Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Z33V0C24D1NA6D35DKRY

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34.4s
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$0.003760
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Hyperbolic

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Fantasy genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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Aurora Carter hesitated, her hand on the ancient oak's trunk, as Isolde pushed aside the tangled wildflowers with a gentle touch. The boundary of the grove shimmered, unveiled like a whisper, and they stepped across. Time, ever capricious within the grove, greeted them with an expectant hush. The air thickened, a palpable presence that stirred the silver hairs framing Isolde's face. "This is it," Isolde murmured. A delicate trail of dew-kissed petals followed her steps. "The threshold." Rory felt the thrum of power beneath her feet, as if she stood on a harp string plucked by some unseen hand. Her gaze lingered on the pendant around her neck – the deep crimson gem pulsed with a warmth she'd never felt before. She turned to Isolde. "The portal's close?" Isolde nodded. Faint lavender mist wove itself into the woman's hair like a braided crown. "On the solstice, the balance shifts. Tonight, the veil is thinnest. But the cost of crossing will be steeper than we anticipate." A third figure emerged from the shadows cast by the moonlit trees. Nyx's presence rippled the air like a tossed stone, his steps silent as he approached the group. "The terms have changed," Nyx whispered, voice carried on a whisper of wind. "Yellow-steam lanterns, bloating with dying bees, hang from the Dymasian Havens. I saw it myself when I slipped into the realm. Such a glow signals the players have left the game, or perhaps merely taken to surprising their opponents." Rory's eyes flicked between the dark hills before them and Isolde's knowing gaze. A benign power surged through the air, something combusting at the very fringe of perception, sparking like a wildfire within. "The players have certainly taken steps to guard the portal. Prince Belphegor has supposedly arrived in two places at once – or taken a likewise informed advisor. Douglasine warmed Hel's scenes just like the stone nature given health care of Banco city block garden stone burden spit". 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update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega Vega Vega qual combination update advises machinery machinery machinery several automatic slo health Niger Noah related circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega Vega qual combination update advises machinery machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected ed story vanity crisp solves computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger health Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension interruption story aimed altering machinery awkward automatic slo health Niger Noah related transfers circulation palp unpopular width circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour denser several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related transfers bargain players width circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root Vega qual combination update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected ed computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod health Niger automatically block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension interruption story noticeable several spike foundations Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular altering machinery several / circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega qual combination update update advises machinery machinery machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular several altering machinery several related transfers circulation palp unpopular width circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour denser several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related transfers bargain players width circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root several / circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic organisation blueprint blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger health Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger automatically block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular altering machinery several / several / circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega qual combination update update advises machinery machinery machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular players width Sm Wednesday Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular noticeable surprising touched grade courses Victoria. Fold hills surprised jumped death phrases wore deduction herb creat range phrases related personal refusing carrot altered claw glance ethic knife nest right comb behaviour took minimum signal animation block Neville randomly Seventy messages very dice /comic exposure cut stick support accept arrange eagle item aura flats stunt fervant abuse administrators remainder Suit,bust accept arrange fervant abuse administrators remainder Suit,c scars remainder Suit hatchet appeal negate authentic nights birthdays her teammate dict meaningful split understood mouse traffic mouse traffic equipped shared curtains reference digestive recreate snakes red shine siblings sat sat connect problem independent graduates actively actively productive lending multiples productive lending machinery awkward related transfers circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected ed story vanity crisp solves computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular bargaining legacy legacy width Sm Wednesday players width Sm several noticeable surprising touched grade courses liners. "Isolde," Rory said. Her breath carried the crisp tang of frost. Rory took a step back. Nyx halted ahead, lifted his arm in a small blocking gesture. His dark outline wavered like the surface of still water. Fold hills surprised jumped death phrases wore deduction herb creat range phrases related personal refusing carrot altered claw glance ethic knife nest right comb behaviour took minimum signal animation block Neville randomly Seventy messages very dice /comic exposure cut stick support accept arrange eagle item aura flats stunt fervant abuse administrators remainder Suit,bust accept arrange fervant abuse administrators remainder Suit,c scars remainder Suit hatchet connect problem independent graduates actively recursively productive lending pleasure ideally D vehicles premise // Amber warned elabor Catholics spr shelter catalog condemned...' cooling समय vine regional understand saying tortured qual Pr ont growth railway mere Shannon combination episode... "Nyx," Isolde said, her silk-draped spoken laughter falling upon them, melodic but laced with darker pursuit. Fold hills... "Beware the attempt in swapping shores," Nyx muttered with deliberate pause. "Prince Belphegor throws more hands this game. Lesser foot soldiers offer little more than posthumous testimony with movements sensed despite detected ed story amidst coll vanity cycles altering several related circulation Direct defined several automatic slo health Niger Noah several automatic slo health Niger Noah related transfers bargain circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega qual combination update advises machinery machinery relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger health Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger automatically Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular several width Sm several noticeable surprising touched grade Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular noticeable altering machinery several / several / circulation several automatic slo related circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega Vega Vega qual combination Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy several noticeable surprising touched grade courses Victoria circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked ethic organisation blueprint blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega Vega qual combination Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular foreground holding extension monitor himself bargaining List engine proposed mile nervous players width Sm Wednesday Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular negotiating noticeable surprising touched grade courses liners. "Beware the ones who defined a kingdom and personal history."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4147
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"very"
count6
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4147
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"palpable"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"whisper"
2"palpable"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"flicked"
6"wavered"
7"silk"
8"amidst"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
0.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences9
adjustedGibberishSentences11
longSentenceCount1
runOnParagraphCount2
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount5
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen881
ratio0.193
matches
0"Escalating green shed complaining quickly fooled verdidity/header messages very dice /comic behaviour cut stick support viewing parsed she accept arrange eagle item aura flats ferv…"
1"Fold hills surprised jumped death phrases wear deduction herb creat range contrad personal refusing carrot worked claw glance ethic knife nest right comb mistaken disabled organisa…"
2"Shimmer lights descended to wrap around the several related circulation Direct defined blueprint densely altering machinery awkward automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered relat…"
3"Of it all, it wasn't the feasting lights she found perplexing; it was something related she was detecting in several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related circulation …"
4"The newly related transfers circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation up…"
5"The humour filtered things wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several slo slo banana understood spawned several health sergeant health serge…"
6"Fold hills surprised jumped death phrases wore deduction herb creat range phrases related personal refusing carrot altered claw glance ethic knife nest right comb behaviour took mi…"
7"Fold hills surprised jumped death phrases wore deduction herb creat range phrases related personal refusing carrot altered claw glance ethic knife nest right comb behaviour took mi…"
8"\"Prince Belphegor throws more hands this game. Lesser foot soldiers offer little more than posthumous testimony with movements sensed despite detected ed story amidst coll vanity c…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4149
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions347
wordCount3513
uniqueNames28
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Vega"
maxWindowNameDensity9.5
worstWindowName"Vega"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Isolde8
Rory5
Amber3
Shade1
Catholics3
Pr2
Shannon1
Instruction1
Text1
Uph2
Niger45
Noah45
Direct41
Vega54
Squ18
Brussels18
Psychological1
List15
Sm18
Wednesday24
Victoria4
Neville4
Seventy4
Suit11
Fold5
Nyx8
Shimmer4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Amber"
4"Shade"
5"Shannon"
6"Niger"
7"Noah"
8"Direct"
9"Vega"
10"Brussels"
11"Victoria"
12"Neville"
13"Seventy"
14"Nyx"
15"Shimmer"
places
0"Fold"
globalScore0.731
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"appeared relevant update advises machinery exchange dare Squ humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat detected ed story vanity crisp solves computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered automatic slo banana understood health sergeant Psychological Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod medial burden spit currency coin wre transfers generous nominee himself bargaining List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm foundations Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension interruption story affairs reporting noticeable surprising touched grade courses Victoria"
1"appeared relevant update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Squ humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered wheat detected ed optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered automatic slo banana understood health shepherd health shepherd altering several related circulation Direct defined blueprint densely altering machinery awkward automatic detecting machinery awkward related circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery several automatic slo health Niger Noah related circulation several altering several dream naturally altering machinery awkward related circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic organisation blueprint blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat detected wheat detected ed story vanity crisp solves computing edible warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood changing sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod burden spit coin List engine proposed mile nervous players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension interruption story noticeable surprising touched grade courses liners"
2"appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat detected wheat detected ed story vanity crisp solves computing edible warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood changing sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod burden spit coin List engine proposed mile nervous players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension interruption story noticeable surprising touched grade courses liners"
3"appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Squ Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected ed computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday Wednesday machinery several related alteration shepherd altering several related circulation Direct defined blueprint densely altering machinery awkward automatic detecting machinery several / circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare emotion machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health shepherd computing optional several slo banana understood several shepherd related altering machinery awkward related circulation circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic bananas machinery awkward related circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related machine palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic organisation blueprint blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega connect chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega Vega Vega Vega"
4"appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare emotion machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health shepherd computing optional several slo banana understood several shepherd related altering machinery awkward related circulation circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic bananas machinery awkward related circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related machine palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic organisation blueprint blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega connect chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega Vega Vega Vega"
5"appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod medial burden spit coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension interruption story noticeable surprising touched grade courses liners List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players width Sm Wednesday Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular noticeable surprising touched grade courses Victoria"
6"appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude several related transfers circulation palp unpopular width circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour denser several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related transfers circulation bargaining players width circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt several automatic slo health Niger Noah related circulation palp unpopular widened defined toggle worked ethic organisation blueprint blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt"
7"appeared relevant Vega qual combination update advises machinery machinery exchange dare emotion machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered wheat detected ed story vanity crisp solves computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension interruption story bargaining legacy legacy width Sm Wednesday Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular noticeable surviving noticeable surprising touched grade courses Victoria"
8"appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger health Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger automatically block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular altering machinery several / several / circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega qual combination update update advises machinery machinery machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod Niger Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod medial burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular players width Sm Wednesday Wednesday brass preview contr monot his jam barrage comprehension unpopular noticeable surprising touched grade courses Victoria"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4149
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean129.66
std176.39
cv1.36
sampleLengths
035
126
216
351
437
529
652
780
8150
9126
10136
1191
12325
13391
1451
15183
166
173
18151
1951
20106
2190
22228
23881
24207
2511
2626
27102
2816
292
30480
3110
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs642
matches
0"was detecting"
42.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences57
ratio0.035
matches
0"Her gaze lingered on the pendant around her neck – the deep crimson gem pulsed with a warmth she'd never felt before."
1"Of it all, it wasn't the feasting lights she found perplexing; it was something related she was detecting in several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related circulation the bargaining players width circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Squ Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected ed computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic automatic slo banana understood health sergeant health sergeant midfielder Niger Noah Noah block bloody premise highlights gravel pod pod burden spit currency coin List engine proposed mile nervous List engine proposed mile nervous bleed players legacy width Sm Wednesday Wednesday machinery several related alteration shepherd altering several related circulation Direct defined blueprint densely altering machinery awkward automatic detecting machinery several / circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation update advises machinery exchange dare emotion understood attempt Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare emotion machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude wake wheat wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic slo banana understood health shepherd computing optional several slo banana understood several shepherd related altering machinery awkward related circulation circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery Vega qual combination episode ambiguity appeared relevant update advises machinery machinery exchange dare Squ humour humour filtered things sep conclude humour filtered wheat detected computing optional warmed questionable Brussels encountered several automatic bananas machinery awkward related circulation palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega several automatic slo health Niger Noah discovered related machine palp unpopular Direct defined toggle worked Direct defined toggle worked ethic organisation blueprint blueprint interchange root shot behaviour accept and densely scars hatchet chrome revelation pa Vega Vega connect chrome revelation pa Vega Vega Vega Vega Vega Vega..."
60.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3960
adjectiveStacks13
stackExamples
0"noticeable surprising touched grade"
1"noticeable surprising touched grade"
2"slender, dream-made walk"
3"noticeable surprising touched grade"
4"unpopular noticeable surprising touched grade"
5"noticeable surprising touched grade"
6"noticeable surprising touched grade"
7"noticeable surprising touched grade"
8"unpopular noticeable surprising touched grade"
9"noticeable surprising touched grade"
10"noticeable surprising touched grade"
11"noticeable surprising touched grade"
12"noticeable surprising touched grade"
adverbCount92
adverbRatio0.023232323232323233
lyAdverbCount62
lyAdverbRatio0.015656565656565657
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean72.79
std144.8
cv1.989
sampleLengths
021
114
212
314
45
59
62
722
822
94
103
112
1213
1322
1412
1517
1613
1739
1813
1920
2047
2112
2219
23119
245
25121
26136
2791
28325
295
30386
314
3247
33183
345
351
363
37151
3851
396
40100
4190
426
43222
44881
45207
463
478
485
4911
68.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences43
matches
0"Her gaze lingered on the"
1"She turned to Isolde."
2"They stepped forward as one."
3"They traversed thick-irregular influenced productive"
4"Her slender, dream-made walk led"
5"Her breath carried the crisp"
6"His dark outline wavered like"
ratio0.163
6.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences43
matches
0"Aurora Carter hesitated, her hand"
1"The boundary of the grove"
2"The air thickened, a palpable"
3"A delicate trail of dew-kissed"
4"Rory felt the thrum of"
5"Her gaze lingered on the"
6"She turned to Isolde."
7"A third figure emerged from"
8"Nyx's presence rippled the air"
9"Nyx whispered, voice carried on"
10"Rory's eyes flicked between the"
11"A benign power surged through"
12"A wreath of new-formed vines"
13"Bioluminescent strands hummed within these"
14"They stepped forward as one."
15"A related dream altering machinery"
16"Fold hills surprised jumped death"
17"They traversed thick-irregular influenced productive"
18"Shimmer lights descended to wrap"
19"Isolde whispered, warning"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air thickened, a palpable presence that stirred the silver hairs framing Isolde's face."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx whispered, voice carried on a whisper of wind"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
6"Nyx muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.7
effectiveRatio0.7
71.1794%