Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT102HQ2TEJH0DZRPDR3N92

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.069850
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of copper and decay, though Detective Harlow Quinn couldn't determine which scent belonged to the body and which to the century-old infrastructure. She ducked beneath the police tape strung across the entrance—a rusted maintenance door that shouldn't have been accessible at all—and descended the iron staircase into darkness. Her torch cut a pale wedge through the black. Somewhere below, the crime scene unit had already set up their lights, and she could see the glow bleeding up from the platform level like something alive trying to crawl free. "Mind the third step from the bottom," called a voice from below. "Rust's eaten clean through." Quinn skipped the step without looking, her worn leather watch catching the light as she gripped the railing. Eighteen years on the force had taught her feet to remember warnings her conscious mind might forget. The platform opened up before her, and she stopped. It wasn't the body that gave her pause—she'd seen plenty of those. It was everything else. Market stalls. Dozens of them, arranged in neat rows across what should have been an empty abandoned platform. Wooden tables draped with cloth, glass display cases, a fortune-teller's booth with velvet curtains now stained with something dark. The crime scene lights cast harsh shadows through the skeletal frames, turning the whole space into a forest of strange silhouettes. "Guv." DS Chen approached, tablet in hand, looking as unsettled as Quinn felt. "Glad you could make it. This one's... different." "What is all this?" "Some kind of underground market, far as we can tell. Transport Police got an anonymous tip three hours ago. Came down expecting rough sleepers, found—" He gestured toward the center of the platform, where a white tent had been erected over the body. Quinn walked the perimeter first, ignoring the tent. The body would keep. The scene wouldn't—not once the brass decided this was too strange for standard procedure and called in whoever they called in for things like this. The stalls held merchandise that made no sense. Glass vials filled with liquids that seemed to shift color when she looked away. Books bound in materials she couldn't identify. A display case full of what appeared to be teeth—human, animal, and something else entirely. She reached for one of the vials, then stopped herself. "Forensics touch any of this yet?" "They're being careful. Half of them think it's some kind of drug operation. The other half—" Chen shrugged. "You know how rumors spread." Quinn knew. She also knew that rumors, in her experience, often carried more truth than official reports. She approached the tent. The victim was female, mid-thirties, dressed in clothes that looked Victorian but felt wrong somehow. Too clean. Too well-preserved. She lay in the center of a stall that appeared to have sold small brass instruments—compasses, astrolabes, devices Quinn couldn't name. Her eyes were open, fixed on the vaulted ceiling above with an expression of profound surprise. No visible wounds. No blood except for a small trickle from her left ear. "Cause of death?" "Medical examiner's saying heart attack pending autopsy. But..." Chen crouched beside the body, pointing his torch at her left hand. "Look at this." The woman's fingers were curled around something. Quinn pulled on a fresh glove and gently pried the hand open. A small brass compass sat in the dead woman's palm. Its face was etched with symbols Quinn didn't recognize, and the casing had a patina of verdigris that suggested age. The needle was spinning wildly, despite the compass lying perfectly still. "That's been doing that since we found her," Chen said. "Haven't touched it. Figured you'd want to see it in situ." Quinn stared at the spinning needle. Something tugged at the back of her mind—a memory of another case, another scene that didn't add up. Three years ago. Morris lying on cold concrete with his eyes open and that same expression of profound surprise. She pushed the thought away. "What's the theory?" she asked, straightening up. Chen checked his tablet. "Anonymous tip suggests this market operates on a rotating schedule. Moves locations every month or so. Vendors sell to a specific clientele—collectors, antiquarians, that sort of thing. We're thinking the victim was either a vendor who got robbed or a customer who saw something she shouldn't have." "Heart attack during a robbery?" "Drugs, maybe. Something that causes cardiac arrest. Forensics found traces of powders at several stalls that don't match any known substance." Quinn walked away from the body, toward the edge of the platform where the tunnel mouth gaped like an open wound. The rails were rusted solid, hadn't seen a train in decades. But there were footprints in the dust—dozens of them, overlapping, leading in both directions. "How many people were here when this happened?" "Based on the footprint analysis? Could be thirty, forty individuals. Maybe more." "And they all vanished before the police arrived." "Three-hour gap between the anonymous tip and our arrival. Plenty of time to clear out." Quinn shook her head. Something didn't fit. The stalls were still here. The merchandise was still here. If this was a criminal operation—drugs or stolen goods or something else—why leave all of it behind? Why not take the evidence? Unless the evidence wasn't evidence at all. Unless it was a message. She returned to the body, crouched again, studied the victim's face. The surprise etched there wasn't fear. It was recognition. This woman had seen something she knew—something familiar—and it had stopped her heart. "I don't think this was a robbery," Quinn said. Chen looked up from his tablet. "Guv?" "The merchandise is worthless to anyone who doesn't know what it is. Look at these stalls—no price tags, no signage, nothing to indicate what's being sold. This market operated on reputation. Word of mouth. The vendors knew their customers, and the customers knew what they were buying." "So?" "So if you wanted to rob this place, you'd need to be part of that world. An insider. And if you were an insider, you'd know better than to kill a vendor in the middle of the market floor. Too many witnesses. Too much risk." Quinn stood, pacing now, her mind working through the problem like a puzzle. "The tip that brought us here—it came in three hours after the estimated time of death. Long enough for the market to clear out, but not long enough for the body to be moved. Someone wanted us to find her exactly like this." "A setup?" "A statement." Quinn gestured at the spinning compass still clutched in the dead woman's hand. "She was selling something. Something specific. And someone wanted to make sure everyone who shops at this market knows what happens when you sell to the wrong buyer." Chen frowned. "That's a lot of speculation, guv. The ME says heart attack. Could be natural causes." "A healthy woman in her mid-thirties drops dead of a heart attack while clutching a compass that won't stop spinning, in the middle of an underground market that officially doesn't exist, and your theory is natural causes?" "I'm saying we follow the evidence. The evidence says heart attack." Quinn looked at her colleague—young, earnest, following procedure exactly as he'd been trained. She couldn't fault him for it. She'd been the same way once, before Morris, before she'd learned that some cases had answers that couldn't be found in evidence bags and autopsy reports. "Pull the CCTV from the surrounding streets," she said. "I want to know everyone who entered this area in the twenty-four hours before the tip came in." "Already running it. But guv—this station's been sealed for seventy years. The only entrance we've found is that maintenance door, and the lock had to be cut to get inside." "Then how did forty people get in and out without anyone noticing?" Chen had no answer for that. Quinn walked back toward the body, past the stalls with their impossible merchandise. A glint of light caught her eye—something beneath one of the tables, half-hidden by a fallen cloth. She crouched, pulled back the fabric. A small wooden box, ornately carved, sitting in a pool of what looked like black ink. Except ink didn't smoke. This did—thin wisps of dark vapor rising from the liquid and dissipating into the air. "Chen. Get forensics over here." He came at a jog, then stopped short when he saw what she'd found. "What the hell is that?" "Evidence." Quinn pulled out her phone, took photographs from multiple angles. The smoke was already thinning, the pool shrinking as whatever substance it was evaporated or absorbed into the stone floor. "Something was in this box. Something that needed to be contained. And now it's not." "You think that's what killed her?" Quinn didn't answer. She was looking past the box, past the stalls, toward the far end of the platform where the shadows seemed deeper than they should be. For just a moment, she could have sworn she saw movement—a shape that was there and then wasn't. She blinked, and it was gone. "Canvas the area again," she said, her voice steady despite the cold settling into her bones. "Every stall, every inch of floor. I want to know what was in that box and where it went." "And the body?" Quinn looked back at the dead woman with her spinning compass and her surprised eyes. Three years of unexplained cases. Three years of evidence that didn't add up. Three years since Morris died with that same expression on his face, and she'd been told it was an accident, a fall, bad luck. She'd stopped believing in bad luck a long time ago. "The body goes to Dr. Patel. Tell her I want a full toxicology screen and I want it fast. And Chen—" She waited until he met her eyes. "This case stays off the shared database for now. Everything goes through me." "Guv, that's not—" "Not protocol. I know." Quinn stepped over the remnants of the smoking pool, already little more than a dark stain on ancient concrete. "Neither is any of this." She climbed the iron staircase alone, the crime scene unit's lights fading behind her until she was back in darkness with only her torch for company. At the top of the stairs, she paused before stepping through the maintenance door. The market had moved locations every full moon, Chen's notes said. Which meant someone knew when and where it would appear. Someone with access to information the Metropolitan Police didn't have. Quinn thought about the dead woman's hand, clutched so tightly around that brass compass. She thought about the symbols etched into its face—protective sigils, if you believed in that sort of thing. And she thought about what kind of person needed protection from the needle of a compass. Someone who didn't want to be found. She stepped through the door into the grey London morning, already planning her next move. Somewhere in this city was a researcher who specialized in impossible things. Someone who might be able to tell her what kind of market sold smoking boxes and spinning compasses. Someone who knew about the spaces between what was real and what the evidence could prove.
created_at"2026-02-19T04:02:14.21Z" 2/19/2026, 4:02:14 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.255
leniency0.51
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1900
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"perfectly"
2"tightly"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
1"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1900
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"profound"
count2
4
word"etched"
count3
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"database"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"unsettled"
2"standard"
3"profound"
4"etched"
5"familiar"
6"glint"
7"database"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1871
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1233
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Chen9
Victorian1
Morris3
Metropolitan1
Police1
London1
Three4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Chen"
3"Morris"
4"Police"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.648
windowScore0.667
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"liquids that seemed to shift color when she looked away"
1"looked like black ink"
2"seemed deeper than they should be"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1871
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences145
matches
0"knew that rumors"
1"learned that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean25.28
std17.38
cv0.687
sampleLengths
053
140
216
335
49
516
658
721
84
943
1037
1154
126
1323
1417
154
1656
1714
183
1923
2019
2141
2221
2343
245
257
2651
275
2821
2946
308
3112
328
3315
3439
3512
3633
379
387
3947
401
4145
4256
432
4443
4517
4637
4711
4845
4927
79.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences108
matches
0"been erected"
1"were curled"
2"was etched"
3"were rusted"
4"been trained"
5"was evaporated"
6"was gone"
7"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was spinning"
1"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences145
ratio0.097
matches
0"She ducked beneath the police tape strung across the entrance—a rusted maintenance door that shouldn't have been accessible at all—and descended the iron staircase into darkness."
1"It wasn't the body that gave her pause—she'd seen plenty of those."
2"The scene wouldn't—not once the brass decided this was too strange for standard procedure and called in whoever they called in for things like this."
3"A display case full of what appeared to be teeth—human, animal, and something else entirely."
4"She lay in the center of a stall that appeared to have sold small brass instruments—compasses, astrolabes, devices Quinn couldn't name."
5"Something tugged at the back of her mind—a memory of another case, another scene that didn't add up."
6"But there were footprints in the dust—dozens of them, overlapping, leading in both directions."
7"If this was a criminal operation—drugs or stolen goods or something else—why leave all of it behind?"
8"This woman had seen something she knew—something familiar—and it had stopped her heart."
9"Quinn looked at her colleague—young, earnest, following procedure exactly as he'd been trained."
10"A glint of light caught her eye—something beneath one of the tables, half-hidden by a fallen cloth."
11"This did—thin wisps of dark vapor rising from the liquid and dissipating into the air."
12"For just a moment, she could have sworn she saw movement—a shape that was there and then wasn't."
13"She thought about the symbols etched into its face—protective sigils, if you believed in that sort of thing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1255
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03266932270916335
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006374501992031873
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean12.9
std9.46
cv0.733
sampleLengths
027
126
29
331
412
54
618
717
89
912
104
112
1216
1319
1421
1513
168
174
1843
198
204
2125
228
2314
247
2515
2610
276
2818
295
302
3115
324
3315
342
352
3621
3716
383
3911
403
4120
423
437
4412
4510
4620
4711
4810
4911
60.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.4206896551724138
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners61
67.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"Somewhere below, the crime scene"
1"Somewhere in this city was"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences99
matches
0"She ducked beneath the police"
1"Her torch cut a pale"
2"It wasn't the body that"
3"It was everything else."
4"He gestured toward the center"
5"She reached for one of"
6"She also knew that rumors,"
7"She approached the tent."
8"She lay in the center"
9"Her eyes were open, fixed"
10"Its face was etched with"
11"She pushed the thought away."
12"she asked, straightening up"
13"She returned to the body,"
14"It was recognition."
15"She couldn't fault him for"
16"She'd been the same way"
17"She crouched, pulled back the"
18"He came at a jog,"
19"She was looking past the"
ratio0.273
66.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences99
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"She ducked beneath the police"
2"Her torch cut a pale"
3"Quinn skipped the step without"
4"The platform opened up before"
5"It wasn't the body that"
6"It was everything else."
7"Dozens of them, arranged in"
8"The crime scene lights cast"
9"DS Chen approached, tablet in"
10"He gestured toward the center"
11"Quinn walked the perimeter first,"
12"The body would keep."
13"The scene wouldn't—not once the"
14"The stalls held merchandise that"
15"Glass vials filled with liquids"
16"Books bound in materials she"
17"A display case full of"
18"She reached for one of"
19"She also knew that rumors,"
ratio0.788
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"If this was a criminal"
ratio0.01
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She ducked beneath the police tape strung across the entrance—a rusted maintenance door that shouldn't have been accessible at all—and descended the iron stairc…"
1"It wasn't the body that gave her pause—she'd seen plenty of those."
2"The victim was female, mid-thirties, dressed in clothes that looked Victorian but felt wrong somehow."
3"She lay in the center of a stall that appeared to have sold small brass instruments—compasses, astrolabes, devices Quinn couldn't name."
4"Somewhere in this city was a researcher who specialized in impossible things."
5"Someone who might be able to tell her what kind of market sold smoking boxes and spinning compasses."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the cold settling into her bones"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.196
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.6900%