."
1"But now that he mentioned it, the air was thick with them—honeyed wildflowers, rich soil after rain, something spiced and indefinable."
2"Roses the colour of old wine grew beside flowers Aurora had no name for—star-shaped things in shades of silver and gold, bell-flowers that chimed faintly when the breeze moved through them."
3"Aurora saw it then—stones arranged in a perfect ring in a small hollow, older than the oaks, worn smooth by time or magic or both."
4"Not blown by wind—there was no wind—but as if they were moving aside, creating a path."
5"The pool at the centre of the stones reflected nothing—not their faces, not the sky, not even the glow of the moss."
6"The grove seemed to react to their presence—flowers curled slightly, as if uncertain."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount222
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.0045045045045045045
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.6
std7.59
cv0.602
sampleLengths
011
113
214
314
418
515
614
77
810
915
1024
1121
124
136
1415
1518
1612
173
185
195
204
2116
2213
231
2410
255
2611
2722
289
297
304
312
3224
3314
347
356
364
3721
3810
399
4021
417
4231
436
4418
4519
4611
4720
4814
4914
63.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4157303370786517
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences66
matches
0"He looked at the stones"
1"She stepped between the stones."
2"It was worse than that—it"
3"She stopped and looked down."
4"Their form became more defined"
5"They made a sound like"
6"He closed his eyes for"
7"It made her dizzy, made"
8"They moved like they belonged"
9"Their voice carried back through"
10"He stopped at the edge"
11"She wore robes the colour"
12"It was like looking into"
ratio0.197
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences66
matches
0"The oak standing stones emerged"
1"Aurora pushed through the final"
2"The world beyond the boundary"
3"The air shimmered, warped, as"
4"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
5"Shadow clung to their edges"
6"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
7"The temperature dropped sharply at"
8"The bar owner had insisted"
9"He looked at the stones"
10"Aurora wasn't certain about anything"
11"She stepped between the stones."
12"The shift wasn't violent."
13"It was worse than that—it"
14"The ground beneath her boots"
15"Luminescent moss that faintly glowed"
16"She stopped and looked down."
17"Nyx passed through the threshold"
18"Their form became more defined"
19"They made a sound like"
ratio0.833
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"Now she carried a Fae"
1"Now she walked with a"
2"As if summoned by the"
ratio0.045
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Roses the colour of old wine grew beside flowers Aurora had no name for—star-shaped things in shades of silver and gold, bell-flowers that chimed faintly when t…"
1"The sky above was still afternoon-bright, but it had taken on a quality that made it hard to judge."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Silas confirmed (confirm)"
2"Isolde continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.241
leniency0.483
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.207
83.2096%