Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT104CH43TYGSJADMG4HF2E

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Duration:
1m 31s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
of cold that had been festering for decades. Rust dripped like dried blood down the tiled walls, and the air tasted of iron, mold, angular shadows, illuminating the one patch of this Marsh stood near the edge of the light, his bulk making the scene feel cramped. He jerked a thumb over his shoulder. “Down there. On the tracks. It’s a mess.” I walked past him, my steps echoing in the cavernous space. The body lay sprawled across the rusted rails, a man in a dark over mugging gone wrong—walcleaned out of the head with something heavy and blunt. But“Who found him?” I asked, not taking my eyes off the scene. “Network Rail inspector doing a routine structural check. Nearly had a heart attack. Called it in two hours ago.” Marsh came to stand beside me, his hands shoved deep in his pockets. “Looks straightforward. Wrong place, wrong time. Probably thought this old tunnel was a good shortcut or. The placement was all wrong. The impact wound was on the occipital bone, but the body was face down. If he’d been attacked from behind, the force would have sent him wound like that should have painted the wall behind him.“Not yet. Lads are still searching. Plenty of rubble down here. Could be any chunk of it.” I crouched, the worn leather of my watch strap pressing against my wrist. I ignored the pervasive smell of decay and focused on the victim. His hands. They were clean. Too clean for a man who’d supposedly been crawling through a filthy, disused tunnel. No grime under the nails, no scratches. I leaned closer. A faint, acrid smell, out of place with the surrounding rot. Ozone. Like the air after a lightning strike. “Marsh, look at his pockets.” “Already did. Empty. Like I said, cleaned out.” “Not the contents. The fabric.” I pointed with a gloved finger. The inner lining of his left coat pocket was lightly scorched, the synthetic material melted and curled inward at the edges. “That’s not from a lighter. That’s a localized, intense heat. Electrical.” Marsh frowned, his jowly face creasing with skepticism. “So he had a faulty battery pack. Happens all the time. Doesn’t change the fact that some lowlife cracked his skull for the twenty quid in his wallet.” I stood up, my knees protesting. The military precision of my bearing felt like a cage. Every instinct screamed that this was a trap, a stage set with deliberate, clumsy props. My gaze swept the area again, beyond the immediate pool of light. The darkness felt watchful. Then I saw it. A glint, half-hidden behind a fallen piece of conduit several yards down the track, away from the designated scene. I walked toward it, Marsh sighing behind me. “Quinn, forensics have already—” I held up a hand, silencing him. Nestled in the grit was a small, circular object. I crouched again. A compassigris. It was old, beautifully made, the face etched with intricate, swirling patterns that were more than just decoration. They looked like sigils. The needle wasn’t pointing north. It was spinning in a slow, lazy circle, unaffected by the movement of my body. “What’s that?” Marsh asked, peering over my shoulder. “Some tourist junk?” “Not junk,” I murmured. The patterns were familiar. I’d seen sketches of things like them before, in a file I wasn’t supposed to have, notes from a case three years ago that had been abruptly, officially, closed. Notes from my late partner, Morris. He’d been obsessed with symbols like these before he vanished. He’d called them ‘wards’ and ‘guides.’ I picked up the compass carefully. It was warm against my palm, a living warmth that had nothing to do with the ambient temperature. “Bag it,” Marsh said, his tone dismissive. “Probably just fell out of the poor sod’s pocket during the struggle.” “No.” The word was out before I could stop it. “It wasn’t on him. Look at the placement. It’s too far away, too carefully obscured. It was dropped. Or planted.” The ozone smell. The clean hands. The lack of spatter. The backwards fall. The pieces, ill-fitting and strange, began to click into a terrifying new picture. “This wasn’t a mugging.” Marsh let out a short, frustrated laugh. “Of course it was. What else could it be?” I turned the compass over in my hand. The spinning needle suddenly stuttered, then jerked to a stop, pointing firmly down the tunnel, into the absolute blackness beyond our lights. A shiver that had nothing to do with the cold traced its way down my spine. “I think he was running,” I said, my voice low. “I think he was running from something that didn’t want to steal his wallet. He was trying to get away, and he fell. That blow to the head… it’s post-mortem. Something else killed him. Something that doesn’t leave a trace your forensics team will know how to find.” I looked from the compass needle, pointing insistently into the void, back to the unnaturally clean body on the tracks. The staged scene. The wrong evidence. It was a message. A warning. And the only person who seemed to see it was the one holding a compass that pointed toward things that shouldn’t exist. Marsh was staring at me, his expression a mixture of pity and impatience. “Quinn, that’s... that’s a hell of a leap. You’re seeing ghosts.” “No,” I said, closing my fingers around the warm brass. “I’m finally starting to see what’s really here.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount919
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount919
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"synthetic"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"firmly"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"down my spine"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"synthetic"
2"glint"
3"etched"
4"intricate"
5"familiar"
6"warmth"
7"firmly"
8"traced"
9"down my spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
45.45% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences44
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences51
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords915
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Then I saw it. A glint, half-hidden behind a fallen piece of conduit several yards down the track, away from the designa…"
90.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount671
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Marsh"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Marsh"
discoveredNames
Marsh8
Lads1
Morris1
Look1
persons
0"Marsh"
1"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.904
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a cage. Every instinct scream"
1"looked like sigils. The needle wasn’t poi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount915
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean39.78
std24.92
cv0.626
sampleLengths
062
149
2105
373
45
58
643
736
847
931
104
1163
1211
1359
1424
1519
1660
1716
1846
1958
2054
2124
2218
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"been obsessed"
1"was dropped"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was spinning"
1"was trying"
2"was staring"
86.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences51
ratio0.02
matches
0"The body lay sprawled across the rusted rails, a man in a dark over mugging gone wrong—walcleaned out of the head with something heavy and blunt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount334
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.03293413173652695
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.014970059880239521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences51
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences51
mean17.94
std18.5
cv1.031
sampleLengths
08
139
27
38
411
526
612
732
858
94
105
116
1273
135
142
151
165
173
1834
195
201
2115
224
2317
2447
2531
264
2763
2811
2959
3024
3119
3214
334
347
353
3632
3711
385
3946
4024
419
425
432
444
4514
4654
4715
486
493
94.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.6078431372549019
totalSentences51
uniqueOpeners31
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Then I saw it. A"
ratio0.025
80.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences40
matches
0"He jerked a thumb over"
1"I walked past him, my"
2"I crouched, the worn leather"
3"I stood up, my knees"
4"I held up a hand,"
5"I murmured. The patterns were"
6"I picked up the compass"
7"It’s too far away, too"
8"It was dropped."
9"I turned the compass over"
10"I said, my voice low"
11"He was trying to get"
12"I looked from the compass"
13"I said, closing my fingers"
ratio0.35
72.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences40
matches
0"Rust dripped like dried blood"
1"He jerked a thumb over"
2"I walked past him, my"
3"The body lay sprawled across"
4"Marsh came to stand beside"
5"Lads are still searching."
6"Plenty of rubble down here."
7"I crouched, the worn leather"
8"The not from a lighter."
9"That’s a localized, intense heat."
10"Marsh frowned, his jowly face"
11"I stood up, my knees"
12"I held up a hand,"
13"Marsh asked, peering over my"
14"I murmured. The patterns were"
15"I picked up the compass"
16"Marsh said, his tone dismissive"
17"The word was out before"
18"It’s too far away, too"
19"It was dropped."
ratio0.775
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rust dripped like dried blood down the tiled walls, and the air tasted of iron, mold, angular shadows, illuminating the one patch of this Marsh stood near the e…"
1"I crouched, the worn leather of my watch strap pressing against my wrist. I ignored the pervasive smell of decay and focused on the victim. His hands. They were…"
2"I stood up, my knees protesting. The military precision of my bearing felt like a cage. Every instinct screamed that this was a trap, a stage set with deliberat…"
3"I held up a hand, silencing him. Nestled in the grit was a small, circular object. I crouched again. A compassigris. It was old, beautifully made, the face etch…"
4"I picked up the compass carefully. It was warm against my palm, a living warmth that had nothing to do with the ambient temperature."
5"I turned the compass over in my hand. The spinning needle suddenly stuttered, then jerked to a stop, pointing firmly down the tunnel, into the absolute blacknes…"
6"I looked from the compass needle, pointing insistently into the void, back to the unnaturally clean body on the tracks. The staged scene. The wrong evidence. It…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Marsh said, his tone dismissive"
1"I said, my voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I murmured. (murmur)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.077
76.3761%