| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 44 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "She scoffed again [again]" | | 2 | "He stepped back [back]" | | 3 | "He stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 92 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 87.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1575 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1575 | | totalAiIsms | 52 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "unspoken" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "magnetic" | | 7 | "race" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "intensity" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "resolve" | | 19 | "wavering" | | 20 | "depths" | | 21 | "electric" | | 22 | "shattered" | | 23 | "pounding" | | 24 | "simmering" | | 25 | "loomed" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 9 | | maxInWindow | 7 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 6 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung in the air" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" | | 2 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1572 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 5 | | wordCount | 943 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.21 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Silence" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1572 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.42% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 25.77 | | std | 10.31 | | cv | 0.4 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "The memories flooded back—late nights spent talking, laughter shared over takeout, the way his fingers had brushed against hers, igniting a fire that had burned too bright, too fast." | | 1 | "“I never said you were.” He stepped closer, his gaze intense, searching her face for something—understanding, forgiveness, or perhaps a flicker of the connection they once shared." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 946 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.0306553911205074 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007399577167019027 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 13.32 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 60.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3983050847457627 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 1 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 2 | "He stepped inside, the door" | | 3 | "She crossed her arms, trying" | | 4 | "he replied, his amber and" | | 5 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising" | | 6 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 7 | "She stepped back, creating distance," | | 8 | "He pushed off the door," | | 9 | "She laughed, a sharp sound" | | 10 | "He raised an eyebrow, a" | | 11 | "She shook her head, incredulous" | | 12 | "He stepped forward, closing the" | | 13 | "She glared at him, her" | | 14 | "he said, his voice low," | | 15 | "He ran a hand through" | | 16 | "She scoffed again, the bitterness" | | 17 | "He stepped closer, his gaze" | | 18 | "She took a step back," | | 19 | "He moved closer, his voice" |
| | ratio | 0.69 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, and" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably" | | 2 | "The air thickened with unspoken" | | 3 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 4 | "His voice was smooth, but" | | 5 | "He stepped inside, the door" | | 6 | "She crossed her arms, trying" | | 7 | "he replied, his amber and" | | 8 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising" | | 9 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 10 | "She stepped back, creating distance," | | 11 | "He pushed off the door," | | 12 | "She laughed, a sharp sound" | | 13 | "He raised an eyebrow, a" | | 14 | "She shook her head, incredulous" | | 15 | "He stepped forward, closing the" | | 16 | "She glared at him, her" | | 17 | "Silence hung between them, thick" | | 18 | "The memories flooded back—late nights" | | 19 | "he said, his voice low," |
| | ratio | 0.958 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame just right, his slicked-back platinum blond hair glinting under …" | | 1 | "He stepped inside, the door clicking shut behind him with a finality that sent a shiver down her spine." | | 2 | "The memories flooded back—late nights spent talking, laughter shared over takeout, the way his fingers had brushed against hers, igniting a fire that had burned…" | | 3 | "The air crackled with tension, and she felt the heat radiating from him, a magnetic pull that made her heart race despite herself." | | 4 | "The world around them faded, leaving only the two of them, suspended in a moment that felt both electric and terrifying." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 44 | | uselessAdditionCount | 24 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret" | | 1 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising in her throat" | | 2 | "She shook, incredulous" | | 3 | "She glared, her blue eyes flashing with defiance" | | 4 | "he said, his voice low, almost pleading" | | 5 | "She scoffed again, the bitterness spilling over" | | 6 | "She took, her heart racing" | | 7 | "He moved, his voice dropping to a whisper" | | 8 | "She narrowed, suspicion creeping in" | | 9 | "He stepped, his voice dropping to a whisper" | | 10 | "She scoffed, the bitterness rising again" | | 11 | "His eyes bore, a mixture of desperation and longing" | | 12 | "She shook, incredulous" | | 13 | "He stepped, his breath warm against her skin" | | 14 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 15 | "She pressed, her heart racing" | | 16 | "His voice dropped, the intensity of his gaze holding her captive" | | 17 | "she started, but the words caught in her throat as he stepped closer, the heat radiating from him enveloping her" | | 18 | "he said, his voice low and urgent" | | 19 | "She shot, her heart still pounding" | | 20 | "He stepped, his voice low and earnest" | | 21 | "she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her" | | 22 | "she said, her heart racing" | | 23 | "He smirked, the tension easing slightly as he took a step back" |
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| 95.65% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 2 | "He laughed (laugh)" | | 3 | "She pressed (press)" | | 4 | "Aurora exclaimed (exclaim)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 92 | | tagDensity | 0.12 | | leniency | 0.239 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.109 | |