Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNSD7YKE59H81B9RC63

Run Details

Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.000703
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was as dimly lit as ever, the green neon sign above the entrance casting an eerie glow into the street. Inside, the walls were adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, each one a story in its own right. The air was thick with the scent of aged wood and the faint aroma of spiced ale. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, slid into a booth in the corner, her black hair falling smoothly over her shoulders. She adjusted her delivery bag on the seat beside her, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. The bar was nearly empty, save for a few regulars nursing their drinks at the counter. Silas, the bar owner, was wiping down the wood with a rag, his neatly trimmed beard matching the grey streaks in his auburn hair. Rory's thoughts wandered to the conversation she had with Silas earlier that day. He had always been a mentor to her, offering advice and a listening ear. But tonight, she felt a restlessness she couldn't shake. Maybe it was the rain outside, or maybe it was something else entirely. She reached for her glass of water, her reflection in the dark liquid momentarily capturing her attention. The door jingled, and a figure stepped inside, shaking rain from their coat. Rory's heart skipped a beat. It was Eva, her childhood friend and the reason she had fled to London years ago. Eva's hair, once a wild mane of chestnut curls, was now sleek and straight, tied back in a neat ponytail. Her eyes, once full of mischief, were guarded, a change Rory hadn't expected. "Eva," Rory whispered, standing up. Eva's gaze flickered with surprise, then softened. "Rory. I didn't expect to see you here," she said, her voice a blend of familiarity and distance. "Silas said you stopped by earlier," Rory replied, gesturing to the booth. "Can you believe it's been six years?" Eva nodded, sliding into the seat across from Rory. "It's been a long time. You look good," she added, and there was a sincerity in her tone that made Rory's guard lower a fraction. "Thanks. So do you. What have you been up to?" Eva's fingers played with the edge of the table, a nervous habit Rory remembered all too well. "I've been working in finance. Long hours, but it pays the bills. How about you?" Rory shrugged. "I'm a delivery person for Yu-Fei's restaurant. It's not much, but it's honest work. And it keeps me busy." "There's more to you than that, Rory. You always had bigger plans." Rory smiled, a mix of pride and regret in her eyes. "Maybe. But life has a funny way of changing those plans." Silas approached the table, his steps deliberate despite the slight limp in his left leg. "Eva, good to see you back. Can I get you something to drink?" Eva glanced up, meeting Silas's hazel eyes. "A whiskey, please. Straight up." "Coming right up," Silas said, his voice steady and warm. He turned to Rory. "You need a refill?" "No, I'm good. Thanks." Silas nodded and retreated behind the bar. Eva watched him go, a thoughtful expression on her face. "How's he doing?" Eva asked, her voice low. "He's doing well. Keeps the bar running like a well-oiled machine. He's more than just a bar owner, you know. He's got a network of people he helps out, in his own way." Eva's eyebrows raised. "That sounds familiar. You ever think about getting back into law?" Rory sighed, running a hand through her hair. "Sometimes. But it's just not the right time. There's too much else going on right now." Eva nodded, her expression unreadable. "I get that. We all have our reasons for taking different paths." Silas returned, placing a glass of whiskey in front of Eva. She took a sip, the liquid warming her throat. "Thanks, Silas." He gave a nod and walked away, leaving them to their conversation. The silence that followed was thick with unspoken words. Rory fidgeted with the hem of her shirt, her mind racing. She remembered the days when she and Eva were inseparable, their laughter echoing through the streets of Cardiff. Those days seemed like a lifetime ago. "I heard about Evan," Eva said, breaking the silence. "I'm sorry, Rory." Rory's gaze hardened, and she clenched her jaw. "It's in the past. I don't want to talk about it." Eva's expression softened. "I understand. But sometimes, it's important to face the things that hurt us, to move past them." Rory's eyes narrowed, a flash of anger in their bright blue depths. "You don't know what it's like. You can't just brush it off and move on." Eva held her gaze, her voice steady. "Maybe not. But you can't keep running either. You've been running since you left Cardiff. When will you stop?" Rory's breath caught in her throat, and she turned away, staring at the old maps on the wall. "I'm not running. I'm living my life." "Are you? Or are you just surviving?" The words hit Rory like a physical blow. She pushed back her chair and stood up, her chair scraping loudly against the floor. "You don't know me anymore, Eva. You left me to deal with everything on my own." Eva stood up as well, her voice shaking with emotion. "I know. And I regret it. But we both changed, Rory. We both made choices that led us here." Rory's eyes filled with tears, but she blinked them away. "Maybe you're right. But right now, I just need to be alone." She grabbed her delivery bag and walked out of the bar, the door jingling behind her. Eva watched her go, a mix of regret and understanding in her eyes. She took another sip of her whiskey, the liquid a bittersweet reminder of the weight of time and unspoken regrets. Silas returned, his eyes gentle. "She'll come around. Sometimes, it just takes a little time." Eva nodded, her shoulders sagging. "I hope so. I miss her." Silas placed a hand on her shoulder. "Give her some space, but be there when she's ready. That's all any of us can do." Eva smiled, a small but genuine one. "Thanks, Silas." He gave her a small nod and walked away, leaving her to her thoughts. The bar was quiet, the only sound the gentle clinking of glasses. Eva sipped her whiskey, her mind drifting back to the past, to the days when she and Rory were inseparable. Maybe, just maybe, they could find their way back to each other. But for now, she would wait, hopeful and patient, knowing that some things take time to heal.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"skipped a beat"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"skipped a beat"
2"flickered"
3"familiar"
4"unreadable"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"racing"
8"echoing"
9"depths"
10"reminder"
11"weight"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched her jaw"
2"The air was thick with"
3"a flash of anger"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences65
matches
0"d with surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount747
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory20
Silas9
Eva20
London1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.161
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.897
wordCount1115
matches
0"not much, but it's honest work"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean25.93
std17.25
cv0.665
sampleLengths
059
180
266
367
45
525
619
734
810
932
1021
1112
1222
1328
1412
1518
164
1717
188
1933
2014
2124
2217
2322
2412
2545
2612
2719
2820
2927
3026
3125
327
3339
3429
3522
3649
3715
3811
3924
409
4146
4229
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"were adorned"
1"were guarded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs126
matches
0"was wiping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences94
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount749
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.036048064085447265
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010680907877169559
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.86
std5.88
cv0.496
sampleLengths
023
119
217
323
417
516
624
713
814
99
1013
1117
1213
135
1416
1520
1613
175
187
1918
2012
217
229
2325
2410
2517
2615
272
2819
2912
3011
3111
3215
3313
347
355
3610
374
384
394
407
4110
428
4333
443
4511
468
4716
485
4912
46.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2765957446808511
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"Maybe it was the rain"
1"Maybe, just maybe, they could"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences64
matches
0"She adjusted her delivery bag"
1"He had always been a"
2"She reached for her glass"
3"It was Eva, her childhood"
4"Her eyes, once full of"
5"she said, her voice a"
6"she added, and there was"
7"He turned to Rory."
8"She took a sip, the"
9"He gave a nod and"
10"She remembered the days when"
11"She pushed back her chair"
12"She grabbed her delivery bag"
13"She took another sip of"
14"He gave her a small"
ratio0.234
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences64
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was as"
1"The air was thick with"
2"Aurora Carter, known to her"
3"She adjusted her delivery bag"
4"The bar was nearly empty,"
5"Silas, the bar owner, was"
6"Rory's thoughts wandered to the"
7"He had always been a"
8"She reached for her glass"
9"The door jingled, and a"
10"Rory's heart skipped a beat."
11"It was Eva, her childhood"
12"Eva's hair, once a wild"
13"Her eyes, once full of"
14"Rory whispered, standing up"
15"Eva's gaze flickered with surprise,"
16"she said, her voice a"
17"Rory replied, gesturing to the"
18"Eva nodded, sliding into the"
19"she added, and there was"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice a blend of familiarity and distance"
1"Silas said, his voice steady and warm"
2"Eva asked, her voice low"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.111
79.1055%