Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT1160AR2R54SPBK2J8N5ZD

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Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.000888
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing a figure framed by the dim light spilling from the hallway. Aurora's heart skipped a beat. It was Lucien, standing there in his impeccably tailored charcoal suit, his heterochromatic eyes locked on hers. The air crackled with an unspoken tension. "Lucien," she said, her voice steady but betraying the turmoil inside her. "What are you doing here?" He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the thin blade hidden inside it a silent threat. "We need to talk, Rory." She crossed her arms, her scar on her left wrist a reminder of a childhood accident and the resilience it had forged. "Can't this wait? I have work in the morning." "It can't." His tone was firm, leaving no room for argument. Aurora stepped aside, allowing him entrance. The flat above Silas' bar was small but cozy, the walls lined with books and the air infused with the scent of Chinese food from the restaurant below. Lucien closed the door behind him and took a slow, measured step forward. "Make yourself comfortable," she said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. He ignored the jab and took a seat on the worn sofa, his eyes scanning the room. "You haven't changed much." She raised an eyebrow. "Neither have you. Still the perfect half-demon, I see." He chuckled, a low, melodic sound. "You flatter me." Aurora perched on the arm of a chair, her posture rigid. "What do you want, Lucien? It's been months." "Months," he echoed. "A lot can happen in that time." "Like what?" she asked, her voice tinged with suspicion. "Like the fact that someone is after us." "Us?" She straightened, her interest piqued despite herself. "Who?" "That's the question, isn't it?" He leaned forward, his eyes intense. "I've been tracking a trail of whispers, shadows, and half-truths. Someone knows about our past, Rory. Someone who wants to use it against us." Her heart raced, memories of their complicated history flooding back. "What do you mean by 'our past'?" Lucien's gaze softened, but only slightly. "You know exactly what I mean. The night we ... the night everything fell apart." Aurora's hands clasped tightly, the scar on her wrist throbbing with memory. "I thought we were done with that." "Clearly, we're not." He stood, his movements fluid and precise. "We need to find out who's behind this before it's too late." "And you think I can help?" she asked, her voice tinged with bitterness. "You know more than you think," he said, his voice low and urgent. "We both do." She sighed, her resolve wavering. "What do you need from me?" "Information," he said simply. "Start with anything you can remember. Anything that feels off, anything that seems out of place." Aurora glanced around the room, her mind racing. "I don't know where to start." "Start with the beginning," Lucien suggested. "The night we met. The night everything changed." She closed her eyes, the memories flooding back with painful clarity. "It was at the gala. The one your father hosted. I was just a law student, trying to make a name for myself. You ... you were different. Confident, mysterious." Lucien nodded, his expression unreadable. "You were the only one who didn't cower in my presence. You saw through me, Rory. You always did." She opened her eyes, her gaze meeting his. "And that's what scared you, isn't it?" "Perhaps," he admitted. "But it also intrigued me. You were a challenge, and I've always been fond of challenges." Aurora stood, her movements deliberate. "So what now? We just wade back into the past and hope to find answers?" "Exactly," he said, his eyes flashing with a hint of determination. "And this time, we won't make the same mistakes." She hesitated, the weight of their history pressing down on her. "Fine. But on one condition." Lucien raised an eyebrow. "And what's that?" "No more secrets," she said, her voice firm. "No more lies. We're in this together, or not at all." He studied her for a moment, his expression unreadable. "Agreed." Aurora felt a surge of relief, followed by a rush of determination. "Then let's start at the beginning. The night everything changed. The night we met." Lucien nodded, his eyes locking onto hers. "The night we met. The night everything began."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.298
leniency0.596
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.043
85.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount714
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount714
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"skipped a beat"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count2
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"tinged"
count2
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"wavering"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count2
16
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"skipped a beat"
1"unspoken"
2"tension"
3"reminder"
4"measured"
5"comfortable"
6"scanning"
7"eyebrow"
8"perfect"
9"echoed"
10"tinged"
11"raced"
12"resolve"
13"wavering"
14"racing"
15"unreadable"
16"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
85.32% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences42
matches
0"a surge of relief"
1"a rush of determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords713
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount347
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien7
Aurora7
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.491
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount713
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean18.76
std9.67
cv0.515
sampleLengths
045
117
220
331
411
547
610
721
813
99
1019
1110
129
138
149
1535
1617
1721
1819
1922
2013
2116
2211
2320
2414
2514
2641
2724
2815
2919
3020
3120
3216
337
3419
3510
3626
3715
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs68
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount317
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.025236593059936908
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.015772870662460567
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean9.64
std5.69
cv0.59
sampleLengths
016
15
217
37
412
55
615
75
822
99
1011
116
1228
1313
1410
1517
164
174
189
196
203
2111
228
233
247
259
268
278
281
2911
3024
3110
327
336
3415
3512
367
3710
3812
3913
4013
413
425
436
444
4516
468
476
486
498
69.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43243243243243246
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences39
matches
0"It was Lucien, standing there"
1"she said, her voice steady"
2"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3"She crossed her arms, her"
4"His tone was firm, leaving"
5"she said, her voice dripping"
6"He ignored the jab and"
7"She raised an eyebrow."
8"He chuckled, a low, melodic"
9"she asked, her voice tinged"
10"She straightened, her interest piqued"
11"He leaned forward, his eyes"
12"Her heart raced, memories of"
13"He stood, his movements fluid"
14"she asked, her voice tinged"
15"he said, his voice low"
16"She sighed, her resolve wavering."
17"he said simply"
18"She closed her eyes, the"
19"She opened her eyes, her"
ratio0.615
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences39
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora's heart skipped a beat."
2"It was Lucien, standing there"
3"The air crackled with an"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6"She crossed her arms, her"
7"His tone was firm, leaving"
8"Aurora stepped aside, allowing him"
9"The flat above"
10"Lucien closed the door behind"
11"she said, her voice dripping"
12"He ignored the jab and"
13"She raised an eyebrow."
14"He chuckled, a low, melodic"
15"Aurora perched on the arm"
16"she asked, her voice tinged"
17"She straightened, her interest piqued"
18"He leaned forward, his eyes"
19"Her heart raced, memories of"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, her voice steady but betraying the turmoil inside her"
1"she said, her voice dripping with sarcasm"
2"He leaned, his eyes intense"
3"he said, his voice low and urgent"
4"he said, his eyes flashing with a hint of determination"
5"she said, her voice firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien suggested (suggest)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.085
76.3272%