Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0ZXB5QP24S2C8J4EMZAVJ

Run Details

Duration:
22.1s
Cost:
$0.008591
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The final deadbolt yielded with a metallic groan. Rory leaned her weight against the heavy oak door of the Brick Lane flat, expecting the drafty silence of an empty hallway. Instead, a scent hit her first—expensive sandalwood and the sharp, metallic tang of ozone that always preceded a storm. Lucien Moreau stood framed by the dim yellow light of the landing. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his tailored charcoal suit pristine despite the torrential downpour howling outside the windows. The platinum strands of his hair remained slicked back, unbothered by the gusts. His heterochromatic eyes—one the warmth of molten amber, the other the void of a blackout—fixed on her face. "You changed the locks." Rory gripped the edge of the door frame. Her knuckles turned white. "Three times. Once for every week you didn't call after the incident in Brixton." Lucien didn't flinch. He stepped past her before she could grant him entry, the tip of his cane clicking rhythmically against the hardwood floor. He moved with a predatory grace that defied his half-demon nature, a silhouette of sharpened edges and quiet power. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncurled from a pile of ancient scrolls on the coffee table and arched his back, letting out a low, inquisitive chirp. "The locks were a charming sentiment, Rory. But the wards on the threshold were amateur at best." Lucien turned to face her, sweeping his gaze across the cramped living room. Books climbed the walls in precarious towers. Reams of research notes fluttered as the wind from the open door caught them. Rory slammed the door shut, the bang echoing through the small space. "Amateur wards for an expected guest. You aren't a guest. You’re an intruder." Lucien set his cane against the side of a bookshelf and began to peel off his leather gloves. "I am a necessity. The council is moving. They know you have the Grimoire." Rory crossed her arms, her thumb brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The old habit flared whenever her pulse spiked. "I don't have it. And even if I did, why would I tell the man who left me bleeding in an alleyway while he chased a lead on Avaros?" A flicker of something—regret, or perhaps just the ghost of it—passed through Lucien’s amber eye. He stepped closer, invading her personal space until she could smell the rain on his wool coat. The height difference forced her to tilt her head back. "I didn't leave you. I drew them away from you. There is a distinction." "A distinction that feels remarkably like abandonment at three in the morning." She tried to brush past him to get to the kitchen, but he caught her elbow. His touch was cold, a constant reminder of the blood that didn't quite run human in his veins. The friction between them felt like a live wire, humming with the memory of a night in Marseille before everything collapsed into blood and secrets. "Look at me." Rory wrenched her arm away, but she stopped. "I’m looking, Luc. I see a fixer who’s running out of time and an information broker who forgot to mention he was working both sides of the fence." Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering inches from her jaw before he dropped his hand. "I work for no one but myself. And, occasionally, for the safety of a girl who is far too intelligent to be this reckless." "I am twenty-five, not a child. I’ve handled the Golden Empress deliveries in Southwark at midnight. I can handle a few rogue demons and a disgruntled Frenchman." She moved to the kitchen island, shoving aside a stack of scrolls to clear a space. Her hands shook, so she gripped the edge of the counter. "Why are you really here? The council doesn't scare you into showing up at my door at ten PM." Lucien moved into the kitchen light. The black of his left eye seemed to swallow the glare of the overhead bulb. "Because I saw the sigil marked on your doorframe downstairs. Not mine. Not the council’s. It belongs to your ex." Rory felt the air pull from her lungs. The name she never spoke aloud—Evan—hung in the air between them like a curse. "He’s in Cardiff. He doesn't know where I am. Eva made sure." Lucien reached into his inner pocket and pulled out a scrap of parchment. He laid it on the counter. It was a charcoal rubbing of a symbol—a jagged crown of thorns. "He’s in Whitechapel. He’s been tracking the restaurant’s delivery routes. You’re smart, Rory, but you’re sentimental. You keep using the same alias in the neighborhood. Laila wasn't an inspired choice." Rory stared at the symbol. The phantom pain of old bruises seemed to ache beneath her skin. "I didn't have anywhere else to go. London was supposed to be the blind spot." "There are no blind spots for a man with his connections. And certainly none when you are carrying enough magical resonance to light up the Underground." Lucien stepped into her space again, this time without the pretense of business. He placed his hands on the counter on either side of her, boxing her in. The heat radiating from his body contradicted his cold touch. "You should have come to me. After Brixton. After everything." "And be what? Another asset on your ledger? Another favor you can trade when the stakes get too high?" Rory looked up at him, her bright blue eyes defiant. "You don't get to play the protector now. You chose the mission over us." "There was no 'us' while the demonic gateways were tearing open in the East End," Lucien hissed, his voice dropping into a low, gravelly register. "I was keeping you alive. I am still keeping you alive." "I never asked you to be my martyr. I asked you to be honest." Lucien leaned down, his face inches from hers. The tension was a physical weight, a tether pulling them toward a collision they had avoided for months. "You want honesty? Fine. The Grimoire is a death sentence. And seeing your name on a hit list is the only thing that has ever made me feel fear." Rory’s breath hitched. "You don't feel fear. You told me your father burnt that out of you in Avaros." "He tried. He failed." Lucien’s gaze dropped to her lips. The amber in his eye glowed with an unnatural intensity. "I didn't come here to argue semantics or to justify my absence. I came to take you to the safe house in Richmond." "I’m not leaving my flat. I’m not leaving Ptolemy or my life because you had a bad feeling." "It isn't a feeling. It is a certainty." He reached out, his thumb finally brushing the line of her jaw. The contact sent a jolt of electricity through her, a sharp reminder of the nights they’d spent deciphering texts by candlelight, their shadows merging into one on the walls. "Rory, please." The use of her nickname, a rarity for him, softened the edge of her anger. She hated how easily he could dismantle her defenses. He was a man built of lies and shadows, yet his touch felt like the only solid thing in a world that was rapidly dissolving into chaos. "If I go with you," she whispered, "it’s on my terms. No more side deals. No more disappearing acts." "You have my word." "Your word is a currency I’ve seen devalued before." Lucien smiled, a slow, dangerous tilt of his lips. "Then let me pay a deposit." He leaned in, the distance vanishing. The kiss was desperate, tasting of rain and suppressed longing. It wasn't the tentative start of a reconciliation; it was a battle. Rory gripped the lapels of his charcoal coat, pulling him closer, her fingers digging into the expensive fabric. He tasted like the dark world he inhabited—bitter, deep, and intoxicating. Lucien groaned low in his throat, his hand moving to the back of her neck to hold her steady. For a moment, the books, the scrolls, and the threat of the man in Whitechapel didn't exist. There was only the heat of the small kitchen and the frantic beat of two hearts that shouldn't have been synchronized. He pulled back just enough to rest his forehead against hers. His breath was ragged. "We leave in five minutes. Pack only what you can carry." Rory stared at him, her lips tingling. "I’m bringing the cat." Lucien smoothed a strand of black hair behind her ear, his eyes searching hers. "I wouldn't dream of leaving him." He stepped away, reclaiming his cane with a fluid motion. The fixer was back, the mask of professional indifference sliding back into place, but the amber in his eye remained bright. "The back exit. My car is around the corner on Hanbury Street." Rory looked around her flat—the home she’d built from the wreckage of her life in Cardiff. She saw the stack of delivery slips from the Golden Empress, the half-finished tea, and the life she was about to abandon once again. "Evan... how close did he get?" Lucien paused at the door. "Close enough to know what color curtains you bought." Rory felt a chill that had nothing to do with the storm. She moved to the bedroom, grabbing a duffel bag and shoving her essential journals inside. Ptolemy watched her with wide green eyes, sensing the shift in the air. "You’re sure about this?" she called out. "I am sure of very little in this life, Aurora," Lucien replied from the living room. "But I am sure that I will not lose you to a man who thinks he can own you." Rory zipped the bag and scooped up the cat. She walked back into the living room, where Lucien stood waiting by the three deadbolts. He held the door open for her, his expression unreadable, but his hand was steady as he waited for her to pass. "After this," she said, stopping at the threshold. "After we deal with him and the council. We talk. Everything. No more omissions." Lucien inclined his head. "Everything." They stepped out into the rain-slicked night of Brick Lane. The neon signs of the curry houses blurred into streaks of pink and yellow against the wet pavement. As they moved toward the car, a shadow detached itself from the mouth of an alleyway two blocks down, watching the flash of a tailored charcoal suit and a woman with jet-black hair disappear into the dark. Lucien climbed into the driver’s seat of the sleek black sedan, the engine purring like a predator. "Is the cat secure?" "He's thrilled," Rory muttered, adjusting the carrier on her lap. "He loves being a refugee." Lucien put the car in gear, his knuckles grazing hers on the gearshift. "He’ll learn to love Richmond. It has a much better class of bird." The car pulled away from the curb, leaving the flat on Brick Lane behind. Rory didn't look back. She kept her eyes on the road ahead, watching the wipers sweep away the London grime, wondering how many more times she would have to ruin her life to save it. "Where's the Grimoire, Rory?" She leaned her head against the cool glass of the window. "Safe." "Be more specific." "I told you. My terms. We reach the safe house, I get a drink, and then we talk." Lucien’s jaw tightened. "You're a difficult woman to protect." "Then stop protecting me and start partnering with me." The silence that followed was heavy with the weight of the kilometers between London and their destination. The city lights flickered across Lucien’s face, highlighting the sharp bone structure and the constant, restless movement of his heterochromatic eyes. "A partnership," he murmured, the word sounding foreign in his mouth. "A dangerous proposition." "Everything with you is dangerous, Luc. I’m just evening the odds."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.117
leniency0.233
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2005
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2005
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"fluttered"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count2
9
word"resonance"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"synchronized"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"predator"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"pristine"
3"warmth"
4"fluttered"
5"echoing"
6"pulse"
7"flicker"
8"reminder"
9"resonance"
10"tension"
11"intensity"
12"synchronized"
13"chill"
14"unreadable"
15"predator"
16"flickered"
17"structure"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences97
matches
0"was desperate"
1"felt a chill"
83.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1988
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.38% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1269
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick3
Lane3
Moreau1
Lucien23
Marseille1
Evan1
Whitechapel1
Cardiff1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory16
London2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Cardiff"
4"Golden"
5"London"
globalScore0.594
windowScore0.667
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite run human in his veins"
1"felt like a live wire, humming with the"
2"felt like the only solid thing in a wor"
3"tasted like the dark world he inhabited—b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.503
wordCount1988
matches
0"no one but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs97
mean20.49
std16.16
cv0.789
sampleLengths
049
162
24
312
414
568
617
746
813
918
1014
1122
1229
1342
1414
1512
1659
173
188
1928
2015
2124
2227
2327
2419
2521
2620
2722
2812
2931
3030
3117
3215
3326
3438
3510
3619
3710
3814
3936
4014
4126
4229
433
4416
454
4616
4723
4818
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"been synchronized"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences150
ratio0.053
matches
0"Instead, a scent hit her first—expensive sandalwood and the sharp, metallic tang of ozone that always preceded a storm."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one the warmth of molten amber, the other the void of a blackout—fixed on her face."
2"A flicker of something—regret, or perhaps just the ghost of it—passed through Lucien’s amber eye."
3"The name she never spoke aloud—Evan—hung in the air between them like a curse."
4"It was a charcoal rubbing of a symbol—a jagged crown of thorns."
5"It wasn't the tentative start of a reconciliation; it was a battle."
6"He tasted like the dark world he inhabited—bitter, deep, and intoxicating."
7"Rory looked around her flat—the home she’d built from the wreckage of her life in Cardiff."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1285
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.025680933852140077
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005447470817120622
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean13.25
std7.1
cv0.536
sampleLengths
08
122
219
312
419
513
618
74
88
94
1014
113
1221
1319
1425
1517
1613
177
1814
1912
2013
2118
2214
2314
248
2529
2615
2717
2810
2914
3012
3116
3218
3325
343
358
3628
3715
3824
3927
4016
4111
4219
436
4415
4520
468
4714
4812
4913
44.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.25333333333333335
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners38
34.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Instead, a scent hit her"
ratio0.01
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences96
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one the warmth"
2"Her knuckles turned white."
3"He stepped past her before"
4"He moved with a predatory"
5"He stepped closer, invading her"
6"She tried to brush past"
7"His touch was cold, a"
8"She moved to the kitchen"
9"Her hands shook, so she"
10"He laid it on the"
11"It was a charcoal rubbing"
12"He placed his hands on"
13"He reached out, his thumb"
14"She hated how easily he"
15"He was a man built"
16"He leaned in, the distance"
17"It wasn't the tentative start"
18"He tasted like the dark"
19"He pulled back just enough"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences96
matches
0"The final deadbolt yielded with"
1"Rory leaned her weight against"
2"Lucien Moreau stood framed by"
3"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
4"The platinum strands of his"
5"His heterochromatic eyes—one the warmth"
6"Rory gripped the edge of"
7"Her knuckles turned white."
8"Lucien didn't flinch."
9"He stepped past her before"
10"He moved with a predatory"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncurled"
12"Lucien turned to face her,"
13"Books climbed the walls in"
14"Reams of research notes fluttered"
15"Rory slammed the door shut,"
16"Lucien set his cane against"
17"Rory crossed her arms, her"
18"The old habit flared whenever"
19"A flicker of something—regret, or"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He moved with a predatory grace that defied his half-demon nature, a silhouette of sharpened edges and quiet power."
1"The contact sent a jolt of electricity through her, a sharp reminder of the nights they’d spent deciphering texts by candlelight, their shadows merging into one…"
2"Rory gripped the lapels of his charcoal coat, pulling him closer, her fingers digging into the expensive fabric."
3"There was only the heat of the small kitchen and the frantic beat of two hearts that shouldn't have been synchronized."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien hissed, his voice dropping into a low, gravelly register"
1"he murmured, the word sounding foreign in his mouth"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien hissed (hiss)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.133
74.4050%