| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1030 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1030 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "structure" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "charged" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blink of an eye" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "in the blink of an eye" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1021 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.57% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 749 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 11 | | Grove | 3 | | Finally | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.766 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "leaves that seemed to shift from gold to silver to copper without changing position" | | 1 | "as if reading her thoughts" | | 2 | "flowers that seemed to respond to her presence, their petals unfurling further as she approached" | | 3 | "seemed dull muted after the impossible vibrancy of the Grove" | | 4 | "felt like hours" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.979 | | wordCount | 1021 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.60% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 28.36 | | std | 9.77 | | cv | 0.345 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 5.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar greens of the park transformed into impossible hues—emerald, jade, viridian—all simultaneously." | | 1 | "When she looked up, minutes had passed—or perhaps hours." | | 2 | "Visions of realms beyond counting flashed through her mind—cities of crystal, forests of living metal, oceans of liquid starlight." | | 3 | "In the distance, something howled—a sound that was neither animal nor human, but something entirely other." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 757 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.035667107001321 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017173051519154558 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 12.3 | | std | 5.1 | | cv | 0.414 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 61.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.40963855421686746 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, the ancient oak standing" | | 1 | "Only ten minutes had passed" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed faintly against her" | | 1 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 2 | "she gasped, her eyes flying" | | 3 | "Her watch ticked normally again." |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "It pulsed faintly against her" | | 2 | "Nyx materialized from the shadows" | | 3 | "Aurora murmured, her fingers tracing" | | 4 | "A silver-haired figure emerged from" | | 5 | "Isolde moved with impossible grace," | | 6 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 7 | "Aurora shared a glance with" | | 8 | "The air between the oaks" | | 9 | "Colors intensified, bursting with vibrancy" | | 10 | "The familiar greens of the" | | 11 | "The air itself tasted different," | | 12 | "Nyx whispered, their form rippling" | | 13 | "Isolde gestured to a path" | | 14 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 15 | "Blossoms that should have withered" | | 16 | "Sunlight filtered through leaves that" | | 17 | "Time felt strange here." | | 18 | "Aurora checked her watch, but" | | 19 | "Isolde explained, as if reading" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted toward a small pool of water that mirrored a sky of impossible twilight stars, despite the afternoon hour on the other side of the stones." | | 1 | "Aurora knelt beside a cluster of flowers that seemed to respond to her presence, their petals unfurling further as she approached." | | 2 | "Patterns swirled beneath its exterior, forming shapes that beckoned to her." | | 3 | "A patch of flowers rearranged themselves into a spiral pattern, leading toward a copse of silver-barked trees that hummed with energy." | | 4 | "In the distance, something howled—a sound that was neither animal nor human, but something entirely other." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx materialized, their violet eyes glowing softly" | | 1 | "she said, her voice carrying the melody of distant chimes" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their form rippling as they followed Aurora into the clearing" | | 3 | "Isolde explained, as if reading her thoughts" | | 4 | "she gasped, her eyes flying open" | | 5 | "Isolde said, her voice suddenly urgent" | | 6 | "Nyx observed, their voice barely a whisper now" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 5 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 6 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 7 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.344 | | leniency | 0.688 | | rawRatio | 0.727 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |