Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT1027TGZQYT8301RYWZ6RG

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Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000428
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped like a fingernailon slate. Aurora froze mid-stir, the ladle clattering into the pot of boiling noodles. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in her chest. She’d been expecting the landlord’s rent collector, not... this. She wiped her hands on a threadbare apron, the fabric rough against her skin, and padded silently towards the door. Three deadbolts. Three layers of defiance. She slid the top one back, then the middle, her knuckles white where they gripped the cold metal. The final bolt yielded with a soft *click*, and she peered through the peephole. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, his platinum hair slicked back like polished obsidian, the tailored charcoal suit looking impossibly sharp against the grimy brick of the building. His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – scanned her flat with detached curiosity, missing nothing. The ivory-handled cane rested against his thigh, its presence a silent threat. He didn’t smile. He didn’t frown. He simply waited. Aurora’s breath hitched. The scar on her left wrist, a small crescent moon from a childhood accident, burned beneath her skin. She’d thought she’d buried that part of herself, buried him, buried the tangled mess of attraction and betrayal that had ended their relationship three years ago. Now he stood there, a ghost from her past, demanding entry. She unlocked the final bolt, her movements precise, controlled. She opened the door a fraction, just enough to see him fully. "Lucien." Her voice was a low rasp, devoid of warmth. "What are you doing here?" He didn’t step inside. He didn’t even move his head. His gaze remained fixed on her, assessing. "Aurora." His voice was smooth, like dark velvet over gravel. "I’ve been looking for you." She stepped back, closing the door with a decisive *thud*. She didn’t turn away, but she kept her back rigid, her eyes locked on his reflection in the small window pane. The flat was a war zone of books and papers, the air thick with the scent of old paper and stale curry from downstairs. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked sleepily from the windowsill, oblivious to the storm brewing. "Why?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "After everything?" He pushed the door open further, his presence filling the narrow hallway. The scent of expensive cologne, sandalwood and bergamot, cut through the stale air. He didn’t answer immediately. Instead, he lifted his cane, tapping it once against the worn linoleum. The ivory handle gleamed. "Because you left something behind, Rory. Something I need." Aurora’s hand flew to her scar, her fingers brushing the raised flesh. "I left nothing. I burned everything." "Interesting." He stepped fully into the flat, his polished shoes clicking on the floor. He didn’t look at her. He walked past her, towards the kitchen, his movements deliberate, predatory. "You always were good at leaving traces, weren’t you? Like this." He gestured vaguely at the chaos around them. "Or this." He stopped beside the stove, his amber eye fixed on the bubbling pot. "That scar. It’s a map. A map to something I’ve been hunting for years." Aurora followed him, her heart pounding a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "What are you talking about, Lucien?" He didn’t turn. He didn’t look at her. He simply held out his hand, palm up. On his palm lay a single, weathered photograph. It showed a young woman, her face obscured by shadows, standing in front of a crumbling stone archway in a forgotten corner of London. The woman’s hand rested on the woman’s shoulder – Aurora’s own hand, the scar visible on her wrist. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. She stumbled back, her hand flying to her mouth. The photograph was old, the paper yellowed, the edges frayed. But the scar... it was unmistakable. "How...?" she breathed, her voice trembling. Lucien Moreau finally turned his head. His black eye met hers, cold and unreadable. "I have my sources, Rory. And I know you know more than you’re telling. You always did. Even when you thought you’d left it all behind." The air in the flat thickened, charged with the electricity of old wounds and new danger. Aurora felt the heat of his gaze on her skin, a physical pressure that made her skin crawl. The scar on her wrist burned with a familiar ache, a reminder of the pain he’d caused. And beneath it all, a flicker of something else – a memory of desire, of a time when the world had felt electric and dangerous, just like him. "Show me," she whispered, the words torn from her throat. "Show me what you want." Lucien Moreau’s lips curved into a slow, knowing smile. "First, you show me why you ran." He held out the photograph again. "Start talking, Rory. Or I’ll start digging. And I promise, I’ll find everything you’ve hidden. Even the things you’ve forgotten." The door to the past slammed open, and Aurora was standing right in the middle of it, the past Lucien Moreau held in his hand burning like a brand on her skin. The game was back on, and this time, there was nowhere left to hide.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stepped fully [fully]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.211
94.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount862
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount862
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"desire"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"warmth"
2"velvet"
3"whisper"
4"pounding"
5"unreadable"
6"charged"
7"familiar"
8"reminder"
9"flicker"
10"desire"
11"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords864
ratio0.002
matches
0"click"
1"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount739
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau4
Aurora8
London1
Lucien4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.959
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount864
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"buried that part"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean48
std26.22
cv0.546
sampleLengths
099
166
279
315
432
569
611
754
818
978
1018
1166
1237
1340
1479
1515
1642
1746
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was standing"
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences77
ratio0.039
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – scanned her flat with detached curiosity, missing nothing."
1"The woman’s hand rested on the woman’s shoulder – Aurora’s own hand, the scar visible on her wrist."
2"And beneath it all, a flicker of something else – a memory of desire, of a time when the world had felt electric and dangerous, just like him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount737
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.036635006784260515
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.014925373134328358
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean11.22
std7.05
cv0.629
sampleLengths
07
112
213
38
41
520
62
74
818
914
1028
1117
1212
133
143
153
163
1718
1826
1911
209
2112
2210
235
244
256
267
2710
285
2910
3021
3124
3214
339
342
3512
3613
374
3812
394
409
4112
426
4314
445
4511
4619
4715
4814
4912
48.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.37662337662337664
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners29
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Instead, he lifted his cane,"
ratio0.015
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her heart hammered against her"
1"She’d been expecting the landlord’s"
2"She wiped her hands on"
3"She slid the top one"
4"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
5"He didn’t smile."
6"He didn’t frown."
7"He simply waited."
8"She’d thought she’d buried that"
9"She unlocked the final bolt,"
10"She opened the door a"
11"Her voice was a low"
12"He didn’t step inside."
13"He didn’t even move his"
14"His gaze remained fixed on"
15"His voice was smooth, like"
16"She stepped back, closing the"
17"She didn’t turn away, but"
18"she asked, her voice barely"
19"He pushed the door open"
ratio0.554
6.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences65
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped like a"
1"Aurora froze mid-stir, the ladle"
2"Her heart hammered against her"
3"She’d been expecting the landlord’s"
4"She wiped her hands on"
5"She slid the top one"
6"The final bolt yielded with"
7"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
8"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
9"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
10"He didn’t smile."
11"He didn’t frown."
12"He simply waited."
13"Aurora’s breath hitched."
14"The scar on her left"
15"She’d thought she’d buried that"
16"She unlocked the final bolt,"
17"She opened the door a"
18"Her voice was a low"
19"He didn’t step inside."
ratio0.908
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Now he stood there, a"
ratio0.015
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She’d thought she’d buried that part of herself, buried him, buried the tangled mess of attraction and betrayal that had ended their relationship three years ag…"
1"Aurora felt the heat of his gaze on her skin, a physical pressure that made her skin crawl."
2"The door to the past slammed open, and Aurora was standing right in the middle of it, the past Lucien Moreau held in his hand burning like a brand on her skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"He stepped fully, his polished shoes clicking on the floor"
2"she breathed, her voice trembling"
3"she whispered, the words torn from her throat"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.211
75.1107%