Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT11832F6GEXQKYHSAGBWTV

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Duration:
10.7s
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$0.014568
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stepped cautiously into the Fae Grove, her bright blue eyes scanning the ethereal landscape. The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary, their gnarled forms twisting skyward like the fingers of some slumbering giant. Rory felt a shiver of anticipation run down her spine, the Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsing faintly with warmth, though no Hel portal was near. She glanced at her companions, Nyx and Isolde, their forms contrasting starkly against the vibrant backdrop. Nyx, a living shadow, moved with a fluid grace, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. The whisper of their presence seemed to stir the air, a gentle breeze that carried secrets from realms beyond. Isolde, the Seer, walked beside them, her silver hair cascading like moonlight over her shoulders. Her pale lavender eyes held a knowing glint, though her expression remained inscrutable. "Time dances differently here," Isolde murmured, her voice a soft melody that seemed to harmonize with the rustling leaves. "An hour within can be but a breath outside." Rory nodded, her gaze drawn to the wildflowers that bloomed in riotous colors, defying the season. She crouched to touch a delicate blossom, its petals cool and smooth beneath her fingertips. The scent was intoxicating, a blend of honey and spice that lingered in the air. "Feels like a dream," Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper. "But there's something... off." Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette shifting between solid and incorporeal. "The Veil is thin here," they replied, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. "A place where worlds brush against each other." As they ventured deeper, the grove seemed to pulse with life, the flora and fauna moving in a rhythm that was both alien and familiar. The path wound through towering trees, their branches forming a canopy that filtered the light into a kaleidoscope of colors. Rory felt the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its moonsilver surface cold to the touch, a reminder of the dangers that lurked beyond the beauty. "Do you sense it?" Rory asked, her eyes darting to Isolde. The Seer paused, her gaze distant as if peering into the threads of fate. "The Grove holds many secrets," she replied, her words a riddle. "Some are meant to be discovered, others to remain hidden." Rory's heart quickened, a mix of excitement and unease. She had heard tales of the Grove, of its timeless beauty and the mysteries it concealed. Yet standing here, she felt the weight of those stories, the truth woven into the fabric of the place. A rustle in the underbrush drew their attention, and Nyx's form solidified, their stance alert. Rory's hand instinctively moved to the dagger, her fingers brushing the hilt. The sound grew louder, a rhythmic thumping that resonated through the ground. "Something approaches," Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible. From the shadows emerged a creature, its form unlike anything Rory had seen. It was a blend of animal and plant, its body covered in bark-like scales, eyes glowing with an inner light. The creature paused, regarding them with an intelligence that belied its otherworldly appearance. Isolde stepped forward, her presence calming. "A guardian of the Grove," she said, her voice soothing. "It means us no harm." Rory relaxed, though her curiosity remained piqued. The creature moved closer, its movements fluid and graceful. She could see the intricate patterns on its skin, a tapestry of nature's artistry. "Why does it watch us?" Rory asked, her voice tinged with wonder. "The Grove is alive," Isolde replied, her gaze meeting the creature's. "It observes, learns, and remembers." As they continued their exploration, the landscape shifted subtly, the path leading them to a clearing bathed in golden light. In the center stood a pool, its surface mirror-like, reflecting the sky's warm amber hue. Rory felt drawn to it, the pendant at her neck pulsing in time with her heartbeat. Nyx lingered at the edge, their form casting no shadow. "A portal," they murmured, their voice a breath of air. "But to where?" Rory knelt beside the pool, her reflection staring back at her. She reached out, her fingers skimming the surface, sending ripples across the water. The pendant glowed softly, its warmth a comforting presence. "Hel's touch is faint here," Rory said, her voice thoughtful. "Yet it feels... familiar." Isolde joined her, her expression contemplative. "The Grove connects realms," she said, her words a gentle echo. "A crossroads of possibilities." Rory's mind raced, the implications vast and daunting. She had come seeking answers, yet found herself faced with more questions. The Grove was a place of wonder, but also of uncertainty, its secrets tantalizingly out of reach. As they prepared to leave, Rory cast one last glance at the pool, its surface now calm and still. She felt a sense of belonging, a connection to the world beyond the Veil. The Grove had shown her glimpses of its magic, a promise of what lay ahead. "Let's go," Rory said, her voice steady. "There's more to discover." Nyx and Isolde nodded, their expressions mirroring her resolve. Together, they retraced their steps, the path leading them back to the standing stones. The Grove whispered its farewell, the wildflowers swaying in a gentle breeze. Rory felt the pendant's warmth fade as they crossed the boundary, the world outside waiting to embrace them. She knew the journey was far from over, the Grove's mysteries a beacon calling her back. But for now, she carried its magic within her, a reminder of the wonders that lay beyond the Veil.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount932
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount932
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"anticipation"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"whisper"
count3
5
word"cascading"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"dances"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count2
11
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count2
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"resonated"
count1
17
word"otherworldly"
count1
18
word"intricate"
count1
19
word"tapestry"
count1
20
word"tinged"
count1
21
word"comforting"
count1
22
word"echo"
count1
23
word"raced"
count1
24
word"sense of"
count1
25
word"resolve"
count1
26
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"anticipation"
2"down her spine"
3"warmth"
4"whisper"
5"cascading"
6"glint"
7"dances"
8"flickered"
9"pulse"
10"familiar"
11"kaleidoscope"
12"reminder"
13"quickened"
14"weight"
15"rhythmic"
16"resonated"
17"otherworldly"
18"intricate"
19"tapestry"
20"tinged"
21"comforting"
22"echo"
23"raced"
24"sense of"
25"resolve"
26"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
71.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences62
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"y with warmth"
2"d with wonder"
3"a sense of belonging"
73.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords930
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
40.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount823
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory18
Fae2
Grove6
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Nyx7
Isolde8
Seer2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Veil2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Grove"
3"Pendant"
4"Nyx"
5"Isolde"
6"Seer"
places
0"Fae"
1"Veil"
globalScore0.406
windowScore0.667
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"melody that seemed to harmonize with the rustling leaves"
1"as if peering into the threads of fate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount930
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean34.44
std19.05
cv0.553
sampleLengths
084
165
228
346
416
533
670
711
835
944
1039
118
1246
1321
1430
1512
1616
1751
1823
1933
2014
2121
2237
2348
2411
2535
2653
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was intoxicating"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount825
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01818181818181818
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013333333333333334
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean12.92
std5.29
cv0.409
sampleLengths
022
120
226
316
418
519
615
713
819
99
1016
1115
1215
1312
144
1510
1615
178
1825
1920
2025
2111
2214
2311
2410
259
2616
2719
2815
2912
3012
318
3213
3320
3413
356
3610
375
387
399
4014
4112
4211
435
4420
4515
4616
4710
4810
493
56.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3472222222222222
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences62
matches
0"She glanced at her companions,"
1"Her pale lavender eyes held"
2"She crouched to touch a"
3"they replied, their voice a"
4"she replied, her words a"
5"She had heard tales of"
6"It was a blend of"
7"she said, her voice soothing"
8"She could see the intricate"
9"they murmured, their voice a"
10"She reached out, her fingers"
11"she said, her words a"
12"She had come seeking answers,"
13"She felt a sense of"
14"She knew the journey was"
ratio0.242
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"Rory felt a shiver of"
3"She glanced at her companions,"
4"Nyx, a living shadow, moved"
5"The whisper of their presence"
6"Isolde, the Seer, walked beside"
7"Her pale lavender eyes held"
8"Isolde murmured, her voice a"
9"Rory nodded, her gaze drawn"
10"She crouched to touch a"
11"The scent was intoxicating, a"
12"Rory said, her voice barely"
13"Nyx's form flickered, their silhouette"
14"they replied, their voice a"
15"The path wound through towering"
16"Rory felt the Fae-Forged Blade"
17"Rory asked, her eyes darting"
18"The Seer paused, her gaze"
19"she replied, her words a"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The path wound through towering trees, their branches forming a canopy that filtered the light into a kaleidoscope of colors."
1"Rory felt the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its moonsilver surface cold to the touch, a reminder of the dangers that lurked beyond the beauty."
2"The sound grew louder, a rhythmic thumping that resonated through the ground."
3"The creature paused, regarding them with an intelligence that belied its otherworldly appearance."
4"She reached out, her fingers skimming the surface, sending ripples across the water."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"they replied, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
2"Rory asked, her eyes darting to Isolde"
3"she replied, her words a riddle"
4"Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible"
5"she said, her voice soothing"
6"Isolde replied, her gaze meeting the creature's"
7"they murmured, their voice a breath of air"
8"Rory said, her voice thoughtful"
9"she said, her words a gentle echo"
10"Rory said, her voice steady"
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.231
73.5378%