Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT10M8Q92AEAK3E5CPYH4D4

Run Details

Duration:
51.9s
Cost:
$0.020930
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung wide before Aurora could twist the bolt back. His silhouette filled the frame, tall and impossibly composed despite the late hour. She sensed every heartbeat in her throat. Aurora Carter didn’t hesitate. She stepped aside. Lucien Moreau entered without a word, his tailored charcoal suit whispering against the scuffed floorboards. He removed his gloves, one amber eye glinting in the lamplight, the other so dark it swallowed the light whole. She shut the door with a soft click, the chain dangling useless. Her left wrist itched where the small crescent scar rested. The scar itched more than usual. He surveyed the narrow hallway. A battered delivery box lay half-open by the shoe rack. A curl of curry-scented steam drifted from the kitchen. He inhaled, subtle as a cat. “I didn’t expect to find you home,” he said, voice low and smooth. She crossed her arms. “You never do.” His foot tapped the floor once. “I’m usually more discreet.” Aurora swallowed. “Discretion isn’t your style.” He took a step forward, closing more of the distance she’d created. She noticed the ivory handle of his cane, pressed at his side. “I came for you,” he said. “Is that why you waltz in unannounced?” He shrugged, one shoulder lifting in a slow tilt. “I knew you’d be here.” She bit down on a breath. “I’m not sure I believe that.” He looked at her hands, splayed at her ribs. “You’re still holding back.” She straightened, spine rigid. “And you’re still prying.” A baritone laugh slipped from his lips. “I haven’t changed.” Her pulse jumped at how close he stood, less than an arm’s length. The faint scrape of his shoe on the threshold sent a tremor through her. She’d forgotten how precise he moved. How careful. “I don’t have time for this,” she said. He tilted his head, amber eye inquisitive. “Time’s a luxury neither of us can afford.” His gaze flicked to the kitchen. “May I?” She hesitated. The living room lay beyond, papers strewn across a small desk, textbooks piled high. Memories of cold coffee and late-night research pressed in. She nodded once. He stepped inside. The room exhaled stale beer and old books. He paused by the window, lifting a notebook bound in cracked leather. “Working on something important?” She hovered behind him, arms still folded. “Just law case prep.” He flipped the cover open, brows flicking over cramped notes. “You always did have a knack for details.” She forced a calm breath. “So did you.” He snapped the book shut and faced her. “Where did we slip, Aurora?” She clenched her jaw. He used her full name. Not Rory. Distance. Without answering, she pointed at a steaming mug on the coffee table. “Tea?” He sank onto the sofa, hands splaying as if marking territory. “Green.” She fetched two mugs, cold porcelain in her palms, and set one beside him. She perched on the edge of an armchair, knees nearly touching her chin. The sofa’s springs groaned under his weight. He brought the mug to his lips, but didn’t drink. He studied her. “You look the same,” he said. Her throat tightened. “I haven’t seen you in months.” She reached for the tea, inhaled the faint lemon note, then set it back before it touched her lips. He leaned forward, cane resting across his knees. The ivory handle caught the light. “Months,” he echoed. “Time enough to rebuild walls.” She stared at her scar, tilted her wrist so he couldn’t see it. “Not rebuild. Reinforce.” He let out a breath. “I was wrong.” Her eyes snapped up, bright blue in the lamplight. “Wrong? After everything?” He pressed his lips together. “I should’ve told you the truth about Evan.” She bristled. “The truth? You withheld half the story.” He closed his eyes, as if resisting a temptation. When they opened, both eyes glowed. “I thought I was protecting you.” “By lying?” Her voice cracked. He straightened. “There were forces at play. I couldn’t risk your safety.” She laughed, hollow. “Your safety, or your pride?” He stood so fast the sofa creaked. The mug rattled against the wood. “I’m not that man anymore.” She rose. “You never were.” He stared up at her, agony flickering across his features. “Aurora—Rory—I’ve missed you.” She swallowed, mouth suddenly dry. “You missed me when it suited you.” He took a step forward, jaw set. “I missed you every day.” She shivered, though the room felt warm. “Prove it.” He reached out, fingertips hovering an inch from her arm. The static of longing crackled between them. “Let me.” She stilled. He smelled of sandalwood and something darker, something ancient. She could almost taste the memory of a kiss they’d shared under a rain-drenched sky. But then the muffled music from Silas’s bar drifted up through the ceiling—laughter, a bassline she knew too well. The world shifted, reality tugging at the edges of the moment. Her mind snapped back. A loud crash sounded from below. Plates, or glass. Then a muffled shout. Lucien’s hand froze midair. “That’s Silas’s place.” His voice grew urgent. “They’re not supposed to be open this late.” She placed a hand on her side table. A letter opener lay half-buried in papers. She slid it into her palm, cold steel pressing reassurance into her fingers. Footsteps pounded on the floor above her. The ceiling boards vibrated. Her pulse hammered in retaliation. Lucien’s amber eye darted to the door. His lips quirked down. “We have company.” She edged toward the hallway, letter opener at the ready. “Who?” He raised a finger, as if to admonish her for asking. Then he stalked to the door, pressing an ear against it. Behind him, he flicked his cane, blade sliding from the shaft with a soft hiss. She stayed back, every sense straining. The bar’s muffled tunes cut off. Silence fell, thick and wrong. Lucien pressed his blade-blade against the door’s wood. “Stay behind me.” She swallowed fear. “Lucien—” He shook his head once. “Trust me.” The handle rattled. A deep, guttural growl rumbled on the other side. The door frame shook. The crunch of splintering wood answered. He pressed forward, blade poised. She advanced beside him, letter opener flicked out. The door split. A dark shape lunged through the gap, eyes gleaming red. Aurora’s breath caught. Lucien lashed out, ivory blade arcing. A vicious screech split the air. She felt the world tilt. Her heart surged, adrenaline sweet and brutal. She plunged her letter opener forward just as Lucien’s cane-blade found its mark. The creature slumped, claws dragging across the floor. Lucien kicked the broken door free and stepped inside the flat’s hallway. Aurora followed him in a rush of fear and something else—exhilaration. She met his gaze as he retracted the blade. His amber eye held hers. “Still with me?” Her voice was thick. “Always.” He offered a grim smile. “Then let’s finish this together.” The corridor light flickered, casting their long shadows across the blood-slicked floor. Thunder rolled through the city, or perhaps it was Silas’s music crashing back to life. Aurora kept her gaze locked to his. Unspoken apologies and confessions tugged between them, heavier than any demon. They moved as one toward the next threat, blades ready. The flat’s walls trembled. Something snarled in the darkness beyond. They exchanged one quick look. Aurora’s scar throbbed. Lucien’s cane-blade gleamed. They advanced.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count3
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"pulse"
2"flicked"
3"porcelain"
4"weight"
5"echoed"
6"footsteps"
7"vibrated"
8"silence"
9"gleaming"
10"flickered"
11"unspoken"
12"trembled"
13"throbbed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences141
matches
0"a rush of fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1230
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1017
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Carter1
Moreau1
Rory1
Silas2
Lucien8
Thunder1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Lucien"
6"Thunder"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if marking territory"
1"as if resisting a temptation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1230
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean16.4
std9.25
cv0.564
sampleLengths
031
17
235
328
430
513
67
710
86
924
106
117
1214
1312
1413
158
1610
1735
188
1923
2028
2123
224
2311
2418
258
2613
2725
2812
2927
3026
3128
3222
3316
348
3512
3613
379
3821
395
4012
418
4218
435
4413
4512
4612
479
4819
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences182
ratio0.011
matches
0"But then the muffled music from Silas’s bar drifted up through the ceiling—laughter, a bassline she knew too well."
1"Aurora followed him in a rush of fear and something else—exhilaration."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1028
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02529182879377432
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0029182879377431907
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean6.76
std4.08
cv0.604
sampleLengths
011
113
27
34
43
515
620
712
810
96
105
1110
129
136
1413
154
163
176
184
192
204
2112
2212
236
247
259
265
276
286
299
304
314
324
337
343
3513
3614
376
382
398
407
4114
422
432
4414
459
463
473
488
4912
47.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2802197802197802
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners51
52.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"Then a muffled shout."
1"Then he stalked to the"
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount75
totalSentences127
matches
0"His silhouette filled the frame,"
1"She sensed every heartbeat in"
2"She stepped aside."
3"He removed his gloves, one"
4"She shut the door with"
5"Her left wrist itched where"
6"He surveyed the narrow hallway."
7"He inhaled, subtle as a"
8"he said, voice low and"
9"She crossed her arms."
10"His foot tapped the floor"
11"He took a step forward,"
12"She noticed the ivory handle"
13"He shrugged, one shoulder lifting"
14"She bit down on a"
15"He looked at her hands,"
16"She straightened, spine rigid."
17"Her pulse jumped at how"
18"She’d forgotten how precise he"
19"He tilted his head, amber"
ratio0.591
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount120
totalSentences127
matches
0"The door swung wide before"
1"His silhouette filled the frame,"
2"She sensed every heartbeat in"
3"Aurora Carter didn’t hesitate."
4"She stepped aside."
5"Lucien Moreau entered without a"
6"He removed his gloves, one"
7"She shut the door with"
8"Her left wrist itched where"
9"The scar itched more than"
10"He surveyed the narrow hallway."
11"A battered delivery box lay"
12"A curl of curry-scented steam"
13"He inhaled, subtle as a"
14"he said, voice low and"
15"She crossed her arms."
16"His foot tapped the floor"
17"He took a step forward,"
18"She noticed the ivory handle"
19"He shrugged, one shoulder lifting"
ratio0.945
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low and smooth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.078
leniency0.157
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.4878%