Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0YZ1WJGKE2YRJ9QVWSYR4

Run Details

Duration:
59.3s
Cost:
$0.066840
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and the smell of garlic and cumin from the curry house below rushed in with the cold. Lucien stood on the landing, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, the other holding a brown paper bag spotted with grease. His platinum hair caught the jaundiced light of the hallway bulb. He looked exactly the same. Charcoal suit cut close to the body, pocket square folded into a precise triangle, shoes polished to a mirror finish. That was the infuriating thing about Lucien Moreau — even when he showed up uninvited at half past ten on a Tuesday night, he looked like he'd stepped out of a fitting at Savile Row. Rory gripped the edge of the door. She'd only opened it because Ptolemy had been scratching at the wood, and she'd assumed the tabby had knocked something off the landing shelf again. "No." "I brought spring rolls." "I don't care if you brought the Crown Jewels." She started to push the door shut. His cane caught the frame — not forcefully, just enough. The ivory handle clicked against the wood like a punctuation mark. "Five minutes. That's all I need." "You said that last time. Then I spent three days pulling glass out of my hair." His mismatched eyes — the amber one warm, the black one fathomless — held hers without blinking. A muscle worked in his jaw. "This isn't that kind of visit." Rory looked at his hands. No rings on the fingers except the thin silver band on his left thumb that she knew contained a ward against scrying. No blood under the nails. No tremor. She checked his breathing next — even, controlled, not the shallow pattern she'd learned to associate with him running from something. She stepped back and let the door swing wide. Lucien crossed the threshold and immediately had to navigate the topography of Eva's flat, which was less an apartment and more a geological formation of accumulated knowledge. Stacks of books rose from the floor like stalagmites. Scrolls poked out of coffee mugs. Research notes blanketed the sofa, the kitchen counter, the top of the microwave. He moved through it all with the precise, practiced gait of someone used to stepping around obstacles — or over bodies — and settled himself against the edge of the kitchen counter. Ptolemy jumped down from the bookshelf by the window and wound between his ankles. "Traitor," Rory muttered at the cat. She locked all three deadbolts. Habit. Then she turned and leaned against the door and folded her arms. Lucien set the paper bag on the counter and began rolling his sleeves back to the elbow with the methodical care of a surgeon prepping. Forearms corded with lean muscle, the skin there a shade darker than the rest of him — evidence of whatever blood ran from his father's side. "So." "So." He mirrored her tone exactly, which she hated. "Five minutes. Clock's running." "You stopped returning my calls." "That's generally what people do when they want someone to leave them alone. Most pick up on the hint." "I'm not most people." "Yeah, Lucien. I'm aware." He pulled a spring roll from the bag and bit into it. Chewed. Swallowed. The audacity of a man eating a spring roll in her kitchen — Eva's kitchen — while she stood there with her pulse hammering in her throat. "I heard about the incident at Borough Market," he said. Casual. As though he were discussing the weather. Her left wrist throbbed. The crescent scar there had nothing to do with the supernatural, but it ached all the same in moments like these, as though her body remembered what it felt like to be small and afraid. "That wasn't your business." "A revenant nearly tore your arm off." "A revenant nearly dislocated my shoulder. There's a difference." "Semantics." "Precision, actually. I thought the French valued that." He set the spring roll down. His black eye seemed to absorb the kitchen light. The amber one caught it and threw it back. It was like being watched by two different creatures at once — one of them patient, the other hungry. "I could have helped." "You were in Marseille." "I would have come back." "I didn't want you to come back." The words landed between them with the flat weight of a stone dropped into still water. Ptolemy stopped purring. Somewhere below, a door slammed in the curry house and someone shouted in Bengali. Lucien was quiet for a long time. He picked up the spring roll, looked at it, put it back in the bag. "I know what I did," he said. "At the Blackfriars job. I know what it looked like." "What it looked like? You sold the location of the safe house to Hargrove's people. Eva had to burn six months of research. Six months, Lucien. She nearly—" "I sold them a location. Not the location. I gave them an address in Deptford that was rigged with enough hex traps to keep Hargrove's enforcers busy for a week." Rory blinked. "The real safe house was never compromised. Eva's research was never in danger. I couldn't tell either of you because the information had to look genuine when it was extracted. If you'd known — if your reactions had been anything less than authentic — Hargrove's reader would have caught it." She stared at him. Her nails bit crescents into her palms. Three months. Three months she'd carried the weight of his betrayal around like a stone in her chest, had lain on Eva's sofa listening to Ptolemy purr and replaying every moment, every conversation, looking for the lie at its root. Three months of training herself not to think about the particular way he tilted his head when he listened to her, the way his accent thickened when he was tired, the single time he'd touched her face and she'd let him. "You could have told me after." "I tried. You changed your number." "You could have come here." "I am here." Another silence. Longer this time. The radiator clicked and groaned. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter and stuck his head into the paper bag. Rory pushed off the door and moved through the maze of books until she stood close enough to see the faint network of scars along his forearms, close enough to smell bergamot and smoke and something underneath both that she'd never been able to name — something warm, something not entirely human. "Three months," she said. "Do you know what three months felt like, thinking you'd—" "Yes." His voice was stripped bare. No charm. No posture. "I counted every single day of it." She wanted to hit him. She wanted to grab the lapels of that immaculate suit and shake him until the pocket square fell out. She wanted to press her face into his chest and breathe. Instead she said, "The spring rolls better be from Golden Empress." Something shifted behind his expression. Not a smile — he was too careful for that, too aware of how thin the ground was between them. But the black eye softened. The amber one held its light. "Yu-Fei sends her regards. She also said to tell you that you're late on your Thursday shift." "It's Tuesday." "She seemed to think you'd need the reminder." Rory took the bag from the counter before Ptolemy could destroy the contents. She pulled out a spring roll and sat on the only clear patch of sofa, drawing her knees up. Lucien stayed by the counter. Giving her space. Watching with that uneven gaze that saw too much. "Sit down," she said. "You look ridiculous standing there like you're waiting for an audience with the queen." He crossed the room and lowered himself into the armchair opposite, cane propped against the side. Ptolemy immediately relocated to his lap. Lucien's hand found the cat's spine and stroked once, long and slow, and Rory watched his fingers and hated herself for watching his fingers. "The thing at Borough Market," she said through a bite of spring roll. "It wasn't random. Something sent the revenant. Something knew where I'd be." His hand stilled on the cat. "You're certain?" "It knew my name, Lucien. It said my name." The amber eye went flat. The black one became a void. She'd seen him angry before — cold, surgical, channeled into precise and devastating action. This was different. This was the other half of him rising to the surface like something dark stirring in deep water. "Tell me everything." "I will. But first you're going to sit there and explain what you've actually been doing in Marseille for three months, because I know it wasn't visiting your mother." He exhaled slowly. "You won't like it." "I haven't liked anything since October. Try me." Lucien leaned back in the chair. Ptolemy resettled. The light from the single overhead bulb threw half his face into shadow, and in that shadow the black eye disappeared entirely, leaving only the amber one burning like a coal. "My father's people made contact," he said. "From Avaros." Rory set the spring roll down. "They had information about a series of breaches — thin points between their realm and ours. London, Manchester, Edinburgh. And a name attached to whoever is engineering them." He paused. "Your name came up in the file, Aurora." Her full name. He never used her full name. The sound of it in his accent — the soft roll of the R, the way he clipped the final vowel — did something to the air between them, thinned it, charged it. "Why me?" "I don't know yet. That's why I'm here. That's why I brought spring rolls and knocked on a door I wasn't sure would open." She looked at him across the chaos of Eva's flat, across three months of silence and hurt and the careful architecture of walls she'd built to keep this exact thing from happening. Ptolemy purred. The curry house clattered beneath them. London groaned outside. "You should have come sooner." "I know." "And for the record, this counts as that kind of visit." The faintest trace of something crossed his mouth. Not a smile. Not yet. "Noted." Rory picked the spring roll back up. She bit into it and chewed and did not look at his hands or his eyes or the way the lamplight found the sharp line of his jaw. She looked anyway.
created_at"2026-02-19T04:01:37.863Z" 2/19/2026, 4:01:37 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.361
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1730
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1730
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"navigate"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"charm"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"navigate"
1"methodical"
2"pulse"
3"throbbed"
4"weight"
5"carried the weight"
6"silence"
7"charm"
8"reminder"
9"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1748
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1236
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Moreau1
Tuesday1
Savile1
Row1
Ptolemy9
Eva4
Casual1
Bengali1
Rory9
Three3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Savile"
1"Bengali"
2"Three"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he'd stepped out of a fitting"
1"felt like to be small and afraid"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1748
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean21.32
std20.71
cv0.972
sampleLengths
021
196
232
31
44
537
66
716
829
955
109
1187
1214
136
1418
1551
161
179
184
195
2019
214
224
2341
2418
2543
267
279
281
298
3043
314
324
335
347
3533
3622
3717
3828
3930
402
4150
4292
436
446
455
463
4723
4852
4914
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"being watched"
1"was tired"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs210
matches
0"were discussing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences159
ratio0.075
matches
0"That was the infuriating thing about Lucien Moreau — even when he showed up uninvited at half past ten on a Tuesday night, he looked like he'd stepped out of a fitting at Savile Row."
1"His cane caught the frame — not forcefully, just enough."
2"His mismatched eyes — the amber one warm, the black one fathomless — held hers without blinking."
3"She checked his breathing next — even, controlled, not the shallow pattern she'd learned to associate with him running from something."
4"He moved through it all with the precise, practiced gait of someone used to stepping around obstacles — or over bodies — and settled himself against the edge of the kitchen counter."
5"Forearms corded with lean muscle, the skin there a shade darker than the rest of him — evidence of whatever blood ran from his father's side."
6"The audacity of a man eating a spring roll in her kitchen — Eva's kitchen — while she stood there with her pulse hammering in her throat."
7"It was like being watched by two different creatures at once — one of them patient, the other hungry."
8"Rory pushed off the door and moved through the maze of books until she stood close enough to see the faint network of scars along his forearms, close enough to smell bergamot and smoke and something underneath both that she'd never been able to name — something warm, something not entirely human."
9"Not a smile — he was too careful for that, too aware of how thin the ground was between them."
10"She'd seen him angry before — cold, surgical, channeled into precise and devastating action."
11"The sound of it in his accent — the soft roll of the R, the way he clipped the final vowel — did something to the air between them, thinned it, charged it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1220
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.027049180327868853
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009016393442622951
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean10.99
std10.18
cv0.926
sampleLengths
021
125
211
35
420
535
67
725
81
94
1016
1110
1211
136
1416
1517
166
176
185
1922
205
212
2221
239
2427
259
266
2713
2832
2914
306
315
321
3312
3425
3526
361
379
384
395
4019
414
424
4312
441
451
4627
4710
481
497
49.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3584905660377358
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then she turned and leaned"
1"Somewhere below, a door slammed"
2"Instead she said,"
ratio0.033
70.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences91
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the"
1"He looked exactly the same."
2"She'd only opened it because"
3"She started to push the"
4"His cane caught the frame"
5"His mismatched eyes — the"
6"She checked his breathing next"
7"She stepped back and let"
8"He moved through it all"
9"She locked all three deadbolts."
10"He mirrored her tone exactly,"
11"He pulled a spring roll"
12"Her left wrist throbbed."
13"He set the spring roll"
14"His black eye seemed to"
15"It was like being watched"
16"He picked up the spring"
17"She stared at him."
18"Her nails bit crescents into"
19"His voice was stripped bare"
ratio0.374
42.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences91
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Lucien stood on the landing,"
2"His platinum hair caught the"
3"He looked exactly the same."
4"Charcoal suit cut close to"
5"That was the infuriating thing"
6"Rory gripped the edge of"
7"She'd only opened it because"
8"She started to push the"
9"His cane caught the frame"
10"The ivory handle clicked against"
11"His mismatched eyes — the"
12"A muscle worked in his"
13"Rory looked at his hands."
14"She checked his breathing next"
15"She stepped back and let"
16"Lucien crossed the threshold and"
17"Stacks of books rose from"
18"Scrolls poked out of coffee"
19"He moved through it all"
ratio0.835
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"As though he were discussing"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The crescent scar there had nothing to do with the supernatural, but it ached all the same in moments like these, as though her body remembered what it felt lik…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.131
leniency0.262
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.033
88.5724%