Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNPMGW6MQZDF93FQNFR

Run Details

Duration:
5.9s
Cost:
$0.000070

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of *The Raven’s Nest* pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the damp London night, casting long shadows across the worn wooden floors. Aurora Carter—Rory—paused at the door, her fingers brushing the handle before she pulled it open. The scent of aged whiskey and damp stone wrapped around her, familiar yet different now. She’d come here often as a student, but this place felt older, heavier. Inside, the bar was nearly empty except for a single figure hunched over a stool by the back counter, a half-empty glass of something amber in hand. Silas Blackwood didn’t look up as she stepped inside, but his voice cut through the quiet like a blade. *"You’re late."* She exhaled sharply, the sound catching in her throat. The scar on her wrist—childhood, a broken bike chain—twitched beneath her sleeve. *"I told you I’d be here."* Silas didn’t move, but the way his jaw tightened told her he’d been waiting. The bar’s walls were lined with maps and old photos, some faded, others still sharp with detail. A framed newspaper clipping from Prague hung above the counter, the date stamped in ink long since faded. *"You look different."* The words hung between them, thick with unspoken years. She turned, her black hair catching the dim light, the weight of it shifting as she adjusted her grip on the strap of her bag. *"You look… older."* Silas finally looked up, his hazel eyes sharp, his auburn hair streaked with silver now, the beard he’d always worn neat and precise. *"So do you."* A silence settled, thick as the air in the back room where they’d once shared secrets. The hum of distant conversation from the main bar faded, swallowed by the weight of what came next. She crossed her arms, the scar on her wrist pressing against her skin. *"You’re not the same man who walked out of that door in Prague."* Silas didn’t deny it. *"No. I’m not."* She stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—something sharp, like old leather and something darker—filling her nose. *"You should’ve stayed."* His voice was low, rough. *"I tried."* The words hit like a punch. The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across the counter. *"You always did."* Silas reached for his glass, his hand steady despite the limp in his leg. *"I lost something important there. You know that."* She didn’t answer. Instead, she turned back toward the door, her fingers tightening on the strap of her bag. *"I have to go."* *"Wait."* The word was barely a breath, but it hung in the air like a promise. She didn’t look back. The bar’s neon sign flickered again, casting a green glow over the maps and photos. Outside, the city hummed, indifferent to the weight between them. Silas called her name again, softer this time. *"Rory."* She didn’t turn. *"I can’t."* The door swung shut behind her, the lock clicking into place with a finality that made her stomach twist. She didn’t look back. The city lights blurred as she stepped into the night, the weight of what had been said pressing down on her like a physical force. Somewhere ahead, the distant sound of a car engine roared to life, the rhythm of it a reminder of the life she’d left behind. She didn’t look back. The past was a ghost she couldn’t chase anymore.
total_cost0.00007

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount567
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount567
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"familiar"
2"unspoken"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"stomach"
7"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords60
totalWords560
ratio0.107
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"\"You’re late.\""
2"\"I told you I’d be here.\""
3"\"You look different.\""
4"\"You look… older.\""
5"\"So do you.\""
6"\"You’re not the same man who walked out of that door in Prague.\""
7"\"No. I’m not.\""
8"\"You should’ve stayed.\""
9"\"I tried.\""
10"\"You always did.\""
11"\"I lost something important there. You know that.\""
12"\"I have to go.\""
13"\"Wait.\""
14"\"Rory.\""
15"\"I can’t.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount503
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
London1
Carter1
Rory1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.904
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount560
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean28
std19.66
cv0.702
sampleLengths
068
146
22
327
452
537
626
760
87
920
107
1119
1222
1323
141
1544
169
175
1848
1937
86.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences37
matches
0"were lined"
1"been said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs75
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences52
ratio0.058
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory—paused at the door, her fingers brushing the handle before she pulled it open."
1"The scar on her wrist—childhood, a broken bike chain—twitched beneath her sleeve."
2"She stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—something sharp, like old leather and something darker—filling her nose."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount510
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03137254901960784
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00784313725490196
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean10.77
std7.49
cv0.695
sampleLengths
025
115
215
313
427
519
62
79
812
96
1014
1117
1218
133
149
1525
163
1723
183
1916
2018
2113
2213
234
243
2517
263
275
282
296
3010
313
3214
338
343
3516
364
371
3815
394
4015
4110
428
431
443
452
4619
474
4825
4924
49.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners16
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences37
matches
0"Instead, she turned back toward"
1"Somewhere ahead, the distant sound"
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences37
matches
0"She’d come here often as"
1"She exhaled sharply, the sound"
2"She turned, her black hair"
3"She crossed her arms, the"
4"She stepped closer, the scent"
5"His voice was low, rough."
6"She didn’t answer."
7"She didn’t look back."
8"She didn’t turn."
9"She didn’t look back."
10"She didn’t look back."
ratio0.297
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences37
matches
0"The neon glow of *The"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory—paused at the door,"
2"The scent of aged whiskey"
3"She’d come here often as"
4"Silas Blackwood didn’t look up"
5"She exhaled sharply, the sound"
6"The scar on her wrist—childhood,"
7"Silas didn’t move, but the"
8"The bar’s walls were lined"
9"A framed newspaper clipping from"
10"The words hung between them,"
11"She turned, her black hair"
12"Silas finally looked up, his"
13"A silence settled, thick as"
14"The hum of distant conversation"
15"She crossed her arms, the"
16"Silas didn’t deny it."
17"She stepped closer, the scent"
18"His voice was low, rough."
19"The words hit like a"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.0416%