Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Z7M277FX2P00159Q5YN9

Run Details

Duration:
2m
Cost:
$0.002342
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered like heat rising off asphalt as Aurora stepped through the rift, her heartstone pendant pulsing warmly against her chest. The ground beneath her boots didn’t feel like Earth — it was soft, almost spongy, covered in a thick carpet of moss that glowed faintly in hues of amber and gold. The sky above wasn’t a sky, not really. It was a canopy of swirling, warm light, like liquid honey caught in a slow whirlpool. “This place… it’s alive.” Nyx’s voice was a whisper that seemed to blend with the soft rustling around them. Their shadowy form shifted, solidifying for a moment as they reached out to touch a vine hanging from a nearby tree. The vine curled slightly at their touch, retracting like a shy creature. “Dymas,” Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes scanning the horizon. She moved without sound, her silver hair catching the amber light, making it seem like strands of molten metal. “A realm of excess, indulgence… and danger. Tread carefully.” Aurora’s fingers brushed the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her side, the cold steel a stark contrast to the warmth of the pendant. “Indulgence? Doesn’t seem so bad so far.” Nyx’s form flickered, their violet eyes narrowing. “Appearances deceive. This place feeds on desire, Rory. It twists it, makes it uncontrollable.” They moved deeper into the grove, the path ahead lined with trees that looked like they belonged in a dream. Their trunks were smooth and pale, almost translucent, with veins of gold running through them like molten rivers. The leaves were impossibly large, their edges razor-sharp, catching the light and scattering it in dazzling patterns across the ground. The air was thick with the scent of something sweet and rich, like honey and burnt sugar mixed with the heady fragrance of ripe fruit. Aurora’s mouth watered despite herself, her stomach growling faintly. “Don’t eat anything,” Isolde warned, her voice low but firm. “Not a single berry, not a drop of water. The moment you indulge, you’re bound.” Aurora nodded, but her eyes lingered on a cluster of fruit hanging from a nearby branch. They were perfectly round, their skins a deep crimson that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant around her neck. Nyx stepped closer to her, their shadowy hand brushing her shoulder. “Focus. The longer we’re here, the harder it becomes.” They pressed on, the path widening into a clearing dominated by a massive stone archway. It was covered in intricate carvings — scenes of feasts, celebrations, and indulgence etched into the smooth surface. The carvings seemed to move as they watched, the figures laughing and dancing, their faces eerily lifelike. Beyond the archway, a sprawling vineyard stretched out as far as the eye could see. The vines were heavy with grapes, each one the size of a fist and glowing faintly with an inner light. Aurora could hear the faint sound of laughter and music drifting from somewhere in the distance, a melody that tugged at her chest, pulling her forward. “We’re not alone,” Nyx whispered, their form flickering as they scanned the area. Isolde’s eyes narrowed. “The helbound. Souls trapped here, enslaved to serve. Stay close.” They moved cautiously through the vineyard, the air growing warmer, thicker, with every step. Aurora felt a bead of sweat trickle down her temple, the pendant around her neck pulsing faster. Ahead, the path led to a grand pavilion, its structure made entirely of glass and gold. Inside, long tables were laden with food — roasted meats, exotic fruits, steaming bread, and decanters of wine that shimmered like liquid fire. The scents were overwhelming, wrapping around her like a warm blanket, whispering promises of comfort and pleasure. Aurora’s steps faltered, her gaze locked on a platter of golden fruit. Each one looked perfect, untouched, their skins gleaming in the amber light. “Rory.” Nyx’s voice was sharp, snapping her out of the trance. She blinked, shaking her head. “Sorry. It’s… hard to think straight.” Isolde’s hand rested on her arm, her touch cold against Aurora’s warm skin. “The realm thrives on distraction. Remember why you’re here.” Aurora nodded, gripping the pendant tightly. The warmth steadied her, grounding her thoughts. They skirted the pavilion, the laughter and music growing louder, more insistent. Aurora caught glimpses of figures moving inside — helbound souls dressed in finery, their faces frozen in expressions of joy that didn’t reach their hollow eyes. Beyond the pavilion, the path sloped downward, leading to a massive garden filled with flowers that shouldn’t exist. Their petals were impossibly large, their colors shifting as they watched, from deep crimson to vibrant gold to a pale, silvery blue. The air hummed with a low, resonant sound, like the distant toll of a bell. Nyx paused, their shadowy form solidifying as they knelt beside a flower. Its petals curled toward them, leaving streaks of black smoke where they made contact. “These flowers… they’re feeding on me,” Nyx said, their voice tinged with unease. Isolde’s lips pressed into a thin line. “The garden feeds on all things. Even shadows.” They moved quickly through the garden, the flowers following their progress, their petals twisting and turning like curious creatures. Aurora’s skin prickled as she walked, the pendant pulsing faster, warmer. At the center of the garden stood a tree unlike any Aurora had ever seen. Its trunk was twisted and black, its branches reaching upward like skeletal fingers. Hanging from its branches were crystalline fruits, each one glowing with a pale, icy light. “The Hearttree,” Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible. “The source of the realm’s power.” Nyx’s form flickered, their violet eyes narrowing. “And the reason we’re here.” As they approached the tree, the air grew colder, a stark contrast to the warmth of the rest of the realm. The ground beneath their feet was covered in frost, each step crunching softly against the ice. Aurora’s breath came out in visible puffs, her fingers tightening around the hilt of the blade. “Something doesn’t feel right.” Isolde’s gaze swept the area, her lavender eyes sharp. “We’re not alone.” The words had barely left her lips when the ground beneath them trembled, the frost cracking and splitting apart. Shadows emerged from the cracks, twisting and coalescing into figures that moved with unnatural speed. Nyx’s form solidified completely, their violet eyes glowing brighter as they stepped forward. “Helbound archons. Stay behind me.” Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade, its cold steel gleaming as she moved to stand beside Nyx. “Not exactly the welcome I was expecting.” Isolde’s hands glowed with a faint silvery light as she summoned a shimmering barrier around them. “The Hearttree’s guardians. They’ll stop at nothing to protect it.” The archons lunged, their forms shifting and twisting like living shadows. Aurora swung the blade, its edge cutting through the darkness with ease, but the archons reformed almost instantly, their laughter echoing unnaturally. Nyx’s voice cut through the chaos, low and commanding. “We need to reach the Hearttree. Now.” They fought their way forward, the archons relentless in their pursuit. Aurora’s arms burned with the effort, the blade growing heavier with each swing. Isolde’s barrier flickered, the archons’ shadows clawing at it with increasing ferocity. Finally, they reached the base of the Hearttree, its crystalline fruits pulsing with a cold light. Nyx reached out, their shadowy hand trembling as they grasped one of the fruits. The moment their fingers touched it, the entire realm seemed to shudder, the amber sky darkening to a deep, oppressive black. “Time to go,” Nyx said, their voice strained. Isolde nodded, her hands moving in a swift, intricate pattern as she opened a rift back to Earth. The archons screeched, their forms twisting and stretching as they lunged forward. Aurora swung the blade one last time, cutting through the shadows as she followed Nyx and Isolde through the rift. The warmth of Dymas vanished, replaced by the familiar chill of Earth’s night air. They collapsed onto the grass of Richmond Park, the Hearttree fruit glowing faintly in Nyx’s shadowy hand. Aurora let out a shaky breath, her fingers trembling as she sheathed the blade. “That… was more than I bargained for.” Isolde’s gaze rested on the fruit, her lavender eyes filled with a mix of relief and apprehension. “The Hearttree’s essence. A dangerous prize… but perhaps a necessary one.” Nyx’s form flickered, their violet eyes meeting Aurora’s. “And only the beginning.” The weight of their words hung in the air, the distant echoes of Dymas’ laughter fading into the night.
created_at"2026-02-19T04:01:46.635Z" 2/19/2026, 4:01:46 AM
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native_tokens_completion2008
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
64.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"warmly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
5
adverb"cautiously"
count1
6
adverb"tightly"
count1
7
adverb"quickly"
count1
8
adverb"softly"
count1
9
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"warmly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"perfectly"
5"cautiously"
6"tightly"
7"quickly"
8"softly"
9"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"stark"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count4
5
word"flickered"
count4
6
word"desire"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count2
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"structure"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"gleaming"
count2
16
word"tinged"
count1
17
word"crystalline"
count2
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
20
word"oppressive"
count1
21
word"familiar"
count1
22
word"chill"
count1
23
word"apprehension"
count1
24
word"weight"
count1
25
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"whisper"
2"scanning"
3"stark"
4"warmth"
5"flickered"
6"desire"
7"stomach"
8"pulse"
9"intricate"
10"etched"
11"dancing"
12"scanned"
13"structure"
14"perfect"
15"gleaming"
16"tinged"
17"crystalline"
18"trembled"
19"echoing"
20"oppressive"
21"familiar"
22"chill"
23"apprehension"
24"weight"
25"echoes"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
3
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
2"The weight of their words"
3"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"d with unease"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1418
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1225
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora19
Earth3
Fae-forged2
Isolde12
Nyx16
Finally1
Hearttree2
Dymas1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Dymas"
places
0"Earth"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.724
windowScore0.833
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"whisper that seemed to blend with the soft rustling around them"
1"looked like they belonged in a dream"
2"crimson that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant around her neck"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1418
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean28.36
std15.22
cv0.537
sampleLengths
077
152
237
331
421
558
634
725
837
920
1050
1161
1213
1313
1431
1556
1624
1711
1811
1922
2013
2138
2255
2326
2413
2515
2630
2743
2814
2912
3037
3120
3212
3334
3418
3523
3626
3733
3816
3936
4030
4121
428
4330
4434
4517
4621
4728
4812
4919
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"was covered"
1"was covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs215
matches(empty)
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences104
ratio0.038
matches
0"The ground beneath her boots didn’t feel like Earth — it was soft, almost spongy, covered in a thick carpet of moss that glowed faintly in hues of amber and gold."
1"It was covered in intricate carvings — scenes of feasts, celebrations, and indulgence etched into the smooth surface."
2"Inside, long tables were laden with food — roasted meats, exotic fruits, steaming bread, and decanters of wine that shimmered like liquid fire."
3"Aurora caught glimpses of figures moving inside — helbound souls dressed in finery, their faces frozen in expressions of joy that didn’t reach their hollow eyes."
99.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1052
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.0408745247148289
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.019961977186311788
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean13.63
std5.74
cv0.421
sampleLengths
022
131
28
316
419
521
612
79
819
99
1024
117
127
1314
1420
1518
1620
1725
189
1910
2015
2116
2221
2311
249
2515
2618
2717
2815
2920
3026
3113
323
3310
3414
3517
3616
3723
3817
3912
4012
4111
425
436
4413
459
466
477
4812
4926
51.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.33653846153846156
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners35
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Finally, they reached the base"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences84
matches
0"It was a canopy of"
1"Their shadowy form shifted, solidifying"
2"She moved without sound, her"
3"They moved deeper into the"
4"Their trunks were smooth and"
5"They were perfectly round, their"
6"They pressed on, the path"
7"It was covered in intricate"
8"They moved cautiously through the"
9"She blinked, shaking her head."
10"They skirted the pavilion, the"
11"Their petals were impossibly large,"
12"Its petals curled toward them,"
13"They moved quickly through the"
14"Its trunk was twisted and"
15"They fought their way forward,"
16"They collapsed onto the grass"
ratio0.202
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences84
matches
0"The air shimmered like heat"
1"The ground beneath her boots"
2"The sky above wasn’t a"
3"It was a canopy of"
4"Nyx’s voice was a whisper"
5"Their shadowy form shifted, solidifying"
6"The vine curled slightly at"
7"Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes"
8"She moved without sound, her"
9"Aurora’s fingers brushed the hilt"
10"Nyx’s form flickered, their violet"
11"They moved deeper into the"
12"Their trunks were smooth and"
13"The leaves were impossibly large,"
14"The air was thick with"
15"Aurora’s mouth watered despite herself,"
16"Isolde warned, her voice low"
17"Aurora nodded, but her eyes"
18"They were perfectly round, their"
19"Nyx stepped closer to her,"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The ground beneath her boots didn’t feel like Earth — it was soft, almost spongy, covered in a thick carpet of moss that glowed faintly in hues of amber and gol…"
1"They were perfectly round, their skins a deep crimson that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant around her neck."
2"Aurora could hear the faint sound of laughter and music drifting from somewhere in the distance, a melody that tugged at her chest, pulling her forward."
3"Inside, long tables were laden with food — roasted meats, exotic fruits, steaming bread, and decanters of wine that shimmered like liquid fire."
4"Aurora caught glimpses of figures moving inside — helbound souls dressed in finery, their faces frozen in expressions of joy that didn’t reach their hollow eyes…"
5"They moved quickly through the garden, the flowers following their progress, their petals twisting and turning like curious creatures."
6"The archons lunged, their forms shifting and twisting like living shadows."
7"Aurora swung the blade, its edge cutting through the darkness with ease, but the archons reformed almost instantly, their laughter echoing unnaturally."
8"The archons screeched, their forms twisting and stretching as they lunged forward."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes scanning the horizon"
1"Isolde warned, her voice low but firm"
2"Nyx whispered, their form flickering as they scanned the area"
3"Isolde murmured, her voice barely audible"
4"Isolde’s barrier flickered, the archons’ shadows clawing at it with increasing ferocity"
5"Nyx said, their voice strained"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.286
70.2973%