Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT10S77EC4JZ5HWWT12GES9

Run Details

Duration:
42.8s
Cost:
$0.004066
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead as Aurora adjusted the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. It pulsed faintly against her skin, the deep crimson gemstone catching the dappled sunlight filtering through Richmond Park's trees. "This is it?" Nyx materialized from the shadows beside her, their violet eyes glowing softly. "A circle of old trees?" "Patience," Aurora murmured, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Isolde said we'd know the way." A silver-haired figure emerged from between two of the standing stones, her lavender eyes regarding them with ancient wisdom. Isolde moved with impossible grace, her feet disturbing not a single fallen leaf. "The barrier thins at twilight," she said, her voice carrying the melody of distant chimes. "Come before the night claims its dominion." Aurora shared a glance with Nyx, then stepped forward. The air between the oaks shimmered, like heat rising from pavement on a summer's day. As she crossed through the invisible boundary, the world shifted. Colors intensified, bursting with vibrancy she'd never witnessed. The familiar greens of the park transformed into impossible hues—emerald, jade, viridian—all simultaneously. The air itself tasted different, thick with the scent of a thousand flowers blooming out of season. "By all that's shadowed..." Nyx whispered, their form rippling as they followed Aurora into the clearing. "This place exists between breaths." Isolde gestured to a path that hadn't been visible moments before. "The Grove remembers those who respect its nature." Wildflowers carpeted the ground in patterns that defied natural arrangement. Blossoms that should have withered in autumn's approach bloomed alongside spring's first buds. Sunlight filtered through leaves that seemed to shift from gold to silver to copper without changing position. Time felt strange here. Aurora checked her watch, but the second hand stuttered, sometimes racing forward, sometimes crawling backward. When she looked up, minutes had passed—or perhaps hours. "The clocks of men hold no sway here," Isolde explained, as if reading her thoughts. "In this place, a heartbeat can span generations, or centuries may pass in the blink of an eye." Nyx drifted toward a small pool of water that mirrored a sky of impossible twilight stars, despite the afternoon hour on the other side of the stones. "I feel... anchored here. More solid than I've been in centuries." Aurora knelt beside a cluster of flowers that seemed to respond to her presence, their petals unfurling further as she approached. The Heartstone Pendant warmed against her chest, its inner glow intensifying. "The artifact recognizes its kin," Isolde said, kneeling beside her. "The realms have touched you, Aurora Carter. More deeply than you realize." As they ventured deeper into the Grove, the trees seemed to whisper secrets in languages just beyond comprehension. Aurora caught fragments of words, meanings that slipped away the moment she tried to grasp them. Laughter echoed from no discernible source, and the temperature shifted without warning from summer warmth to winter chill. "The Veil is thinner here," Nyx observed, their form solidifying completely as they stood beside a crystalline structure that hadn't been there moments before. "I can almost see through to the other side." Aurora reached out, her fingers hovering inches from the crystal's surface. Patterns swirled beneath its exterior, forming shapes that beckoned to her. "It's like it's calling to me." Isolde's hand closed gently around her wrist. "Some doors, once opened, cannot be closed again. The Fae do not offer second chances to those who rush where wisdom fears to tread." The ground beneath their feet trembled slightly. A patch of flowers rearranged themselves into a spiral pattern, leading toward a copse of silver-barked trees that hummed with energy. "The Grove shows you what you need to see," Isolde explained. "Not always what you wish to see." As they approached the copse, the air grew charged with static. Aurora's hair stood on end, and Nyx's form flickered between solid and shadow. The silver branches of the trees seemed to reach toward them, their leaves whispering in a language that tugged at forgotten memories. "Close your eyes," Isolde instructed. "Listen with more than your ears." Aurora obeyed, and the world exploded behind her eyelids. Visions of realms beyond counting flashed through her mind—cities of crystal, forests of living metal, oceans of liquid starlight. The Heartstone Pendant grew hot against her skin, almost burning. "What is this?" she gasped, her eyes flying open. Nyx had drifted closer, their form nearly transparent now. "The places between worlds. The spaces I travel when I move through shadow." Isolde smiled, a mysterious expression that held both joy and sorrow. "The Fae Grove exists in the spaces between. A sanctuary, a prison, a crossroads—all at once." A sudden breeze swept through the clearing, carrying with it the scent of ozone and distant rain. The wildflowers bent in unison, though no wind had touched them before. In the distance, something howled—a sound that was neither animal nor human, but something entirely other. "We should return to the standing stones," Isolde said, her voice suddenly urgent. "The twilight approaches, and other things stir when the boundary weakens." As they made their way back, the Grove seemed to resist their departure. Paths twisted and turned, leading them in circles. The flowers that had welcomed them now seemed to watch with silent judgment. "The Grove doesn't want us to leave," Nyx observed, their voice barely a whisper now. "The Grove has no wants," Isolde corrected. "But the things that watch from beyond the Veil do. They hunger for what they cannot have." Finally, the ancient oak standing stones came into view again. As they crossed the invisible boundary back into Richmond Park, Aurora stumbled, catching herself against a tree. The world seemed dull, muted after the impossible vibrancy of the Grove. Her watch ticked normally again. Only ten minutes had passed since they'd entered, though it felt like hours. Or days. Or years. Nyx solidified beside her, their violet eyes dimmed. "I never thought I'd find a place that felt more like home than the shadows." Isolde regarded them both with her lavender gaze. "The Fae Grove remembers all who enter. And it never forgets."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1030
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"completely"
2"gently"
3"slightly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1030
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"crystalline"
count1
11
word"structure"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count2
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"tracing"
3"shimmered"
4"familiar"
5"racing"
6"whisper"
7"echoed"
8"warmth"
9"chill"
10"crystalline"
11"structure"
12"crystal"
13"trembled"
14"charged"
15"flickered"
16"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blink of an eye"
count1
highlights
0"in the blink of an eye"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1021
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount749
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Richmond2
Park2
Nyx9
Isolde11
Grove3
Finally1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.766
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"leaves that seemed to shift from gold to silver to copper without changing position"
1"as if reading her thoughts"
2"flowers that seemed to respond to her presence, their petals unfurling further as she approached"
3"seemed dull muted after the impossible vibrancy of the Grove"
4"felt like hours"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.979
wordCount1021
matches
0"neither animal nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
55.60% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean28.36
std9.77
cv0.345
sampleLengths
035
120
219
332
422
534
638
721
819
940
1028
1133
1238
1332
1422
1552
1633
1728
1831
1928
2018
2146
2211
2338
249
2522
2627
2745
2824
2934
3015
3124
3239
3322
3423
3519
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
5.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences83
ratio0.048
matches
0"The familiar greens of the park transformed into impossible hues—emerald, jade, viridian—all simultaneously."
1"When she looked up, minutes had passed—or perhaps hours."
2"Visions of realms beyond counting flashed through her mind—cities of crystal, forests of living metal, oceans of liquid starlight."
3"In the distance, something howled—a sound that was neither animal nor human, but something entirely other."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount757
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.035667107001321
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.017173051519154558
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean12.3
std5.1
cv0.414
sampleLengths
016
119
215
35
413
56
619
713
815
97
109
1115
1210
138
1413
1517
1616
175
1811
198
2010
2113
2217
234
2415
259
2615
2718
2827
2911
3021
3111
3210
3312
3418
3516
3618
3724
389
3911
4011
416
427
4324
447
4521
4611
477
4811
4913
61.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.40963855421686746
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Finally, the ancient oak standing"
1"Only ten minutes had passed"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences59
matches
0"It pulsed faintly against her"
1"she said, her voice carrying"
2"she gasped, her eyes flying"
3"Her watch ticked normally again."
ratio0.068
36.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences59
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"It pulsed faintly against her"
2"Nyx materialized from the shadows"
3"Aurora murmured, her fingers tracing"
4"A silver-haired figure emerged from"
5"Isolde moved with impossible grace,"
6"she said, her voice carrying"
7"Aurora shared a glance with"
8"The air between the oaks"
9"Colors intensified, bursting with vibrancy"
10"The familiar greens of the"
11"The air itself tasted different,"
12"Nyx whispered, their form rippling"
13"Isolde gestured to a path"
14"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
15"Blossoms that should have withered"
16"Sunlight filtered through leaves that"
17"Time felt strange here."
18"Aurora checked her watch, but"
19"Isolde explained, as if reading"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Nyx drifted toward a small pool of water that mirrored a sky of impossible twilight stars, despite the afternoon hour on the other side of the stones."
1"Aurora knelt beside a cluster of flowers that seemed to respond to her presence, their petals unfurling further as she approached."
2"Patterns swirled beneath its exterior, forming shapes that beckoned to her."
3"A patch of flowers rearranged themselves into a spiral pattern, leading toward a copse of silver-barked trees that hummed with energy."
4"In the distance, something howled—a sound that was neither animal nor human, but something entirely other."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Nyx materialized, their violet eyes glowing softly"
1"she said, her voice carrying the melody of distant chimes"
2"Nyx whispered, their form rippling as they followed Aurora into the clearing"
3"Isolde explained, as if reading her thoughts"
4"she gasped, her eyes flying open"
5"Isolde said, her voice suddenly urgent"
6"Nyx observed, their voice barely a whisper now"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde explained (explain)"
3"Nyx observed (observe)"
4"Isolde explained (explain)"
5"she gasped (gasp)"
6"Nyx observed (observe)"
7"Isolde corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.727
effectiveRatio0.5
68.9004%