Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNWQ1VS9T0634QAGRCG

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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest pulsed with the soft hum of low chatter and the clinking of glasses. The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed gently, casting an otherworldly glow as Aurora—Rory, as she preferred—angled her way inside. She favored the bar after a long day delivering hot dishes around the city. Silas always kept a corner booth aside for her, a place to unwind and forget the demands of the day. Tonight, the room seemed no different. The dim lighting reflected off the polished wood tables, casting shadows across the black-and-white photographs on the walls. Rory's bright blue eyes scanned for Silas, spotting him effortlessly. He leaned against the bar with his usual quiet authority, hazel eyes taking in everything and everyone present. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. "Si," she called with a half-smile, making her way toward him. A lift of his eyebrows greeted her. "Rory. Thirsty?" She nodded, sliding into the stool at the bar. "The usual, please." As he turned to pour her drink, the door opened again, letting in a burst of cool evening air. Rory glanced over, not expecting much. But then her breath caught. The man standing there, pausing to let his eyes adjust to the darkness, seemed both hauntingly familiar and yet a stranger. He was tall, with shoulders that appeared broader than she remembered. His face was sharper, more defined, shadowed by a day's growth of stubble. There was an intensity in his eyes, a seriousness that belied the youthful energy of his past self. "Evan?" she murmured, almost to herself. Silas cast a quick glance at her before returning to the bottles. "Friend of yours?" He met her gaze, and she shook her head, biting her lip. Evan’s eyes landed on her. Recognition flickered there, followed by something more complex: surprise, regret, perhaps a trace of longing. He walked over, his steps measured, confident. "Rory." His voice was deeper, carrying undertones of fatigue and experience. She didn't stand. "Evan. It's been a while." Her fingers wrapped around the glass Silas handed her, the cold seeping into her skin. He took the stool beside her, not yet ordering a drink. Instead, his eyes roamed over her face, as if re-mapping familiar territory with an unfamiliar guide. "It has. Four years?" His voice was softer now, like he was treading on delicate ground. "Five." She sipped her drink, watching him over the rim. "But who's counting?" A small smile tugged at the corner of his lips, a glimpse of the old him. "Still the same Rory. Sharp as ever." "Not everything stays the same." She looked away, focusing on the reflection of the bar in the mirror behind Silas. "What brings you here?" His shoulders seemed to tense a bit. "Work. Just passing through." His eyes held hers again, searching for a reaction. "Passing through." She let out a soft, almost inaudible sigh. "Always a traveller." He leaned back, a shadow crossing his face. "Sometimes, it's better that way." Silas moved to another patron, leaving the two of them in a cocoon of past bitterness and unspoken words. The tension was palpable, a weight pressing on both of them. Rory broke the silence first. "You've changed." He raised an eyebrow. "You haven't. Not really. Still beautiful, still that fire in your eyes." She shook her head. "It's more than that. You used to be..." She searched for the right word, "lighter." "We all grow up sometime, Rory." His voice carried a hint of sadness. "Some of us don't have a choice." She frowned. "Choices. They're always there, Evan. Whether we see them or not." He gave a short, mirthless laugh. "Spoken like someone who hasn't walked the paths I have." Her eyes narrowed. "Don't pretend like you know my life. You left. You gave that up." He opened his mouth, then closed it, struggling with the response. His hand flexed on the bar top, as if wanting to reach out but restrained. "I'm sorry," he finally said, the words heavy. "For everything." She looked into his eyes, those deep wells of regret and unspoken stories. "It’s in the past, Evan. We're different people now." He swallowed hard. "But does it ever really go away?" Rory took a long sip, then set her glass down. "No. It doesn't. But it shapes us." Silas returned, wiping down the portion of the bar nearest them. He seemed to sense the need to stay nearby, an almost protective presence for Rory. Evan took the cue, shifting slightly. "You always were wise beyond your years." "And you—you were reckless," she replied. "A whirlwind that couldn't be tamed." He nodded slowly. "I thought I could be better for you, Rory. But maybe my leaving was the best thing." "It hurt. You hurt me." The bluntness of her confession hung in the air, a raw truth between them. He looked away, unable to meet her gaze. "I know. And I regret it every day." Silence fell once more, but it was different now—filled with the echoes of their shared past, the memories that still linked them despite everything. "I’m glad you're doing well." He finally broke the silence again, his voice almost tentative. "Are you? Doing well, I mean." She couldn't help but ask, needing to know. He hesitated, then nodded. "As well as one can be. Life has its ups and downs." She appreciated the honesty in his voice. "It does. For all of us." For a moment, they simply sat there, side by side at the bar, unspoken feelings swirling in the dim light. Evan took a breath, as if preparing to continue, but Rory held up a hand. "Another round, Silas. For the visitor too." Silas nodded curtly, understanding the gravity of the moment without a single word. The glasses clinked as he set them down. Evan picked up his drink, raising it slightly. "To old friends, and the paths we walk." Rory clinked her glass against his. "To the paths we've walked—and the ones yet to come." They drank, the warmth spreading through them. In that shared silence, a fragile bridge began to build over the chasm of time and regret. Their story wasn’t over, but for now, this small connection was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
60.47% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Her fingers wrapped around [around]"
1"She looked away [away]"
2"he finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.651
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.14
71.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1051
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1051
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"otherworldly"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"complex"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count3
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"palpable"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"silence"
count4
13
word"eyebrow"
count1
14
word"restrained"
count1
15
word"echoes"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"otherworldly"
2"scanned"
3"familiar"
4"intensity"
5"flickered"
6"complex"
7"measured"
8"unspoken"
9"tension"
10"palpable"
11"weight"
12"silence"
13"eyebrow"
14"restrained"
15"echoes"
16"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1043
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount791
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora1
Rory8
Silas8
Evan4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.994
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"appeared broader than she remembered"
1"as if re-mapping familiar territory with an unfamiliar guide"
2"as if wanting to reach out but restrained"
3"as if preparing to continue, but Rory held up a hand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1043
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean20.45
std12.38
cv0.605
sampleLengths
071
163
211
39
412
551
642
76
827
927
1011
1123
1227
1316
1413
1523
1624
1720
1813
1913
2030
217
2216
2319
2420
2513
2616
2716
2826
2910
3022
3110
3217
3326
3413
3512
3620
3719
3816
3924
4015
4114
4216
4313
4420
4522
4621
4716
4816
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was treading"
86.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences101
ratio0.02
matches
0"The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed gently, casting an otherworldly glow as Aurora—Rory, as she preferred—angled her way inside."
1"Silence fell once more, but it was different now—filled with the echoes of their shared past, the memories that still linked them despite everything."
94.38% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount797
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04642409033877039
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013801756587202008
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean10.33
std5.36
cv0.519
sampleLengths
016
121
214
320
46
518
610
718
811
911
107
112
129
133
1419
156
165
1721
1811
1913
2018
216
2212
2315
245
2515
267
2711
283
2920
3011
3116
3216
3310
343
3516
367
3720
384
397
4013
4110
423
438
445
4519
4611
475
482
494
69.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42574257425742573
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners43
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, his eyes roamed over"
ratio0.014
0.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences73
matches
0"She favored the bar after"
1"He leaned against the bar"
2"she called with a half-smile,"
3"She nodded, sliding into the"
4"He was tall, with shoulders"
5"His face was sharper, more"
6"she murmured, almost to herself"
7"He met her gaze, and"
8"He walked over, his steps"
9"His voice was deeper, carrying"
10"She didn't stand."
11"Her fingers wrapped around the"
12"He took the stool beside"
13"His voice was softer now,"
14"She sipped her drink, watching"
15"She looked away, focusing on"
16"His shoulders seemed to tense"
17"His eyes held hers again,"
18"She let out a soft,"
19"He leaned back, a shadow"
ratio0.548
1.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences73
matches
0"The Raven's Nest pulsed with"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"She favored the bar after"
3"Silas always kept a corner"
4"Tonight, the room seemed no"
5"The dim lighting reflected off"
6"Rory's bright blue eyes scanned"
7"He leaned against the bar"
8"The silver signet ring on"
9"she called with a half-smile,"
10"A lift of his eyebrows"
11"She nodded, sliding into the"
12"Rory glanced over, not expecting"
13"The man standing there, pausing"
14"He was tall, with shoulders"
15"His face was sharper, more"
16"she murmured, almost to herself"
17"Silas cast a quick glance"
18"He met her gaze, and"
19"Evan’s eyes landed on her."
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He was tall, with shoulders that appeared broader than she remembered."
1"There was an intensity in his eyes, a seriousness that belied the youthful energy of his past self."
2"Instead, his eyes roamed over her face, as if re-mapping familiar territory with an unfamiliar guide."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she murmured, almost to herself"
1"She couldn't, needing to know"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.047
73.7134%