Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT1125R2BJJ495XV9QB6Q4F

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
46.5s
Cost:
$0.018394
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora paused at the lip of the rift, fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant nestled at her throat. The silver chain caught moonlight slipping between oak branches. Through the wavering distortion, an amber sky beckoned. Isolde drifted beside her, silver hair brushing mossy stone. Pale lavender eyes traced the distortion’s edge, unblinking. Nyx hovered just behind, a pulse of violet light at the heart of their shadow. “This place waits for new mouths,” Isolde whispered. Her voice wove through the grove like wind through reeds. Aurora swallowed, slick sweat in her throat. She stepped forward, rippling air swallowing hood and cloak. Nyx slipped after, solid form coalescing—a tall figure draped in living shadow, edges trembling like flame. They stood atop a broad terrace carved from pale stone. Vines heavy with violet grapes curled around pillared colonnades. Dew-slick leaves glowed faintly, as if lit from within. The air tasted of fermented fruit and something darker—rotting honey. Cracked pottery spilled amber liquid across the floor. Each droplet quickened the beat at Aurora’s wrist, the Heartstone pulsing beneath her skin. She traced its crescent scar, half-remembering childhood pain. Nyx knelt, fingertips brushing spilled wine. Shadow flesh darkened, absorbing the stain without a trace. They rose, voice a breeze through chimes. “It hungers,” Nightwhisper breathed, gaze sweeping rows of gilded tables set for a thousand guests. Plates carved from ivory, each rim inked with looping runes. Some tables tilted askew, chairs overturned, as if diners had bolted for their lives. Isolde drifted toward a vine-choked arch. No footprints marked her path. Beneath curling leaves, a wall of reliefs: hulking figures with bloated cheeks, goblets raised to empty sky. Aurora pressed her palm against the stone. Tiny tremors shivered through her bones. “Demons feast here,” Isolde said. She traced one carved face. Lips parted in a silent roar. A distant clatter rattled through the colonnade. Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade from its sheath. Moonsilver gleamed cool as starlight. She angled it toward the sound. Vines stirred. Grape clusters fell, pattering on stone like raindrops. Nyx flickered, form melting into a tendril of shadow that spilled across the floor. Their voice skimmed Aurora’s ear. “Watch for unseen mouths.” Aurora lifted the pendant. It glowed deep crimson, warmth blooming beneath her fingers. A pulse of tension dog-legged her spine. She stepped between columns, blade raised. Concrete pillars loomed overhead, carved vines twisting into grinning faces. Each vine seemed alive, twitching as she passed. Isolde floated to a low dais at the terrace’s center. A circular hatch lay half-open beneath crumbling steps. Pale light flickered within. She crouched, her gown pooling over broken stone. “This hatch leads deeper,” she murmured. “To the Banqueting Hall of Belphegor.” Aurora nodded. The vault beyond promised revelations—and horrors. She crouched beside Isolde, peering over the rim. Below, a vast chamber spread like a spider’s web of tables. Candles flickered at every place setting, flames bending toward one another as if in whispered conspiracy. The floor groaned. Nyx slipped past, silhouette melting into darkness at Aurora’s back. A hiss cracked against stone. Isolde lay fingertips on the hatch’s rim. “The Veil thins here,” she said. “Earth resonances seep through.” Aurora lifted the blade. “Let’s feed it something it fears.” The dagger’s edge gleamed faintly. She gathered her courage, then dropped into the darkness. Bare stone walls closed in around them. A ribbon of amber light fell from the hatch above, painting their shadows long and thin across the floor. Their feet found sticky puddles—wine, honey, something thicker. Aurora tested the surface with her blade tip. The probe sank an inch before she yanked it free, blade slick with crimson syrup. Isolde followed, silent as a mist. Nyx hovered at the wall, shoulders shifting where stone met shadow. Everywhere the amber glow quivered, throwing pillars into stark relief. Piles of bones lay heaped at intervals, ribs cleaved open like overturned baskets. A low moan crawled through the columns. Aurora froze. Heart hammered against her ribs. She breathed out a single word: “Alive?” Isolde tipped her head. “Souls pressed into service,” the Seer said. “Bound to feed the endless hunger of this realm.” Sharp metal scraped stone. Aurora spun, blade raised. A shape lurched from behind a pillar—a figure hunched, racks of ribs visible beneath taut flesh. Eyes burned with amber fire. “No,” Aurora said, muscles clenched. She lunged, blade singing as it sliced through taut flesh. The figure dissolved into wisps of ember and ash, a roar echoing as fire spilled from its ruin. The columns rattled, stones shifting underfoot. A beam of light flared above. The hatch clanged shut. Darkness pooled around them, scraped by the amber glow from distant crevices. “No turning back,” Isolde said. Her voice echoed. A weight pressed at Aurora’s chest. She glanced at the pendant, its glow stronger now. She tucked the chain into her cloak and pushed forward, blade carving a path through stinking air. They reached a hall where tables stretched to a distant archway, each heaped with rotting fruit and spoiled meats. Thousands of plates brimmed with maggots squirming in citrus pools. The scent drove tears to Aurora’s eyes—sick sweetness laced with copper tang. Nyx solidified at her side, fingers brushing the ceiling. Shadows dripped from their arms like liquefied ink. They drew breath—no, they felt the absence of breath—then whispered against Aurora’s ear. “They frame the way forward,” Nyx said. “Follow the line of empty goblets.” Aurora knelt, tracing a path of overturned chalices shimmering with dried blood. She rose, sandals slipping on congealed sauces. Each step echoed through the vaulted space. Isolde paused before a dais carved into a single monolith. An altar rose at its crown—an obsidian slab veined with crimson. Runes glowed faintly, pulsing in time with the stone at Aurora’s throat. “Here lies the seed of sin,” Isolde said. Her fingers hovered above the altar’s surface. Aurora approached. The pendant blazed, warm waves lapping across her palm. Beneath that warmth, a whisper: pull, sever, free. Her heart hammered. Nyx drifted around the dais, shadows pouring over runes as if crawling into their cracks. They whispered a curling phrase Aurora couldn’t quite catch. Isolde raised a hand. “Speak truth,” she said. “The blade must know its purpose.” Aurora touched the dagger’s guard. Steel was cold. She closed her eyes, thought of Evan—his fist cracking her wrist, the scar smoldering beneath her skin. She thought of every moment she’d run, every corridor she’d built in London to hide from fear. “I cut through bondage,” she said. Voice steady. “I free what’s bound.” The pendant flared. The runes on the altar ignited, blood-red filaments skittering across the stone. A low rumble shook plates loose from tables, sending them crashing. A fissure split the altar’s face. Crimson light poured like molten wine. Aurora stepped back, blade raised. Stone cracked around them. Vines ripped through floor slabs, skeletal hands bursting from the cracks before withering on the spot. A single vine snaked toward Aurora’s ankle. She kicked, sending it spiraling back into darkness. The altar split open, revealing a hollow chamber. Within, a single chalice floated, wrapped in shadow. Its rim dripped the same honeyed blood that slicked the floor above. Isolde bowed her head. “The heart of gluttony,” she said. “Destroy it, and the realm withers.” Aurora squared her shoulders. She lunged, blade slicing through the chalice’s stem. Steel met shadow-cold metal. A shriek shredded the air. The chalice pulsed, then fractured like stained glass. Shards collapsed inward, vanishing one by one. The light in the chamber faded. Runic veins on the altar shrank until they blinked out. The frost of the Fae blade steamed, then stilled. The amber glow overtook the hall, painting even the bones white. A hush settled, heavy as dust. Aurora sank to her knees, chest heaving. She lifted the pendant. Warmth pulsed steady and calm. Nyx exhaled into shadow. “It bleeds quiet now.” Isolde stepped forward, joining Aurora at the hatch. She reached out, touch softer than a breath. “The Veil mends,” she said. “Soon, the distortion will vanish.” Aurora rose. Damp hair clung to her cheeks. She wiped a smear of blood from the blade’s edge. At the hatch, a keening gust of wind pulled at their cloaks. Outside, the amber sky faded to the grove’s green canopy, leaves drifting in morning light. Aurora looked back once, toward the empty hall. Tables stood bare, plates stacked and spotless. Vines retracted into cracks. Bones lay bleached and clean. All sign of the feast had vanished, swallowed by time. She climbed the steps, blade in hand. Above, Isolde closed the hatch with a gentle push. Nyx slipped through first, ripple of shadow fading to silver-blue dawn. Aurora paused on the terrace. The Heartstone hung quiet against her chest. Morning light filtered across damp leaves. A single grape cluster fell at her feet, unharmed and glistening. She picked it up, cold and real. Bit it. Sweet juice bloomed on her tongue. She looked to Isolde and Nyx. No words passed between them. They stood under oak branches, distant echoes of clashing metal and hungry roars already fading to memory. Together, they turned back toward the standing stones—and the world waiting beyond the rift.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The dagger’s edge gleamed faintly [faintly]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"wavering"
count1
1
word"traced"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"quickened"
count1
4
word"hulking"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count3
6
word"warmth"
count3
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"quivered"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"lurched"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count2
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count2
18
word"fractured"
count1
19
word"glistening"
count1
20
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"wavering"
1"traced"
2"pulse"
3"quickened"
4"hulking"
5"flickered"
6"warmth"
7"tension"
8"loomed"
9"quivered"
10"stark"
11"lurched"
12"echoing"
13"echoed"
14"weight"
15"tracing"
16"whisper"
17"pulsed"
18"fractured"
19"glistening"
20"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences181
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences191
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1531
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount1419
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Aurora30
Plates1
Fae-forged1
Isolde17
Seer1
Sharp1
Evan1
London1
Voice1
Fae2
Nyx12
Vines4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Plates"
3"Isolde"
4"Seer"
5"Evan"
6"Voice"
7"Nyx"
8"Vines"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.443
windowScore0.5
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed alive twitching as she passed"
1"as if crawling into their cracks"
2"quite catch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1531
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
71.94% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean26.4
std10.61
cv0.402
sampleLengths
034
132
218
332
438
530
622
739
841
916
1036
1119
124
1344
1430
1512
1643
1718
1817
1915
2035
2131
2240
2321
2420
2529
2639
2722
288
2932
3041
3130
3213
3326
3433
3515
3622
3724
3814
3942
4012
4126
4217
4335
4428
4516
4636
4736
4822
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs292
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences191
ratio0.052
matches
0"Nyx slipped after, solid form coalescing—a tall figure draped in living shadow, edges trembling like flame."
1"The air tasted of fermented fruit and something darker—rotting honey."
2"The vault beyond promised revelations—and horrors."
3"Their feet found sticky puddles—wine, honey, something thicker."
4"A shape lurched from behind a pillar—a figure hunched, racks of ribs visible beneath taut flesh."
5"The scent drove tears to Aurora’s eyes—sick sweetness laced with copper tang."
6"They drew breath—no, they felt the absence of breath—then whispered against Aurora’s ear."
7"An altar rose at its crown—an obsidian slab veined with crimson."
8"She closed her eyes, thought of Evan—his fist cracking her wrist, the scar smoldering beneath her skin."
9"Together, they turned back toward the standing stones—and the world waiting beyond the rift."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1439
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay half-open beneath crumbling"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.01667824878387769
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0020847810979847115
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences191
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences191
mean8.02
std3.81
cv0.476
sampleLengths
017
19
28
39
48
515
68
710
87
99
1016
1110
129
139
1410
158
1614
178
186
199
207
2115
2210
2314
246
255
2617
277
286
295
305
316
327
338
345
356
362
378
3814
395
404
414
429
437
446
4510
468
4710
488
494
60.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.38219895287958117
totalSentences191
uniqueOpeners73
20.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences163
matches
0"Everywhere the amber glow quivered,"
ratio0.006
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences163
matches
0"Her voice wove through the"
1"She stepped forward, rippling air"
2"They stood atop a broad"
3"She traced its crescent scar,"
4"They rose, voice a breeze"
5"She traced one carved face."
6"She angled it toward the"
7"Their voice skimmed Aurora’s ear."
8"It glowed deep crimson, warmth"
9"She stepped between columns, blade"
10"She crouched, her gown pooling"
11"She crouched beside Isolde, peering"
12"She gathered her courage, then"
13"Their feet found sticky puddles—wine,"
14"She breathed out a single"
15"She lunged, blade singing as"
16"Her voice echoed."
17"She glanced at the pendant,"
18"She tucked the chain into"
19"They reached a hall where"
ratio0.227
39.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount137
totalSentences163
matches
0"Aurora paused at the lip"
1"The silver chain caught moonlight"
2"Isolde drifted beside her, silver"
3"Nyx hovered just behind, a"
4"Her voice wove through the"
5"Aurora swallowed, slick sweat in"
6"She stepped forward, rippling air"
7"Nyx slipped after, solid form"
8"They stood atop a broad"
9"Vines heavy with violet grapes"
10"The air tasted of fermented"
11"Each droplet quickened the beat"
12"She traced its crescent scar,"
13"Nyx knelt, fingertips brushing spilled"
14"Shadow flesh darkened, absorbing the"
15"They rose, voice a breeze"
16"Nightwhisper breathed, gaze sweeping rows"
17"Plates carved from ivory, each"
18"Some tables tilted askew, chairs"
19"Isolde drifted toward a vine-choked"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Dew-slick leaves glowed faintly, as if lit from within."
1"Some tables tilted askew, chairs overturned, as if diners had bolted for their lives."
2"Candles flickered at every place setting, flames bending toward one another as if in whispered conspiracy."
3"She closed her eyes, thought of Evan—his fist cracking her wrist, the scar smoldering beneath her skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
1"Nightwhisper breathed (breathe)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"She breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.577
leniency1
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.267
77.6271%