Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0Z9CEX0ZZN7SN47TYJRB4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.001494
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn checked her watch. The leather strap was tight around her left wrist, the black face illuminated by the flickering LED signs above the abandoned platform. Three in the morning. The Metropolitan Transit service had ended hours ago, but the Victorian ticket barriers still stood like sentinels. A gate hung open, forcing the wind to whistle through the concrete arches. The Veil Market didn't announce its arrival. It just materialized, a chaotic collision of neon signs and candlelight squeezed into the hollowed-out space beneath Camden. Quinn pressed her palms against her belt, forcing her breathing to sync with the sharp intake of the damp air. Her jaw was set, the muscles in her face hardening into a mask of stoicism. She scanned the perimeter. No uniformed police. No plainclothes detectives. Just a crowd of shadowy figures moving like a river around a submerged rock. She walked toward the back of the station, where the stalls were concentrated. The floor here was slick with pooled condensation and oil. There was a crowd gathered around the central stall. Quinn pushed through, her boots scuffing the tiles. They parted instantly, sensing the predator in their midst. "Move it," Quinn commanded, her voice low and gravelly. A man with a tattoo of a spider on his neck mumbled an apology and shuffled aside. Quinn stepped up to the wooden counter. Arthur Pendelton lay flat on his back, his neck bent at an impossible ninety-degree angle. He was a fence, a middleman for the underworld, and his inventory was always questionable. But this... this wasn't inventory. It was art. Blood pooled around his head, but it didn't soak into the wood. It glowed, a faint, sickly violet. "Quinn." The voice was soft, barely rising above the hum of the overhead fluorescent lights that had strayed to life in this sector. Quinn didn't turn. She crouched, inspecting the wound. The skin around the neck was cauterized, not cut. It looked like it had been branded by a torch, but the line was too clean, too thin. "Eva." Quinn kept her eyes on the wound. "You shouldn't be here." "I had to come," Eva said. Her curly red hair framed a face pale with anxiety, freckles dusting her cheeks like pepper. She pushed her round glasses up her nose, her fingers trembling slightly. "The rumors. I knew Arthur was the target." "Rumors get you killed." "This isn't a killing, Harlow. It’s a calling." Eva reached into her satchel, a worn leather bag covered in small tears, and pulled out a brass compass. The face was etched with protective sigils, the needle hovering still. "Step back, Evie. Let me work." "I won't. The residual magic... it's too thick." Eva spun the compass in her hand. The needle wasn't pointing north. It was vibrating, twitching erratically. "Look at the floor." Quinn looked down. There were no footprints leading *to* the body. No tracks in the pooling blood, no scuff marks on the tiles. Just Pendelton’s own shoes. The killer hadn't walked here. They had arrived without weight. Quinn stood up, stepping over the body. She placed a hand on the stall's edge. It was cold, unnaturally so. "He was dealing in Soul-fire vials yesterday. Maybe he found the wrong shipment." "You're overlooking the geometry," Eva said, her voice rising a fraction. She tapped the compass against the wood. "The spill isn't random. Look at where the blood stops." Quinn leaned in, studying the stain. It formed a perfect circle around Arthur’s head, but inside the circle, the wood was warped. It wasn't wet. It looked like the wood had been drilled into from below. A phantom drill. "Here." Eva pointed to the center of the circle. "Look at the distortion." Quinn squinted. It looked like a reflection, distorted by heat haze, but there was no heat. She pressed her fingers against the wood. It was solid. "You're overcomplicating this," Quinn said. She holstered her weapon and adjusted her belt. "It's a ritual. The Clique. They're sending a message." "It's not the Clique," Eva stepped closer, her hand hovering over the compass. The needle suddenly snapped upward, pointing straight down into the center of Arthur's chest. "They don't use tools like this. They use power. This..." Eva hesitated. "This is surgical." Quinn turned to face her. The detective’s eyes were cold brown pits, assessing. "Surgical how? The guy's neck is branded." "I didn't say it was a bullet or a blade," Eva whispered, her gaze darting from the body to the empty space above the stalls. "Look at the shadows." The overhead lights flickered again, casting long, dancing shadows against the concrete columns. But these shadows weren't following the light. They were pulsing. One large shadow detached itself from Arthur’s form and stretched across the floor toward the tunnel entrance. It looked like a claw. Quinn drew her gun. "Stay behind me." "I told you, you're wrong." Eva’s hands were gripping her satchel straps tight enough to whiten her knuckles. "He wasn't killed, Harlow. He was harvested." "For what?" "His organics," Eva said, her voice trembling. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small, rolled parchment. "I found this in the restricted archives. A receipt from 'The Gilded Cage.' Arthur bought a specific containment unit for a guest yesterday. I thought it was just for storage." "Containment unit." "He bought a 'patient.' And now he's the patient." Eva’s eyes went wide behind the lenses of her glasses. "Look at the blood again." Quinn looked. The purple glow was intensifying, creeping up Arthur’s neck. "It's not blood, Harlow. It's tonic." Eva grabbed Quinn’s elbow, her fingers digging in hard. "It's accelerating his transformation. He's becoming what the buyer wants." Quinn felt a chill that had nothing to do with the underground air. She looked at the closed ticket barriers at the far end of the platform. The heavy iron gates were vibrating. A low thrumming sound emanated from the darkness beyond. "They're coming," Eva whispered, spinning the compass. The needle was spinning so fast it blurred. Quinn holstered her gun and reached out, grabbing Eva by the lapels of her coat. She didn't pull her close; she planted her feet, anchoring the scientist in place. "Not us," Quinn said, her voice low and commanding. "Them." The shadows detached fully from Arthur’s body. They rose up the stone pillars, elongating into humanoid shapes. They weren't people. They were smears of ink, dripping with darkness. Quinn aimed her weapon at the nearest shadow. "Get ready to run." Eva nodded, her mouth tight with fear, her hand resting on the brass compass. The needle was no longer moving; it had locked in place, locked on Quinn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"chaotic"
2"scanned"
3"predator"
4"etched"
5"weight"
6"perfect"
7"flickered"
8"dancing"
9"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences100
matches
0"e with anxiety"
1"felt a chill"
2"t with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1115
ratio0.001
matches
0"to"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount893
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.35
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Quinn21
Metropolitan1
Transit1
Victorian1
Veil1
Market1
Camden1
Pendelton2
Eva15
Arthur6
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Pendelton"
3"Eva"
4"Arthur"
places(empty)
globalScore0.324
windowScore0.333
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it had been branded by a torc"
1"looked like the wood had been drilled int"
2"looked like a reflection, distorted by he"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1115
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean25.34
std16.34
cv0.645
sampleLengths
061
184
223
326
49
524
638
718
823
935
1012
1142
124
1338
146
1529
163
1734
1833
1928
2039
2113
2226
2322
2437
255
2620
2729
2845
297
3025
312
3249
332
3424
3511
3625
3742
3815
3929
4010
4128
4212
4328
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"was cauterized"
1"been branded"
2"was etched"
3"been drilled"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs159
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
1"was vibrating"
2"weren't following"
3"were pulsing"
4"were gripping"
5"was intensifying"
6"were vibrating"
7"was spinning"
96.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences122
ratio0.016
matches
0"She didn't pull her close; she planted her feet, anchoring the scientist in place."
1"The needle was no longer moving; it had locked in place, locked on Quinn."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount895
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.0335195530726257
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0111731843575419
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean9.14
std5.75
cv0.629
sampleLengths
05
122
24
317
413
57
618
720
815
94
103
113
1214
1313
1410
159
168
179
189
1917
207
2115
2215
232
243
253
2612
276
2823
293
305
319
3218
338
344
356
3616
3712
388
394
4027
4111
426
4315
445
455
464
473
488
4912
43.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2786885245901639
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners34
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just a crowd of shadowy"
1"Just Pendelton’s own shoes."
ratio0.021
83.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences94
matches
0"It just materialized, a chaotic"
1"Her jaw was set, the"
2"She scanned the perimeter."
3"She walked toward the back"
4"They parted instantly, sensing the"
5"He was a fence, a"
6"It was art."
7"It glowed, a faint, sickly"
8"She crouched, inspecting the wound."
9"It looked like it had"
10"Her curly red hair framed"
11"She pushed her round glasses"
12"It was vibrating, twitching erratically."
13"They had arrived without weight."
14"She placed a hand on"
15"It was cold, unnaturally so."
16"She tapped the compass against"
17"It formed a perfect circle"
18"It wasn't wet."
19"It looked like the wood"
ratio0.34
13.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences94
matches
0"Harlow Quinn checked her watch."
1"The leather strap was tight"
2"The Metropolitan Transit service had"
3"A gate hung open, forcing"
4"The Veil Market didn't announce"
5"It just materialized, a chaotic"
6"Quinn pressed her palms against"
7"Her jaw was set, the"
8"She scanned the perimeter."
9"She walked toward the back"
10"The floor here was slick"
11"Quinn pushed through, her boots"
12"They parted instantly, sensing the"
13"Quinn commanded, her voice low"
14"A man with a tattoo"
15"Quinn stepped up to the"
16"Arthur Pendelton lay flat on"
17"He was a fence, a"
18"this wasn't inventory."
19"It was art."
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Quinn commanded, her voice low and gravelly"
1"Eva said, her voice rising a fraction"
2"Eva stepped, her hand hovering over the compass"
3"Eva said, her voice trembling"
4"Eva grabbed, her fingers digging in hard"
5"Quinn said, her voice low and commanding"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.359
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.103
77.1936%