Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT10G169HCFDRR0CG5C888D

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Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The air felt thick, almost gelatinous, as if weighed down by the secrets this place harbored. Flickering fluorescent lights buzzed overhead, casting an eerie glow over the damp walls. She adjusted her leather watch, its worn surface smooth beneath her fingers, and surveyed the scene. A body lay sprawled on the cracked tiles, a young man with pale skin and tousled hair, his eyes oddly vacant, staring sightlessly at the ceiling. The faint scent of iron hung in the air, mingling with the earthy scent of decay. Blood pooled beneath him, congealing into dark, jagged shapes that sent a chill down her spine. Detective Mason stood a few feet away, his broad shoulders hunched over a notepad. He scribbled something, his brow furrowed. Quinn approached, her gaze locked on the evidence. There had been reports of unusual activities in the market, whispers of stolen artifacts passed around like currency in an underbelly she could never fully grasp. “Quinn.” Mason glanced her way, his tone buoyed by recognition. “You’ll want to see this.” She leaned in closer, studying the scene. “It’s a straightforward cut,” Mason said, motioning to the wound on the man's neck. “Clean, precise. Knows what he’s doing.” “Straightforward?” Quinn furrowed her brow. “No sign of a struggle. Look at the position of the body.” He shrugged. “Maybe he didn’t see it coming.” “Or it wasn’t meant for him.” Quinn’s voice dropped, her instincts prickling. “Look at how he’s lying. His arms are relaxed, almost… at ease.” She knelt down, inching closer to the ground. “It’s like he was standing casually before someone just—” She stopped, her mind racing. “Before someone just what?” Mason prompted, crossing his arms. Quinn straightened, her gaze darting around the room. Graffiti decorated some of the walls, odd symbols intermixed with swirling tags. A single phrase loomed large in the corner: “Truth hides in shadows.” “People don’t just drop dead in a place like this without a reason.” She gestured towards a nearby wall. “Those marks,” she said. “They aren't random.” Mason sighed. “You think it’s connected? This place and…” He trailed off, searching her expression for understanding. “It’s all connected,” Quinn insisted. “It’s the Veil Market. Items go missing, and people don’t come back. That’s not just coincidence.” Mason jotted down a note, skepticism etched across his features. “Until we find something more concrete, it’s best to remain cautious with those assumptions.” “Caution won’t cut it down here,” Quinn shot back, temper flaring. “I need you to follow me on this. What about the blood? It’s drying too quickly. Too uneven. Look at the way it spreads; it shouldn’t be like this unless…” “Unless?” Mason tilted his head, brow raised. She took a steadying breath, mask of professionalism tightening. “Unless he bled out elsewhere. Dragged here after.” Mason stepped back, bracing against the concrete wall, crossing his arms as he shot her a flat look. “And you think someone just… dragged him in?” “Yes.” Quinn gestured to the nearby doorway leading deeper into the station, shadowed and opaque. “And I think they left something behind.” She moved, the rhythm of her boots echoing off the walls, filled with purpose as she headed through the opening, the darkness swallowing her whole. Mason hesitated for a heartbeat, then followed, chastised curiosity edging him forward. Inside, the air shifted. A thick, pungent mix of must and something sweet, almost cloying, greeted her. Faded images of long-forgotten advertisements lined the walls, their colors muted. Guessing it had been some time since this area saw any action, she traced her fingertips along the surface of an old poster, the torn edges crumbling beneath her touch. “There’s nothing here.” Mason groaned beyond her. “Your imagination is running away with you again.” Quinn shut him out, straining to listen. Silence wrapped around them, but it was something more than just ordinary absence; it hummed with potential chaos. “Did you hear that?” she whispered, eyes narrowing. “What?” Mason stretched his ears, straining for an echo lost on the wind. “Footsteps,” she snapped, moving deeper into the shadows. “Someone’s here.” “Quinn, wait—” His voice faded as her instinct propelled her forward. The corridor opened into a larger chamber, construction debris strewn across the floor, and a distinct metallic tang enveloping the stale air. She paused, surrounding herself with the tenseness of the moment. Her gaze darted—nothing moved. Just silence. A shiver located itself at the base of her spine. “Who knows this place?” Quinn murmured, prowling hungrily through the clutter. “The whispers aren’t unfounded. This isn’t just about explosions and bruises; this is bigger.” She found it, half-buried underneath a broken beam—a compact brass compass, its face etched with protective sigils, verdigris patina glinting dully in the thin light. The Veil Compass? In the middle of a murder scene? A chill washed over her. She pocketed it without hesitation, her heart pounding. “Quinn!” Mason's voice surged with urgency. “Get back here—” She turned. Just then, footsteps echoed through the chamber, and her body ignited with adrenaline. Shadows darted against the far wall. “Get down!” She dropped to the floor, kicking debris aside, and peered around the corner, pulse racing. Mason cursed softly behind her, but she focused on the flickering shadows ahead. If her hunch was right—and it usually was—this was it. The figures emerged slowly, fluidly, their forms wrapping around the edges of the flickering light. Quinn gritted her teeth, guessing they were the ones who’d dragged the victim here. The thieves of shadows, gathering fragments of wishes and secrets they had no right to claim. “Mason.” Each word escaped in a ragged whisper, her voice steady despite wild thoughts clawing within. “What?” he returned, glancing nervously at the encroaching darkness. “Be ready.” She bolted toward the flickering shadows, directing the first of her questions. But her heart raced with another realization: it was no longer just about the dead. It was about the truth sealed within those hidden spaces, nestled deep in the heart of the Veil Market. And she would unearth it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.634
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1019
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"hungrily"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"hungrily"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
4"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1019
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count2
3
word"racing"
count2
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"potential"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count2
12
word"glinting"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"down her spine"
2"furrowed"
3"racing"
4"loomed"
5"etched"
6"echoing"
7"traced"
8"silence"
9"potential"
10"echo"
11"footsteps"
12"glinting"
13"pounding"
14"echoed"
15"pulse"
16"whisper"
17"raced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"d with urgency"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1013
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount775
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Mason"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Mason"
discoveredNames
Quinn11
Tube1
Camden1
Mason13
Veil2
Compass1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Mason"
places
0"Market"
globalScore0.661
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1013
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean23.56
std16
cv0.679
sampleLengths
055
158
254
315
47
520
617
78
846
99
1032
1126
1217
1321
1424
1541
167
1717
1826
1922
2037
2158
2215
2325
248
2513
2610
2711
2848
2950
3015
318
329
3321
3417
3523
3645
3716
389
392
4012
4134
425
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences89
ratio0.056
matches
0"“I need you to follow me on this. What about the blood? It’s drying too quickly. Too uneven. Look at the way it spreads; it shouldn’t be like this unless…”"
1"Silence wrapped around them, but it was something more than just ordinary absence; it hummed with potential chaos."
2"Her gaze darted—nothing moved."
3"“The whispers aren’t unfounded. This isn’t just about explosions and bruises; this is bigger.” She found it, half-buried underneath a broken beam—a compact brass compass, its face etched with protective sigils, verdigris patina glinting dully in the thin light."
4"If her hunch was right—and it usually was—this was it."
99.15% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount781
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.040973111395646605
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.014084507042253521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean11.38
std6.89
cv0.606
sampleLengths
010
116
213
316
426
516
616
714
86
98
1026
1110
125
137
1414
156
165
1712
182
196
2012
2120
2214
239
248
2512
2612
2719
284
293
302
3115
325
3316
3410
3514
3611
3730
387
399
408
4118
428
4315
447
4525
4612
474
4813
4911
87.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5393258426966292
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners48
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Just then, footsteps echoed through"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences68
matches
0"She adjusted her leather watch,"
1"He scribbled something, his brow"
2"She leaned in closer, studying"
3"She knelt down, inching closer"
4"She stopped, her mind racing"
5"She gestured towards a nearby"
6"He trailed off, searching her"
7"She took a steadying breath,"
8"She moved, the rhythm of"
9"she whispered, eyes narrowing"
10"she snapped, moving deeper into"
11"His voice faded as her"
12"She paused, surrounding herself with"
13"Her gaze darted—nothing moved."
14"She found it, half-buried underneath"
15"She pocketed it without hesitation,"
16"She dropped to the floor,"
17"he returned, glancing nervously at"
18"She bolted toward the flickering"
19"It was about the truth"
ratio0.294
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"Harlow Quinn stepped into the"
1"The air felt thick, almost"
2"She adjusted her leather watch,"
3"A body lay sprawled on"
4"The faint scent of iron"
5"Blood pooled beneath him, congealing"
6"Detective Mason stood a few"
7"He scribbled something, his brow"
8"Quinn approached, her gaze locked"
9"There had been reports of"
10"Mason glanced her way, his"
11"She leaned in closer, studying"
12"Mason said, motioning to the"
13"Quinn furrowed her brow"
14"Quinn’s voice dropped, her instincts"
15"She knelt down, inching closer"
16"She stopped, her mind racing"
17"Mason prompted, crossing his arms"
18"Quinn straightened, her gaze darting"
19"Graffiti decorated some of the"
ratio0.868
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"If her hunch was right—and"
ratio0.015
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Blood pooled beneath him, congealing into dark, jagged shapes that sent a chill down her spine."
1"She moved, the rhythm of her boots echoing off the walls, filled with purpose as she headed through the opening, the darkness swallowing her whole."
2"Quinn gritted her teeth, guessing they were the ones who’d dragged the victim here."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn’s voice dropped, her instincts prickling"
1"She stopped, her mind racing"
2"she whispered, eyes narrowing"
3"Each word escaped, her voice steady despite wild thoughts clawing within"
28.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Quinn insisted (insist)"
1"Mason groaned (groan)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she snapped (snap)"
4"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.341
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.244
78.6178%