Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT10C8BY51VJZCDWKGDGT59

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Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.008642
Provider:
Nebius

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Theancient oak standing stones pierced the earth like broken teeth, jagged and grey against the manicured grass of Richmond Park. Aurora Carter paused at the perimeter, the damp chill of the London evening seeping through her jacket. Her fingers brushed the rough bark of the nearest monolith. A sudden, sharp heat bloomed against her chest. She flinched, hand darting inside her coat to pull out the Heartstone Pendant. The crimson gemstone pulsed with a rhythmic, inner light, warmer than her skin. "It knows." Nyx materialised from the shadow of a nearby rhododendron. Their form wavered, a solid darkness cut from a different cloth of reality, faint violet eyes glowing in the twilight. They didn't speak so much as breathe the words, the sound like wind rushing through a cracked window. "The boundary is thin here." Nyx extended a hand, long fingers dissolving into mist as they passed through the gap between the stones. "Can you taste it? The ozone and old magic." Rory grimaced, tucking the pendant back into her shirt. The heat lingered, a comforting anchor. She adjusted the strap of her bag, feeling the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade pressing against her hip through the fabric. The cold metal seemed to leech the warmth from her side, a stark counterpoint to the stone. "I taste damp dog and exhaust fumes." She stepped up to the threshold. "Isolde said she was waiting." Isolde Varga stood just beyond the central stone, though she hadn't been there a second ago. The silver hair cascading down her back shimmered with a life of its own, catching light that didn't exist in the park. Her pale lavender eyes regarded Rory with a mixture of amusement and ancient tiredness. "The mortal world clings to you, Aurora Carter." Isolde gestured with a graceful sweep of her arm. "Step through. Leave the clock at the door." Rory took a breath and crossed the line. The sensation hit her like a physical blow, a sudden drop in barometric pressure that made her ears pop. The damp chill vanished, replaced by a thick, humid warmth that smelled of crushed pine needles, honey, and rain on hot asphalt. She spun around. The towering oaks of the park were gone. In their place stood a forest of bioluminescent fungi and towering, spiralling trees with bark like polished obsidian. The sky above wasn't the heavy grey of London, but a swirl of violet and bruised peach, light without a visible source. "Welcome to the Grove." Nyx drifted past her, their feet hovering inches above a ground carpeted in moss that glowed a soft, electric blue. They seemed more solid here, less a shadow and more a creature of substance. "The resonance is stronger here." Nyx crouched, trailing a hand through the glowing moss. The light rippled away from their touch like water. "The Veil is just a whisper." Rory took a cautious step forward. Her boots sank into the moss, silent. She looked down, expecting footprints, but the moss sprang back instantly, leaving no trace she had ever walked there. "Don't worry about the path." Isolde walked ahead, her movements fluid, leaving no footprints of her own. "The ground remembers, but it does not judge." They moved deeper into the clearing. The flora defied earthly biology. Flowers with petals like stained glass hung suspended in mid-air, drifting lazily on currents Rory couldn't feel. Vines thicker than her torso coiled around the obsidian trees, pulsing with a slow, rhythmic thump like a heartbeat. Rory reached out to touch a fern that unfurled as she watched. The fronds were metallic, cold and sharp. "I wouldn't." Nyx’s voice slid through the air. "It tastes like iron and regret." Rory pulled her hand back, clutching her jacket tighter. "This is where you live? It feels... unfinished." "It is a pause." Isolde stopped near a stream that flowed upward, defying gravity, winding its way into the violet sky. She dipped her fingers into the liquid, which shimmered like liquid mercury. "A breath held between realms. Time here is a suggestion, not a law." Rory checked her watch. The second hand was frozen, twitching uselessly between ticks. She tapped the glass, but the hand refused to move. "How long have we been here?" "An eternity. Or a heartbeat." Isolde turned, her expression unreadable. "Does it matter?" "It matters if I have a shift at the Golden Empress tonight." Rory scanned the perimeter of the grove. The standing stones were visible in the distance, shimmering like a mirage. Beyond them, the outline of London was blurred and indistinct, as if seen through thick frosted glass. The unease settled in her stomach, heavy and cold. This place was beautiful, yes, but it was the beauty of a deep-sea fish—luminous, alien, and predatory. "The blade." Nyx straightened, their gaze fixed on Rory’s hip. "It hums." Rory placed a hand on the hilt of the Fae-Forged dagger. Even through her gloves, the cold was biting. It vibrated against her palm, a low-frequency thrum that made her teeth ache. "It's been doing that since we crossed the stones." She drew the blade an inch. The moonsilver metal caught the ambient light, casting a long, slender shadow that didn't match the angle of the illumination. "It feels like it wants to cut something." "It senses the rifts." Nyx drifted closer, their head cocking to the side. "The fabric of this place is woven with stardust and decay. The blade belongs to the Courts, but the Grove... the Grove is a echo of them." Isolde laughed, a sound like wind chimes in a storm. "Clever shadow. The blade is hungry because this place is a feast of magic it cannot consume." Rory sheathed the weapon, the sound a sharp hiss of metal on leather. She walked to the edge of the upward-flowing stream. The air here tasted sweet, cloying, like rotting fruit. She looked at her reflection in the mercury water. Her face looked the same—pale, sharp blue eyes, black hair tied back—but the eyes in the reflection seemed older, tired. Or maybe that was just the distortion of the liquid. "What do you see?" Isolde stood beside her, though Rory hadn't heard her approach. "London. Bills. Deliveries." Rory stared at the water. "Myself." Isolde shook her head slowly. "You see the mask. The Grove shows the truth underneath. Look closer." Rory leaned in. The ripple stilled. For a moment, the image of her face flickered and changed, replaced by a woman clad in armour of woven light, standing atop a mountain of obsidian. The eyes were the same, but the expression was one of terrifying, cold resolve. She jerked back, stumbling on the soft moss. "A trick of the light." "Is it?" Isolde smiled, but the warmth didn't reach her lavender eyes. "The Veil weakens, Aurora Carter. The reflections are bleeding into the reality. You brought the Heartstone here. It bridges the gap." The pendant seared against her skin again. Rory clutched her chest, wincing. The heat was spreading, radiating outwards, making the air around her shimmer. "Nyx?" The Shade was at her side instantly, their form coalescing into a towering, protective shadow. "The stone reacts to the Grove’s core. We are too close to the epicentre." "Too close to what?" Rory gasped, the heat becoming unbearable, a physical weight pressing against her lungs. "To the reason I was exiled." Isolde turned her back on them, facing the deep, dark center of the grove where the light struggled to penetrate. "Come. The tour is over. The work begins." Isolde walked into the darkness without looking back. Rory fought to catch her breath, the pendant’s heat slowly subsiding to a dull throb. She exchanged a glance with Nyx. The Shade’s violet eyes were fixed on the darkness Isolde had entered, their body tense, poised to strike or flee. "Stay close." Nyx’s whisper was barely audible. "The shadows here have teeth." Rory nodded, tightening her grip on the strap of her bag. She followed the silver-haired seer into the dark, the bioluminescent plants bowing as she passed, watching her with unblinking, alien eyes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"wavered"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count3
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"cascading"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count2
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"resonance"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"flickered"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
20
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"wavered"
4"comforting"
5"weight"
6"warmth"
7"stark"
8"cascading"
9"shimmered"
10"electric"
11"resonance"
12"whisper"
13"unreadable"
14"scanned"
15"stomach"
16"vibrated"
17"echo"
18"flickered"
19"resolve"
20"throb"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1348
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1060
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
London3
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory19
Fae-Forged2
Blade1
Isolde12
Varga1
Shade2
Nyx9
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Varga"
5"Shade"
6"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.604
windowScore0.5
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed more solid here, less a shadow and more a creature of substance"
1"seemed older tired"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1348
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean26.43
std15
cv0.567
sampleLengths
047
18
226
32
447
532
653
718
852
925
108
1141
1251
134
1434
1529
1632
1725
1847
1919
2014
2117
2246
2323
246
2513
2648
2726
2812
2932
3043
3140
3227
3331
3439
3514
369
3717
3847
398
405
4133
4224
431
4429
4517
4634
478
4841
4912
93.44% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"were gone"
1"was blurred"
2"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was biting"
1"was spreading"
92.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences113
ratio0.018
matches
0"This place was beautiful, yes, but it was the beauty of a deep-sea fish—luminous, alien, and predatory."
1"Her face looked the same—pale, sharp blue eyes, black hair tied back—but the eyes in the reflection seemed older, tired."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1070
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.027102803738317756
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007476635514018692
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean11.93
std6.1
cv0.511
sampleLengths
020
117
210
38
413
513
62
79
820
918
1023
119
129
136
1421
1517
1613
175
1816
1922
2014
2117
228
238
2419
2522
263
278
2818
2922
304
3120
3214
3314
349
356
366
377
3819
3917
408
416
425
4317
4419
4512
467
478
486
499
48.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.336283185840708
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her fingers brushed the rough"
1"She flinched, hand darting inside"
2"Their form wavered, a solid"
3"They didn't speak so much"
4"She adjusted the strap of"
5"She stepped up to the"
6"Her pale lavender eyes regarded"
7"She spun around."
8"They seemed more solid here,"
9"Her boots sank into the"
10"She looked down, expecting footprints,"
11"They moved deeper into the"
12"She dipped her fingers into"
13"She tapped the glass, but"
14"It vibrated against her palm,"
15"She drew the blade an"
16"She walked to the edge"
17"She looked at her reflection"
18"Her face looked the same—pale,"
19"She jerked back, stumbling on"
ratio0.247
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences89
matches
0"Aurora Carter paused at the"
1"Her fingers brushed the rough"
2"A sudden, sharp heat bloomed"
3"She flinched, hand darting inside"
4"The crimson gemstone pulsed with"
5"Nyx materialised from the shadow"
6"Their form wavered, a solid"
7"They didn't speak so much"
8"Nyx extended a hand, long"
9"Rory grimaced, tucking the pendant"
10"The heat lingered, a comforting"
11"She adjusted the strap of"
12"The cold metal seemed to"
13"She stepped up to the"
14"Isolde Varga stood just beyond"
15"The silver hair cascading down"
16"Her pale lavender eyes regarded"
17"Isolde gestured with a graceful"
18"Rory took a breath and"
19"The sensation hit her like"
ratio0.933
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Even through her gloves, the"
ratio0.011
26.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The silver hair cascading down her back shimmered with a life of its own, catching light that didn't exist in the park."
1"The sensation hit her like a physical blow, a sudden drop in barometric pressure that made her ears pop."
2"The damp chill vanished, replaced by a thick, humid warmth that smelled of crushed pine needles, honey, and rain on hot asphalt."
3"Nyx drifted past her, their feet hovering inches above a ground carpeted in moss that glowed a soft, electric blue."
4"It vibrated against her palm, a low-frequency thrum that made her teeth ache."
5"The moonsilver metal caught the ambient light, casting a long, slender shadow that didn't match the angle of the illumination."
6"The Shade was at her side instantly, their form coalescing into a towering, protective shadow."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde walked, her movements fluid, leaving no footprints of her own"
1"Isolde turned, her expression unreadable"
2"Nyx drifted, their head cocking to the side"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.048
79.3292%