Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT10VSD4194CZH3X98C0B2A

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt turned with a click that sounded too loud in the narrow stairwell. The second followed. Then the first. Aurora hadn't expected visitors. Eva was away at a conference in Edinburgh, Ptolemy was at the cattery, and nobody knew she was staying here while her own place got repainted. No one except— The door swung inward, and there he stood. Lucien Moreau looked exactly as he had six months ago, when he'd walked out of her life without a word of explanation. Impeccable. Untouchable. His platinum hair slicked back with military precision, that ivory cane gripped in one manicured hand, charcoal suit hugging shoulders that had once held her in the dark. His heterochromatic eyes found hers immediately, that amber one warm, the black one cold as onyx. "Rory." Her stomach clenched at the old nickname. She didn't move from the doorway. "That's not my name anymore." "Indeed." His gaze slid past her, taking in the cramped flat behind her. Books stacked on every surface. Scrolls unrolled on the kitchen counter. Notes pinned to the wall above the sofa with kitchen knives. "You've redecorated." "What are you doing here, Lucien?" "May I come in?" "No." He didn't move. Didn't blink. "Then I'll speak here, and your neighbour across the landing will hear everything." She glanced at the thin wall to her left. Mrs. Okonkwo was eighty-three and sharp as a tack. Already, music had started playing from her flat, volume turned up. Pretending not to hear. "This is a bad time." Aurora stepped back, about to close the door. "I know about Evan." Her hand stopped on the door. The name hit her like a physical blow, even now. Her ex's face flashed behind her eyes, that controlled mask that could switch to violence in a heartbeat. The way he'd pinned her wrist that last time, the crescent scar on her left arm burning as he squeezed. "What about him?" Lucien's jaw tightened. "He's out. Paroled three weeks early for good behaviour." "Three weeks." She laughed, but there was no humour in it. "Of course. Of course he's out." "I thought you should know." "You thought—" She pressed her palm against the doorframe. "You left. You were gone for six months, Lucien. Six months of nothing, not a single word, and now you show up to tell me about my ex?" The black eye held something that might have been pain. "I tried to contact you." "I changed my number." "I know." "You could have left a note. A message. A summoning spell through my tarot cards, since you're so bloody connected to the supernatural world." She was shaking now. Good. Let him see it. "But you didn't. You just disappeared. So forgive me if I'm not exactly welcoming you through my door." He was quiet for a moment. Then he reached into his jacket and pulled out a cream-coloured envelope. "What's that?" "New address. New contact details. For when you need help." "I don't need your help." "Rory." He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne, that sandalwood and something darker underneath. "Evan knows where you live. Your flat above Silas' bar. He was asking about you in Whitechapel last week." The blood drained from her face. "He wouldn't—" "He was released into a halfway house in Bow. Already violated his parole once by leaving the district. Already asked about you." Lucien's voice was flat, controlled, but she could see the tension in his neck, the way his fingers had tightened on the cane. "I have resources. People who can watch him. A protection charm that can be warded around your—" "I don't need your protection." "You needed it six months ago." The words hung between them like a blade. Aurora remembered that night with perfect clarity. The phone call. Evan's voice, calm and terrifying, telling her he knew where she was, that she couldn't hide from him, that they needed to talk. Lucien had been there, had somehow known, had appeared at her door with a bag of frozen peas for her wrist and a promise to handle it. She'd thought he meant he'd call the police. Instead, he'd made calls that involved entities she'd never known existed. By morning, Evan was in custody on charges she didn't understand, and Lucien was gone. "I didn't ask you to do that." Her voice came out small. Childish. "I didn't ask you to—what did you do, Lucien? What did it cost you?" His expression shuttered. "It doesn't matter." "It matters to me." "Then consider this my way of ensuring the debt is paid." He held out the envelope again. "Take it. Please." She stared at his hand. Long fingers, neat nails, a signet ring on his pinky that she'd always found ridiculously pretentious. The hand that had touched her like she was something precious. The hand that had let go. "The debt was paid when you left." She took the envelope. It was warm from his pocket. "That's what you wanted, isn't it? No more complications. No more messy human girl who couldn't keep up with your world." "That's not—" "I understand, alright?" She tucked the envelope into her back pocket. "You're half-demon. You live in a realm I can't see, deal with people I can't know. I was a distraction. A pleasant one. And when it got complicated, you ran." Something flickered across his face. "I didn't run." "Then what do you call it?" Silence stretched between them. From Mrs. Okonkwo's flat, she could hear the faint strains of Mahler. The cat-less flat felt too quiet, too empty, the books on her walls suddenly feeling like a poor disguise for the chaos inside her. "I received a message from my father," Lucien said quietly. "The realm of Avaros. I was summoned." "Pulled back into demon territory by your daddy issues." Aurora crossed her arms. "Original." "It wasn't a request." "And you couldn't tell me that? You couldn't say, 'Rory, I have to go deal with my family, I'll be back'?" "I didn't know if I'd come back." The admission hung in the air. His black eye caught the dim light from the stairwell, but the amber one seemed to glow. "Avaros isn't kind to half-breeds." He spoke like he was reciting a report. "My father maintains order through fear. I'd been avoiding his summons for years. This time, I couldn't." "How long were you there?" "Four months. Twelve days." Four months. Not six. He'd been back for almost two months and only now came to find her. "I looked for you when I returned," he continued. "You'd moved. Changed your name. Your friend Eva wouldn't tell me where you were." "Eva knows better than to give out my location to strange men." "I'm not a strange man." "You are now." He flinched. Good. Let him feel something. "Evan." She changed the subject, because the alternative was crying, and she refused to cry in front of him. "How exactly do you plan to protect me? Follow me around like a shadow? Set your demon friends on him?" "I have contacts in the mortal realm as well." "Of course you do." "I'm not asking you to forgive me, Rory. I'm not asking for anything." He straightened, that perfect posture returning, the mask sliding back into place. "I simply wanted you to have this. And to warn you." "Warn me." "He's escalating. The questions he's asking, the people he's contacting. Whatever hold he had over you before—" He paused, choosing his words carefully. "He's not the same man you left." "You don't know what he was." "I know enough." She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him to mind his own business, to go back to whatever hell he'd crawled out of. But she was tired. Tired of running. Tired of pretending she didn't still dream about amber eyes and ivory canes and the way he'd said her name like it meant something. "The charm," she said. "The protection one." He blinked. "Yes?" "Show me how it works." Relief flashed across his face, so quick she almost missed it. "May I come in now?" She stepped aside. The door swung closed behind him, and the Mahler from next door reached a crescendo, drowning out the sound of the deadbolts turning again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Aurora stepped back [back]"
1"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
2"He spoke like [like]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.234
leniency0.468
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.078
92.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1389
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1389
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"charm"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"ensuring"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"tension"
2"charm"
3"perfect"
4"ensuring"
5"flickered"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
95.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"see"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1384
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount794
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Edinburgh1
Ptolemy1
Moreau1
Books1
Good2
Evan2
Lucien6
Childish1
Mrs2
Mahler2
Aurora4
Four1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Books"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Mrs"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Edinburgh"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1384
matches(empty)
99.55% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences149
matches
0"remembered that night"
1"was, that she"
2"pinky that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean18.21
std16.78
cv0.922
sampleLengths
021
133
28
368
41
518
637
76
84
91
1018
1133
1213
134
1454
153
1612
1717
185
1937
2015
214
222
2351
2418
252
2610
275
2837
298
3062
315
326
338
3460
3534
3627
376
384
3920
4038
4138
422
4341
448
456
4640
4717
4814
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was gone"
25.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was staying"
1"was shaking"
2"was reciting"
3"was crying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences149
ratio0.007
matches
0"No one except—"
97.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount796
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04271356783919598
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008793969849246231
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean9.29
std7.83
cv0.844
sampleLengths
015
13
23
34
426
53
68
722
81
91
1028
1116
121
137
146
155
1613
175
186
1911
202
216
224
231
243
252
2613
279
281
298
3011
314
3213
334
346
3510
3618
3720
383
393
409
4111
426
435
449
4528
4610
475
484
492
54.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.38926174496644295
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then the first."
1"Already, music had started playing"
2"Then he reached into his"
3"Instead, he'd made calls that"
ratio0.052
64.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences77
matches
0"His platinum hair slicked back"
1"His heterochromatic eyes found hers"
2"Her stomach clenched at the"
3"She didn't move from the"
4"His gaze slid past her,"
5"He didn't move."
6"She glanced at the thin"
7"Her hand stopped on the"
8"Her ex's face flashed behind"
9"She laughed, but there was"
10"She pressed her palm against"
11"She was shaking now"
12"He was quiet for a"
13"He stepped closer, close enough"
14"She'd thought he meant he'd"
15"Her voice came out small"
16"His expression shuttered."
17"He held out the envelope"
18"She stared at his hand."
19"She took the envelope"
ratio0.39
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences77
matches
0"The third deadbolt turned with"
1"The second followed."
2"Aurora hadn't expected visitors."
3"Eva was away at a"
4"The door swung inward, and"
5"Lucien Moreau looked exactly as"
6"His platinum hair slicked back"
7"His heterochromatic eyes found hers"
8"Her stomach clenched at the"
9"She didn't move from the"
10"His gaze slid past her,"
11"Books stacked on every surface."
12"Scrolls unrolled on the kitchen"
13"Notes pinned to the wall"
14"He didn't move."
15"She glanced at the thin"
16"Okonkwo was eighty-three and sharp"
17"Aurora stepped back, about to"
18"Her hand stopped on the"
19"The name hit her like"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His platinum hair slicked back with military precision, that ivory cane gripped in one manicured hand, charcoal suit hugging shoulders that had once held her in…"
1"Her ex's face flashed behind her eyes, that controlled mask that could switch to violence in a heartbeat."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She changed, because the alternative was crying, and she refused to cry in front of him"
1"He straightened, that perfect posture returning, the mask sliding back into place"
98.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"She pressed (press)"
2"He spoke like (speak)"
3"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.078
leniency0.156
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.104
86.7888%