Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNQZ921X5G0NHVRGPMY

Run Details

Duration:
19.8s
Cost:
$0.013997
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, and the soft strains of jazz from a hidden speaker. The green neon sign outside cast a ghostly glow through the windows, painting the patrons in shades of emerald. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, slipped through the door, her eyes scanning the room with a practiced ease. She wore a leather jacket over her delivery uniform, the logo of Golden Empress peeking out from beneath. Her bright blue eyes, sharp and observant, settled on the bar where Silas Blackwood stood, his presence commanding even in the dim light. "Rory," Silas greeted, his voice a gravelly rumble that matched the bar's ambiance. He leaned slightly on his good leg, the other still bearing the weight of old injuries. "You're early." "Thought I'd grab a drink before the shift," Rory replied, sliding onto a stool. Her fingers brushed the crescent scar on her wrist, a subconscious habit when she was deep in thought. Silas nodded, pouring her a glass of something amber and warm. "On the house." She took a sip, savoring the burn. "Thanks, Si." The door swung open again, and a gust of cold air swept through the bar. Rory turned, her gaze catching on a figure framed in the doorway. He was tall, with a lean build and a face that seemed both familiar and foreign. His hair, once a wild mane of curls, was now cropped short, and his eyes, once full of mischief, held a shadow of something she couldn't quite place. "Evan," she breathed, the name slipping out before she could stop it. He hesitated, his eyes meeting hers with a flicker of recognition. "Rory." The name hung between them, a bridge to a past neither had fully left behind. He approached, his movements cautious, as if testing the waters of an uncertain sea. "Didn't expect to see you here," Rory said, her voice steady despite the sudden rush of memories. "Same," Evan replied, taking the seat beside her. "I heard you were in London, but I didn't think..." "That we'd run into each other?" Rory finished for him, a wry smile tugging at her lips. "Small world." Silas watched them with a knowing look, his hands busy polishing a glass. "Old friends?" "Something like that," Rory answered, her eyes never leaving Evan's face. Evan chuckled, though it lacked the warmth she remembered. "Yeah, something like that." Silas moved away, giving them space, his limp barely noticeable as he disappeared into the back room. The bar seemed to close in around them, the noise fading to a distant hum. "You've changed," Rory observed, her gaze tracing the lines of his face, the set of his jaw. "So have you," Evan countered, his eyes lingering on her scar. "But some things stay the same." "Like what?" "Like the way you look at people. Always trying to figure them out." Rory shrugged, a hint of defiance in her posture. "Old habits." Evan nodded, his expression softening. "I missed that." Silence settled between them, heavy with the weight of unspoken words. Rory took another sip of her drink, the warmth spreading through her chest. "Why are you here, Evan?" she asked, cutting through the quiet. He hesitated, his fingers tracing the edge of the bar. "I needed a change. Thought London might be a good place to start over." "Running away again?" "Maybe," he admitted, a hint of vulnerability in his voice. "But it's different this time." "How so?" "I'm not running from you," he said, meeting her gaze with a steadiness that surprised her. "I'm running towards something." Rory considered his words, the sincerity in his eyes. "And what is that?" "Redemption, I guess. A chance to make things right." She studied him, the years of distance and silence falling away. "Do you think that's possible?" "I hope so," Evan replied, his voice barely above a whisper. "I want to believe it is." Rory nodded, the tension between them easing, if only slightly. "It's not easy, you know. Facing the past." "I know," he said, a shadow passing over his features. "But I have to try." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Rory glanced at the clock, the hands ticking towards the start of her shift. "I should go," she said, sliding off the stool. "Work." Evan stood, his movements mirroring hers. "Can we talk again? Properly, I mean." She hesitated, the past and present colliding in her mind. "Maybe." He nodded, accepting the uncertainty. "I'll be around." Rory turned to leave, her heart a mix of emotions she couldn't quite untangle. As she reached the door, she paused, looking back at him. "Evan," she called, her voice carrying across the room. He looked up, hope flickering in his eyes. "Take care of yourself," she said, a small smile playing on her lips. "You too, Rory," he replied, his voice warm with gratitude. She stepped out into the night, the cold air biting at her skin. The streets of Soho stretched out before her, a labyrinth of possibilities and paths yet to be taken. As she walked, the weight of the past felt lighter, the promise of the future just within reach.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount877
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount877
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"tracing"
count2
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"practiced ease"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"flicker"
5"warmth"
6"tracing"
7"silence"
8"unspoken"
9"whisper"
10"tension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
1"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords877
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount690
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory13
Golden1
Empress1
Silas5
Blackwood1
Evan7
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Empress"
5"Silas"
6"Blackwood"
7"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.558
windowScore0.5
13.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite place"
1"as if testing the waters of an uncertain sea"
2"quite untangle"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount877
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean19.07
std17.35
cv0.91
sampleLengths
0104
131
232
314
49
571
612
712
829
917
1018
1119
1215
1311
1413
1532
1617
1717
182
1913
2011
218
2224
2311
2424
253
2615
272
2820
2913
309
3116
3217
3318
3415
3527
3610
3713
3811
398
4025
419
428
4313
4410
4549
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences85
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount690
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02318840579710145
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013043478260869565
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean10.32
std5.8
cv0.562
sampleLengths
024
119
220
318
423
513
616
72
814
918
1011
113
127
132
1415
1512
1616
1728
1812
1911
201
2115
2214
2317
248
2510
2617
272
2813
292
3011
319
324
3317
3415
3517
3611
376
382
3913
409
412
425
433
4411
4513
4611
4710
4814
493
69.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4470588235294118
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences57
matches
0"She wore a leather jacket"
1"Her bright blue eyes, sharp"
2"He leaned slightly on his"
3"Her fingers brushed the crescent"
4"She took a sip, savoring"
5"He was tall, with a"
6"His hair, once a wild"
7"she breathed, the name slipping"
8"He hesitated, his eyes meeting"
9"He approached, his movements cautious,"
10"she asked, cutting through the"
11"He hesitated, his fingers tracing"
12"he admitted, a hint of"
13"he said, meeting her gaze"
14"She studied him, the years"
15"he said, a shadow passing"
16"They sat in silence, the"
17"she said, sliding off the"
18"She hesitated, the past and"
19"He nodded, accepting the uncertainty."
ratio0.439
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences57
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Aurora Carter, known to most"
3"She wore a leather jacket"
4"Her bright blue eyes, sharp"
5"Silas greeted, his voice a"
6"He leaned slightly on his"
7"Rory replied, sliding onto a"
8"Her fingers brushed the crescent"
9"Silas nodded, pouring her a"
10"She took a sip, savoring"
11"The door swung open again,"
12"Rory turned, her gaze catching"
13"He was tall, with a"
14"His hair, once a wild"
15"she breathed, the name slipping"
16"He hesitated, his eyes meeting"
17"The name hung between them,"
18"He approached, his movements cautious,"
19"Rory said, her voice steady"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He was tall, with a lean build and a face that seemed both familiar and foreign."
1"He approached, his movements cautious, as if testing the waters of an uncertain sea."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Silas greeted, his voice a gravelly rumble that matched the bar's ambiance"
1"she breathed, the name slipping out before she could stop it"
2"Rory said, her voice steady despite the sudden rush of memories"
3"Rory finished, a wry smile tugging at her lips"
4"Evan countered, his eyes lingering on her scar"
5"he admitted, a hint of vulnerability in his voice"
6"Evan replied, his voice barely above a whisper"
7"he said, a shadow passing over his features"
8"she called, her voice carrying across the room"
9"she said, a small smile playing on her lips"
84.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"Rory observed (observe)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.652
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.13
73.5500%