Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0ZJARSA1VMHZRWCE4PXD4

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12.0s
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter fumbled with her keys, juggling the paper bags crammed with tonight's dinner deliveries. With the door to Eva's flat in sight, she balanced everything precariously while attempting to secure the keys from between her teeth. Her shoulder ached from squeezing past strangers in the hurried streets below, and Eva's cat, Ptolemy, impatiently meowed at the threshold on the other side. The door swung open unexpectedly. A pause, pregnant with so much unsaid history, stretched between them. Lucien Moreau stood framed in the doorway, somehow looking even sharper than she had remembered, his tailored charcoal suit clinging like an extension of his half-demon guise. Those eyes—one containing a swirl of amber and the other, abyssal black—stared into her with an intensity Rory had long since tried to forget. "Aurora," Lucien murmured, shifting his weight elegantly with his ivory-handled cane poised as if it were simply another appendage. "Lucien." Rory's voice carried a mixture of surprise and bitterness, like flavourful but too sharp curry sauce. "Weren't you supposed to be in Paris? Or was it... Rio?" The sarcasm barely masked the old resentment simmering just beneath its surface. His crisp smile maintained its charm. "Circumstances changed. I find myself subscribing to the unpredictability of life's capricious whims." His gaze swept over her, stopping at her wrist where the crescent-shaped scar remained, a reminder of past vulnerabilities. Rory stared him down, her stance steadfast despite the emotional charge crackling between them. "Yes, life's whims. Like the time you left without a word." "I didn't come here for a history lesson, Aurora." "Then why are you here?" Her eyes searched his features for sincerity. Lucien stepped aside, allowing her into the small flat. Inside, remnants of chaos reigned; books and papers created precarious towers, shadowed by the glow of flickering candles. Ptolemy darted around Lucien, brushing against Rory's legs, the tabby's curiosity piqued by the unexpected company. "We have mutual interests," Lucien replied, closing the heavy door with a deliberate slowness. "Rumours abound about dark dealings—hardly the mundane kind found in Soho—more... celestial." Rory set her bags on the cluttered table, subtly shifting her stance to evade uncovering her nervousness. "I've heard things, too." A defiant breeze stirred from the open window, rustling yellowing scrolls. "But that doesn't explain why you're here, in Eva's flat." Lucien tensed, his cane reverberating as if to communicate a silent distress warning. "Eva's caught up in it more than I'm comfortable with." Rory’s suspicion deepened. "Dark dealings? And you're worried about Eva?" Confusion edged her words. He scrutinized a particularly cryptic manuscript, sulking within his own contemplations. "Among other things, yes. This extends beyond mere mortal affairs." "And where do we fit in?" "You—" Lucien gestured slightly "—remain pivotal." Aurora leaned against the back wall, storied parchment brushing her hands. She recognized Eva's handwriting between scrap notes, Latin incantations scribbled in haste. "Pivotal to what?" "That should become evident in due time," Lucien paused, absorbing the chaos as he considered his words. "But we cut through it together." "Together." She repeated the word slowly, processing its implications. Rory regarded him warily, unsure if his declaration carried shadows of past betrayal or the promise of redemption. Lucien closed the distance between them. His presence was compelling, drawing her towards irredeemable decisions. "I didn't mean to hurt you," he confessed in lowered tones, his voice seemingly burdened by lost echoes. "And you're right to wonder about everything." Rory's fingers absently traced the scar on her wrist. Unspoken histories surged within her thoughts, reflecting the intimacy that had once defined them. "We never got closure." Her words cut through the air, sharp as blades concealed within ivory canes. Accountability gripped Lucien's features just as regret colored Rory's. He placed a hand on the table as if bracing for something punctuated. "Then let’s find it," he said, a faint plea threading his normally poised speech. Surprising herself, Rory nodded. "Eva," she said softly, changing her focus, "knows what she's doing." Though spoken aloud, she knew Lucien understood the protective undertone, unspoken. "Indeed. But safety often eludes intention." Together, they surveyed the room—an impromptu alliance tethered by honor and mistakes. Rory shifted, the energy between them undeniable yet increasingly hopeful. Her pulse mirrored memories rushing back, promising turmoil and possibilities colliding in the same furious dance as before. Beyond the flickering candlelight, intensities continued to strain against the confined limits of physical space. Aurora and Lucien stood at its epicenter, submerged in past sentiments and future uncertainties. Yet somehow, with the door closed behind them, the inevitable had become unavoidable. Lucien's eyes bore into her. "Shall we?" Rory nodded once more, her brave exterior rivaling the trepidation within. "Onward," she replied, a whispered hope encased in resilience. As the flat absorbed their presence, tension relaxed, revealing itself in hues of reassurance and renewed determination. Embarking on perilous aims, Aurora Carter allowed one last glance—from tangled dreams and heartbreak—into Lucien Moreau's eyes. His gaze anchored memory, refusing to waiver under the oncoming storm. Thus, united at the precipice with uncalibrated trust, Aurora and Lucien embraced the danger—a dance inevitable since their story's inception. Amid uncertainties and shadows beyond, they navigated the chaos hand in hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
12.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"the old resentment simmering just [just]"
1"Lucien gestured slightly [slightly]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.188
77.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount875
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"warily"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"warily"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount875
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"abyssal"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"comfortable"
count1
7
word"echoes"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"dance"
count2
12
word"trepidation"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"abyssal"
1"intensity"
2"weight"
3"simmering"
4"charm"
5"reminder"
6"comfortable"
7"echoes"
8"traced"
9"unspoken"
10"pulse"
11"dance"
12"trepidation"
13"tension"
14"navigated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords863
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount695
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Eva3
Ptolemy2
Moreau2
Rory12
Lucien15
Aurora5
Latin1
Accountability1
Surprising1
Together1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
6"Aurora"
7"Accountability"
places(empty)
globalScore0.421
windowScore0.5
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"nes, his voice seemingly burdened by lost ec"
1"as if bracing for something punctuated"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount863
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean27.84
std15.53
cv0.558
sampleLengths
062
15
262
319
440
538
625
79
812
943
1026
1142
1223
1314
1421
156
166
1726
1823
1927
2040
2140
2236
2326
246
2540
2642
277
2820
2945
3032
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences67
ratio0.09
matches
0"Those eyes—one containing a swirl of amber and the other, abyssal black—stared into her with an intensity Rory had long since tried to forget."
1"Inside, remnants of chaos reigned; books and papers created precarious towers, shadowed by the glow of flickering candles."
2"\"You—\" Lucien gestured slightly \"—remain pivotal.\""
3"Together, they surveyed the room—an impromptu alliance tethered by honor and mistakes."
4"Embarking on perilous aims, Aurora Carter allowed one last glance—from tangled dreams and heartbreak—into Lucien Moreau's eyes."
5"Thus, united at the precipice with uncalibrated trust, Aurora and Lucien embraced the danger—a dance inevitable since their story's inception."
84.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount372
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.053763440860215055
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.024193548387096774
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean12.88
std6.02
cv0.468
sampleLengths
015
122
225
35
411
527
624
719
817
923
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1214
1311
149
1512
169
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1816
1914
2012
2117
2215
2310
2413
2510
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2711
2811
2910
306
316
3211
3312
343
3517
366
379
3818
396
409
4118
427
439
4414
4517
469
4713
4814
494
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6119402985074627
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners41
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Thus, united at the precipice"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences55
matches
0"Her shoulder ached from squeezing"
1"His crisp smile maintained its"
2"His gaze swept over her,"
3"Her eyes searched his features"
4"He scrutinized a particularly cryptic"
5"She recognized Eva's handwriting between"
6"She repeated the word slowly,"
7"His presence was compelling, drawing"
8"he confessed in lowered tones,"
9"Her words cut through the"
10"He placed a hand on"
11"he said, a faint plea"
12"she said softly, changing her"
13"Her pulse mirrored memories rushing"
14"she replied, a whispered hope"
15"His gaze anchored memory, refusing"
ratio0.291
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences55
matches
0"Aurora Carter fumbled with her"
1"Her shoulder ached from squeezing"
2"The door swung open unexpectedly."
3"A pause, pregnant with so"
4"Lucien Moreau stood framed in"
5"Those eyes—one containing a swirl"
6"Lucien murmured, shifting his weight"
7"Rory's voice carried a mixture"
8"The sarcasm barely masked the"
9"His crisp smile maintained its"
10"His gaze swept over her,"
11"Rory stared him down, her"
12"Her eyes searched his features"
13"Lucien stepped aside, allowing her"
14"Ptolemy darted around Lucien, brushing"
15"Lucien replied, closing the heavy"
16"Rory set her bags on"
17"A defiant breeze stirred from"
18"Lucien tensed, his cane reverberating"
19"Rory’s suspicion deepened."
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien tensed, his cane reverberating as if to communicate a silent distress warning."
1"Unspoken histories surged within her thoughts, reflecting the intimacy that had once defined them."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he confessed, his voice seemingly burdened by lost echoes"
1"he said, a faint plea threading his normally poised speech"
42.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"She repeated (repeat)"
2"he confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.214
76.2189%