Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0ZVCVSX403WMT596HP8V7

Run Details

Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.004302
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked open one by one, each metallic sound echoing in the narrow hallway. The door to Eva's flat swung inward, revealing Rory in the dim light of the entryway. Her straight black hair was pulled back in a messy knot, a few strands framing her face. Bright blue eyes widened in surprise as they landed on the figure standing outside. Lucien. He stood there leaning slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzly London evening. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face, betraying nothing of his thoughts. "Rory." Her fingers tightened on the doorknob. "What are you doing here?" "May I come in?" He gestured with his free hand toward the cramped flat behind her. "Or would you prefer to have this conversation in the hallway where your neighbors can enjoy the show?" Rory stepped aside, her movements stiff. "Make it quick. I was just leaving." Lucien entered, his gaze sweeping over the familiar chaos of books, scrolls, and research papers covering every available surface. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, arched his back from his perch on a stack of ancient manuscripts, hissing before disappearing into the bedroom. "Still hiding behind Eva's research, I see." Lucien turned to face her, the faint scent of something otherworldly—like ozone and old parchment—surrounding him. "Still breaking into places you're not welcome, I see." Rory crossed her arms, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist visible where her sleeve rode up. "How did you even find me?" Lucien's lips curved into a smile that didn't reach his eyes. "I'm an information broker, Rory. Finding people is what I do." "Breaking hearts is also what you do." The words slipped out, sharper than she intended. The smile vanished. "That wasn't what happened and you know it." "Did you come here to rehash the past?" Rory moved toward the tiny kitchen area, putting distance between them. "Because I'm not interested." "I came because something's happening." Lucien followed her, his cane tapping softly against the floorboards. "Something that involves you whether you like it or not." Rory spun around, her blue eyes flashing. "I left that world behind. I'm done with demons and deals and—" "And me?" Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint amber flecks in his otherwise black eye. "Are you done with me too?" Her breath hitched. "You made your choice, Lucien. You chose your father's world over—" "Over you?" His voice was low, rough. "Is that what you really think happened?" "What else am I supposed to think?" Rory's voice rose. "One morning you're making coffee in my flat, talking about weekend plans, and the next you're gone without a word. Just a note saying 'It's better this way.' What was I supposed to make of that?" Lucien reached out, his fingers almost brushing her arm before she flinched away. "My father's people found out about us. About you. They don't take kindly to humans associating with half-bloods, especially not ones who know about our world." "So you what? Decided to protect me by disappearing?" Rory shook her head. "That's such bullshit and you know it." "I was trying to keep you alive!" His voice echoed in the small flat. For a moment, the human facade slipped, and something ancient and dangerous flashed in his eyes. "When my father's lieutenant showed up at my door with threats about what would happen to you if I continued this... this dalliance with a human, what exactly was I supposed to do?" "You could have talked to me!" Rory's hands clenched into fists. "You could have trusted me instead of making decisions for both of us!" Lucien ran a hand through his slicked-back blond hair, disheveling the perfect strands. "And what would you have done, Rory? Fought back? You're human. You wouldn't have stood a chance against what they would have sent." "You don't know that." Her voice dropped to a whisper. "You didn't give me a chance." The space between them crackled with unresolved tension, with months of unspoken words and feelings. Rory could feel the pull of him, the same magnetic attraction that had drawn her in from the moment they'd met—her delivering takeout from Golden Empress to his office in that discreet building in Soho. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" she asked, her voice softer now. "What's happening?" He leaned his cane against the wall, his shoulders slumping slightly. "My father's dead. The demon lords are positioning themselves to take control of his territory. And somehow, your name has come up in the discussions." "My name?" Rory frowned. "How? I'm just a delivery girl who—" "Who knows about our world. Who was involved with a half-demon. Who has connections to people who interest them." Lucien's eyes met hers. "They're coming for you, Rory. Whether you're 'done' with that world or not." Rory sank into the overstuffed armchair buried beneath a pile of books, her mind racing. "What do they want with me?" "Information. Leverage. Possibly just to make a point." Lucien knelt in front of her, his voice low and urgent. "You need to leave London. Go somewhere they can't find you." "And what about you?" The question escaped before she could stop it. Lucien's expression softened almost imperceptibly. "I'll handle things on this end." "That's what you said last time before you disappeared." A bitter laugh escaped Rory's lips. "How do I know you won't just vanish again?" Lucien reached out, this time letting his fingers gently trace the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of her human fragility that he had once kissed so tenderly. "Because this time," he said, his amber eye catching the light, "I'm asking you to trust me."
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
63.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount969
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"tenderly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"gently"
4"tenderly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount969
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"facade"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"magnetic"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"familiar"
2"otherworldly"
3"echoed"
4"facade"
5"perfect"
6"whisper"
7"tension"
8"unspoken"
9"could feel"
10"magnetic"
11"racing"
12"reminder"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"clenched into fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences44
matches
0"d in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords958
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
28.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount495
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Rory12
London1
Lucien12
Golden1
Empress1
Soho1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.288
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount958
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean25.89
std14.14
cv0.546
sampleLengths
063
134
21
311
434
513
641
723
833
922
1015
1111
1223
1325
1419
1526
1614
1714
1846
1939
2020
2163
2224
2336
2416
2550
2614
2736
2811
2936
3021
3130
3212
3311
3424
3530
3617
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"was pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs78
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences72
ratio0.056
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her face, betraying nothing of his thoughts."
1"\"Still hiding behind Eva's research, I see.\" Lucien turned to face her, the faint scent of something otherworldly—like ozone and old parchment—surrounding him."
2"Rory could feel the pull of him, the same magnetic attraction that had drawn her in from the moment they'd met—her delivering takeout from Golden Empress to his office in that discreet building in Soho."
3"Lucien reached out, this time letting his fingers gently trace the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of her human fragility that he had once kissed so tenderly."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount504
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03571428571428571
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.013888888888888888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean13.31
std7.86
cv0.591
sampleLengths
016
116
217
314
41
519
614
71
86
95
1016
1118
126
137
1419
1522
1623
1727
186
1911
2011
2115
223
238
2419
254
2615
2710
287
2912
3020
316
323
3311
347
357
3610
3736
3813
3926
4013
417
4214
4316
4433
4511
4613
4713
4823
4910
71.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4722222222222222
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners34
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Bright blue eyes widened in"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences42
matches
0"Her straight black hair was"
1"He stood there leaning slightly"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
3"Her fingers tightened on the"
4"He gestured with his free"
5"Her breath hitched."
6"His voice was low, rough"
7"His voice echoed in the"
8"Her voice dropped to a"
9"she asked, her voice softer"
10"He leaned his cane against"
11"he said, his amber eye"
ratio0.286
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences42
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked open"
1"The door to Eva's flat"
2"Her straight black hair was"
3"He stood there leaning slightly"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"Her fingers tightened on the"
6"He gestured with his free"
7"Rory stepped aside, her movements"
8"Lucien entered, his gaze sweeping"
9"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, arched"
10"Lucien turned to face her,"
11"Rory crossed her arms, the"
12"Lucien's lips curved into a"
13"The words slipped out, sharper"
14"The smile vanished."
15"Rory moved toward the tiny"
16"Lucien followed her, his cane"
17"Rory spun around, her blue"
18"Lucien stepped closer, close enough"
19"Her breath hitched."
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien's lips curved into a smile that didn't reach his eyes."
1"Rory could feel the pull of him, the same magnetic attraction that had drawn her in from the moment they'd met—her delivering takeout from Golden Empress to his…"
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Lucien followed, his cane tapping softly against the floorboards"
1"she asked, her voice softer now"
2"Lucien knelt, his voice low and urgent"
3"he said, his amber eye catching the light,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.083
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.7127%