| 51.85% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "They gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "they said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |
| 90.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1072 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1072 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "imposing" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "stark" | | 15 | "fleeting" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 98.54% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "filled with awe" | | 1 | "d with awe" |
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| 52.15% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1075 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.30% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 882 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Aurora | 13 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 3 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Nyx" | | 8 | "Veil" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.763 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to absorb the light, while Isolde drifted ahead like a ghost, her silver hair trailing like a banner" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.93 | | wordCount | 1075 | | matches | | 0 | "not from cold, but from the sheer weight of the place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 96.10% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 46.74 | | std | 22.73 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 102 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 87 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of damp earth, decaying leaves, and something else – something sweet and faintly metallic – filled her nostrils." | | 1 | "Aurora saw shapes moving in the periphery – a flicker of silver fur, a flash of iridescent wings – but they vanished before she could focus on them." | | 2 | "The runes seemed to shift beneath her touch, forming fleeting images – a castle, a storm, a figure falling." | | 3 | "The shadows seemed to writhe, and the air shimmered with a faint, visible distortion – the Veil, thinning." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 879 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange, beautiful, terrifying beauty" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03299203640500569 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010238907849829351 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.14 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 46.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.34210526315789475 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.37% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the sound of" | | 1 | "She touched the rough bark" | | 2 | "It was the smell of" | | 3 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 4 | "she intoned, her voice echoing" | | 5 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 6 | "Her voice was practical, trying" | | 7 | "They gestured vaguely towards the" | | 8 | "She took a step forward," | | 9 | "She kept her hand on" | | 10 | "she said, her voice low" | | 11 | "they echoed, their voice a" | | 12 | "she stated, more to herself" | | 13 | "They emerged into a small" | | 14 | "She jerked her hand back," | | 15 | "they said simply" | | 16 | "she murmured, her voice thick" | | 17 | "She looked around the clearing," | | 18 | "she said, her voice echoing" |
| | ratio | 0.302 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as they" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, alias Rory, felt" | | 2 | "Nyx, the Shade, flowed like" | | 3 | "Isolde Varga, the Seer, moved" | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 5 | "The air hummed with a" | | 6 | "It was the sound of" | | 7 | "Aurora whispered, her voice barely" | | 8 | "She touched the rough bark" | | 9 | "The scent of damp earth," | | 10 | "It was the smell of" | | 11 | "Nyx shifted, becoming a solid," | | 12 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 13 | "Isolde stopped before the largest" | | 14 | "she intoned, her voice echoing" | | 15 | "Aurora shivered, not from cold," | | 16 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 17 | "Her voice was practical, trying" | | 18 | "Nyx chuckled, a sound like" | | 19 | "They gestured vaguely towards the" |
| | ratio | 0.968 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx, the Shade, flowed like liquid darkness around her ankles, dissolving into wisps of shadow that skimmed the moss-carpeted ground before coalescing again." | | 1 | "Nyx flowed beside her, a dark shadow that seemed to absorb the light, while Isolde drifted ahead like a ghost, her silver hair trailing like a banner." | | 2 | "The runes seemed to shift beneath her touch, forming fleeting images – a castle, a storm, a figure falling." | | 3 | "Aurora felt the pendant burn against her wrist, a searing heat that spread up her arm." | | 4 | "The humming had grown louder, a deep, resonant thrum that vibrated in her chest." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora whispered, her voice barely audible over the thrum" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 2 | "she intoned, her voice echoing strangely in the enclosed space" | | 3 | "Aurora called, her voice cutting through the humming silence" | | 4 | "she said, her voice low and resonant" | | 5 | "they echoed, their voice a whisper" | | 6 | "she stated, more to herself than anyone" | | 7 | "she murmured, her voice thick with concentration" | | 8 | "she said, her voice echoing in the clearing" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she stated (state)" | | 3 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Aurora stated (state)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.37 | | leniency | 0.741 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |