| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.727 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 899 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 899 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "dancing" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "dance" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "tantalizing" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "anticipation" | | 10 | "yearning" | | 11 | "symphony" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "tension" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "structure" | | 17 | "unwavering" | | 18 | "intensity" | | 19 | "enigma" | | 20 | "traced" | | 21 | "resonated" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "weight" | | 24 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 78.70% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "g in anticipation" | | 1 | "a sense of urgency" | | 2 | "d with awe" |
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| 63.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 893 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.63% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 820 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Rory | 14 | | Isolde | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Together | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.646 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 51.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if absorbing the intricate weaving of magic threading the air, letting it ripple across their being" | | 1 | "textures that seemed to shift under her touch" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 893 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 34.35 | | std | 17.85 | | cv | 0.52 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 29 |
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| 98.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could ask more, Rory heard an unexpected click—a faint metallic sound that interwove with the natural symphony around them." | | 1 | "Drifting strands of moonlight revealed a structure ahead—a shrine, almost swallowed whole by vines, its weathered surface inscribed with intricate patterns that sang of hidden truths." | | 2 | "Uncertainty mingled with awe—she was being drawn into the unknown, and curiosity demanded she follow." | | 3 | "Nyx's whisper caressed the air like a fresh breeze, carrying ancient wisdom—\"Only the grove can answer.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 796 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.018844221105527637 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008793969849246231 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 78.89% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 15.67 | | std | 5.44 | | cv | 0.347 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 72.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.45614035087719296 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, Isolde halted, her eyes" | | 1 | "Then came another sound, soft" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pale lavender eyes shimmered" | | 1 | "Her speech wove riddles, layers" | | 2 | "She felt Isolde's gift, the" | | 3 | "They paused, as if absorbing" | | 4 | "they murmured, hinting at the" | | 5 | "She felt drawn, pulled by" | | 6 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 7 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 8 | "Her eyes settled upon another" | | 9 | "She gestured to her companions," | | 10 | "Her breath hitched, and she" | | 11 | "she urged, leading them between" | | 12 | "She hesitated, the world holding" | | 13 | "It held the essence of" | | 14 | "She exchanged glances with Nyx" |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 61.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the Heartstone" | | 1 | "The clearing opened before them" | | 2 | "Rory stepped forward, her bright" | | 3 | "The world seemed to ripple" | | 4 | "The strange whisper of their" | | 5 | "Nyx's voice brushed past Rory," | | 6 | "Isolde Varga walked ahead, leaving" | | 7 | "Her pale lavender eyes shimmered" | | 8 | "Her speech wove riddles, layers" | | 9 | "Rory followed, nodding as if" | | 10 | "She felt Isolde's gift, the" | | 11 | "The air itself felt charged," | | 12 | "The scent of earth mingled" | | 13 | "Nyx glided ahead, their form" | | 14 | "They paused, as if absorbing" | | 15 | "they murmured, hinting at the" | | 16 | "The ground became softer, almost" | | 17 | "She felt drawn, pulled by" | | 18 | "Rory crouched, captivated by the" | | 19 | "Isolde mused, cryptic yet inviting" |
| | ratio | 0.796 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could ask more," |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the Heartstone Pendant hanging around her neck, feeling its faint warmth as the group passed beneath the ancient oak standing stones mark…" | | 1 | "Isolde Varga walked ahead, leaving no footprints, her silver hair blending with the ether as if the grove embraced her as one of its own." | | 2 | "She felt Isolde's gift, the cold Fae-Forged Blade, resting against her side, glowing faintly in the moonlight that filtered through impossibly thick boughs abov…" | | 3 | "Above, the sky danced with colors unseen, as if reality itself was cracking open to reveal the wonders beneath its skin." | | 4 | "They paused, as if absorbing the intricate weaving of magic threading the air, letting it ripple across their being." | | 5 | "Nyx nodded, their presence solidifying, shadows twisting at their edges." | | 6 | "She gestured to her companions, feeling a drive pulsing through her veins, compelling them forward." | | 7 | "Drifting strands of moonlight revealed a structure ahead—a shrine, almost swallowed whole by vines, its weathered surface inscribed with intricate patterns that…" | | 8 | "Rory traced the patterns, her fingers discovering textures that seemed to shift under her touch." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice steady despite the slowly rising tension" | | 1 | "Nyx noted, their voice weaving old knowledge into the present moment" | | 2 | "Rory breathed, her voice echoing with the weight of possibility" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she urged (urge)" | | 2 | "Nyx noted (note)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.727 | |