| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s voice grated softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |
| 85.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1426 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1426 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "marble" | | 12 | "fluttered" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "structure" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "solitary" | | 18 | "amidst" | | 19 | "magnetic" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1415 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.56% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1209 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Nyx | 9 | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Dymasian | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Shadows | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Gluttony | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Prince | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Shadows" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Gluttony" | | 7 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.756 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a sliver of ice in her hand," | | 1 | "looked like a blooming ribcage" | | 2 | "felt like a layer of gold leaf over a c" | | 3 | "felt like a heartbeat during a panic at" | | 4 | "baritone that seemed to vibrate in Rory’s very marrow" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.707 | | wordCount | 1415 | | matches | | 0 | "not from wind, but in a slow, heaving motion" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 34.51 | | std | 18.08 | | cv | 0.524 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 54 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't just glow; it pushed back against the cold, a tiny furnace of Dymasian energy." | | 1 | "The air buckled and folded like heat haze over asphalt, revealing brief, flickering glimpses of a rainy London street—black taxis, umbrellas, the neon sign of the Golden Empress." | | 2 | "She’d spent her life running from one type of trap; she wasn't about to end up as a garnish in a demon's kitchen." | | 3 | "The sound of distant music—harps and drums playing a frantic, erratic beat—drifted on the wind." | | 4 | "The crimson gem was no longer just pulsing; it was vibrating, emitting a high-pitched whine that set her teeth on edge." | | 5 | "He was tall, dressed in robes of shimmering silk that changed color with every movement—from the deep red of a pomegranate to the pale gold of honey." | | 6 | "She didn't look back; the only way out of this gilded larder was straight through the throat of the one who owned it." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1219 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "translucent, jewel-toned grapes." | | 1 | "giant, blue-capped mushrooms." | | 2 | "ice-cold against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.02132895816242822 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004101722723543888 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 14.44 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.455 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 49.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3469387755102041 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't just glow; it" | | 1 | "They stepped through a gap" | | 2 | "They followed a path paved" | | 3 | "They crested a ridge and" | | 4 | "It was a jagged tear" | | 5 | "They walked with a slow," | | 6 | "She looked at her wrist," | | 7 | "She’d spent her life running" | | 8 | "It wasn't joyful." | | 9 | "It felt like a heartbeat" | | 10 | "They reached a bridge made" | | 11 | "It was a pavilion made" | | 12 | "She stepped off the vine" | | 13 | "She felt a pull, a" | | 14 | "It was a cold hunger" | | 15 | "He was tall, dressed in" | | 16 | "His skin was the color" | | 17 | "She drew the Fae blade," | | 18 | "He raised a hand, and" | | 19 | "It was a landslide." |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 28.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "A thick, pearlescent fog swallowed" | | 1 | "Nyx’s voice grated softly, like" | | 2 | "Rory reached beneath her coat," | | 3 | "The crimson gem throbbed against" | | 4 | "It didn't just glow; it" | | 5 | "They stepped through a gap" | | 6 | "The shift happened in a" | | 7 | "The gray London haze dissolved" | | 8 | "Rory shielded her eyes." | | 9 | "Clouds the color of bruised" | | 10 | "The air felt heavy, saturated" | | 11 | "Rory’s voice sounded small against" | | 12 | "Nyx replied, their form sharpening" | | 13 | "Shadows stretched long and jagged" | | 14 | "They followed a path paved" | | 15 | "Rory gripped the hilt of" | | 16 | "The metal felt like a" | | 17 | "Rory snapped, though she had" | | 18 | "A low hum vibrated through" | | 19 | "They crested a ridge and" |
| | ratio | 0.863 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "To their left, an orchard" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 56.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem throbbed against her palm, a rhythmic heat that matched her own accelerating pulse." | | 1 | "Clouds the color of bruised plums drifted lazily over a landscape that defied every law of Cardiff geography." | | 2 | "One fell, shattering against the ground with a chime like a crystal bell, spilling a thick, golden syrup that smoked in the warm air." | | 3 | "The crimson gem was no longer just pulsing; it was vibrating, emitting a high-pitched whine that set her teeth on edge." | | 4 | "He was tall, dressed in robes of shimmering silk that changed color with every movement—from the deep red of a pomegranate to the pale gold of honey." | | 5 | "The man smiled, revealing teeth that were too many and too sharp." | | 6 | "The Heartstone turned ice-cold against Rory’s skin, a sudden, jarring shift that signaled the presence of something even older than the demon before her." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx replied, their form sharpening in the rich light" | | 1 | "Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.37 | | leniency | 0.741 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |