Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT1117QZK3VQNGEYM51NQ4Q

Run Details

Duration:
16.1s
Cost:
$0.006580
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost-rimed grass crunched under Aurora’s boots, the sound unnervingly rhythmic in the absolute silence of Richmond Park. A thick, pearlescent fog swallowed the familiar oak trees of London, replacing the scent of damp earth with the cloying sweetness of jasmine and overripe nectarines. Beside her, Nyx moved like an inkblot dropped into water, their boots never touching the ground, their violet eyes scanning the shifting mist. "The border is thin here," Nyx’s voice grated softly, like dry leaves skittering across stone. "The air tastes of honey and old blood. Hold the pendant." Rory reached beneath her coat, her fingers brushing the Heartstone. The crimson gem throbbed against her palm, a rhythmic heat that matched her own accelerating pulse. It didn't just glow; it pushed back against the cold, a tiny furnace of Dymasian energy. They stepped through a gap between two gnarled oaks that looked less like trees and more like frozen lightning bolts. The shift happened in a heartbeat. The gray London haze dissolved into an explosion of amber light. Rory shielded her eyes. Above, the sky stretched out in a vast, bruised gold, like a sunset that refused to die. Clouds the color of bruised plums drifted lazily over a landscape that defied every law of Cardiff geography. Sprawling vineyards climbed the sides of obsidian cliffs, their vines heavy with translucent, jewel-toned grapes. The air felt heavy, saturated with the smell of roasting meats, caramelizing sugar, and the sharp tang of fermenting fruit. "Is this... Dymas?" Rory’s voice sounded small against the backdrop of a distant, booming waterfall that poured liquid silver into a basin three miles below. "The outskirts," Nyx replied, their form sharpening in the rich light. Shadows stretched long and jagged behind them. "The realm of Belphegor. Every craving Earth ever birthed is nurtured here until it rots." They followed a path paved with crushed shells that shimmered with iridescent oils. To their left, an orchard of trees with silver bark bore fruit shaped like glass starbursts. One fell, shattering against the ground with a chime like a crystal bell, spilling a thick, golden syrup that smoked in the warm air. Rory gripped the hilt of the moonsilver dagger Isolde had gifted her. The metal felt like a sliver of ice in her hand, a stark contrast to the stifling warmth of the Dymasian air. "Don't touch the flora, Carter." "I wasn't going to," Rory snapped, though she had been staring at a flower that looked like a blooming ribcage. "It’s hard to ignore the fact that the grass is breathing." She pointed. Beneath their feet, the emerald blades of grass rippled in waves, not from wind, but in a slow, heaving motion that suggested something massive slept miles below the surface. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her shoes, a steady, subterranean drone. They crested a ridge and the true scale of the Gluttony realm revealed itself. A city carved from white marble and gold sat nestled in a valley of perpetual harvest. Towers wound like corkscrews into the amber sky, topped with banners that fluttered despite the stillness of the air. Great aqueducts carried wine instead of water, the red liquid staining the stone a deep, permanent mahogany. "Look there," Nyx pointed a shadowy finger toward a shimmering distortion in the air near the city gates. "The Veil is weeping." Rory squinted. The air buckled and folded like heat haze over asphalt, revealing brief, flickering glimpses of a rainy London street—black taxis, umbrellas, the neon sign of the Golden Empress. It was a jagged tear in reality, held open by nothing but the sheer weight of the excess on this side. A group of figures moved along the road toward the city. They walked with a slow, hypnotic gait, their clothes fine but tattered, their faces fixed in expressions of blissful vacancy. "Are those... people?" Rory whispered, hunkering down behind a bush that smelled of cinnamon and wet fur. "Souls," Nyx corrected. "Contracts signed in salt and hunger. They come to the feasts promised by the Prince. They eat until they forget their names. Then they become the ingredients for the next cycle." Rory’s stomach did a slow, nauseous somersault. The beauty of the amber sky and the silver waterfalls suddenly felt like a layer of gold leaf over a carcass. She looked at her wrist, the crescent-shaped scar white against her tan skin. She’d spent her life running from one type of trap; she wasn't about to end up as a garnish in a demon's kitchen. As they descended toward the valley floor, the sensory assault intensified. The sound of distant music—harps and drums playing a frantic, erratic beat—drifted on the wind. It wasn't joyful. It felt like a heartbeat during a panic attack. They reached a bridge made of woven vines that spanned a river of dark chocolate. The liquid moved with the consistency of lava, bubbling and popping to release clouds of bitter cocoa steam. "The Heartstone is burning," Rory said, pulling the pendant out. The crimson gem was no longer just pulsing; it was vibrating, emitting a high-pitched whine that set her teeth on edge. "We’re close to a portal. A real one, not just a rift." "Then the Wardens will be close as well," Nyx warned. "They don't take kindly to Shades, and even less to humans carrying Fae-forged steel." Rory ignored the warning, her eyes fixed on a structure ahead. It was a pavilion made of rib bones and silk, standing solitary amidst a field of giant, blue-capped mushrooms. Within the pavilion, a pedestal of black basalt held a spinning orb of liquid shadow. "That’s it," Rory breathed. "That’s how they’re leaching the energy from London." She stepped off the vine bridge, her boots sinking into the spongy, fungal soil. The mushrooms hummed as she passed, their gills glowing with a faint, bioluminescent purple. "Wait," Nyx hissed, but Rory was already moving. She felt a pull, a magnetic tug on the moonsilver blade at her waist. The dagger wanted to cut. It was a cold hunger that rivaled the gluttony of the realm around them. As she stepped into the shadow of the pavilion, the air temperature plummeted. The jasmine scent vanished, replaced by the sterile, metallic bite of moonlight. Rory reached for the orb. The Heartstone against her chest flared with blinding light, screaming a warning in a language of pure heat. "Rory, get back!" A figure stepped from behind the basalt pedestal. He was tall, dressed in robes of shimmering silk that changed color with every movement—from the deep red of a pomegranate to the pale gold of honey. His skin was the color of polished mahogany, and his eyes were two burning coals of pure, unadulterated hunger. "A guest," the man said, his voice a rich baritone that seemed to vibrate in Rory’s very marrow. "And she brings a gift of silver and stone. How wonderfully... indulgent." Rory didn’t hesitate. She drew the Fae blade, the moonsilver hilt freezing her palm. The metal caught the amber light and refracted it into a thousand shards of cold, white brilliance. "I’m not here to join the menu," Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt. The man smiled, revealing teeth that were too many and too sharp. He raised a hand, and the river of chocolate behind them roared, a massive wave of dark liquid rising up like a hooded cobra. "In Dymas, everyone is on the menu eventually, little bird. It’s just a matter of seasoning." The Heartstone turned ice-cold against Rory’s skin, a sudden, jarring shift that signaled the presence of something even older than the demon before her. The shadows around Nyx began to boil, the Shade growing in height, their violet eyes flaring until they eclipsed the amber sky. "She is under the protection of the Shadow, Belphegor," Nyx’s voice wasn't a whisper anymore. It was a landslide. The Prince of Gluttony let out a melodic laugh that ended in a snarl. He snapped his fingers, and the giant mushrooms around the pavilion began to vent a thick, yellow gas. "Then let us see if the Shadow can feast on smoke." Rory lunged, the Fae blade slicing a path through the sulfurous cloud. The air screamed where the moonsilver cut it, a sound of tearing fabric that echoed through the amber valley. She didn't look back; the only way out of this gilded larder was straight through the throat of the one who owned it.
created_at"2026-02-19T04:02:45.633Z" 2/19/2026, 4:02:45 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s voice grated softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.074
85.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1426
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"lazily"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1426
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"marble"
count1
12
word"fluttered"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"structure"
count1
16
word"silk"
count2
17
word"solitary"
count1
18
word"amidst"
count1
19
word"magnetic"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"silence"
2"familiar"
3"scanning"
4"throbbed"
5"pulse"
6"shimmered"
7"crystal"
8"stark"
9"warmth"
10"vibrated"
11"marble"
12"fluttered"
13"weight"
14"stomach"
15"structure"
16"silk"
17"solitary"
18"amidst"
19"magnetic"
20"whisper"
21"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
92.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1415
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1209
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Richmond1
Park1
London3
Nyx9
Rory18
Heartstone3
Dymasian2
Cardiff1
Shadows1
Isolde1
Gluttony2
Golden1
Empress1
Fae2
Shade1
Prince1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Heartstone"
4"Shadows"
5"Isolde"
6"Gluttony"
7"Shade"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.756
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a sliver of ice in her hand,"
1"looked like a blooming ribcage"
2"felt like a layer of gold leaf over a c"
3"felt like a heartbeat during a panic at"
4"baritone that seemed to vibrate in Rory’s very marrow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.707
wordCount1415
matches
0"not from wind, but in a slow, heaving motion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean34.51
std18.08
cv0.524
sampleLengths
066
126
262
317
474
525
633
753
834
95
1031
1145
1266
1322
1451
1531
1617
1734
1864
1938
2033
2143
2224
2345
2412
2528
268
2758
2823
293
3054
3130
3231
3315
3436
3516
3646
3719
3832
3911
4054
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was vibrating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences98
ratio0.071
matches
0"It didn't just glow; it pushed back against the cold, a tiny furnace of Dymasian energy."
1"The air buckled and folded like heat haze over asphalt, revealing brief, flickering glimpses of a rainy London street—black taxis, umbrellas, the neon sign of the Golden Empress."
2"She’d spent her life running from one type of trap; she wasn't about to end up as a garnish in a demon's kitchen."
3"The sound of distant music—harps and drums playing a frantic, erratic beat—drifted on the wind."
4"The crimson gem was no longer just pulsing; it was vibrating, emitting a high-pitched whine that set her teeth on edge."
5"He was tall, dressed in robes of shimmering silk that changed color with every movement—from the deep red of a pomegranate to the pale gold of honey."
6"She didn't look back; the only way out of this gilded larder was straight through the throat of the one who owned it."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1219
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"translucent, jewel-toned grapes."
1"giant, blue-capped mushrooms."
2"ice-cold against Rory’s"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02132895816242822
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004101722723543888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean14.44
std6.56
cv0.455
sampleLengths
017
126
223
315
411
510
616
716
820
96
1011
114
1217
1318
1415
1520
1625
1711
187
1915
2013
2116
2224
2312
2422
255
2620
2711
282
2929
3014
3114
3216
3319
3417
3518
364
372
3828
3921
4011
4120
4217
433
4431
457
4621
4713
4823
4911
49.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3469387755102041
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences80
matches
0"It didn't just glow; it"
1"They stepped through a gap"
2"They followed a path paved"
3"They crested a ridge and"
4"It was a jagged tear"
5"They walked with a slow,"
6"She looked at her wrist,"
7"She’d spent her life running"
8"It wasn't joyful."
9"It felt like a heartbeat"
10"They reached a bridge made"
11"It was a pavilion made"
12"She stepped off the vine"
13"She felt a pull, a"
14"It was a cold hunger"
15"He was tall, dressed in"
16"His skin was the color"
17"She drew the Fae blade,"
18"He raised a hand, and"
19"It was a landslide."
ratio0.275
28.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences80
matches
0"A thick, pearlescent fog swallowed"
1"Nyx’s voice grated softly, like"
2"Rory reached beneath her coat,"
3"The crimson gem throbbed against"
4"It didn't just glow; it"
5"They stepped through a gap"
6"The shift happened in a"
7"The gray London haze dissolved"
8"Rory shielded her eyes."
9"Clouds the color of bruised"
10"The air felt heavy, saturated"
11"Rory’s voice sounded small against"
12"Nyx replied, their form sharpening"
13"Shadows stretched long and jagged"
14"They followed a path paved"
15"Rory gripped the hilt of"
16"The metal felt like a"
17"Rory snapped, though she had"
18"A low hum vibrated through"
19"They crested a ridge and"
ratio0.863
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"To their left, an orchard"
ratio0.013
56.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The crimson gem throbbed against her palm, a rhythmic heat that matched her own accelerating pulse."
1"Clouds the color of bruised plums drifted lazily over a landscape that defied every law of Cardiff geography."
2"One fell, shattering against the ground with a chime like a crystal bell, spilling a thick, golden syrup that smoked in the warm air."
3"The crimson gem was no longer just pulsing; it was vibrating, emitting a high-pitched whine that set her teeth on edge."
4"He was tall, dressed in robes of shimmering silk that changed color with every movement—from the deep red of a pomegranate to the pale gold of honey."
5"The man smiled, revealing teeth that were too many and too sharp."
6"The Heartstone turned ice-cold against Rory’s skin, a sudden, jarring shift that signaled the presence of something even older than the demon before her."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx replied, their form sharpening in the rich light"
1"Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx corrected (correct)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Rory breathed (breathe)"
5"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.444
73.2485%