| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Nyx said darkly [darkly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 41.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "truly" | | 5 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "shattered" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "fluttered" | | 13 | "kaleidoscope" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "depths" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "firmly" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "stark" | | 21 | "gleaming" | | 22 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 99.36% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "k with anticipation" | | 1 | "d with unease" |
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| 76.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1087 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 938 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Varga | 2 | | Aurora | 12 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.86 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like distant insect wings—except t" | | 1 | "felt like it pulsed with a heartbeat of" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.92 | | wordCount | 1087 | | matches | | 0 | "neither entirely solid nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "announcing that whatever" |
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| 93.58% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 36.23 | | std | 17.3 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 58 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 35 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.2 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky was unrecognizable—a canvas of swirling hues that shifted from deep burgundy to sickly green and back again, like a bruise fading in and out of focus." | | 1 | "They stepped forward onto a surface that was neither entirely solid nor liquid—more like a membrane stretched over something vast and unknowable." | | 2 | "The scent changed then—something sweet, yet rotten, like overripe fruit that had been left to ferment in a dark cellar." | | 3 | "The trees around them broke into view—fleshless branches adorned with blossoms of impossible colours." | | 4 | "A strange silence fell, broken only by the faint chittering that sounded like distant insect wings—except the wings were made of shimmering crystal, clattering softly as they fluttered through impossible air." | | 5 | "The group edged toward a glimmering pool at the centre of this alien grove—its surface rippled with a kaleidoscope of colours, swirling and sliding like oil on water." | | 6 | "The reflected sky above shimmered with the same unnatural colours, distorting her own face — sharp cheekbones, bright blue eyes unblurred by the chaos around her." | | 7 | "But beneath that, something flickered, a faint movement—like a shadow slipping just beyond the reach of sight." | | 8 | "A pattern formed within the pool—a series of luminous symbols swirling into the center, glowing with a stark blue light." | | 9 | "They spun rapidly as if eager to escape the confines of the water, then coalesced into a shape—a shimmering door of moon-silver, an archway made of the same material as her blade, gleaming cold and bright." | | 10 | "The whispers grew louder as they moved deeper into the grove—soft voices of unseen things, riddles spoken in a language at once mesmerizing and threatening." | | 11 | "Then, a flicker of movement—something watching from beyond sight." | | 12 | "From somewhere deep within the grove, a faint voice—melancholy, ancient—murmured in a language lost to mortals." | | 13 | "The boundary of the grove began to ripple, announcing that whatever lies beyond was stirring—aware, waiting, hungry." | | 14 | "The world around her seemed to pulse in response—and she knew, deep in her core, this was only the beginning." |
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| 81.48% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 957 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.054336468129571575 | | lyAdverbCount | 26 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027168234064785787 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 14.49 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.463 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 70.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.44 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 53.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a flicker of movement—something" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "Their whisper of a voice" | | 2 | "she said softly, voice barely" | | 3 | "Her hand lingered on her" | | 4 | "They stepped forward onto a" | | 5 | "Her hand tightened around the" | | 6 | "It was warm, unnervingly so," | | 7 | "She clasped the pendant more" | | 8 | "They spun rapidly as if" | | 9 | "It floated just above the" | | 10 | "It pulsed faintly, as if" | | 11 | "They advanced cautiously, each step" |
| | ratio | 0.194 | |
| 16.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew thicker with" | | 1 | "Aurora’s boots sank slightly into" | | 2 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 3 | "Nyx slid silently beside her," | | 4 | "The silhouette of their humanoid" | | 5 | "Their whisper of a voice" | | 6 | "Aurora’s gaze flicked upward as" | | 7 | "The sky was unrecognizable—a canvas" | | 8 | "Clouds bulged strangely, opaque yet" | | 9 | "she said softly, voice barely" | | 10 | "Her hand lingered on her" | | 11 | "The blade caught the dim," | | 12 | "A sudden ripple coursed through" | | 13 | "The ground trembled briefly, a" | | 14 | "Aurora’s eyes darted to Nyx," | | 15 | "Nyx’s whisper was barely a" | | 16 | "They stepped forward onto a" | | 17 | "The scent changed then—something sweet," | | 18 | "The trees around them broke" | | 19 | "Some shone with an iridescent" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky was unrecognizable—a canvas of swirling hues that shifted from deep burgundy to sickly green and back again, like a bruise fading in and out of focus." | | 1 | "Clouds bulged strangely, opaque yet glowing faintly, as if made of vaporized obsidian." | | 2 | "Aurora’s eyes darted to Nyx, who tilted their head, shadow shifting and swirling." | | 3 | "They stepped forward onto a surface that was neither entirely solid nor liquid—more like a membrane stretched over something vast and unknowable." | | 4 | "The scent changed then—something sweet, yet rotten, like overripe fruit that had been left to ferment in a dark cellar." | | 5 | "One tree, its bark twisted like dripping wax, bore fruit that glowed with an inner flame, flickering wildly between life and death." | | 6 | "They spun rapidly as if eager to escape the confines of the water, then coalesced into a shape—a shimmering door of moon-silver, an archway made of the same mat…" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said softly, voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |