| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 716 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 716 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
| | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "intricate" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "firmly" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "stark" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "fragmented" | | 13 | "tapestry" | | 14 | "enigmatic" | | 15 | "profound" | | 16 | "the last thing" | | 17 | "echoing" | | 18 | "cacophony" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 85.32% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "A flicker of unease" | | 1 | "felt a shiver" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 717 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 706 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.84 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.579 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "pulsing that seemed to respond to the pendant's warmth" | | 1 | "seemed amplified a stark discordance that cut through the air like a cold knife" | | 2 | "as if sensing the connection it shared with Rory" | | 3 | "quite grasp, yet the meaning hung heavy in her mind" | | 4 | "felt like she was drowning" | | 5 | "terror that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 717 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 51.21 | | std | 24.65 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 113 | | matches | | |
| 74.83% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant flared to a brilliant warmth, and a vision burst into Rory's mind – a fragmented tapestry of images that danced with eerie speed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 705 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.029787234042553193 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00851063829787234 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 42 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 42 | | mean | 17.07 | | std | 6.9 | | cv | 0.404 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 30 |
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| 58.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.38095238095238093 | | totalSentences | 42 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the flicker grew, became" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Their intricate patterns seemed to" | | 1 | "She wandered further into the" | | 2 | "It was a soft hum," | | 3 | "she called out, the words" | | 4 | "She froze, her heart pounding" | | 5 | "It was tall and gaunt," |
| | ratio | 0.143 | |
| 7.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" | | 2 | "Their intricate patterns seemed to" | | 3 | "A soft hush fell over" | | 4 | "She wandered further into the" | | 5 | "Each stone bore the scars" | | 6 | "Rory felt a thread of" | | 7 | "The connection sent a shiver" | | 8 | "A low murmur caught her" | | 9 | "It was a soft hum," | | 10 | "Rory's skin prickled as she" | | 11 | "Shadows writhed across the trees" | | 12 | "A flicker of unease danced" | | 13 | "she called out, the words" | | 14 | "The hum ceased, and the" | | 15 | "The air remained heavy, weighed" | | 16 | "Rory took a slow step" | | 17 | "The trees seemed to loom" | | 18 | "A dry leaf fell to" | | 19 | "The sound was the only" |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was heavy with the sweet scent of wildflowers that bloomed in shades of purple, blue, and white." | | 1 | "A soft hush fell over her as the gentle breeze carried the distant hum of crickets, the only sound that broke the stillness." | | 2 | "The sound was the only thing that broke the silence, yet it seemed amplified, a stark discordance that cut through the air like a cold knife." | | 3 | "The pendant flared to a brilliant warmth, and a vision burst into Rory's mind – a fragmented tapestry of images that danced with eerie speed." | | 4 | "Places, faces, and events swirled through her consciousness, each snapshot a key to unlocking the secrets of the Heartstone and the enigmatic figure that stood …" | | 5 | "The last thing she remembered was the sound of her own screams echoing through the void, a cacophony of terror that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere a…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, the words barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "the figure whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |