| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde spoke softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 80.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1028 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1028 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "anticipation" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "fleeting" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "charged" | | 12 | "aftermath" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "treacherous" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "otherworldly" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "stomach" | | 19 | "churned" | | 20 | "crystalline" | | 21 | "pulsed" | | 22 | "remarkable" | | 23 | "etched" | | 24 | "trembled" | | 25 | "synchronized" | | 26 | "resolve" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart hammered in her chest" | | 1 | "eyes widened" | | 2 | "stomach churned" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "e with anticipation" | | 1 | "a sense of wonder" |
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| 66.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1026 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 29.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 828 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.42 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 13 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Winding | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heart | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Inhaling | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Heart" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.292 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "petals that seemed to hum under her touch" | | 1 | "appeared crystalline shimmering with a thousand colors" |
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| 5.07% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.949 | | wordCount | 1026 | | matches | | 0 | "not their images but scenes of otherworldly beauty" | | 1 | "not just to the Grove but something far greater" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 23.32 | | std | 13.39 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 15 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "was marked" | | 1 | "was filled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 830 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.030120481927710843 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018072289156626505 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 11.79 | | std | 5.57 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 83.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5287356321839081 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She had heard tales of" | | 1 | "She could feel the Heartstone" | | 2 | "she breathed, fingers tracing the" | | 3 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 4 | "Her stomach churned both from" | | 5 | "Their path led to a" | | 6 | "Its bark appeared crystalline, shimmering" | | 7 | "She stepped back, overwhelmed, yet" | | 8 | "She placed the Heartstone on" | | 9 | "she turned to them, seeking" |
| | ratio | 0.143 | |
| 38.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "Nyx, a menacing silhouette with" | | 2 | "The entrance to Isolde's grove" | | 3 | "Isolde spoke softly, her voice" | | 4 | "Rory nodded, eyes wide with" | | 5 | "She had heard tales of" | | 6 | "She could feel the Heartstone" | | 7 | "Nyx's whisper-like voice broke the" | | 8 | "Wildflowers in colors beyond description" | | 9 | "The flora seemed to breathe" | | 10 | "Rory knelt to touch a" | | 11 | "she breathed, fingers tracing the" | | 12 | "Isolde replied, a cryptic smile" | | 13 | "An ancient oak stood, its" | | 14 | "Rory asked, herself bathed in" | | 15 | "Isolde answered, her silvery hair" | | 16 | "Rory squinted, trying to adjust" | | 17 | "Nyx's form shifted slightly, their" | | 18 | "A rustling sound caught their" | | 19 | "Rory's pulse quickened as she" |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The entrance to Isolde's grove was marked by ancient, twisted oaks that towered above, their branches entwining to form an archway that shimmered faintly with a…" | | 1 | "The flora here was different, with plants that glowed with an internal luminescence, casting an eerie light upon their faces." | | 2 | "Both the Heartstone and the Heart of the Grove pulsed in unison, a deep crimson glow that enveloped them." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde spoke softly, her voice melodic and echoing like water over stones" | | 1 | "Isolde answered, her silvery hair flowing like a waterfall of liquid moonlight" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered, her voice a mix of awe and fear" | | 3 | "Nyx noted, their tone serious" | | 4 | "Rory said, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde spoke softly (speak)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Nyx noted (note)" | | 7 | "Isolde added (add)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.533 | |