Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT10FT5TE7JE5AAMA8FDNYB

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.029610
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory adjusted the strap of her bag and glanced back at her companions. Nyx, a menacing silhouette with eyes like faintly glowing violet stars, moved silently beside Isolde, whose ethereal presence contrasted with their shadowy demeanor. The entrance to Isolde's grove was marked by ancient, twisted oaks that towered above, their branches entwining to form an archway that shimmered faintly with an inner light. "Welcome to the Grove," Isolde spoke softly, her voice melodic and echoing like water over stones. "Remember, time is an illusive companion here. What may seem but minutes could be hours or days outside." Rory nodded, eyes wide with anticipation. She had heard tales of this place but never thought she'd step foot in it. She could feel the Heartstone Pendant against her chest, its faint warmth a constant reminder of Hel's connection. Nyx's whisper-like voice broke the calm. "Shall we begin?" Passing through the wooden arch, they found themselves in a clearing devoid of footprints. Wildflowers in colors beyond description carpeted the ground, their fragrance intoxicating. The flora seemed to breathe and pulse with its own life, swaying to a rhythm only it knew. Rory knelt to touch a luminous bloom. "I've never seen anything like this," she breathed, fingers tracing the delicate petals that seemed to hum under her touch. "The Fae Grove holds many wonders," Isolde replied, a cryptic smile on her lips. "But beware, not everything here is what it seems." Winding through the grove, each step brought new marvels. An ancient oak stood, its bark shimmering like woven silver. Tiny orbs of light floated around its branches, reminiscent of fireflies but much larger and brighter. "What are those?" Rory asked, herself bathed in fleeting glimmers. "Spirits of the forest," Isolde answered, her silvery hair flowing like a waterfall of liquid moonlight. "Guardians and guides, depending on their mood." As they ventured deeper, the light grew dimmer, consumed by dense canopy overhead. Rory squinted, trying to adjust to the dark but found comfort in the faint glow of her Fae-Forged Blade tucked securely in her belt. Nyx's form shifted slightly, their outline becoming misty as they moved between shadows. "This place is old. I can feel its history." A rustling sound caught their attention. Rory's pulse quickened as she saw shadowy figures darting between trees. She tightened her grip on the Heartstone Pendant. "Fear not," Isolde said, sensing Rory’s unease. "The shadows here are curious, but not harmful." Rory nodded, though her heart hammered in her chest. The path suddenly opened into another clearing, this one encircled by standing stones. The air felt charged, like the aftermath of a storm. Each stone seemed to hum, a low, resonant sound that vibrated in her bones. "These stones," Rory asked, "do they mean something?" Isolde stepped forward, placing her hand on one. "They mark the boundary. Beyond this point, time and space as you know it become more fluid. Stay close, for the path can be treacherous." With hesitant steps, they crossed the boundary. The temperature dropped, their breath turning into misty clouds. The flora here was different, with plants that glowed with an internal luminescence, casting an eerie light upon their faces. "Look at this," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying a sense of wonder as they pointed to a pool of water. The surface was mirror-like, reflecting not their images but scenes of otherworldly beauty and terror. Jagged mountains, sprawling cities of gold, and beings of indescribable form flickered in and out. Rory stood mesmerized by a scene of a grand feast where otherworldly beings dined on exotic fruits and meats unfamiliar to her. Her stomach churned both from hunger and unease. Isolde pulled her away gently. "Such pools can ensnare the mind. Best not to linger." A sudden gust of wind rattled the surrounding trees, sending leaves and petals swirling around them. Their path led to a grove where a grand tree stood, dwarfing all around it. Its bark appeared crystalline, shimmering with a thousand colors. At its base was a hollow, from which an inviting warmth emanated. "Is that...?" Rory trailed off, stepping closer. "Yes," Isolde confirmed, "The Heart of the Grove. Few have seen it." With reverence, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against the crystalline bark. A surge of energy traveled through her, making her shiver. "The Heartstone," Nyx murmured, "it reacts." Rory unclasped the pendant, holding it aloft. Both the Heartstone and the Heart of the Grove pulsed in unison, a deep crimson glow that enveloped them. "Remarkable," Isolde whispered, her voice a mix of awe and fear. "It appears you were meant for this, Rory." The air around them vibrated, and Rory could feel a connection forming, binding her not just to the Grove but something far greater. She stepped back, overwhelmed, yet emboldened by the experience. As they continued deeper, they came across an ancient altar, overgrown but unmistakably significant. Symbols etched into the stone seemed to rearrange themselves as Rory’s eyes moved over them. "These are wards," Nyx noted, their tone serious. "Powerful ones." Isolde added, "This altar predates the Grove, a remnant of when the Veil was much thinner. Be careful." Rory felt an inexplicable draw. She placed the Heartstone on the altar, feeling its ancient power resonate through her. The ground beneath them trembled. The symbols lit up, bathing the area in an eerie luminescence. Wisps of energy spiraled upward, forming an arch. "It’s a portal," Rory said, her voice barely a whisper. Nyx's eyes widened. "To Hel." Isolde nodded. "Possibly. Or somewhere even more perilous." Driven by a mix of instinct and curiosity, Rory stepped closer to the portal. The Heartstone Pendant levitated above the altar, its glow intensifying. "What do we do?" she turned to them, seeking guidance. "That," Isolde's voice was filled with a cryptic certainty, "is up to you, Rory. You hold the key." Inhaling deeply, Rory reached for the Heartstone, feeling its warmth, its pulse synchronized with her heartbeat. The portal shimmered, inviting yet intimidating. "I believe in you," Nyx’s voice, usually haunting, now carried a note of hope. Rory took one last look at her companions and, with resolve, took a step forward.
created_at"2026-02-19T04:02:27.79Z" 2/19/2026, 4:02:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde spoke softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
80.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count3
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count3
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"fleeting"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"aftermath"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count2
14
word"treacherous"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"otherworldly"
count2
17
word"flickered"
count1
18
word"stomach"
count1
19
word"churned"
count1
20
word"crystalline"
count2
21
word"pulsed"
count1
22
word"remarkable"
count1
23
word"etched"
count1
24
word"trembled"
count1
25
word"synchronized"
count1
26
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"echoing"
2"anticipation"
3"could feel"
4"warmth"
5"reminder"
6"whisper"
7"pulse"
8"tracing"
9"fleeting"
10"quickened"
11"charged"
12"aftermath"
13"vibrated"
14"treacherous"
15"sense of"
16"otherworldly"
17"flickered"
18"stomach"
19"churned"
20"crystalline"
21"pulsed"
22"remarkable"
23"etched"
24"trembled"
25"synchronized"
26"resolve"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"stomach churned"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences75
matches
0"e with anticipation"
1"a sense of wonder"
66.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1026
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount828
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Isolde13
Rory20
Heartstone6
Pendant3
Hel1
Winding1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Heart1
Grove2
Nyx8
Inhaling1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Hel"
5"Blade"
6"Heart"
7"Nyx"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore0.292
windowScore0.333
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"petals that seemed to hum under her touch"
1"appeared crystalline shimmering with a thousand colors"
5.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.949
wordCount1026
matches
0"not their images but scenes of otherworldly beauty"
1"not just to the Grove but something far greater"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean23.32
std13.39
cv0.574
sampleLengths
064
134
239
39
443
527
623
735
810
923
1037
1122
1225
1315
149
1537
168
1733
1836
1950
2030
2115
2252
237
2412
2522
266
2726
2819
2932
3029
3110
3218
3319
3424
3510
365
378
3824
3910
4018
4122
4214
4315
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was marked"
1"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences87
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount830
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.030120481927710843
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.018072289156626505
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean11.79
std5.57
cv0.472
sampleLengths
013
123
228
316
418
56
615
718
86
93
1014
1111
1218
137
1420
1514
169
179
1810
1916
2010
2116
227
2313
2424
2513
269
276
2811
298
307
318
329
3313
3410
3514
368
378
3825
397
409
4120
4220
4315
4415
4522
468
475
4810
4916
83.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5287356321839081
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences70
matches
0"She had heard tales of"
1"She could feel the Heartstone"
2"she breathed, fingers tracing the"
3"She tightened her grip on"
4"Her stomach churned both from"
5"Their path led to a"
6"Its bark appeared crystalline, shimmering"
7"She stepped back, overwhelmed, yet"
8"She placed the Heartstone on"
9"she turned to them, seeking"
ratio0.143
38.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences70
matches
0"Rory adjusted the strap of"
1"Nyx, a menacing silhouette with"
2"The entrance to Isolde's grove"
3"Isolde spoke softly, her voice"
4"Rory nodded, eyes wide with"
5"She had heard tales of"
6"She could feel the Heartstone"
7"Nyx's whisper-like voice broke the"
8"Wildflowers in colors beyond description"
9"The flora seemed to breathe"
10"Rory knelt to touch a"
11"she breathed, fingers tracing the"
12"Isolde replied, a cryptic smile"
13"An ancient oak stood, its"
14"Rory asked, herself bathed in"
15"Isolde answered, her silvery hair"
16"Rory squinted, trying to adjust"
17"Nyx's form shifted slightly, their"
18"A rustling sound caught their"
19"Rory's pulse quickened as she"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The entrance to Isolde's grove was marked by ancient, twisted oaks that towered above, their branches entwining to form an archway that shimmered faintly with a…"
1"The flora here was different, with plants that glowed with an internal luminescence, casting an eerie light upon their faces."
2"Both the Heartstone and the Heart of the Grove pulsed in unison, a deep crimson glow that enveloped them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Isolde spoke softly, her voice melodic and echoing like water over stones"
1"Isolde answered, her silvery hair flowing like a waterfall of liquid moonlight"
2"Isolde whispered, her voice a mix of awe and fear"
3"Nyx noted, their tone serious"
4"Rory said, her voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Isolde spoke softly (speak)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
5"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
6"Nyx noted (note)"
7"Isolde added (add)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.533
69.5604%