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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YT30GXAZ9PVYTGZPSCN6
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 397B A17B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
6m 53s
Cost:
$0.004103
Provider:
AtlasCloud
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
87.58%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
54.47%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
98.10%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
50.85%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
42.19%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
9.87%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
23.29%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
63.29%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.6552%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The third deadbolt slid back
with a metallic grind.
Rory gripped the serrated knife
behind her back, knuckles white against the black handle. She swung the door open, ready to drive the steel into whatever throat waited on the landing. Lucien stood there.
He leaned heavily on the
ivory handle of his cane, the charcoal fabric of his suit darkened across the left shoulder. Blood. Fresh.
It smelled of copper and
expensive cologne, cutting through the perpetual scent of cumin and fried onions drifting up from the curry house below. You
look
terrible. He stepped forward without invitation.
Rory retreated, boot heels clicking
against the worn floorboards.
She kicked the door shut
and engaged the locks. One. Two. Three.
The sound echoed in the
cramped space like gunshots.
Ptolemy wound himself around Lucien's
polished oxfords, tail flicking against the bloody hem of his trousers.
The tabby cat purred, oblivious
to the violence clinging to the visitor. Move.
Rory gestured toward the single
armchair buried under stacks of legal textbooks and scrolls. Lucien ignored the seat.
He remained standing, heterochromatic eyes
scanning
the room, assessing exits, threats, weaknesses.
The amber iris caught the
low light, the black one swallowed it. Sit down before you bleed on the rugs. These are Persian.
They are covered in notes
on demonic lineage.
I doubt a little blood
ruins the thesis.
He lowered himself onto the
edge of the sofa, cane resting across his knees. His fingers
trembled
, just once, before he stilled them. Rory watched the movement. She
knew that tremor
.
It happened when he suppressed
the demon blood, when the human side lost the fight against the pain.
She crossed the room, knife
still hidden behind her thigh.
She stopped just out of
reach. Who did this. A disagreement over information. You sold someone out. I protected an asset. You left me. The words
hung in the air
, heavier than the stacks of books lining the walls. Lucien looked up.
His gaze dropped to her
left wrist, where the sleeve of her jumper had ridden up. The crescent-shaped scar gleamed pale against her skin. I did what was necessary. Necessary. She spat the word. It tasted like ash. She moved closer, close enough to
see
the sweat beading on his platinum hairline. Close enough to smell the ozone tang of his magic leaking through the wound. Let me
see
. It is superficial. Your suit is soaked through. That is not superficial. She reached out. He did
not flinch, but the air in the room tightened
. Her fingers brushed the lapel of his jacket. The fabric felt cool, tailored to perfection despite the ruin beneath. She popped the top button. Then the second. Do not. Shut up. She peeled the jacket back. The white shirt beneath
was ruined
. A deep gash ran from his collarbone down toward his ribs. The edges
were blackened
, burning
slowly
like paper held to a flame. Demon steel. You fought a highborn. He caught her wrist. His grip was iron, hot despite the
chill
radiating from his skin. He
traced
the crescent scar with his thumb. I fought for you. You fought for your own ends. You always do. She pulled her hand free. He let her go. She turned to the small kitchenette, grabbing a clean towel and the bottle of whiskey she kept for medicinal purposes. Not for drinking. For cleaning. She returned and poured the liquid onto the towel. The smell of alcohol mixed with the blood and cumin. She pressed the cloth to the wound. Lucien hissed through his teeth. His back arched off the cushion. That burns. It
is supposed
to. She held the pressure. His hand found her knee, gripping the fabric of her jeans. Not pushing her away. Anchoring himself. The heat from his palm seeped through the denim. Why are you here, Lucien. They
know
about the flat. Rory froze. The towel slipped
slightly
. She pressed it back down. Who knows. The ones who want what I found. They tracked the signature. You led them to Eva. I led them away from you. It appears I failed. He leaned forward, ignoring the pain. His face was inches from hers. She could
see
the flecks of gold in the amber eye, the void in the black one. The attraction was a physical
weight
, pressing against her ribs, making it hard to breathe. It was the same pull that had ruined her life six months ago. The same gravity that kept her living above a bar, delivering noodles for pocket money, waiting for the other shoe to drop. You need to leave. I cannot walk far. Then crawl.
If I leave, they will
burn this building to find me.
If I stay, they will
burn it to get to us. He released her knee. His hand moved to the ivory handle of his cane. He twisted the head. A click
echoed
. The blade slid out an inch, shining silver in the dim light. We have minutes. You are delirious. Check the window. Rory moved to the single pane overlooking Brick Lane. The street below teemed with life. People eating, drinking, living. Normalcy. She looked higher. Across the alley, a figure stood on the roof of the adjacent building. Silhouette against the city glow. A long shape rested in their hands. A rifle. She ducked below the sill. Sniper. Two. Possibly three. She scrambled back to the sofa. Lucien
was standing
again, cane fully drawn. The sword gleamed. He looked pale, grey beneath the tan, but steady. We cannot stay. The door is reinforced. Steel melts. Wood burns. They will not knock. He limped toward the center of the room. He began kicking the stacks of books aside, clearing a space on the floor. Scrolls tumbled. Pages scattered. Ptolemy yowled and darted under the bed. What are you doing. Creating a distraction. He reached into his inner pocket and pulled out a small glass vial. The liquid inside swirled, dark purple and thick. He tossed it to her. She caught it instinctively. What is this. Acid. Concentrated. Throw it at the door when they breach. And then. Then we run. You can barely stand. I will stand enough. A sound came from the hallway. Not a knock. A scratch. Metal on wood. Like a key turning, but wrong. Grinding. The locks engaged, but the mechanism whined. Something
was forcing
the tumblers from the outside. Rory gripped the vial. The glass felt cold, biting into her palm. They are inside the lock. Lucien positioned himself beside the door, shadow merging with the
gloom
of the corner. His sword hung low at his side. He looked at her, and for the first time, the mask slipped. Fear. Not for himself. For her. Behind me. No. Rory. She moved to the other side of the door. She raised the vial. The scratching stopped. Silence filled the flat, heavy and suffocating. The cat stopped breathing under the bed. The doorknob turned. Slowly. The wood around the frame
began to
smoke. Ready. Lucien's voice was a
whisper
. Rory tightened her grip on the acid. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. She looked at Lucien. He nodded. The door exploded inward.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
87.58%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
54.47%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1208
totalAiIsms
11
found
0
word
"echoed"
count
2
1
word
"scanning"
count
1
2
word
"trembled"
count
1
3
word
"chill"
count
1
4
word
"traced"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
1
6
word
"normalcy"
count
1
7
word
"gloom"
count
1
8
word
"silence"
count
1
9
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"echoed"
1
"scanning"
2
"trembled"
3
"chill"
4
"traced"
5
"weight"
6
"normalcy"
7
"gloom"
8
"silence"
9
"whisper"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
196
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
3
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
196
filterMatches
0
"look"
1
"see"
2
"know"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
196
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
24
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1207
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
33
wordCount
1207
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
0.83
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"You"
discoveredNames
Lucien
10
Persian
1
Eva
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Rory
9
You
10
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Eva"
2
"Rory"
3
"You"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
81
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.829
wordCount
1207
matches
0
"not flinch, but the air in the room tightened"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
196
matches
0
"knew that tremor"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
87
mean
13.87
std
15.9
cv
1.146
sampleLengths
0
40
1
3
2
47
3
3
4
35
5
28
6
1
7
42
8
8
9
3
10
16
11
49
12
16
13
3
14
4
15
4
16
4
17
3
18
42
19
5
20
1
21
36
22
3
23
3
24
9
25
41
26
2
27
2
28
36
29
4
30
24
31
4
32
9
33
34
34
26
35
11
36
2
37
4
38
30
39
5
40
5
41
11
42
2
43
11
44
5
45
10
46
79
47
4
48
4
49
2
98.10%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
196
matches
0
"are covered"
1
"was ruined"
2
"were blackened"
3
"is supposed"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
228
matches
0
"was standing"
1
"was forcing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
196
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1208
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.024834437086092714
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.006622516556291391
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
196
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
196
mean
6.16
std
4.59
cv
0.746
sampleLengths
0
9
1
14
2
17
3
3
4
21
5
1
6
1
7
24
8
3
9
5
10
9
11
9
12
1
13
1
14
1
15
9
16
16
17
12
18
1
19
14
20
4
21
12
22
12
23
8
24
3
25
8
26
8
27
14
28
9
29
4
30
4
31
18
32
10
33
6
34
3
35
4
36
4
37
4
38
3
39
15
40
3
41
16
42
8
43
5
44
1
45
4
46
4
47
14
48
14
49
3
50.85%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.32653061224489793
totalSentences
196
uniqueOpeners
64
42.19%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
158
matches
0
"Then the second."
1
"Then we run."
ratio
0.013
9.87%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
83
totalSentences
158
matches
0
"She swung the door open,"
1
"He leaned heavily on the"
2
"It smelled of copper and"
3
"You look terrible."
4
"He stepped forward without invitation."
5
"She kicked the door shut"
6
"He remained standing, heterochromatic eyes"
7
"They are covered in notes"
8
"I doubt a little blood"
9
"He lowered himself onto the"
10
"His fingers trembled, just once,"
11
"She knew that tremor."
12
"It happened when he suppressed"
13
"She crossed the room, knife"
14
"She stopped just out of"
15
"You sold someone out."
16
"I protected an asset."
17
"You left me."
18
"His gaze dropped to her"
19
"I did what was necessary."
ratio
0.525
23.29%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
138
totalSentences
158
matches
0
"The third deadbolt slid back"
1
"Rory gripped the serrated knife"
2
"She swung the door open,"
3
"Lucien stood there."
4
"He leaned heavily on the"
5
"It smelled of copper and"
6
"You look terrible."
7
"He stepped forward without invitation."
8
"Rory retreated, boot heels clicking"
9
"She kicked the door shut"
10
"The sound echoed in the"
11
"Ptolemy wound himself around Lucien's"
12
"The tabby cat purred, oblivious"
13
"Rory gestured toward the single"
14
"Lucien ignored the seat."
15
"He remained standing, heterochromatic eyes"
16
"The amber iris caught the"
17
"These are Persian."
18
"They are covered in notes"
19
"I doubt a little blood"
ratio
0.873
63.29%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
2
totalSentences
158
matches
0
"If I leave, they will"
1
"If I stay, they will"
ratio
0.013
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
38
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The same gravity that kept her living above a bar, delivering noodles for pocket money, waiting for the other shoe to drop."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
87.6552%