Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
200
glossingSentenceCount
26
matches
0
"sounded like glass when we stepped, the su"
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"not quite touch the ground"
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"lavender that seemed to see through to us and beyond"
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"sounded like wind rolling across a hollow"
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"whisper that seemed to come from nowhere, everywhere, all at once"
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"looked like stained glass"
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"as if listening to something that lay just beyond perception"
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"quite belong on the face of a seer"
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"felt like a delicate ornament being dro"
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"looked like papers made of the thinnest g"
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"not quite sound like laughter and yet carried a kind of approval"
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"felt like a memory of sunlight trapped"
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"as if trying to decide whether to spring into life and save us or to stay quiet and let whatever happened happen"
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"as if answering a question none of us had voiced aloud, and the room’s walls, made of glass and night, carried the whisper of countless other footsteps we would never hear again"
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"glow that seemed to settle into the bones of her hand"
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"as if awaiting a signal"
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"tasted like rain on steel"
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"something between both"
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"not quite a silhouette, not quite a memory, but something between both"
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"tasted like a dare and a warning all at o"
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"as if listening to a distant choir that only they could hear"
"Nyx dragged us through the boundary by a thread of shadow; the world flipped, and we landed with a breathless thud among whispering trees."
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"Fronds brushed my wrists with a chill that remembered winter and a sweetness that remembered summer; the air carried a scent that was at once like rain on iron and lilac petals pressed between old books."
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"An hour inside could be minutes or days outside, and I could feel it in my bones—the way the pulses of the wildflowers seemed to beat with a patient, alien rhythm."
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"Nyx’s glow—soft violet at the edge of perception—brightened enough to catch the iron-blue glint of Auror a Carter’s eyes as she scanned the surroundings."
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"The grove did not like stalkers or liars, and Isolde had learned to walk without leaving a trace—an irony that did not go unnoticed by those of us who depended on her visions."
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"Leaves rustled in a way that sounded almost like a conversation—the click of a twig here, the sigh of a gust there, a breath of wind that carried a syllable in it, a syllable I almost recognised as my own name spoken by a voice that wasn’t mine."
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"I knew the warmth wasn’t simply warmth; it carried a hint of Hel, a memory of fiery gates and battles won with a blade that carried more than frost."
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"The stream’s surface carried a reflection not of us but of something else—perhaps the Fae realm, perhaps some other world hidden just behind the veil."
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"Their form stretched along the ground until it nearly touched the stream’s surface, and then — with a whisper of air that suggested a sigh rather than sound — they drew back, as if afraid of what they had almost learned."
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"The Wardens monitored rift points—the places where the Veil flickered or trembled."
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"The stream’s glow intensified, and the reflection in the water resolved into something else entirely—a corridor of arching trees that didn’t exist in the real world but existed in the space between."
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"The air tasted of copper again, but with a sweetness that made my teeth tingle—a flavour of triumph and risk at the same time."
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"The Blood-rose at my neck—well, the one I wore as a talisman—flickered in my peripheral vision, as if trying to decide whether to spring into life and save us or to stay quiet and let whatever happened happen."
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"I caught sight of something beyond the archway—a silhouette, pale and almost translucent, gliding between the trees as if it had no intention of staying, yet drawn by our presence."
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"It did not show itself in the real world; it existed only in the space the grove offered to those with courage enough to enter."
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"Then I spoke, not loudly, not to the grove as a whole, but to the path beneath our feet, to the stones, to the memory of Hel above and the memory of Earth beneath—"
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"Beyond the doorway lay an impossibility made into a room: a chamber lined with shelves of glass, each shelf containing a miniature sky—the colour of dusk in a dozen different hours, each sky turning and turning with its own gravity."
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"In the centre stood a pedestal of carved wood and bone, upon which rested a single object: a small, crystalline key—like an icicle that remembered warmth—faintly humming with a tone that could have been a note from a harp or a memory from a long-forgotten choir."
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"The grove did not simply open doors; it offered choices and tested the integrity of intent by placing temptations in our path."
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"We did not move to take the memory or to resist it; we let the grove’s suggestion settle in us, settle into the shapes our choices had carved out of our minds over the years."
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"The corridor beyond—the memory-path—stood still as if awaiting a signal."
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"They did not look afraid of us; they looked bored by the delay of our arrival and curious about what we would choose to do next."
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"The light from their eyes grew brighter, and for a fleeting instant I saw a spark of recognition—like a memory brushing the edge of a dream."
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"The voice that answered—low, clear, and distinctly amused—did not belong to a single body but to the room itself."
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"The keeper looked at me, and for a moment I thought I saw the trace of something like a smile in their expression—a smile that suggested both acknowledgment and caution."
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"The blade’s breath of cold touched my cheek; the air around us sang, a thin string of music that threaded through the grove and seemed to tie our fates to its ancient will."
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"She did not pull; she simply gripped, and with a methodical, deliberate motion she pressed the key into a small lockwork indent hidden within the pedestal's base."
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"The memory door did not swing wide; instead, it slid aside, revealing a corridor made not of air but of potential—the same corridor shown in the reflection, but now manifesting as actual passage."
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"The walls were not walls but a continuous tapestry of remembered moments—ours, theirs, and those that had never occurred but could have—woven by the grove and the will of the memory’s door."
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"The air shifted again, cooler now, and I heard a new, softer sound—a cadence, like a soft chant echoing from somewhere far away that we could not quite place."
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"The sigils did not form words but intentions—goals we had never dared to name aloud."
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"Behind them, a faint glow—like dawn caught in the teeth of a blade."
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"Not a path to victory or defeat, but a corridor of choices—the kind of corridor that would only reveal itself to those who were ready to bear the weight of what they chose."
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"The moment the doors closed behind us—quiet, inexorable, and final—the grove’s heartbeat rose to a triumphant, dangerous crescendo."
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"A crack of silence fell, and then a sudden, sharp sound split the air—a low thrum followed by the crack of a branch as if something unseen pressed against the boundary from the other side, something powerful and hungry for what we carried now."
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"Then the sound came again, closer this time—a soft, measured rustle beyond the door, a whisper that promised something terrible and necessary in equal measure."
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"From the far end of the corridor—where the double doors stood open not by fate but by choice—a figure stepped into view."
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"The figure wore garments that glowed with a spectrum of pale light, and in their eyes burned a pale, patient intelligence that looked upon us as an observer might look upon a moving spectacle—the kind of gaze that could see every thread of a tapestry and know which one would unravel us."
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"The blade in Aurora’s hand no longer felt like a mere weapon; it felt like a promise."
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"The chapter ends here, with the grove alive around us and the stranger—the keeper of memory, perhaps, perhaps simply another traveller drawn by our arrival—standing at the threshold of the memory’s door and the door to whatever future we might claim."
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"And as the figure stepped closer, the first true note of danger rang clear: we were not merely walking into a dream; we were stepping into a bargain, one that would demand everything we had and leave us with something we could not put a name to yet."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
169
technicalSentenceCount
43
matches
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"Aurora’s heartstone throbbed against her chest, a warm, stubborn pulse that refused to be ignored."
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"Light poured from inside the leaves, not folded through the sun so much as breathed from within them, a pale blue-green glow that shouldn’t have existed in a pl…"
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"Fronds brushed my wrists with a chill that remembered winter and a sweetness that remembered summer; the air carried a scent that was at once like rain on iron …"
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"They hummed faintly, not with sound but with potential, a low thrumming that threaded through my teeth and settled somewhere behind my eyes."
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"Isolde stood a few paces behind us, an pale statue with silver hair brushing the edge of her waist, eyes pale lavender that seemed to see through to us and beyo…"
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"The tree carried the scent of home and exile in equal measure, a paradox that pricked at the back of my neck."
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"The ground changed beneath our feet, shifting from glass-slick to soil that felt almost alive, like a creature under our weight."
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"The Heartstone Pendant warmed against my sternum, warm and patient, pulsing in a measured rhythm that matched the cadence of the grove itself."
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"The pendant’s crimson gemstone glowed faintly, as if it understood that we were trespassers here, but would protect us if we walked with a careful heart."
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"Nyx drifted closer to me, their form bending as if listening to something that lay just beyond perception."
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"There, the trees stood a little farther apart, and between them ran a shallow stream that did not look like water but something closer to liquid light."
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"The reflection moved in ways the real world did not: the trees in the reflection breathed in the opposite tempo, the rocks glowed with a different hue, and the …"
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"The Heartstone Pendant grew brighter, and I realised it was responding to the crack, as if the Hel-bound warmth wanted to spill out into this world and show us …"
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"Nyx crouched, melding with a shadow along the ground, and then stepped forward again in the blink of an eye, their silhouette returning to a solid shape just in…"
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"The Heartstone Pendant thrummed in my hand, a warmth that spread up my forearm and into my shoulder, as if my own blood pulsed along with it."
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"The stream’s glow intensified, and the reflection in the water resolved into something else entirely—a corridor of arching trees that didn’t exist in the real w…"
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"Isolde moved beside me, her eyes narrowing as she studied the doorway without crossing it."
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"The Blood-rose at my neck—well, the one I wore as a talisman—flickered in my peripheral vision, as if trying to decide whether to spring into life and save us o…"
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"I caught sight of something beyond the archway—a silhouette, pale and almost translucent, gliding between the trees as if it had no intention of staying, yet dr…"
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"The air around us grew cooler, the glow brighter, and the ground beneath us changed again, becoming a layered mosaic of light and colour that felt not like grou…"
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"The second doorway sighed open, releasing a corridor of dream-threads that stretched into a space that had no end."
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"In the centre stood a pedestal of carved wood and bone, upon which rested a single object: a small, crystalline key—like an icicle that remembered warmth—faintl…"
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"The key radiated a soft, pale blue light, not of ice, but of something colder than ice and warmer than starlight, a paradox that slid into my chest and hummed i…"
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"Isolde moved closer to the pedestal, her gaze sweeping the room in a way that reminded me of looking into a well and seeing your own reflection multiplied in th…"
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"Nyx slid to the edge of the glass shelf encircling the pedestal, their shadow rippling along its surface with a soft hiss."
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"The key’s glow intensified as if answering a question none of us had voiced aloud, and the room’s walls, made of glass and night, carried the whisper of countle…"
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"The corridor beyond—the memory-path—stood still as if awaiting a signal."
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"The room’s air thickened, heavy with the scent of lilac and old copper again, but this time it carried a note of something sharper, something that tasted like r…"
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"The moment stretched long enough for us to feel the quiet tremble of the grove’s heart, the ambient thrumming rising into a chorus that wanted to swallow our na…"
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"The voice that answered—low, clear, and distinctly amused—did not belong to a single body but to the room itself."
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"Then she moved forward with a smooth, decisive motion, drawing the Fae-Forged Blade from its sheath with a sound that spoke of old promises and new decisions."
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"We crossed the threshold into the corridor, a place that did not belong to any map, a place that tasted of old rain and the sweetness of fear acknowledged and n…"
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"I felt the syllable land in my mind as clearly as if I had spoken it aloud, and I knew the grove had chosen us: Isolde’s truths would guide us, Nyx’s shadows wo…"
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"Here the walls pulsed with a living light, and the floor bore lines of shifting sigils that rearranged themselves under our feet as we walked."
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"And at the far end stood a final door, double doors carved from a single piece of glass that looked like water frozen in place."
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"Then it opened with a sigh of cooling wind, revealing a final, pale corridor that stretched into a glimmering distance."
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"Not a path to victory or defeat, but a corridor of choices—the kind of corridor that would only reveal itself to those who were ready to bear the weight of what…"
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"The corridor brightened, the light painting our faces with a soft, reflective glow that made our eyes seem to belong to someone else, something other."
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"A crack of silence fell, and then a sudden, sharp sound split the air—a low thrum followed by the crack of a branch as if something unseen pressed against the b…"
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"Then the sound came again, closer this time—a soft, measured rustle beyond the door, a whisper that promised something terrible and necessary in equal measure."
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"The figure wore garments that glowed with a spectrum of pale light, and in their eyes burned a pale, patient intelligence that looked upon us as an observer mig…"
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"The air thickened with the sense of something ancient awakening, something that had waited long enough for us to prove ourselves to the grove."
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"The corridor ahead glowed with a pale certainty, the kind that says, without words, that we are about to walk into something that will change us forever."