| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His fingers tightened around [around]" | | 1 | "He looked away [away]" | | 2 | "Rory glanced around [around]" | | 3 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 81 | | tagDensity | 0.358 | | leniency | 0.716 | | rawRatio | 0.138 | | effectiveRatio | 0.099 | |
| 77.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1559 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "completely" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "slowly" | | 6 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1559 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "comfortable" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "intricate" | | 13 | "grave" | | 14 | "absolutely" | | 15 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1547 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 900 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.89 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Lucien | 12 | | Silence | 1 | | London | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.556 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like sandalwood and something olde" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.646 | | wordCount | 1547 | | matches | | 0 | "not much, but it's mine" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 23.8 | | std | 12.62 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Those distinctive eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on hers with an intensity that made her breath catch." | | 1 | "As he brushed past her, his familiar scent—something like sandalwood and something older, stranger—filled her senses." | | 2 | "His father wasn't just a demon lord—he was the ruler of a realm, a being of immense power and cruelty." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 909 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, leather-bound book." | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03850385038503851 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015401540154015401 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 11.81 | | std | 5.86 | | cv | 0.496 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 64.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4122137404580153 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 41.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just simple acknowledgment." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 57.04% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't ordered takeout, and" | | 1 | "She pulled the door inward," | | 2 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 3 | "His voice carried that smooth" | | 4 | "She gripped the doorframe, her" | | 5 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 6 | "It wasn't a question" | | 7 | "She watched him settle into" | | 8 | "His heterochromatic eyes held hers" | | 9 | "She needed distance, a barrier." | | 10 | "She filled the kettle, her" | | 11 | "She set two mugs on" | | 12 | "She placed a mug in" | | 13 | "He wrapped his hands around" | | 14 | "He looked up, his amber" | | 15 | "She shook her head, a" | | 16 | "she said, the words quiet" | | 17 | "She looked up, meeting his" | | 18 | "His fingers tightened around the" | | 19 | "He looked away, toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.407 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts thumped open one" | | 1 | "Rory straightened, running a hand" | | 2 | "She hadn't ordered takeout, and" | | 3 | "Anyone knocking at this hour" | | 4 | "She pulled the door inward," | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 6 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 7 | "Those distinctive eyes—one amber, one" | | 8 | "His voice carried that smooth" | | 9 | "She gripped the doorframe, her" | | 10 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 11 | "Rory stepped aside, the motion" | | 12 | "The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lifted" | | 13 | "The flat seemed to shrink" | | 14 | "Books and scrolls covered every" | | 15 | "Rory gestured toward the only" | | 16 | "Lucien's lips curved into a" | | 17 | "Rory crossed her arms, leaning" | | 18 | "It wasn't a question" | | 19 | "She watched him settle into" |
| | ratio | 0.951 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Those distinctive eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on hers with an intensity that made her breath catch." | | 1 | "The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lifted his head from where he'd been sleeping on a stack of books, his tail twitching with interest." | | 2 | "He wrapped his hands around the mug, his gaze dropping to the steam rising from the surface." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "He shifted, the cane tapping softly against the worn carpet" | | 1 | "She watched, the cane resting across his knees" | | 2 | "Lucien watched, his gaze tracking her every movement" | | 3 | "She set, her back still to him" | | 4 | "He looked up, his amber eye catching the light" | | 5 | "She shook, a bitter laugh escaping her lips" | | 6 | "He leaned, his expression serious" | | 7 | "She moved, her hand resting on the handle" | | 8 | "he said, his voice low" | | 9 | "she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 81 | | tagDensity | 0.037 | | leniency | 0.074 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |