Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNWW7ENKF5NXW2SKAF2

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18.1s
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$0.017278
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory perched herself on a stool at the far end of the bar, her view a tapestry of shadow and flickering light woven by the dim bulbs hanging above. The Raven’s Nest was unusually sparse tonight, save for a few scattered patrons nestled in corners nursing their solitude beneath Silas' watchful eye. As Rory swirled her wine, the blood-red liquid grazing the rim of the glass, her eyes caught the gleam of Silas' silver signet ring as he moved deftly behind the counter. Each motion was careful, deliberate, disguising the whisper of his limp. Rory appreciated the rhythm of the place, the quiet cadence harmonizing with her need for anonymity. A chime, subtle yet intrusive, punctuated the mellow ambience as the bar door swung open. Rory glanced only briefly at the green neon glow of the entrance, dismissing the newcomer as just another stranger seeking solace in the dark. “Laila?” The voice struck an unwelcome chord, a name she had buried beneath the debris of her past. She turned slowly, eyes meeting the source—a man with eyes clouded by surprise and an echo of familiarity she didn’t wish to revisit. Thomas Ellery stood there, eyes wide and searching, legs hesitant upon recognizing the woman he'd known in different times. Years had masked the features of the boisterous youth she once thought she knew, replacing them with the lines of age and experience. His once unkempt hair now lay tamed and respectable, yet his gaze held the same hunger for understanding. She addressed him with a nod, contemplative rather than welcoming. “Rory now.” “Rory,” he repeated, tasting the name upon his tongue like the remnants of an old flame. “It suits you.” “Everything changes,” Rory retorted, a smile touched with ambivalence. The Raven’s Nest seemed smaller now, swirling with echoes of another life. Thomas took the adjoining stool, his presence uninvited but inevitable. “I didn’t expect to see you here. Thought you'd slipped away for good.” “People always return, eventually,” she replied, setting the page for what could be a familiar tale of lost connections. His laughter, warm and genuine, cut through her guarded demeanor. “Silas mentioned you’d moved to London, but I didn’t believe him.” “Silas knows how to keep a secret,” she answered, eyeing the bookshelf that led to his hidden room, knowing its purpose better now. As Silas approached with their drinks, his hazel eyes flickered between them, graced with the wisdom of past encounters. He lingered only for a moment, long enough for his silent approval to bridge the gap. “I thought you’d pursued Law, Rory,” Thomas ventured, navigate the territory of both past dreams and present realities. “Eva always praised your tenacity.” “I started with Pre-Law, then traded the courtroom dreams for faster lanes,” Rory answered. “London keeps me busy enough.” “Did the city manage to sweep you up, or was it more compelling than the barristers?” Thomas pressed, wary of the honesty she might reflect. “Both sometimes. Mostly neither,” she divulged, each word drawing paths across their shared past. Silas looked away as Rory mentioned Cardiff, their shared origin clear yet quietly acknowledged. Memories of clumsy dates and unsaid truths floated, the emotional castaways of Cardiff days. Thomas's gaze softened as though rummaging through those memories. “Still the same Rory... or, a new one?” “I’ve got different stories now, old ones tighter-knit than before.” She replied, binding new identity around old truths. Thomas fished a cigarette from his pocket, meeting her eyes as he struck a match. “They say familiar spaces and old friends light pathways in dark spaces.” “I prefer streetlights,” Rory answered, trading implied sentiment for simple narrative. “Keeps stepping stones firm.” “Rory, your stories glow old places,” Thomas acknowledged. His voice carried with it the crisp layers of choices made and shelved. Silas cleared the counter, his hands omnipresent between them for a moment thick with reflections, then retreating into silence. A bar keeper’s solemn vigilance, knowing when his customers needed space. The seconds weighed heavily between them, as Thomas mused on the Rory he hadn’t seen. “Do you remember leaving Cardiff?” Her laugh pressed into the warmth of the drink. “Cardiff feels etched upon my bones.” “I followed Eva once, chasing schooldays,” Thomas admitted. “We all tried directions then, not knowing where they might lead.” Rory’s features lightened at the mention of their ally, Eva. “Eva was on the wings when no one else found the nerve to listen.” Silas shifted behind the bar, listening less to words and more to their interplay. “Evan was the edge I couldn’t edge away from,” Rory confessed, raw emotions triggered by the cadence of conversation. Thomas nodded, remembering Evan's shadow. “I didn’t see... not closely. Now, I see the imprint you’ve shaped.” “Imprints fade, Thomas,” Rory said quietly, evoking echoes of lost time. Thomas looked hard at her. “Not all of them, Rory. Some linger despite what we try.” The weight of past voices, their depths and echoes, grew between them. Rory leant against the counter, allowing moments without words to colour the picture more deeply. Their drinks gone, Silas returned, tracking their dialogue’s rhythm. His quiet presence bridged silent acknowledgments. The dialogue folded into silence’s embrace, thick with nuanced understanding, with time’s weight pressing upon the rhythm of earlier concoctions. The Raven’s Nest, a comforting cradle for those revisiting past paths, thrived in quiet harmony. The neon sign flickered. The world outside pressed inward, demanding both intention and escape. Rory met the moment, wrapped bitter-sweetly in a dedication to new paths. Thomas toyed with the cigarette absent-mindedly. “Don’t wait for brighter roads, Rory.” “I don’t,” Rory replied softly, shaping new intentions through familiar shadows. The clock ticked onward, compelling release. Years dissipated, interspersed with honest accords. Time had been both ache and remedy. Rory, gathering her belongings, exhaled deeply, unassuming. “I should go.” Thomas laid his palm on the counter, collecting traces of their interaction. “Next chapter, Rory?” “Likely a novel,” she replied, firm with crisp resolve. The weight of memories danced through the Raven’s Nest, an imprint of salience embraced, now interwoven in harmonious silence punctuated by laughter familiar—and treasured. Silas returned, his eyes tender with professed memory. “Yours is a vivid story, Rory; woven through the tales of old friends pioneered,” he murmured. Their steps echoed against the doorframe, soft with intent shared yet unvoiced. “Keep your pathways lit, Rory,” Thomas called across the fading embrace of night’s welcome. “Always,” Rory replied, embracing silence audibly. The Raven's Nest held them briefly, a cocoon born of old maps and hearts warmed within. Their scene reflected through the neon light, remembered by those attentive. Never forgotten nor neglected, their rhythmic tale endured.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
1"Rory replied softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.579
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
86.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"sweetly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sweetly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"solace"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"echoes"
count3
5
word"familiar"
count4
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"silence"
count4
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"weight"
count3
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"whisper"
2"solace"
3"echo"
4"echoes"
5"familiar"
6"flickered"
7"navigate"
8"silence"
9"warmth"
10"etched"
11"weight"
12"depths"
13"comforting"
14"resolve"
15"echoed"
16"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1109
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount846
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven5
Nest5
Rory17
Ellery1
Silas6
Thomas14
Cardiff2
Eva1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Ellery"
4"Silas"
5"Thomas"
6"Eva"
7"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.495
windowScore0.5
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed smaller now, swirling with echoes of another life"
1"as though rummaging through those memories"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1109
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean22.18
std17.03
cv0.768
sampleLengths
0110
139
218
383
412
519
621
723
819
921
1023
1135
1223
1319
1425
1514
1628
1717
1818
1927
2015
2121
2230
2320
2415
2519
2624
2714
2819
2917
3011
3116
3227
3315
3435
3514
3612
3712
3811
3919
4010
4115
429
4324
448
4516
4612
4714
486
4935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
46.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences89
ratio0.034
matches
0"She turned slowly, eyes meeting the source—a man with eyes clouded by surprise and an echo of familiarity she didn’t wish to revisit."
1"The weight of memories danced through the Raven’s Nest, an imprint of salience embraced, now interwoven in harmonious silence punctuated by laughter familiar—and treasured."
2"“Yours is a vivid story, Rory; woven through the tales of old friends pioneered,” he murmured."
84.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount227
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.05726872246696035
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.013215859030837005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.46
std6.14
cv0.493
sampleLengths
029
123
231
311
416
515
624
718
823
919
1023
1118
1210
132
1416
153
169
1712
1810
1913
2019
2110
2211
2323
2419
2516
2618
275
2814
295
3025
3114
3214
3314
349
358
3618
3715
3812
3911
404
418
4213
4319
4411
4515
465
479
486
498
69.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.449438202247191
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences67
matches
0"She turned slowly, eyes meeting"
1"His once unkempt hair now"
2"She addressed him with a"
3"he repeated, tasting the name"
4"she replied, setting the page"
5"His laughter, warm and genuine,"
6"she answered, eyeing the bookshelf"
7"He lingered only for a"
8"she divulged, each word drawing"
9"She replied, binding new identity"
10"His voice carried with it"
11"Her laugh pressed into the"
12"Their drinks gone, Silas returned,"
13"His quiet presence bridged silent"
14"she replied, firm with crisp"
15"Their steps echoed against the"
16"Their scene reflected through the"
ratio0.254
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rory perched herself on a"
1"The Raven’s Nest was unusually"
2"Each motion was careful, deliberate,"
3"Rory appreciated the rhythm of"
4"A chime, subtle yet intrusive,"
5"Rory glanced only briefly at"
6"The voice struck an unwelcome"
7"She turned slowly, eyes meeting"
8"Thomas Ellery stood there, eyes"
9"Years had masked the features"
10"His once unkempt hair now"
11"She addressed him with a"
12"he repeated, tasting the name"
13"Rory retorted, a smile touched"
14"The Raven’s Nest seemed smaller"
15"Thomas took the adjoining stool,"
16"she replied, setting the page"
17"His laughter, warm and genuine,"
18"she answered, eyeing the bookshelf"
19"He lingered only for a"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory retorted, a smile touched with ambivalence"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"Rory retorted (retort)"
2"Thomas pressed (press)"
3"she divulged (divulge)"
4"Thomas acknowledged (acknowledge)"
5"Thomas admitted (admit)"
6"Rory confessed (confess)"
7"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.421
76.9145%