| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.117 | | leniency | 0.233 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2005 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2005 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pristine" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "fluttered" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "resonance" | | 10 | "tension" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "synchronized" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "predator" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "structure" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "knuckles turned white" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "was desperate" | | 1 | "felt a chill" |
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| 83.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1988 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.38% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1269 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 23 | | Marseille | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | London | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Golden" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.594 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 33.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite run human in his veins" | | 1 | "felt like a live wire, humming with the" | | 2 | "felt like the only solid thing in a wor" | | 3 | "tasted like the dark world he inhabited—b" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.503 | | wordCount | 1988 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 97 | | mean | 20.49 | | std | 16.16 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a scent hit her first—expensive sandalwood and the sharp, metallic tang of ozone that always preceded a storm." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one the warmth of molten amber, the other the void of a blackout—fixed on her face." | | 2 | "A flicker of something—regret, or perhaps just the ghost of it—passed through Lucien’s amber eye." | | 3 | "The name she never spoke aloud—Evan—hung in the air between them like a curse." | | 4 | "It was a charcoal rubbing of a symbol—a jagged crown of thorns." | | 5 | "It wasn't the tentative start of a reconciliation; it was a battle." | | 6 | "He tasted like the dark world he inhabited—bitter, deep, and intoxicating." | | 7 | "Rory looked around her flat—the home she’d built from the wreckage of her life in Cardiff." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1285 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.025680933852140077 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005447470817120622 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 13.25 | | std | 7.1 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 44.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.25333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 34.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a scent hit her" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one the warmth" | | 2 | "Her knuckles turned white." | | 3 | "He stepped past her before" | | 4 | "He moved with a predatory" | | 5 | "He stepped closer, invading her" | | 6 | "She tried to brush past" | | 7 | "His touch was cold, a" | | 8 | "She moved to the kitchen" | | 9 | "Her hands shook, so she" | | 10 | "He laid it on the" | | 11 | "It was a charcoal rubbing" | | 12 | "He placed his hands on" | | 13 | "He reached out, his thumb" | | 14 | "She hated how easily he" | | 15 | "He was a man built" | | 16 | "He leaned in, the distance" | | 17 | "It wasn't the tentative start" | | 18 | "He tasted like the dark" | | 19 | "He pulled back just enough" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The final deadbolt yielded with" | | 1 | "Rory leaned her weight against" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood framed by" | | 3 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 4 | "The platinum strands of his" | | 5 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one the warmth" | | 6 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 7 | "Her knuckles turned white." | | 8 | "Lucien didn't flinch." | | 9 | "He stepped past her before" | | 10 | "He moved with a predatory" | | 11 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncurled" | | 12 | "Lucien turned to face her," | | 13 | "Books climbed the walls in" | | 14 | "Reams of research notes fluttered" | | 15 | "Rory slammed the door shut," | | 16 | "Lucien set his cane against" | | 17 | "Rory crossed her arms, her" | | 18 | "The old habit flared whenever" | | 19 | "A flicker of something—regret, or" |
| | ratio | 0.958 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He moved with a predatory grace that defied his half-demon nature, a silhouette of sharpened edges and quiet power." | | 1 | "The contact sent a jolt of electricity through her, a sharp reminder of the nights they’d spent deciphering texts by candlelight, their shadows merging into one…" | | 2 | "Rory gripped the lapels of his charcoal coat, pulling him closer, her fingers digging into the expensive fabric." | | 3 | "There was only the heat of the small kitchen and the frantic beat of two hearts that shouldn't have been synchronized." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien hissed, his voice dropping into a low, gravelly register" | | 1 | "he murmured, the word sounding foreign in his mouth" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |