| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The dagger’s edge gleamed faintly [faintly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1551 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1551 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "wavering" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "quickened" | | 4 | "hulking" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "quivered" | | 10 | "stark" | | 11 | "lurched" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "tracing" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "fractured" | | 19 | "glistening" | | 20 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 181 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 191 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 19 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1531 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 75 | | wordCount | 1419 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Aurora | 30 | | Plates | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 17 | | Seer | 1 | | Sharp | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 | | Voice | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 12 | | Vines | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Plates" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Voice" | | 7 | "Nyx" | | 8 | "Vines" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.443 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed alive twitching as she passed" | | 1 | "as if crawling into their cracks" | | 2 | "quite catch" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1531 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.94% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 26.4 | | std | 10.61 | | cv | 0.402 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 292 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 191 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx slipped after, solid form coalescing—a tall figure draped in living shadow, edges trembling like flame." | | 1 | "The air tasted of fermented fruit and something darker—rotting honey." | | 2 | "The vault beyond promised revelations—and horrors." | | 3 | "Their feet found sticky puddles—wine, honey, something thicker." | | 4 | "A shape lurched from behind a pillar—a figure hunched, racks of ribs visible beneath taut flesh." | | 5 | "The scent drove tears to Aurora’s eyes—sick sweetness laced with copper tang." | | 6 | "They drew breath—no, they felt the absence of breath—then whispered against Aurora’s ear." | | 7 | "An altar rose at its crown—an obsidian slab veined with crimson." | | 8 | "She closed her eyes, thought of Evan—his fist cracking her wrist, the scar smoldering beneath her skin." | | 9 | "Together, they turned back toward the standing stones—and the world waiting beyond the rift." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1439 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay half-open beneath crumbling" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.01667824878387769 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0020847810979847115 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 191 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 191 | | mean | 8.02 | | std | 3.81 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 60.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.38219895287958117 | | totalSentences | 191 | | uniqueOpeners | 73 | |
| 20.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "Everywhere the amber glow quivered," |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice wove through the" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, rippling air" | | 2 | "They stood atop a broad" | | 3 | "She traced its crescent scar," | | 4 | "They rose, voice a breeze" | | 5 | "She traced one carved face." | | 6 | "She angled it toward the" | | 7 | "Their voice skimmed Aurora’s ear." | | 8 | "It glowed deep crimson, warmth" | | 9 | "She stepped between columns, blade" | | 10 | "She crouched, her gown pooling" | | 11 | "She crouched beside Isolde, peering" | | 12 | "She gathered her courage, then" | | 13 | "Their feet found sticky puddles—wine," | | 14 | "She breathed out a single" | | 15 | "She lunged, blade singing as" | | 16 | "Her voice echoed." | | 17 | "She glanced at the pendant," | | 18 | "She tucked the chain into" | | 19 | "They reached a hall where" |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 39.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 137 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora paused at the lip" | | 1 | "The silver chain caught moonlight" | | 2 | "Isolde drifted beside her, silver" | | 3 | "Nyx hovered just behind, a" | | 4 | "Her voice wove through the" | | 5 | "Aurora swallowed, slick sweat in" | | 6 | "She stepped forward, rippling air" | | 7 | "Nyx slipped after, solid form" | | 8 | "They stood atop a broad" | | 9 | "Vines heavy with violet grapes" | | 10 | "The air tasted of fermented" | | 11 | "Each droplet quickened the beat" | | 12 | "She traced its crescent scar," | | 13 | "Nyx knelt, fingertips brushing spilled" | | 14 | "Shadow flesh darkened, absorbing the" | | 15 | "They rose, voice a breeze" | | 16 | "Nightwhisper breathed, gaze sweeping rows" | | 17 | "Plates carved from ivory, each" | | 18 | "Some tables tilted askew, chairs" | | 19 | "Isolde drifted toward a vine-choked" |
| | ratio | 0.84 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Dew-slick leaves glowed faintly, as if lit from within." | | 1 | "Some tables tilted askew, chairs overturned, as if diners had bolted for their lives." | | 2 | "Candles flickered at every place setting, flames bending toward one another as if in whispered conspiracy." | | 3 | "She closed her eyes, thought of Evan—his fist cracking her wrist, the scar smoldering beneath her skin." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nightwhisper breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "She breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.577 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |