| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the old resentment simmering just [just]" | | 1 | "Lucien gestured slightly [slightly]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 77.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 875 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "warily" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 875 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "abyssal" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "simmering" | | 4 | "charm" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "comfortable" | | 7 | "echoes" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "trepidation" | | 13 | "tension" | | 14 | "navigated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 863 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 695 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Moreau | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Lucien | 15 | | Aurora | 5 | | Latin | 1 | | Accountability | 1 | | Surprising | 1 | | Together | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Accountability" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.421 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "nes, his voice seemingly burdened by lost ec" | | 1 | "as if bracing for something punctuated" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 863 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 27.84 | | std | 15.53 | | cv | 0.558 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "Those eyes—one containing a swirl of amber and the other, abyssal black—stared into her with an intensity Rory had long since tried to forget." | | 1 | "Inside, remnants of chaos reigned; books and papers created precarious towers, shadowed by the glow of flickering candles." | | 2 | "\"You—\" Lucien gestured slightly \"—remain pivotal.\"" | | 3 | "Together, they surveyed the room—an impromptu alliance tethered by honor and mistakes." | | 4 | "Embarking on perilous aims, Aurora Carter allowed one last glance—from tangled dreams and heartbreak—into Lucien Moreau's eyes." | | 5 | "Thus, united at the precipice with uncalibrated trust, Aurora and Lucien embraced the danger—a dance inevitable since their story's inception." |
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| 84.46% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 372 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.053763440860215055 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024193548387096774 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 12.88 | | std | 6.02 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6119402985074627 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Thus, united at the precipice" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Her shoulder ached from squeezing" | | 1 | "His crisp smile maintained its" | | 2 | "His gaze swept over her," | | 3 | "Her eyes searched his features" | | 4 | "He scrutinized a particularly cryptic" | | 5 | "She recognized Eva's handwriting between" | | 6 | "She repeated the word slowly," | | 7 | "His presence was compelling, drawing" | | 8 | "he confessed in lowered tones," | | 9 | "Her words cut through the" | | 10 | "He placed a hand on" | | 11 | "he said, a faint plea" | | 12 | "she said softly, changing her" | | 13 | "Her pulse mirrored memories rushing" | | 14 | "she replied, a whispered hope" | | 15 | "His gaze anchored memory, refusing" |
| | ratio | 0.291 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter fumbled with her" | | 1 | "Her shoulder ached from squeezing" | | 2 | "The door swung open unexpectedly." | | 3 | "A pause, pregnant with so" | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau stood framed in" | | 5 | "Those eyes—one containing a swirl" | | 6 | "Lucien murmured, shifting his weight" | | 7 | "Rory's voice carried a mixture" | | 8 | "The sarcasm barely masked the" | | 9 | "His crisp smile maintained its" | | 10 | "His gaze swept over her," | | 11 | "Rory stared him down, her" | | 12 | "Her eyes searched his features" | | 13 | "Lucien stepped aside, allowing her" | | 14 | "Ptolemy darted around Lucien, brushing" | | 15 | "Lucien replied, closing the heavy" | | 16 | "Rory set her bags on" | | 17 | "A defiant breeze stirred from" | | 18 | "Lucien tensed, his cane reverberating" | | 19 | "Rory’s suspicion deepened." |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien tensed, his cane reverberating as if to communicate a silent distress warning." | | 1 | "Unspoken histories surged within her thoughts, reflecting the intimacy that had once defined them." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he confessed, his voice seemingly burdened by lost echoes" | | 1 | "he said, a faint plea threading his normally poised speech" |
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| 42.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "he confessed (confess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.214 | |