| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.81 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1358 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1358 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "scanned" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "vibrated" | | 17 | "echo" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "resolve" | | 20 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1348 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1060 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Varga | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.604 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 86.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed more solid here, less a shadow and more a creature of substance" | | 1 | "seemed older tired" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1348 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 26.43 | | std | 15 | | cv | 0.567 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 41 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 93.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was blurred" | | 2 | "were fixed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "was biting" | | 1 | "was spreading" |
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| 92.29% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "This place was beautiful, yes, but it was the beauty of a deep-sea fish—luminous, alien, and predatory." | | 1 | "Her face looked the same—pale, sharp blue eyes, black hair tied back—but the eyes in the reflection seemed older, tired." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1070 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.027102803738317756 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007476635514018692 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 11.93 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 48.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.336283185840708 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers brushed the rough" | | 1 | "She flinched, hand darting inside" | | 2 | "Their form wavered, a solid" | | 3 | "They didn't speak so much" | | 4 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 5 | "She stepped up to the" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes regarded" | | 7 | "She spun around." | | 8 | "They seemed more solid here," | | 9 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 10 | "She looked down, expecting footprints," | | 11 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "She dipped her fingers into" | | 13 | "She tapped the glass, but" | | 14 | "It vibrated against her palm," | | 15 | "She drew the blade an" | | 16 | "She walked to the edge" | | 17 | "She looked at her reflection" | | 18 | "Her face looked the same—pale," | | 19 | "She jerked back, stumbling on" |
| | ratio | 0.247 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter paused at the" | | 1 | "Her fingers brushed the rough" | | 2 | "A sudden, sharp heat bloomed" | | 3 | "She flinched, hand darting inside" | | 4 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed with" | | 5 | "Nyx materialised from the shadow" | | 6 | "Their form wavered, a solid" | | 7 | "They didn't speak so much" | | 8 | "Nyx extended a hand, long" | | 9 | "Rory grimaced, tucking the pendant" | | 10 | "The heat lingered, a comforting" | | 11 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 12 | "The cold metal seemed to" | | 13 | "She stepped up to the" | | 14 | "Isolde Varga stood just beyond" | | 15 | "The silver hair cascading down" | | 16 | "Her pale lavender eyes regarded" | | 17 | "Isolde gestured with a graceful" | | 18 | "Rory took a breath and" | | 19 | "The sensation hit her like" |
| | ratio | 0.933 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through her gloves, the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 26.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver hair cascading down her back shimmered with a life of its own, catching light that didn't exist in the park." | | 1 | "The sensation hit her like a physical blow, a sudden drop in barometric pressure that made her ears pop." | | 2 | "The damp chill vanished, replaced by a thick, humid warmth that smelled of crushed pine needles, honey, and rain on hot asphalt." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted past her, their feet hovering inches above a ground carpeted in moss that glowed a soft, electric blue." | | 4 | "It vibrated against her palm, a low-frequency thrum that made her teeth ache." | | 5 | "The moonsilver metal caught the ambient light, casting a long, slender shadow that didn't match the angle of the illumination." | | 6 | "The Shade was at her side instantly, their form coalescing into a towering, protective shadow." |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde walked, her movements fluid, leaving no footprints of her own" | | 1 | "Isolde turned, her expression unreadable" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted, their head cocking to the side" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.024 | | leniency | 0.048 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |