Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YX45MSE7548K1Y8M8ZYH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.008204
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bass from the curry house downstairs rattled the floorboards, a steady, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through the soles of her boots. Three deadbolts threw back with heavy, metallic clanks. Rory wrenched the door open, expecting Eva with a armful of takeaway or maybe a neighbour complaining about the smell of sage burning again. The air in the hallway stalled. Lucien Moreau stood on the welcome mat, looking like he’d just stepped out of a glossy magazine spread and into the grime of East London. His charcoal suit was pristine, the collar of his white shirt crisp enough to cut glass, and that ivory-handled cane rested loosely in his grip. The scent of expensive tobacco and ozone hit her, instantly drowning out the frying spices from the ground floor. Rory’s grip on the doorknob tightened until her knuckles ached. She didn't step back. She didn't invite him in. "You’re blocking the fire escape." "A distinct possibility." He leaned against the doorframe, the movement fluid, predatory. One eye was the colour of polished obsidian, the other a molten amber that seemed to catch the dim hallway light and hold it. He hadn't shaved; a shadow of stubble darkened his jaw, softening the sharp angles of his face just enough to be dangerous. "Six months, Lucien. You don't get to just show up at my friend's door." "I didn’t realise I required an invitation to visit an associate." "I'm not your associate. I'm the delivery girl who once saved your life, and then you vanished." "Vanished implies I ceased to exist. I merely relocated." "To where? Hell?" "Avaros is hotter, but the hospitality is lacking." Rory glared at him, hating the way her heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. Hating that he looked good. Hating that the sight of him didn't make her angry, it made her tired. A deep, bone-weary exhaustion that had nothing to do with her double shift at the Golden Empress. "If you’re here for business, you can talk to Silas. If you’re here for information, the rate’s gone up." He pushed off the doorframe and stepped forward, invading her personal space. The flat was tiny, barely a hallway and a room, and his presence sucked all the oxygen out of it. He brushed past her, the wool of his suit grazing her arm, sending a jolt of static electricity skittering over her skin. "I’m not here for business, Rory." She spun around, watching him navigate the minefield of stacked books and scrolls that covered every available surface. Eva’s research material. He moved with a grace that defied the clutter, his cane tapping a staccato beat on the floorboards. "Then get out. You can't be here." "I can be anywhere I please." "Not here. Not after what happened." Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, wound himself around Lucien’s legs, purring loud enough to rival the bass downstairs. Lucien paused, looking down at the animal with an expression of mild distaste before nudging the cat away gently with the tip of his shoe. "Traitor," Rory muttered. Lucien turned, the amber eye fixing on her. "The cat recognises power. You, on the other hand, seem determined to pretend you don't feel it." "I feel plenty. I feel like calling the police. Or a priest." He laughed, a low, rumbling sound that did things to her stomach she tried very hard to ignore. He walked over to the window, gazing out at the rain-slicked brick of the building opposite. His back was to her, shoulders tense beneath the tailored fabric. "I heard about Evan." Rory stiffened. The air in the room suddenly felt ten degrees colder. "Who told you? Silas?" "I have my sources. The ex-boyfriend who couldn't take no for an answer. I heard he’s stopped bothering you." "I handled it." "Did you?" He turned back to face her, his gaze dropping to her left wrist. The small, crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. He knew it was there. He knew how she got it, falling off a swing as a child, but he also knew about the newer bruises, the ones that had faded but the memory of which still stung. "You moved to London to escape him. You live above a werewolf’s bar and work for a woman who thinks poison is a valid seasoning choice. You’re hiding, Rory." "I’m living. There's a difference." "Is there?" He crossed the room in two long strides. Rory stood her ground, lifting her chin, refusing to let him see her flinch. He stopped inches away, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his dark eye, close enough that the scent of him—sandalwood and something metallic, like blood—filled her nose. "Why did you leave?" The question slipped out before she could stop it, sharp and raw. "One minute we were... and then you were gone. No note. No goodbye. Just a empty flat and a hole in the wall." "I did what was necessary." "Necessary? You ditched me. We spent three months hunting that banshee in the sewers, I nearly lost my foot, and the second we get out, you disappear." "Because of what happened in the sewers." Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering near her face. He didn't touch her, just traced the air beside her jawline, as if she were something fragile and forbidden. "I almost crossed a line. I almost lost control." "So? I lose control all the time. I’m human. You’re the one who’s supposed to be the composed, half-demon fixer." "I am half-demon, Rory. The other half is human, and that half is... problematic around you." The admission hung in the air, heavy and suffocating. Rory’s breath hitched. She looked up at him, searching his face for a sign of deception, for the slick mask he usually wore. It was gone. He looked tired, the lines around his mouth deeper than she remembered. "You could have called." "Phones can be traced. Conversations can be recorded. Silence is safer." "Safety is overrated." She took a step closer, closing the gap. The heat radiating from his body was palpable, a stark contrast to the damp chill of the London flat. She saw his pupils dilate, the black swallowing the amber. "If you're worried about losing control," she whispered, "you're doing a terrible job of proving it." "Am I?" His hand moved, finally touching her. His fingers cupped the back of her neck, his thumb brushing the sensitive skin behind her ear. His touch was cool, but the sensation it sparked was searing. Rory’s eyes fluttered shut for a fraction of a second before she forced them open again, locking onto his. "You left me," she said, her voice barely audible. "You don't get to touch me like that just because you walked back into my life." "I didn't walk back in. I was pulled back in." He leaned down, his forehead resting against hers. The position was intimate, vulnerable. It exposed his throat, a weakness she knew he would never show anyone else. "Eva found something," he murmured against her skin. "Something in the archives. A name. A location. I think I know where my father is keeping the ledger." Rory froze. The ledger. The book of debts that had started them down this twisted path together. The reason they had met in the first place. She pulled back slightly, just enough to look him in the eye. "That's why you're here? You need me to break into a demon lord's safe house?" "I need you because I can't do it alone. And because I don't trust anyone else to watch my back." The admission stung. It wasn't a declaration of love, it was a tactical assessment. But the way his thumb was stroking her neck, the way his breath hitched when she leaned into his touch—that told a different story. "Eva will kill us if we mess up her flat." "Eva isn't here. She's at the university until morning." Rory let out a breath she didn't know she was holding. She reached up, covering his hand with hers. Her fingers tangled with his, the crescent scar on her wrist pressing against his pale skin. "If we do this," she said, "we do it my way. No running off half-cocked. No disappearing acts." "I solemnly swear." "Demons can't swear." "This one can." He didn't kiss her. He didn't make some grand gesture. He just squeezed her hand, a silent promise in the pressure of his fingers, and stepped back, the professional mask sliding back into place. But the air in the room had shifted. The tension was still there, tight as a wire, but it had changed. It wasn't just anger anymore. It was the thrill of the hunt, the adrenaline of the fight, and the terrifying, undeniable pull between them. Rory grabbed her leather jacket from the back of the chair and shrugged it on. "Fine," she said, grabbing her keys. "But you're buying dinner afterwards. And I don't mean from the curry place downstairs." Lucien smiled, a genuine, crooked expression that made his heterochromatic eyes gleam. "Deal."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.264
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1525
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"gently"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1525
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
4
word"determined"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"traced"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"fluttered"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"vibrated"
2"pristine"
3"navigate"
4"determined"
5"stomach"
6"traced"
7"silence"
8"palpable"
9"stark"
10"chill"
11"searing"
12"fluttered"
13"tension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1515
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1012
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau1
East1
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien6
Rory11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.957
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"amber that seemed to catch the dim hallway light and hold it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1515
matches(empty)
88.54% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"Hating that he"
1"Hating that the"
2"scrolls that covered"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean21.04
std18.77
cv0.892
sampleLengths
054
16
269
319
45
53
655
714
811
917
109
113
128
1353
1419
1554
166
1739
187
196
206
2142
223
2325
2412
2545
264
2716
2819
293
302
3159
3229
335
342
3554
3639
375
3827
397
4028
419
4220
4316
4447
454
4611
473
4837
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"was gone"
85.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was searing"
1"was stroking"
2"was holding"
75.89% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences128
ratio0.023
matches
0"He hadn't shaved; a shadow of stubble darkened his jaw, softening the sharp angles of his face just enough to be dangerous."
1"He stopped inches away, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his dark eye, close enough that the scent of him—sandalwood and something metallic, like blood—filled her nose."
2"But the way his thumb was stroking her neck, the way his breath hitched when she leaned into his touch—that told a different story."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1019
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"deep, bone-weary exhaustion"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03434739941118744
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008832188420019628
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.84
std7.34
cv0.62
sampleLengths
022
18
224
36
425
525
619
710
84
95
105
113
129
1324
1422
1514
1611
1717
189
193
208
2117
225
2314
2417
2519
2612
2720
2822
296
3018
313
3218
337
346
356
3617
3725
383
398
4017
4112
4218
4316
4411
454
462
4710
484
4919
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3203125
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences76
matches
0"His charcoal suit was pristine,"
1"She didn't step back."
2"She didn't invite him in."
3"He leaned against the doorframe,"
4"He hadn't shaved; a shadow"
5"He pushed off the doorframe"
6"He brushed past her, the"
7"She spun around, watching him"
8"He moved with a grace"
9"He laughed, a low, rumbling"
10"He walked over to the"
11"His back was to her,"
12"He turned back to face"
13"He knew it was there."
14"He knew how she got"
15"He crossed the room in"
16"He stopped inches away, close"
17"He didn't touch her, just"
18"She looked up at him,"
19"It was gone."
ratio0.526
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The bass from the curry"
1"Rory wrenched the door open,"
2"The air in the hallway"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"His charcoal suit was pristine,"
5"The scent of expensive tobacco"
6"Rory’s grip on the doorknob"
7"She didn't step back."
8"She didn't invite him in."
9"He leaned against the doorframe,"
10"He hadn't shaved; a shadow"
11"Rory glared at him, hating"
12"A deep, bone-weary exhaustion that"
13"He pushed off the doorframe"
14"The flat was tiny, barely"
15"He brushed past her, the"
16"She spun around, watching him"
17"Eva’s research material."
18"He moved with a grace"
19"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, wound"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The bass from the curry house downstairs rattled the floorboards, a steady, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through the soles of her boots."
1"A deep, bone-weary exhaustion that had nothing to do with her double shift at the Golden Empress."
2"He brushed past her, the wool of his suit grazing her arm, sending a jolt of static electricity skittering over her skin."
3"He moved with a grace that defied the clutter, his cane tapping a staccato beat on the floorboards."
4"Rory stood her ground, lifting her chin, refusing to let him see her flinch."
5"He didn't touch her, just traced the air beside her jawline, as if she were something fragile and forbidden."
6"But the way his thumb was stroking her neck, the way his breath hitched when she leaned into his touch—that told a different story."
7"Lucien smiled, a genuine, crooked expression that made his heterochromatic eyes gleam."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice barely audible"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.226
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.113
75.0545%