| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His lips curled just [just]" | | 1 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "He stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.371 | | leniency | 0.742 | | rawRatio | 0.13 | | effectiveRatio | 0.097 | |
| 73.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "simmering" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "glistening" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "desire" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "stomach dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1309 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "know" | | 1 | "enthusiastic" | | 2 | "fuck" | | 3 | "good" | | 4 | "this" | | 5 | "me" | | 6 | "“She’s been bitten. Again.”" | | 7 | "own" | | 8 | "good" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 988 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.994 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1309 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 24.7 | | std | 18.02 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 91 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 50 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 94.41% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "been forced" | | 1 | "been stretched" | | 2 | "were filled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside hit her like a physical blow—warm, thick with the scent of spiced tea and something sharper, like old leather and gunpowder." | | 1 | "His suit was immaculate—charcoal, tailored to the point of being sculptural—and yet there was something about the way he held himself that made her think of a wolf in a tailored coat." | | 2 | "She grabbed the envelope, her fingers brushing against something inside—paper, thin and brittle." | | 3 | "It wasn’t just the tension—it was something older, something that had been simmering beneath the surface since the last time they’d been this close." | | 4 | "“Am I?” He reached out, his fingers brushing the inside of her wrist—not touching, just hovering, like he was testing the air." | | 5 | "She’d cut herself—somehow, in the chaos of the moment, she’d torn the skin open." | | 6 | "The pages were filled with neat, precise handwriting—dates, times, observations." |
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| 86.17% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1001 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, leather-bound journal." |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04895104895104895 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01098901098901099 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 9.76 | | std | 6.78 | | cv | 0.694 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 45.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.27611940298507465 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 71.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he reached into his" | | 1 | "Instead, he tilted her wrist," |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 35.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, stepping back instinctively" | | 1 | "His suit was immaculate—charcoal, tailored" | | 2 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 3 | "She exhaled sharply, her shoulders" | | 4 | "She knew that envelope." | | 5 | "His lips curled, just slightly" | | 6 | "She grabbed the envelope, her" | | 7 | "she said, her voice colder" | | 8 | "He chuckled, low and dark" | | 9 | "It wasn’t just the tension—it" | | 10 | "he observed, nodding at the" | | 11 | "Her breath hitched." | | 12 | "he cut in, voice dropping" | | 13 | "She stared at him, her" | | 14 | "He reached out, his fingers" | | 15 | "She’d cut herself—somehow, in the" | | 16 | "She swallowed hard, her voice" | | 17 | "He stepped closer, his presence" | | 18 | "His hand shot out, fingers" | | 19 | "She gasped, her body arching" |
| | ratio | 0.462 | |
| 19.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "The air inside hit her" | | 2 | "Rory froze on the threshold," | | 3 | "she muttered, stepping back instinctively" | | 4 | "The flat’s entrance was a" | | 5 | "A shadow detached itself from" | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, his" | | 7 | "The amber eye caught the" | | 8 | "His suit was immaculate—charcoal, tailored" | | 9 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 10 | "She exhaled sharply, her shoulders" | | 11 | "Lucien didn’t answer right away." | | 12 | "The corner of it was" | | 13 | "Rory’s stomach dropped." | | 14 | "She knew that envelope." | | 15 | "His lips curled, just slightly" | | 16 | "She grabbed the envelope, her" | | 17 | "A contract, probably." | | 18 | "The kind that had her" | | 19 | "she said, her voice colder" |
| | ratio | 0.882 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Because she’d been lying to" | | 1 | "Because she’d been running from" | | 2 | "Because she knew he was" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory froze on the threshold, her fingers tightening around the worn leather satchel she’d been carrying, its edges digging into her palm." | | 1 | "His suit was immaculate—charcoal, tailored to the point of being sculptural—and yet there was something about the way he held himself that made her think of a w…" | | 2 | "It wasn’t just the tension—it was something older, something that had been simmering beneath the surface since the last time they’d been this close." | | 3 | "Rory gasped, her body arching into him, her fingers tangling in his hair." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice colder than she intended" | | 1 | "Lucien leaned, his cane forgotten" | | 2 | "he cut in, voice dropping to something that made her skin prickle" | | 3 | "She swallowed, her voice shaking" | | 4 | "He stepped, his presence swallowing the space between them" | | 5 | "he murmured, his breath hot against her ear" | | 6 | "she whispered, her voice breaking" | | 7 | "he said, his voice a low rumble" | | 8 | "He stepped back, his voice dropping to something that made her shiver" | | 9 | "He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist" | | 10 | "He stepped, his presence swallowing the space between them" | | 11 | "he murmured, his voice rough with desire" |
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| 53.23% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "He chuckled (chuckle)" | | 2 | "he observed (observe)" | | 3 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.161 | | leniency | 0.323 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.194 | |