Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YWYJM0CWMPFG1V3MEEQZ

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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit confines of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, her footsteps echoing against the cold, tiled walls. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and sharp that made her nostrils flare. She paused, her sharp jaw set in a determined line, and glanced at the worn leather watch on her wrist. It was just past midnight, the witching hour, and the Veil Market was supposed to be deserted. Yet, here she was, called to investigate a crime scene that defied logic. The flickering light from the overhead bulbs cast eerie shadows, dancing across the walls like spectres. Harlow's eyes, keen and observant, swept over the scene. A circle of police tape cordoned off an area near the old ticket booth, where a body lay sprawled, lifeless and still. The victim, a young man, was dressed in a suit that seemed out of place in such a grim setting. His eyes stared blankly at the ceiling, and his skin had a pallor that suggested he had been dead for hours. Detective Quinn crouched beside the body, her salt-and-pepper hair barely brushing the collar of her coat. She noted the absence of any visible wounds, no sign of struggle or violence. Yet, the man's expression was one of sheer terror, frozen in his final moments. Her gaze shifted to the ground, where a small brass compass lay beside him, its casing marked with verdigris and etched with sigils. The Veil Compass, she recognized it immediately, a tool for navigating supernatural rifts. But what was it doing here, and why was it with him? "Quinn," a voice called out, breaking her concentration. Detective Inspector Markson, her colleague, approached with a clipboard in hand, his brow furrowed in thought. "Strange one, isn't it? No signs of foul play, but the look on his face... it's like he saw something that scared him to death." Harlow rose to her feet, her eyes never leaving the compass. "It's not just strange, Markson. It's impossible. This place is supposed to be empty, and yet here he is, with a compass meant for supernatural navigation. What was he looking for?" Markson shrugged, his expression skeptical. "Could be a heart attack. Stress, maybe. These markets attract all sorts, you know. He might have been involved in something shady." Harlow shook her head, her instincts telling her otherwise. "No, there's more to it. Look at the compass. It's pointing towards something, but there's no rift here, at least not one we can see." Markson glanced at the compass, dismissing it with a wave of his hand. "Probably malfunctioning. These things aren't exactly reliable." Harlow ignored his dismissal, her mind racing with possibilities. She scanned the area, her eyes catching the faint glimmer of something on the wall behind the ticket booth. She moved closer, her steps deliberate, and found a series of symbols etched into the tiles, barely visible in the dim light. They were ancient, arcane, and pulsed with a subtle energy that made her skin prickle. "Markson, look at this," she called, tracing the symbols with her finger. "These markings... they're not random. They're part of a ritual, something meant to conceal or protect." Markson joined her, squinting at the wall. "Ritual? You think this is some kind of cult thing?" Harlow considered the possibility, her mind piecing together the puzzle. "Not a cult, but something supernatural. The compass, the symbols, the fear on his face... he was trying to find something, or someone, and it led him here." Markson frowned, his skepticism evident. "You think he was looking for a ghost?" "Not a ghost," Harlow replied, her voice steady. "A rift. A portal to another realm. The compass was guiding him, but he didn't make it through." Markson shook his head, unconvinced. "You're chasing shadows, Quinn. There's no evidence of any rift here." Harlow turned to face him, her eyes fierce. "Evidence isn't always visible, Markson. Sometimes, you have to look beyond what's in front of you." She returned to the body, her mind working through the details. The man's suit, the compass, the symbols—they were all connected, part of a larger picture that was slowly coming into focus. She crouched again, examining the man's hands. They were clenched, as if he had been holding something tightly. She pried them open, revealing a bone token, the entry requirement for the Veil Market. "Look at this," she said, holding up the token. "He was here for a reason, and he had access. But something went wrong." Markson leaned closer, his interest piqued. "A token? So he was a regular, or at least knew how to get in." Harlow nodded, her mind racing. "He was searching for something, and the compass led him here. But the rift... it wasn't stable. It closed before he could pass through, trapping him on this side." Markson's eyes widened, the pieces falling into place. "So he died trying to cross over?" "Exactly," Harlow replied, her voice firm. "The fear on his face, the lack of wounds... he was caught between worlds, unable to escape." Markson rubbed his chin, his skepticism fading. "But why? What was he looking for?" Harlow glanced at the compass, its needle still pointing towards the wall. "Information, perhaps. Or something more valuable. Whatever it was, it cost him his life." She stood, her mind already working on the next steps. The Veil Market was a place of secrets, and this man's death was just one of many mysteries it held. But she was determined to uncover the truth, to find the answers that eluded her. "Markson, we need to secure this area," she said, her voice commanding. "There's more here than meets the eye, and I intend to find out what." Markson nodded, his respect for her evident. "I'll get the team on it. But Quinn, be careful. This place... it's not like the others." Harlow met his gaze, her determination unwavering. "I know. But that's why I'm here." As she turned back to the scene, her mind was already racing with possibilities. The Veil Market was a place of shadows, and she was determined to bring its secrets into the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1041
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1041
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"determined"
count3
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"navigating"
count1
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"racing"
count3
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"determined"
3"dancing"
4"etched"
5"navigating"
6"furrowed"
7"racing"
8"scanned"
9"pulsed"
10"tracing"
11"unwavering"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1037
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount660
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow12
Quinn2
Tube1
Camden1
Veil5
Market4
Compass1
Detective3
Inspector1
Markson10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Detective"
3"Markson"
places
0"Compass"
globalScore0.591
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.964
wordCount1037
matches
0"Not a cult, but something supernatural"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean35.76
std23.16
cv0.648
sampleLengths
095
188
292
349
442
527
634
720
865
928
1017
1138
1213
1326
1416
1524
1665
1723
1821
1934
2015
2123
2214
2326
2445
2526
2624
2714
2833
65.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences53
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was, called"
2"was dressed"
3"were clenched"
4"was determined"
5"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
66.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences75
ratio0.027
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and sharp that made her nostrils flare."
1"The man's suit, the compass, the symbols—they were all connected, part of a larger picture that was slowly coming into focus."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount664
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.024096385542168676
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010542168674698794
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean13.83
std6.29
cv0.455
sampleLengths
024
121
220
317
413
516
69
722
820
921
1016
1114
1214
1323
1413
1512
168
1716
1825
1911
2031
215
2222
239
2425
2513
267
279
2819
2922
3015
3112
3216
337
3410
3510
3628
375
388
398
4018
415
4211
438
4416
4511
4621
477
4811
4915
65.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences53
matches
0"She paused, her sharp jaw"
1"It was just past midnight,"
2"His eyes stared blankly at"
3"She noted the absence of"
4"Her gaze shifted to the"
5"She scanned the area, her"
6"She moved closer, her steps"
7"They were ancient, arcane, and"
8"she called, tracing the symbols"
9"She returned to the body,"
10"She crouched again, examining the"
11"They were clenched, as if"
12"She pried them open, revealing"
13"she said, holding up the"
14"She stood, her mind already"
15"she said, her voice commanding"
ratio0.302
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences53
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She paused, her sharp jaw"
3"It was just past midnight,"
4"The flickering light from the"
5"Harlow's eyes, keen and observant,"
6"A circle of police tape"
7"The victim, a young man,"
8"His eyes stared blankly at"
9"Detective Quinn crouched beside the"
10"She noted the absence of"
11"Her gaze shifted to the"
12"The Veil Compass, she recognized"
13"a voice called out, breaking"
14"Detective Inspector Markson, her colleague,"
15"Harlow rose to her feet,"
16"Markson shrugged, his expression skeptical."
17"Harlow shook her head, her"
18"Markson glanced at the compass,"
19"Harlow ignored his dismissal, her"
ratio0.906
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"Yet, here she was, called"
1"Yet, the man's expression was"
ratio0.038
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"They were ancient, arcane, and pulsed with a subtle energy that made her skin prickle."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Harlow replied, her voice steady"
1"Harlow replied, her voice firm"
2"she said, her voice commanding"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a voice called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.071
81.2818%