Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YMM5ZTCH5J5XWH9NX38M

Run Details

Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.020915
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, revealing familiar eyes — one amber, one black. Aurora's heart skipped a beat. She hadn't seen Lucien Moreau in a year, not since their messy parting. His slicked-back platinum blond hair and tailored charcoal suit seemed as impeccable as ever. He leaned slightly, gripping his ivory-handled cane with the same elegant arrogance that always infuriated and endeared him to her. "Rory." His voice was silk, layered with that unmistakable French lilt. "Lucien," she replied, trying to keep her voice steady. He glanced down the narrow corridor, eyes flitting over the peeling wallpaper and dim light before locking back onto her. "May I come in?" Aurora hesitated. Behind her, the cozy disarray of Eva's flat seemed worlds apart from the suave, dangerous air Lucien carried. But the pull was undeniable. Already she'd felt that nagging curiosity, tinged with excitement and dread. "Alright," she stepped aside, holding the door wider. The tabby cat named Ptolemy darted between her legs and shot into the hallway. Lucien entered, his gait measured. He placed the cane against the wall, his eyes scanning the cluttered space. "Things haven't changed much, I see." Rory shut the door, the three deadbolts clicking into place. "Eva likes her books." She turned, crossing her arms, the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist catching the light briefly. He noticed. His gaze lingered before meeting hers. "And you? Any changes?" "Maybe a few," she replied. "What's this about, Lucien? Why are you here?" He exhaled, moving to a small wooden chair by the cluttered table. "I need your help." Rory scoffed, leaning against the counter. "After everything that happened? You think you can just waltz in and—" "Yes," he interrupted, his voice sharper. The intensity of his gaze softened, though, as his tone turned to a near plea. "Please, Rory. It's important." "Important," she echoed, bitterness seeping through. Memories of their last confrontation flashed in her mind. The shouting, the accusations, the lingering looks and unsaid words. "Yes." He looked around again, a hint of discomfort creeping into his posture. "Can we sit?" She nodded, begrudgingly, and motioned to the shabby sofa. They sat at opposite ends, the physical divide echoing the emotional chasm between them. Lucien reached into his suit jacket, pulling out a folded piece of parchment. "There's a ritual—" "There's always a ritual," Rory cut in. "What makes this one different?" "This one threatens both realms. Your world... and mine." His words hung heavy in the air. The realm of Avaros, a place she barely understood but had gotten tangled with because of him. She leaned forward, curiosity piqued despite herself. "Go on." "There are forces who wish to merge the realms. The balance would be shattered. Both worlds would suffer unimaginable consequences." His voice grew more fervent, his heterochromatic eyes displaying a sincerity she couldn't ignore. Rory frowned. "And what do you need from me?" "A map. An ancient one, hidden here in London." He leaned closer, eyes pleading. "You're the best at finding things, Rory. I need you." Her heart ached at those words, memories of their past swirling within her. She wanted to yell, to push him away, but the gravity of his plea held her back. "And what do I get in return?" she challenged, more to buy time than anything else. "Protection," he replied immediately. "Not just for you, but for everyone." She stared at him, the man who had once been her everything, and the enormity of what he was asking settled in. "How do I know this isn't another one of your schemes?" Lucien's gaze softened further. "Because this time, Rory, our worlds hang in the balance. Because this time, I'm asking you to trust me." Silence stretched. Ptolemy meowed loudly, the only sound breaking the heavy quiet. Rory instinctively reached down to stroke the feline, grounding herself. "Fine," she finally said. "I'll help. But you don't get to disappear after this. We figure this out together." A rare, genuine smile crossed Lucien's face. "Deal." She couldn't help noticing how that smile still had the power to weaken her resolve. Standing, she walked to the small table cluttered with Eva’s research. "Let's start with what we know." Lucien joined her, his presence warm and familiar beside her. Papers rustled as they delved into books and documents, the old dynamics slipping back into place, albeit tentatively. Hours passed in relative quiet as they worked, stealing brief, cautious glances at each other amidst the hushed shuffle of paper. The tension remained, but it was laced with an undercurrent of rediscovered camaraderie. And as the clock on the wall ticked towards midnight, Aurora couldn’t help but wonder if maybe, just maybe, this chance encounter was what they both needed. If maybe their worlds wouldn't just be saved but rebuilt — together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she stepped aside [aside]"
1"He looked around [around]"
2"His voice grew more [more]"
3"he replied immediately [immediately]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.235
93.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount800
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount800
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"skipped a beat"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"delved"
count1
14
word"amidst"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"skipped a beat"
2"silk"
3"lilt"
4"tinged"
5"measured"
6"scanning"
7"intensity"
8"echoed"
9"echoing"
10"shattered"
11"silence"
12"resolve"
13"delved"
14"amidst"
15"tension"
16"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"d with excitement"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords799
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount604
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien7
Moreau1
French1
Eva2
Ptolemy2
Memories1
Avaros1
Rory5
Aurora3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Memories"
globalScore0.921
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
74.84% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.252
wordCount799
matches
0"Not just for you, but for everyone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
97.96% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean22.83
std11.25
cv0.493
sampleLengths
064
111
29
324
436
522
624
729
812
913
1016
1118
1225
1325
1416
1523
1616
1712
189
1933
2034
219
2224
2330
2416
2511
2633
2723
2822
2919
308
3132
3228
3334
3439
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"was laced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs119
matches
0"was asking"
69.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences78
ratio0.026
matches
0"The door swung open, revealing familiar eyes — one amber, one black."
1"If maybe their worlds wouldn't just be saved but rebuilt — together."
84.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount605
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"open, revealing familiar eyes —"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0512396694214876
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01652892561983471
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean10.24
std6.2
cv0.605
sampleLengths
012
15
213
314
420
511
69
720
84
92
1018
115
1211
138
1414
155
1613
176
1810
1919
202
216
224
235
248
2512
264
276
2812
296
3015
314
326
339
3410
3513
363
379
3814
3913
403
417
425
439
447
4517
467
472
4834
492
92.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5641025641025641
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners44
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Already she'd felt that nagging"
ratio0.019
16.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences53
matches
0"She hadn't seen Lucien Moreau"
1"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
2"He leaned slightly, gripping his"
3"His voice was silk, layered"
4"she replied, trying to keep"
5"He glanced down the narrow"
6"she stepped aside, holding the"
7"He placed the cane against"
8"She turned, crossing her arms,"
9"His gaze lingered before meeting"
10"He exhaled, moving to a"
11"he interrupted, his voice sharper"
12"she echoed, bitterness seeping through"
13"He looked around again, a"
14"She nodded, begrudgingly, and motioned"
15"They sat at opposite ends,"
16"His words hung heavy in"
17"She leaned forward, curiosity piqued"
18"His voice grew more fervent,"
19"He leaned closer, eyes pleading"
ratio0.509
16.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences53
matches
0"The door swung open, revealing"
1"Aurora's heart skipped a beat."
2"She hadn't seen Lucien Moreau"
3"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
4"He leaned slightly, gripping his"
5"His voice was silk, layered"
6"she replied, trying to keep"
7"He glanced down the narrow"
8"she stepped aside, holding the"
9"The tabby cat named Ptolemy"
10"Lucien entered, his gait measured."
11"He placed the cane against"
12"Rory shut the door, the"
13"She turned, crossing her arms,"
14"His gaze lingered before meeting"
15"He exhaled, moving to a"
16"Rory scoffed, leaning against the"
17"he interrupted, his voice sharper"
18"The intensity of his gaze"
19"she echoed, bitterness seeping through"
ratio0.887
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"If maybe their worlds wouldn't"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she replied, trying to keep her voice steady"
1"he interrupted, his voice sharper"
2"she echoed, bitterness seeping through"
3"He looked around, a hint of discomfort creeping into his posture"
4"He leaned, eyes pleading"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he interrupted (interrupt)"
1"she challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.147
leniency0.294
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.118
79.5187%