Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNWTFXD9002KGGDEAV9

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Duration:
34.4s
Cost:
$0.001062

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered down like a battering ram, sending waves of water cascading off the pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn gripped her collar higher, trying to shield herself from the chill that seeped into her bones. She hardly felt it, not with the adrenaline coursing through her. Ahead, a figure darted through the shadows, almost melding with the darkness itself. Quinn quickened her pace, her leather shoes splashing through puddles formed by yesterday’s downpour. The scent of wet asphalt and something else—a hint of iron—wafted through the air. “Stop! Police!” Her voice boomed through the night, but the suspect only glanced back, eyes wide with panic before vanishing around a corner. Quinn rounded the bend, her heart racing, lungs burning. They slid to a stop in a narrow alley, shrouded in darkness. She peered into the gloom, muscles tense. The rain pattered harder, creating a dull roar that deafened her senses. A flicker of movement caught her eye. The suspect, a scruffy man with a hood pulled low, slipped through a wrought-iron gate, heading into the bowels of the earth. Quinn hesitated, a moment’s indecision gripping her. The entrance loomed ominously, leading to the unknown—The Veil Market, she surmised, a place whispered about but rarely visited. “Damn it,” she muttered, her sharp jaw tightening as she pushed the gate open. The damp air enveloped her, cooler than the rain-soaked streets above. She walked down the creaking stairs, each step echoing like a warning. The passage widened, revealing a subterranean expanse alive with murmurs and laughter. Quinn descended into a den of color and movement, a maze of stalls lining the walls, each displaying strange artifacts and shimmering wares. The warm glow of lantern light flickered, casting shadows against the brick. “Are you lost, love?” A voice, rich and teasing, floated to her. Quinn shot a glare at a woman draped in vibrant fabrics, her arms adorned with silver bangles that jingled like wind chimes. “Just looking for someone,” Quinn said, keeping her tone level, despite the unease twisting in her gut. The woman raised an eyebrow, amusement dancing in her emerald eyes. “In here? Could be trouble.” “No trouble I can’t handle.” Quinn stepped away, scanning the crowd. The place pulsed with energy—people of all kinds mingled, their voices blending into a heady symphony. Her eyes darted around, seeking the suspect—any sign of him. “Hey, officer!” A man’s voice came from one of the stalls, thick with an accent that suggested everything but ordinary. “You’re not looking for illicit drugs, are you? ‘Cause I got just what you need.” He waved an ornate vial that glimmered strangely. “I’m not interested.” Quinn pushed past, determined to keep her focus. The suspect’s trail grew colder by the second. Ahead, a fleeting shadow caught her attention. Her instincts surged into overdrive, and she pushed through the crowd, ignoring the curious stares. “Can’t let him get away,” she whispered through clenched teeth. Suddenly, a commotion erupted to her left. People gasped, pressing back as a figure broke free, holding something aloft—a glimmering object, perhaps stolen or forged. The moment erupted, morphing into chaos. Quinn moved like a predator in the midst of prey, darting through the shifting crowd. She caught sight of the scruffy man, shoving himself against the wall, his back to her, chest heaving. “Nowhere to run,” she said, driving forward, but at that moment, a massive man twisted into her path, his bulk blocking her way. “Careful, detective,” he growled, his voice like gravel, eyes narrowing. “People don’t take kindly to nosy policemen down here.” Quinn stepped back, assessing him. “I’m not looking for trouble.” “Then find your way out.” Ignoring the warning, Quinn waded deeper into the throng. Faces loomed—suspicious, curious, threatening. “Hey! Stop!” she shouted again, spotting the suspect blending into a nearby stall filled with glistening baubles and fabrics that shimmered like fish scales. An intricate tapestry of colors flared before her, mesmerizing. Quinn lunged, but the stall owner swung out in front of her, arms wide. “You’ll want to buy something before you go poking around, love.” “Get out of my way!” Quinn shoved him aside, determination sparking in her brown eyes. The man winced but stepped back, confusion and anger momentarily obscuring his expression. The suspect glanced back over his shoulder, realization dawning. Panic struck his features, and he bolted again, darting through an opening between two booths. Quinn sprinted after him, heart pounding with each stride. The echo of pounding feet matched her frantic breaths. For an instant, she lost him in the labyrinth, the bazaar alive with chaos. “Tomás.” She called out, desperate, her mind racing to find an ally. She needed someone who knew these alleys, who could navigate the depths. Then, as though summoned by her thoughts, Tomás popped into view from behind a stall, ducking low. His thick curls glistened with raindrops, the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck catching the light. “Quinn!” He lunged towards her, brows furrowing in concern. “What are you doing here?” “Chasing a suspect. Have you seen him?” she hissed, eyes wild. Tomás shook his head, quick and alert. “No, but it’s dangerous down here. Let’s get out.” “No. I’m going after him.” Quinn’s resolve flared. The evidence, the leads—they slipped through her fingers every time. “Quinn, he’ll lead you into a trap. This isn’t a game.” Tommy's voice dropped, the casual demeanor replaced by urgency. “Everything is a game here.” Quinn stepped past him, intent on continuing her pursuit. “I can handle myself.” Suddenly, a loud crash echoed from the back of the market, followed by frightened shouts. Heads turned, shoppers scattered, and Quinn felt a hard shove at her back. She barely regained her balance as chaos burst forth in the narrow expanse, knocking everything off balance. “Quinn!” Tomás lunged again, grasping her arm. “This isn’t the place!” But her eyes had caught a glimpse of movement—a flash of the suspect darting into a hidden alcove, disappearing like smoke. “I have to.” She pulled away, urgency clawing at her, desperation rising. Quinn pushed on, heading toward the darkness, beneath the sounds of scuffling feet and startled voices. With every ounce of her training, she bolted into the unknown, leaving the chaos of the market behind as the weight of the past bore down on her. Darkness enveloped her, the scent of damp earth and something metallic filling the air. The heartbeat of the market faded, replaced by the distant pounding of her pulse—the only sound that underscored her pursuit.
total_cost0.00106215

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Quinn stepped away [away]"
1"she shouted again [again]"
2"Tomás lunged again [again]"
3"She pulled away [away]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
90.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"cascading"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"racing"
count2
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count2
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"symphony"
count1
14
word"determined"
count1
15
word"fleeting"
count1
16
word"predator"
count1
17
word"glistening"
count1
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"intricate"
count1
20
word"tapestry"
count1
21
word"pounding"
count3
22
word"echo"
count1
23
word"navigate"
count1
24
word"depths"
count1
25
word"furrowing"
count1
26
word"resolve"
count1
27
word"echoed"
count1
28
word"weight"
count1
29
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"cascading"
1"chill"
2"quickened"
3"racing"
4"gloom"
5"flicker"
6"loomed"
7"echoing"
8"flickered"
9"eyebrow"
10"dancing"
11"scanning"
12"pulsed"
13"symphony"
14"determined"
15"fleeting"
16"predator"
17"glistening"
18"shimmered"
19"intricate"
20"tapestry"
21"pounding"
22"echo"
23"navigate"
24"depths"
25"furrowing"
26"resolve"
27"echoed"
28"weight"
29"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"e with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1084
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The entrance loomed ominously, leading to the unknown—The Veil Market, she surmised, a place whispered about but rarely …"
48.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount939
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn19
Veil1
Market1
Suddenly2
Tomás3
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Tomás"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places(empty)
globalScore0.488
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1084
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
84.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean26.44
std11.75
cv0.444
sampleLengths
046
141
223
340
455
537
647
734
817
916
1037
1143
1219
1322
1410
1531
1633
1723
1819
1910
205
2113
2233
2325
2428
2524
2632
2724
2833
2914
3011
3116
3218
3320
3418
3545
3611
3721
3828
3928
4034
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences85
ratio0.106
matches
0"The scent of wet asphalt and something else—a hint of iron—wafted through the air."
1"The entrance loomed ominously, leading to the unknown—The Veil Market, she surmised, a place whispered about but rarely visited."
2"The place pulsed with energy—people of all kinds mingled, their voices blending into a heady symphony."
3"Her eyes darted around, seeking the suspect—any sign of him."
4"People gasped, pressing back as a figure broke free, holding something aloft—a glimmering object, perhaps stolen or forged."
5"Faces loomed—suspicious, curious, threatening."
6"The evidence, the leads—they slipped through her fingers every time."
7"But her eyes had caught a glimpse of movement—a flash of the suspect darting into a hidden alcove, disappearing like smoke."
8"The heartbeat of the market faded, replaced by the distant pounding of her pulse—the only sound that underscored her pursuit."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount951
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.031545741324921134
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011566771819137749
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean12.75
std5.4
cv0.423
sampleLengths
016
119
211
313
414
514
623
79
812
97
1012
117
1222
137
1419
1514
1611
1712
1812
1923
2012
2112
2222
2317
2411
255
2611
2716
2810
2920
3023
3111
328
337
3415
3510
367
3718
386
3915
4018
4123
4210
439
445
455
465
479
484
4924
74.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4588235294117647
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"Suddenly, a commotion erupted to"
1"Then, as though summoned by"
2"Suddenly, a loud crash echoed"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences76
matches
0"She hardly felt it, not"
1"Her voice boomed through the"
2"They slid to a stop"
3"She peered into the gloom,"
4"she muttered, her sharp jaw"
5"She walked down the creaking"
6"Her eyes darted around, seeking"
7"He waved an ornate vial"
8"Her instincts surged into overdrive,"
9"she whispered through clenched teeth"
10"She caught sight of the"
11"she said, driving forward, but"
12"he growled, his voice like"
13"she shouted again, spotting the"
14"She called out, desperate, her"
15"She needed someone who knew"
16"His thick curls glistened with"
17"He lunged towards her, brows"
18"she hissed, eyes wild"
19"She barely regained her balance"
ratio0.276
19.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences76
matches
0"The rain hammered down like"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn gripped her"
2"She hardly felt it, not"
3"Quinn quickened her pace, her"
4"The scent of wet asphalt"
5"Her voice boomed through the"
6"Quinn rounded the bend, her"
7"They slid to a stop"
8"She peered into the gloom,"
9"The rain pattered harder, creating"
10"A flicker of movement caught"
11"The suspect, a scruffy man"
12"Quinn hesitated, a moment’s indecision"
13"The entrance loomed ominously, leading"
14"she muttered, her sharp jaw"
15"The damp air enveloped her,"
16"She walked down the creaking"
17"The passage widened, revealing a"
18"Quinn descended into a den"
19"The warm glow of lantern"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn gripped her collar higher, trying to shield herself from the chill that seeped into her bones."
1"She caught sight of the scruffy man, shoving himself against the wall, his back to her, chest heaving."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she muttered, her sharp jaw tightening as she pushed the gate open"
1"Quinn pushed, determined to keep her focus"
2"Quinn shoved, determination sparking in her brown eyes"
3"He lunged, brows furrowing in concern"
4"she hissed, eyes wild"
5"She pulled away, urgency clawing at her, desperation rising"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he growled (growl)"
3"she shouted again (shout)"
4"She called out (call out)"
5"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.4
73.9057%