Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0ZW1D6GZ27CPGMKWEBT14

Run Details

Duration:
59.6s
Cost:
$0.005634
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts thumped open one by one, each metallic clunk echoing in the cramped hallway. Rory straightened, running a hand through her straight black hair as the final lock released. She hadn't ordered takeout, and Eva wouldn't be back from her lecture for hours. Anyone knocking at this hour meant trouble. She pulled the door inward, and the words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood in the dimly lit corridor, leaning slightly on his ivory-handled cane. His tailored charcoal suit was immaculate as always, the platinum blond hair slicked back from his forehead. Those distinctive eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on hers with an intensity that made her breath catch. "Rory." His voice carried that smooth French accent that had once been her undoing. "I hope I'm not disturbing you." She gripped the doorframe, her knuckles whitening. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" "We need to talk." He shifted his weight, the cane tapping softly against the worn carpet. "May I come in?" Rory stepped aside, the motion automatic despite her racing heart. As he brushed past her, his familiar scent—something like sandalwood and something older, stranger—filled her senses. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lifted his head from where he'd been sleeping on a stack of books, his tail twitching with interest. The flat seemed to shrink around them. Books and scrolls covered every available surface, research notes threatening to avalanche from precarious piles. Rory gestured toward the only clear chair, a rickety wooden thing buried beneath Eva's latest archaeological journal. "Make yourself comfortable." Lucien's lips curved into a faint smile as he cleared the chair with precise movements, setting the journal aside. "Still Eva's research assistant, I see." "Delivery person, actually." Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe she'd just abandoned. "But I help Eva with her projects sometimes." "You left your studies." It wasn't a question. "Pre-Law wasn't for me." She watched him settle into the chair, the cane resting across his knees. "I thought we agreed London was big enough for both of us to avoid each other indefinitely." "I wouldn't call that an agreement so much as your decision." His heterochromatic eyes held hers. "And avoiding you proved impossible." Rory pushed away from the doorframe, moving to the small kitchenette. She needed distance, a barrier. "Tea?" "If it's not too much trouble." She filled the kettle, her movements precise. "You always did love your tea." The words slipped out, more familiar than she'd intended. "Some habits are difficult to break." Lucien watched her, his gaze tracking her every movement. "You look well, Rory." "I'm surviving." She set two mugs on the counter, her back still to him. "London's been good to me. Most days." Silence stretched between them, filled only by the whistle of the kettle. Rory poured the water, her hands steady despite the tremor she felt inside. She placed a mug in front of Lucien, keeping her fingers from touching his. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" He wrapped his hands around the mug, his gaze dropping to the steam rising from the surface. "There's something happening in the city. Something that concerns both of us." Rory sank into the worn armchair opposite him, pulling her legs beneath her. "I don't work in your world anymore. I told you—I'm done with all that." "Our worlds have a way of colliding whether we want them to or not." He looked up, his amber eye catching the light. "Especially when it comes to you." "Is that why you're here? Because of what I am?" She shook her head, a bitter laugh escaping her lips. "I thought we settled that. I'm just Rory. No special powers, no destiny. Just a girl from Cardiff trying to live a quiet life." "You were never just a girl from Cardiff." Lucien's voice softened. "And you were never quiet." The tension between them shifted, something older and more complicated surfacing. Rory looked down at her hands, remembering how they had once traced the sharp line of his jaw, the smooth skin of his back. Remembering how he had once looked at her like she was the only thing in his world worth seeing. "You hurt me," she said, the words quiet but heavy between them. "I know." No excuses, no justifications. Just simple acknowledgment. "It was never my intention." "Your intentions didn't matter much when you disappeared without a word." She looked up, meeting his gaze directly. "Three months, Lucien. No calls, no texts, nothing. Then you show up at my flat asking for help?" "I was dealing with family matters." His fingers tightened around the mug. "In Avaros." Rory's breath caught. "You went back? After everything they did to you?" "My father summoned me." He looked away, toward the window where the London rain streaked the glass. "One doesn't refuse the Lord of Avaros." The implications settled over her. His father wasn't just a demon lord—he was the ruler of a realm, a being of immense power and cruelty. Lucien had endured his childhood there, barely escaping to the human world as a teenager. "Are you alright?" The question slipped out, concern overriding her resolve to remain distant. Lucien's gaze returned to hers, a flicker of surprise in his dual-colored eyes. "I'm here, aren't I?" "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I have." He set his mug aside, leaning forward. "Rory, what happened between us... it wasn't just a casual fling for me. I hope you know that." "I don't know what to think anymore." She wrapped her arms around herself, a defensive posture. "One day we're planning weekends in Paris, the next you're gone without a trace." "I couldn't contact you. Avaros doesn't exactly have mobile service." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "And when I returned, I heard you'd left Cardiff. Moved to London. Started a new life." "Eva found me a place. A job." Rory glanced around the cluttered flat. "It's not much, but it's mine." "You deserve more than this." Lucien's voice was low, intense. "You deserve everything." Ptolemy chose that moment to leap into Rory's lap, purring loudly. She stroked his fur, the rhythmic motion calming her racing thoughts. "Why now, Lucien? Why come back into my life after all this time?" "Because something's coming." He leaned forward, his expression serious. "Something that affects both humans and supernatural beings. And whatever it is, it seems to be centered around you." Rory froze, her hand stilling on the cat's back. "Me? That's impossible. I'm completely ordinary." Lucien reached into his suit jacket, withdrawing a small, leather-bound book. "Eva's been researching ancient prophecies, hasn't she?" "How do you know about Eva's research?" "I know many things, Rory. It's rather my profession." He opened the book, turning to a marked page. "This symbol here—it's been appearing all over London. At supernatural crime scenes, at places of power." Rory leaned forward to look. The symbol was intricate, a series of interlocking circles with strange runes at each intersection point. "I've never seen it before." "Perhaps not." Lucien's gaze locked with hers. "But Eva has been drawing it in her research notes for weeks. Unconsciously, she told me. Almost like she's compelled to." The implications settled over Rory like a shroud. "You think this has something to do with Eva?" "I think it has something to do with both of you." He closed the book, his expression grave. "Which is why I came to you. Because whatever is coming, we'll face it better together than apart." Rory stood suddenly, the cat leaping from her lap with an indignant meow. "No. Absolutely not. I'm not getting dragged back into that world. Not with you, not with anyone." "Rory—" "No." She moved to the door, her hand resting on the handle. "You can't disappear for months, then show up expecting me to fall back into step with whatever supernatural crisis is happening this week. It doesn't work like that." Lucien rose, his cane making a soft click on the floorboards. He approached her slowly, giving her space to retreat if she wanted to. She didn't. "I never stopped thinking about you," he said, his voice low. "Not for a single day in Avaros. Not for a single night in London." Rory's breath hitched. "Don't say that." "It's the truth." He was closer now, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the slight stubble along his jaw. "I made mistakes, Rory. Leaving you was the biggest one." "You didn't just leave me, Lucien. You vanished." "And I'm here now." He reached out, his fingers hovering just above her wrist where the small crescent-shaped scar marked her skin. "I'm asking for a chance to explain. To make things right. To help you, before it's too late." Rory looked from his hand to his eyes, the conflict warring within her. The attraction was still there, humming beneath the surface of hurt and anger. The history between them was complicated, messy, but it wasn't nothing. "Tell me," she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. "Tell me everything." Lucien's fingers finally brushed her skin, sending a jolt through her system. The past and present collided in that small London flat, with nothing but books, a cat, and the rain as witnesses.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His fingers tightened around [around]"
1"He looked away [away]"
2"Rory glanced around [around]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.358
leniency0.716
rawRatio0.138
effectiveRatio0.099
77.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"completely"
4"suddenly"
5"slowly"
6"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"racing"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"grave"
count1
14
word"absolutely"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"intensity"
2"weight"
3"racing"
4"familiar"
5"comfortable"
6"silence"
7"tension"
8"traced"
9"resolve"
10"flicker"
11"rhythmic"
12"intricate"
13"grave"
14"absolutely"
15"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences82
matches
0"a flicker of surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1547
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount900
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau1
French1
Rory17
Ptolemy2
Lucien12
Silence1
London2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Silence"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.556
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like sandalwood and something olde"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.646
wordCount1547
matches
0"not much, but it's mine"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean23.8
std12.62
cv0.53
sampleLengths
051
112
247
320
413
520
648
739
83
925
1022
118
1234
1321
1417
156
1622
1719
1821
1939
206
2129
2227
2329
2444
2516
2654
2712
2814
2936
3014
3112
3224
3340
3414
3517
364
3731
3830
3934
4019
4113
4222
4313
4428
4515
4618
477
4834
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
77.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences131
ratio0.023
matches
0"Those distinctive eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on hers with an intensity that made her breath catch."
1"As he brushed past her, his familiar scent—something like sandalwood and something older, stranger—filled her senses."
2"His father wasn't just a demon lord—he was the ruler of a realm, a being of immense power and cruelty."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount909
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03850385038503851
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.015401540154015401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean11.81
std5.86
cv0.496
sampleLengths
015
115
214
37
412
514
617
716
814
96
107
116
1216
134
1410
1516
1622
177
1815
1917
203
2119
226
2314
248
258
2617
2717
2816
295
3011
315
321
336
347
3515
3615
374
3814
397
4012
4113
4214
436
4417
4512
4613
4714
4823
496
64.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4122137404580153
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners54
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just simple acknowledgment."
ratio0.012
57.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences81
matches
0"She hadn't ordered takeout, and"
1"She pulled the door inward,"
2"His tailored charcoal suit was"
3"His voice carried that smooth"
4"She gripped the doorframe, her"
5"He shifted his weight, the"
6"It wasn't a question"
7"She watched him settle into"
8"His heterochromatic eyes held hers"
9"She needed distance, a barrier."
10"She filled the kettle, her"
11"She set two mugs on"
12"She placed a mug in"
13"He wrapped his hands around"
14"He looked up, his amber"
15"She shook her head, a"
16"she said, the words quiet"
17"She looked up, meeting his"
18"His fingers tightened around the"
19"He looked away, toward the"
ratio0.407
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences81
matches
0"The deadbolts thumped open one"
1"Rory straightened, running a hand"
2"She hadn't ordered takeout, and"
3"Anyone knocking at this hour"
4"She pulled the door inward,"
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"His tailored charcoal suit was"
7"Those distinctive eyes—one amber, one"
8"His voice carried that smooth"
9"She gripped the doorframe, her"
10"He shifted his weight, the"
11"Rory stepped aside, the motion"
12"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lifted"
13"The flat seemed to shrink"
14"Books and scrolls covered every"
15"Rory gestured toward the only"
16"Lucien's lips curved into a"
17"Rory crossed her arms, leaning"
18"It wasn't a question"
19"She watched him settle into"
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Those distinctive eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on hers with an intensity that made her breath catch."
1"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lifted his head from where he'd been sleeping on a stack of books, his tail twitching with interest."
2"He wrapped his hands around the mug, his gaze dropping to the steam rising from the surface."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"He shifted, the cane tapping softly against the worn carpet"
1"She watched, the cane resting across his knees"
2"Lucien watched, his gaze tracking her every movement"
3"She set, her back still to him"
4"He looked up, his amber eye catching the light"
5"She shook, a bitter laugh escaping her lips"
6"He leaned, his expression serious"
7"She moved, her hand resting on the handle"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.4421%