Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT1153WTSQVHXG533A9TNKC

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Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.009166
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three sharp, deliberate raps echoed through the flat, the sound too precise for a neighbour and too confident for a drunk from the bar below. Rory froze, a half-eaten carton of chow mein suspended halfway to her mouth. The spoon clattered back into the cardboard. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, lifted his head from his position on a stack of ancient-looking maps, his tail giving a single, annoyed flick. Another knock. This one slower, more insistent. A message. *I know you’re in there.* Rory placed the carton on a precarious tower of books and wiped her greasy fingers on her jeans. She moved silently through the cramped living space, navigating the minefield of scrolls and research notes that covered every available surface. The air smelled of old paper, dust, and the rich, lingering scent of cumin and cardamom wafting up from the curry house on the ground floor. She reached the front door, its three deadbolts a stark, metallic promise of security. She didn't bother with the peephole; it had been painted over years ago. Instead, she pressed her ear to the cool wood. Silence. She held her breath, listening for the tell-tale shuffle of feet, the creak of the floorboards in the hall. Nothing. Whoever stood on the other side was as still as a statue. That stillness was a signature. It was the unnerving, predatory calm of a man who measured time not in seconds, but in the slow, steady beating of a victim’s heart. With a sigh that felt like it scraped her lungs raw, she began to slide the bolts back. The first one scraped with a loud protest. The second clicked cleanly. The third, a heavy, brass monstrosity, thudded home. She turned the knob and pulled the door open just enough to see him. Lucien Moreau stood in the dingy hallway, a slash of impossible elegance in a world of peeling paint and tired floral wallpaper. His charcoal suit was immaculate, the platinum blond of his slicked-back hair catching the single bare bulb’s light. In one gloved hand, he gripped the ivory handle of his cane. His mismatched eyes—one the colour of polished amber, the other a fathomless black—fixed on her. "Aurora," he said, his voice a low, cultured purr that somehow managed to both soothe and threaten. He always used her full name. A deliberate little barb. "Lucien." She leaned against the doorframe, affecting a casualness she was far from feeling. "If you're looking for the best vindaloo in Brick Lane, you're two floors too high." A faint smile touched his lips, a mere ghost of an expression. "A commendable attempt at deflection, but I am not here for the cuisine. I am here for you." "I'm retired." She started to push the door closed. His booted foot shot out, stopping it with a dull thud that vibrated through the wood. He didn't push, didn't force it. The mere suggestion of his strength was enough. "From what, precisely? Noodle delivery? I was under the impression your talents were… wasted on such endeavours." "My talents are my business. Now get your foot out of my doorway before I make it my business to break it." He tilted his head, the black eye seeming to drink in the light while the amber one glittered with amusement. "We both know that is an empty threat. You may be formidable, Carter, but I am something else entirely." He applied the slightest pressure, and the door swung inward against her will. "May I come in?" Rory stepped back, her hand instinctively going to the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a nervous habit she thought she’d broken. "It’s not my flat to invite you into." "Ah, yes. Miss Rostova’s little sanctuary." He glided into the room, his presence instantly overwhelming the small space. He moved with a predator’s grace, his polished shoes making no sound on the worn floorboards. Ptolemy, who usually hissed at strangers, watched him with wide, unblinking eyes, then rose from his pile of maps and wound himself around Lucien’s legs, purring. Rory's stomach tightened. The cat’s judgment was usually impeccable. This was a very bad sign. Lucien ignored the feline adoration, his gaze sweeping over the cluttered room with the air of a museum curator assessing a chaotic exhibit. He tapped a stack of books with his cane. "Archaeology, mythology, forbidden Sumerian texts. Your friend has eclectic tastes. Dangerous ones." "She's a researcher." "Is that what we're calling it now?" He turned back to her, the smile gone. In its place was a look of grim intensity that made the air feel thin. "I am not here for small talk, Aurora. A situation has developed. One that requires your unique… perspective." "Like I said, I'm delivering noodles. My perspective is that traffic on the Old Street roundabout is a special kind of hell." "Your past has a rather persistent echo," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a near-whisper. "A name. Evan." The name hit her like a physical blow. The air in her lungs turned to ice. She saw a flash of a shattered mirror, a hand gripping her arm too hard, a voice screaming in her face. She forced the memory down, burying it under layers of practiced composure. Her expression remained a mask of indifference, but she knew he’d seen it. He saw everything. "I don't know who you're talking about." "Don't you?" He took a step closer, the scent of ozone and cold stone emanating from him, a smell that had no place in a warm London flat. "He’s looking for you. He has been for weeks. But he’s not just looking for the woman who left him. He’s looking for something else. Something he believes you took." "I took nothing." "He believes otherwise." Lucien leaned his cane against the back of a threadbare armchair, the ivory handle gleaming. "He has been asking questions in all the wrong places. Whispers in the Undermarket, inquiries with goblin money-lenders, even a clumsy attempt to scry for you using a stolen grimoire. He is drawing attention. The wrong kind of attention." "And this is my problem because?" "Because the attention he is drawing is from the same people who employ me. They do not appreciate mortals stumbling into their affairs. It creates… paperwork." Lucien paused, letting the weight of his words settle in the silence. "He is looking for an artefact. A key. He thinks you have it." "I don't." "I know." Lucien’s gaze was unnervingly direct. "But he doesn't. And his frantic search is becoming a nuisance. A loose end that needs tying." "So tie it," she snapped. "You're the fixer. Go fix it. Break his legs. Vanish him. Whatever it is you people do." "I could," he conceded softly. "But that would be so… crude. And it wouldn't solve the real problem." "Which is?" "Your friend, Eva." He let the name hang in the air between them, a poisoned gift. "Her research is not just academic, is it? She dabbles. Summons. Divinations. Things that whisper back. Six months ago, she needed a rare text for her work. A text my associates possessed. A bargain was struck." Rory felt a cold dread creep up her spine. "What kind of bargain?" "A simple one. The text for a future favour. A marker to be called in at our discretion." Lucien’s mismatched eyes were pitiless. "The discretion is now over. They are calling in that debt. They want what Evan is looking for. And they have tasked me with retrieving it." He let that sink in, the final, terrible piece clicking into place. "They believe Eva knows where it is," Lucien continued, his voice flat and cold as a morgue slab. "And when she cannot produce it, they will consider the debt unpaid. The penalty for default is… severe." He walked towards the door, his movements once again fluid and unhurried. He paused with his hand on the knob, turning back to face her. The faint, predatory smile was back on his lips. "You can help me find this artefact and present it to them. We can frame it as a collaborative effort, a successful conclusion. Eva remains safe, and Evan becomes someone else's problem." He gave a slight, elegant shrug. "Or you can refuse. In which case, I will be forced to inform my associates that their asset has become a liability. And I will deliver Eva to them myself." He opened the door, the noise from the hallway rushing back in. "The choice, Aurora, is yours."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
1"he conceded softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.711
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.089
89.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1433
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"very"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1433
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"mask of indifference"
count1
15
word"gleaming"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"navigating"
2"stark"
3"silence"
4"measured"
5"vibrated"
6"sanctuary"
7"predator"
8"stomach"
9"chaotic"
10"intensity"
11"echo"
12"whisper"
13"shattered"
14"mask of indifference"
15"gleaming"
16"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
47.62% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"know"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"managed to"
2"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1424
ratio0.004
matches
0"I know you’re in there."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount873
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Rory5
Moreau1
Lucien9
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.985
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like it scraped her lungs raw, she"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.702
wordCount1424
matches
0"not in seconds, but in the slow, steady beating of a victim’s heart"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"notes that covered"
1"let that sink"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean34.73
std24.43
cv0.703
sampleLengths
068
114
2101
31
462
552
667
727
829
930
109
1147
1222
1356
1433
1575
1644
173
1848
1922
2018
2165
227
2358
243
2557
266
2751
282
2924
3022
3118
322
3352
3413
3549
3612
3736
3834
3968
4017
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
87.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences103
ratio0.019
matches
0"She didn't bother with the peephole; it had been painted over years ago."
1"His mismatched eyes—one the colour of polished amber, the other a fathomless black—fixed on her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.029511918274687854
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009080590238365494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean13.83
std8.83
cv0.639
sampleLengths
025
113
27
323
42
55
62
75
818
921
1026
1114
1213
139
141
1519
161
1712
185
1925
2018
218
224
238
2414
2522
2618
2712
2815
2917
306
314
3214
3315
3412
3518
369
3716
386
398
4017
4122
4220
4332
444
4516
469
478
4818
4916
58.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4077669902912621
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners42
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Instead, she pressed her ear"
ratio0.014
25.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences70
matches
0"*I know you’re in there.*"
1"She moved silently through the"
2"She reached the front door,"
3"She didn't bother with the"
4"She held her breath, listening"
5"It was the unnerving, predatory"
6"She turned the knob and"
7"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
8"His mismatched eyes—one the colour"
9"he said, his voice a"
10"He always used her full"
11"She leaned against the doorframe,"
12"She started to push the"
13"His booted foot shot out,"
14"He didn't push, didn't force"
15"He tilted his head, the"
16"He applied the slightest pressure,"
17"It was a nervous habit"
18"He glided into the room,"
19"He moved with a predator’s"
ratio0.486
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"Rory froze, a half-eaten carton"
1"The spoon clattered back into"
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, lifted"
3"This one slower, more insistent."
4"*I know you’re in there.*"
5"Rory placed the carton on"
6"She moved silently through the"
7"The air smelled of old"
8"She reached the front door,"
9"She didn't bother with the"
10"She held her breath, listening"
11"That stillness was a signature."
12"It was the unnerving, predatory"
13"The first one scraped with"
14"The second clicked cleanly."
15"The third, a heavy, brass"
16"She turned the knob and"
17"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
18"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
19"His mismatched eyes—one the colour"
ratio0.914
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Whoever stood on the other"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was the unnerving, predatory calm of a man who measured time not in seconds, but in the slow, steady beating of a victim’s heart."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He applied, and the door swung inward against her will"
1"He glided, his presence instantly overwhelming the small space"
2"He turned back, the smile gone"
3"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a near-whisper"
4"Lucien leaned, the ivory handle gleaming"
5"Lucien continued, his voice flat and cold as a morgue slab"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"he conceded softly (concede)"
2"Lucien continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.133
80.2702%