Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNWNDS4X8G8RABPVVEJ

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Duration:
13.3s
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$0.015947
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter adjusted the Heartstone Pendant hanging around her neck, feeling its faint warmth as the group passed beneath the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary. The clearing opened before them like the world taking a breath, wildflowers blooming in riotous colors and painting the earth beneath their feet. Rory stepped forward, her bright blue eyes wide as she surveyed the Fae Grove. Time twisted in this place, an hour inside could be minutes or days in the outside world, but for now, she didn't care. Beside her, Nyx hovered in their shadowy form, faintly glowing violet eyes taking in the splendor surrounding them. The world seemed to ripple around Nyx, shadows dancing like living entities as they moved. The strange whisper of their voice carried on the wind, weaving through the wildflowers. "Time never holds its grip here," Nyx's voice brushed past Rory, both a warning and a promise. Isolde Varga walked ahead, leaving no footprints, her silver hair blending with the ether as if the grove embraced her as one of its own. Her pale lavender eyes shimmered as she turned back to her companions. Her speech wove riddles, layers upon layers. "The Grove sings to those who listen truly. Hear the dance of petals, the heartbeat of the earth." Rory followed, nodding as if the Seer's cryptic words held clarity. She felt Isolde's gift, the cold Fae-Forged Blade, resting against her side, glowing faintly in the moonlight that filtered through impossibly thick boughs above. The air itself felt charged, humming with the vibrancy of a place touched by realms beyond mortal understanding. As the group ventured deeper into the grove's folds, Rory grew increasingly aware of the subtle changes in the air. The scent of earth mingled with the crisp bite of enchantment, a melody of nature at play with tantalizing notes of the unknown. Above, the sky danced with colors unseen, as if reality itself was cracking open to reveal the wonders beneath its skin. Nyx glided ahead, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal. They paused, as if absorbing the intricate weaving of magic threading the air, letting it ripple across their being. "There are whispers here older than time itself," they murmured, hinting at the grove's ancient secrets. The ground became softer, almost fluid beneath their feet, each step drawing Rory deeper into the enchantment of the grove. She felt drawn, pulled by the promise of discovery, her heart racing in anticipation. Suddenly, Isolde halted, her eyes narrowing with a curious light. At her touch, a stone seemed to shift, revealing beneath it an iridescent pool, its surface shimmering like glass. Rory crouched, captivated by the reflections, catching glimpses of scenes that danced across the surface, like visions yearning to be born. "A pathway to deeper truths," Isolde mused, cryptic yet inviting. Before she could ask more, Rory heard an unexpected click—a faint metallic sound that interwove with the natural symphony around them. She glanced at Nyx, who had paused, their eyes scanning the shadows. "Did you hear that?" Rory asked, her voice steady despite the slowly rising tension. Nyx nodded, their presence solidifying, shadows twisting at their edges. "The grove plays its tricks, revealing what was hidden." Rory's curiosity spiked. She brushed a strand of hair behind her ear, her gaze sweeping the grove's expanse. Her eyes settled upon another stone circle, half-hidden by vibrant blooms. She gestured to her companions, feeling a drive pulsing through her veins, compelling them forward. As they approached, Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant pulse with an anxious heartbeat. Her breath hitched, and she touched the pendant, its warmth pressing into her palm. "This way," she urged, leading them between the stones, her steps unyielding as a sense of urgency blossomed within her. The grove thickened, ancient spirits murmuring in the rustle of leaves overhead. Drifting strands of moonlight revealed a structure ahead—a shrine, almost swallowed whole by vines, its weathered surface inscribed with intricate patterns that sang of hidden truths. Rory stepped closer, eyes wide. She hesitated, the world holding its breath around her. Nyx moved beside her, staring at the shrine with unwavering intensity, shadows enhancing the enigma it presented. "The veil between worlds thins here," Nyx noted, their voice weaving old knowledge into the present moment. Isolde's gaze lingered on the shrine, her ethereal presence casting light on secrets for those willing to see. "To look is to open—what comes forth, no one knows." Rory traced the patterns, her fingers discovering textures that seemed to shift under her touch. A pulse of warmth resonated from the Heartstone, matching the humming energy pervading the grove. Uncertainty mingled with awe—she was being drawn into the unknown, and curiosity demanded she follow. Then came another sound, soft and enticing, a melody born of the earth's pulse. Rory caught her breath, her heart aligning with the rhythm. It held the essence of the grove, the promise of discovery unmasked. She exchanged glances with Nyx and Isolde, their expressions mirroring her silent question. "What will we uncover?" Rory breathed, her voice echoing with the weight of possibility. Nyx's whisper caressed the air like a fresh breeze, carrying ancient wisdom—"Only the grove can answer." Together, they stepped forward, the moment stretching as the shrine's secrets beckoned, like the pull of a tide weaving their destinies within the enchanted depths of the Fae Grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount899
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount899
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"dancing"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"dance"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"tantalizing"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count2
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"anticipation"
count1
10
word"yearning"
count1
11
word"symphony"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count3
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"structure"
count1
17
word"unwavering"
count1
18
word"intensity"
count1
19
word"enigma"
count1
20
word"traced"
count1
21
word"resonated"
count1
22
word"echoing"
count1
23
word"weight"
count1
24
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"dancing"
2"whisper"
3"shimmered"
4"dance"
5"charged"
6"tantalizing"
7"intricate"
8"racing"
9"anticipation"
10"yearning"
11"symphony"
12"scanning"
13"tension"
14"pulse"
15"sense of"
16"structure"
17"unwavering"
18"intensity"
19"enigma"
20"traced"
21"resonated"
22"echoing"
23"weight"
24"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
78.70% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences54
matches
0"g in anticipation"
1"a sense of urgency"
2"d with awe"
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords893
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount820
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone3
Pendant2
Fae3
Grove2
Nyx10
Rory14
Isolde6
Varga1
Seer1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Together1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Rory"
4"Isolde"
5"Varga"
6"Seer"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.646
windowScore0.667
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if absorbing the intricate weaving of magic threading the air, letting it ripple across their being"
1"textures that seemed to shift under her touch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount893
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean34.35
std17.85
cv0.52
sampleLengths
087
147
217
344
418
553
664
745
834
950
1010
1147
1219
1329
1442
1520
1638
1714
1834
1928
2045
2136
2213
2314
2416
2529
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was cracking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences57
ratio0.07
matches
0"Before she could ask more, Rory heard an unexpected click—a faint metallic sound that interwove with the natural symphony around them."
1"Drifting strands of moonlight revealed a structure ahead—a shrine, almost swallowed whole by vines, its weathered surface inscribed with intricate patterns that sang of hidden truths."
2"Uncertainty mingled with awe—she was being drawn into the unknown, and curiosity demanded she follow."
3"Nyx's whisper caressed the air like a fresh breeze, carrying ancient wisdom—\"Only the grove can answer.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount796
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.018844221105527637
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008793969849246231
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
78.89% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean15.67
std5.44
cv0.347
sampleLengths
027
123
214
323
418
515
614
717
825
912
107
1118
1211
1324
1418
1520
1623
1721
1810
1919
2016
2120
2214
2310
2419
2521
2610
2721
2812
2914
3010
319
323
3315
3411
3515
3613
3714
3820
3912
4026
415
429
4317
4417
4518
4610
4715
4815
4915
72.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45614035087719296
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"Suddenly, Isolde halted, her eyes"
1"Then came another sound, soft"
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her pale lavender eyes shimmered"
1"Her speech wove riddles, layers"
2"She felt Isolde's gift, the"
3"They paused, as if absorbing"
4"they murmured, hinting at the"
5"She felt drawn, pulled by"
6"She glanced at Nyx, who"
7"She brushed a strand of"
8"Her eyes settled upon another"
9"She gestured to her companions,"
10"Her breath hitched, and she"
11"she urged, leading them between"
12"She hesitated, the world holding"
13"It held the essence of"
14"She exchanged glances with Nyx"
ratio0.278
61.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences54
matches
0"Aurora Carter adjusted the Heartstone"
1"The clearing opened before them"
2"Rory stepped forward, her bright"
3"The world seemed to ripple"
4"The strange whisper of their"
5"Nyx's voice brushed past Rory,"
6"Isolde Varga walked ahead, leaving"
7"Her pale lavender eyes shimmered"
8"Her speech wove riddles, layers"
9"Rory followed, nodding as if"
10"She felt Isolde's gift, the"
11"The air itself felt charged,"
12"The scent of earth mingled"
13"Nyx glided ahead, their form"
14"They paused, as if absorbing"
15"they murmured, hinting at the"
16"The ground became softer, almost"
17"She felt drawn, pulled by"
18"Rory crouched, captivated by the"
19"Isolde mused, cryptic yet inviting"
ratio0.796
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Before she could ask more,"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora Carter adjusted the Heartstone Pendant hanging around her neck, feeling its faint warmth as the group passed beneath the ancient oak standing stones mark…"
1"Isolde Varga walked ahead, leaving no footprints, her silver hair blending with the ether as if the grove embraced her as one of its own."
2"She felt Isolde's gift, the cold Fae-Forged Blade, resting against her side, glowing faintly in the moonlight that filtered through impossibly thick boughs abov…"
3"Above, the sky danced with colors unseen, as if reality itself was cracking open to reveal the wonders beneath its skin."
4"They paused, as if absorbing the intricate weaving of magic threading the air, letting it ripple across their being."
5"Nyx nodded, their presence solidifying, shadows twisting at their edges."
6"She gestured to her companions, feeling a drive pulsing through her veins, compelling them forward."
7"Drifting strands of moonlight revealed a structure ahead—a shrine, almost swallowed whole by vines, its weathered surface inscribed with intricate patterns that…"
8"Rory traced the patterns, her fingers discovering textures that seemed to shift under her touch."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice steady despite the slowly rising tension"
1"Nyx noted, their voice weaving old knowledge into the present moment"
2"Rory breathed, her voice echoing with the weight of possibility"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"she urged (urge)"
2"Nyx noted (note)"
3"Rory breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.727
74.8906%