Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNQVRY99YJKM0M465WS

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Duration:
35.7s
Cost:
$0.001103

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest had a hush about it, the kind that settled like dust in the corners, wrapped in the scent of aged whiskey and wood polish. Roars of laughter and clinks of glasses drifted around the dimly lit space, but the back corner where Aurora sat remained untouched by the bustling crowd. She traced a fingertip over the small crescent scar on her left wrist, recalling the day it happened—a careless tumble, a forgotten childhood. The memory tugged at her, a reminder of a past she often wished to escape. Across the bar, Silas Blackwood poured a pint with precision, the amber liquid gliding into the glass, sparkles catching light from the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance. His grey-streaked auburn hair gleamed under the soft glow, and the neatly trimmed beard spoke of a man who hadn’t stopped caring. Yet, there was something—an air of authority mixed with longing, a hint of history behind those hazel eyes, which seemed to see right through the walls of silence built over years without contact. “How’s the delivery game treating you?” Silas called to Aurora, polishing the bar top as he leaned closer, the slight limp in his left leg barely noticeable. “Busy,” she replied, forcing a smile. “But it’s good to keep moving, right?” “Right,” he nodded, a knowing glance flickered before he poured another drink for a customer. Aurora shifted on her barstool, scanning the room. The walls of The Raven's Nest breathed stories. Muffled secrets lingered in the musty air; she couldn’t shake the impression that each silence echoed of past conversations, lost friends, and choices never made. Silas returned to her side, a pint in hand. He set it in front of her, “On the house. Figured you could use it.” “Thanks,” she said, taking a sip. The bitterness smoothed the edges of her thoughts. “You know, this place could use some of that delivery energy. I’ve got old maps and photographs begging for some company.” A twinkle sparked in his eyes, but it was quickly replaced with a serious demeanor. “Maps and photographs?” She raised an eyebrow. “You still keeping tabs on the world out there?” “Always. Old habits die hard, Rory.” Leaning on the bar, he observed her, taking in the subtle changes—how her black hair framed her striking blue eyes, the way she held her body, like she was both here and somewhere far away. Aurora forced a chuckle. “I figured you’d traded in spy games for pouring drinks and chatting up patrons.” Silas’s laughter echoed, warm and familiar. “Not much of a retirement plan, is it? Just a change of scenery.” The pulse of nostalgia settled thick between them. A shadow passed across Aurora’s face. “Some scenery suits some people,” she murmured. “Been a while since we last caught up. What, five years?” Silas leaned against the bar, crossing his arms. “What’s been keeping you busy?” “Just the usual,” she said, avoiding his gaze. “School, work. You know how it goes.” She glanced at the crowd as though trying to find a refuge in their laughter. “Or trying to escape?” Silas offered, his voice low, eyes intense. Rory swirled her drink, the ice cracking under the pressure. “Is that what you think? That I’m running?” “Sometimes running leads—” “To nowhere?” she interjected, leaning forward. “I’m not running, Silas. I’m building.” “Building what?” He squinted, his expression hardening. “A delivery route?” “Dammit!” The sudden burst startled a nearby couple. “I’m serious. You think just because I work at a restaurant, I’m built to sit at a bar for the rest of my life?” The warmth in her fingertips began to dissipate, replaced by the cold glass. Silas relaxed a fraction, his voice quieting. “Forgive me. I meant no offense. You’ve always been clever, Rory. I just don’t want to see you lose sight of who you are.” “What’s that supposed to mean?” She leaned back, arms folding across her chest. “Last time I saw you—” Silas paused. The weight of the statement hung in the air across their table. “It was daunting.” “You mean Evan?” Her voice was steady, but beneath it, tremors quaked. Silas nodded, eyes narrowing. “You don’t have to talk about it, but I’m worried you might still carry him with you.” Aurora stared into the depths of her pint, feeling its cold condensation drip onto her palm. “I left him behind. That should matter, shouldn’t it?” “Yes, but leaving doesn’t always mean moving on.” She shrugged, a flicker of vulnerability crossed her face. “I’m here. That counts for something, doesn’t it? I survived, Silas.” “You turned up to hide in a bar.” He waved an arm toward the establishment. “We both know this isn’t the endgame.” “Life’s messy. Sometimes I wonder if we really know where we’re going.” “Sure we don’t,” he replied softly. “You went off to be a spy.” Her words dripped with irony. “What the hell did that get you? A bar?” Silas held her gaze, unflinching. “No one ever knows the kind of weight they carry until it becomes too heavy. I carry mine just like you.” “What do you mean?” “I had regrets—people I didn’t save, chances I didn’t take.” A tightness crept into Aurora’s throat. “You think it’s easy, watching everything fall apart and not being able to fix it?” “Not easy at all. But you can’t stop trying.” “Can’t?” Her voice rose with indignation. “I’ve learned to protect myself. I used to trust, but that got me—” “Evan,” he interjected sharply, and Aurora flinched. “You swore you’d never let that man anchor you. But here we are.” “Stop.” She snapped, fists tightening. “You don’t know what’s been happening in my life or what I’ve sacrificed. Don’t act like you’ve got it all figured out.” A moment stretched between them, raw tension crackling with unspoken truths. In the dim light, fragments of past selves lingered, haunting them both—a girl who dreamed of breaking free and a man with scars inked deeper than skin. “Where do we go from here?” Silas asked at last, his voice low, almost tender. Aurora caught her breath, feeling distant yet tethered. “I don’t know, but I don’t want to turn back.” The vibrations of the bar pulsed back into existence, loud laughter erupting from the opposite end and shattering their momentary seclusion. The mundane world of clinking glasses and casual conversation surged forth again, their brief encounter becoming just an echo in the chaotic noise around them. “Then don’t,” Silas spoke, determination threading his voice. “Let the past fuel you, not bind you. We’ll sort this out together, maybe even understand what’s worth holding onto.” She looked at him then, a sense of unshed tears lurking at the corners of her vision. Something between them shifted, a recognition of shared battles fought in secret and the promise of a better future that still flickered in the shadows. The night stretched on, filled with unasked questions, but for now, Aurora savored the possibility of something new igniting in the spaces between them.
total_cost0.00110325

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She leaned back [back]"
1"he replied softly [softly]"
2"he interjected sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.107
effectiveRatio0.107
83.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"encounter"
count1
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"chaotic"
count1
19
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"reminder"
2"silence"
3"flickered"
4"scanning"
5"echoed"
6"eyebrow"
7"familiar"
8"pulse"
9"warmth"
10"weight"
11"depths"
12"flicker"
13"tension"
14"unspoken"
15"pulsed"
16"encounter"
17"echo"
18"chaotic"
19"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences60
matches
0"d with longing"
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1173
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount720
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora10
Silas12
Blackwood1
Leaning1
Rory1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.667
windowScore0.5
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though trying to find a refuge in their laughter"
1"Something between them shifted, a recognition o"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1173
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean23.94
std16.85
cv0.704
sampleLengths
091
184
227
313
415
541
624
714
836
916
1041
1118
1227
1313
1424
1530
1611
1718
183
1912
2010
2145
2231
2313
2422
2512
2621
2725
288
2920
3022
3112
326
3321
3426
354
3610
3721
389
3919
4020
4127
4238
4315
4418
4546
4628
4742
4824
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences87
ratio0.057
matches
0"She traced a fingertip over the small crescent scar on her left wrist, recalling the day it happened—a careless tumble, a forgotten childhood."
1"Yet, there was something—an air of authority mixed with longing, a hint of history behind those hazel eyes, which seemed to see right through the walls of silence built over years without contact."
2"Muffled secrets lingered in the musty air; she couldn’t shake the impression that each silence echoed of past conversations, lost friends, and choices never made."
3"“Always. Old habits die hard, Rory.” Leaning on the bar, he observed her, taking in the subtle changes—how her black hair framed her striking blue eyes, the way she held her body, like she was both here and somewhere far away."
4"In the dim light, fragments of past selves lingered, haunting them both—a girl who dreamed of breaking free and a man with scars inked deeper than skin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount725
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.022068965517241378
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008275862068965517
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean13.48
std8.62
cv0.64
sampleLengths
027
126
223
315
429
522
633
727
86
97
1015
118
128
1325
149
1515
166
178
1836
197
209
2141
224
2314
246
2521
266
277
2819
295
308
3122
3211
3310
348
353
366
376
387
393
408
4137
427
4324
4413
457
4612
473
4812
494
92.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5632183908045977
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences58
matches
0"She traced a fingertip over"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair gleamed"
2"she replied, forcing a smile"
3"he nodded, a knowing glance"
4"He set it in front"
5"she said, taking a sip"
6"She raised an eyebrow"
7"she said, avoiding his gaze"
8"She glanced at the crowd"
9"she interjected, leaning forward"
10"He squinted, his expression hardening"
11"She leaned back, arms folding"
12"Her voice was steady, but"
13"She shrugged, a flicker of"
14"He waved an arm toward"
15"he replied softly"
16"Her words dripped with irony"
17"Her voice rose with indignation"
18"he interjected sharply, and Aurora"
19"She snapped, fists tightening"
ratio0.362
11.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences58
matches
0"The Raven's Nest had a"
1"She traced a fingertip over"
2"The memory tugged at her,"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair gleamed"
4"Silas called to Aurora, polishing"
5"she replied, forcing a smile"
6"he nodded, a knowing glance"
7"Aurora shifted on her barstool,"
8"The walls of The Raven's"
9"Silas returned to her side,"
10"He set it in front"
11"she said, taking a sip"
12"The bitterness smoothed the edges"
13"A twinkle sparked in his"
14"She raised an eyebrow"
15"Aurora forced a chuckle."
16"Silas’s laughter echoed, warm and"
17"The pulse of nostalgia settled"
18"A shadow passed across Aurora’s"
19"Silas leaned against the bar,"
ratio0.897
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Yet, there was something—an air"
ratio0.017
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair gleamed under the soft glow, and the neatly trimmed beard spoke of a man who hadn’t stopped caring."
1"Yet, there was something—an air of authority mixed with longing, a hint of history behind those hazel eyes, which seemed to see right through the walls of silen…"
2"In the dim light, fragments of past selves lingered, haunting them both—a girl who dreamed of breaking free and a man with scars inked deeper than skin."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas offered, his voice low, eyes intense"
1"He squinted, his expression hardening"
2"She leaned back, arms folding across her chest"
3"She snapped, fists tightening"
4"Silas asked, his voice low, almost tender"
5"Silas spoke, determination threading his voice"
42.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"the bar he observed (observe)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she interjected (interject)"
3"he interjected sharply (interject)"
4"She snapped (snap)"
5"Silas spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.214
73.6789%