Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNXAFXH6YC1GK7C0VWA

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44.5s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, and Aurora Carter froze, her heart thundering in her chest. Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame just right, his slicked-back platinum blond hair glinting under the dim light of the cramped flat. The air thickened with unspoken words, a tension that crackled like static electricity. “Lucien,” she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret. “Rory.” His voice was smooth, but there was an edge to it, a hint of something darker lurking beneath the surface. He stepped inside, the door clicking shut behind him with a finality that sent a shiver down her spine. She crossed her arms, trying to mask the rush of emotions that threatened to spill over. “What are you doing here?” “Business,” he replied, his amber and black eyes scanning the cluttered room, taking in the stacks of books and scrolls that littered every surface. “But I thought I’d check in on you while I was in the neighbourhood.” “Check in?” She scoffed, the bitterness rising in her throat. “You haven’t checked in for months.” “Touché.” He leaned against the doorframe, his posture relaxed, but the tension in his jaw betrayed him. “I didn’t think you’d want to see me.” “Why would I?” She stepped back, creating distance, but the space felt charged, as if the air itself was conspiring against her. “You left without a word.” “I had my reasons.” He pushed off the door, taking a step closer, and she felt the heat radiating from him, a magnetic pull that made her heart race despite herself. “You know how it is in my line of work.” “Your line of work?” She laughed, a sharp sound that echoed in the small flat. “You mean your shady dealings in the supernatural underworld? You think that justifies ghosting me?” “Ghosting?” He raised an eyebrow, a smirk playing at the corners of his lips. “I didn’t ghost you, Rory. I was trying to protect you.” “Protect me?” She shook her head, incredulous. “By disappearing? That’s rich, Lucien.” He stepped forward, closing the distance between them, and she felt the heat of his presence envelop her. “You don’t understand. I was in over my head. I didn’t want to drag you into my mess.” “Too late for that.” She glared at him, her blue eyes flashing with defiance. “You already did.” Silence hung between them, thick and suffocating. The memories flooded back—late nights spent talking, laughter shared over takeout, the way his fingers had brushed against hers, igniting a fire that had burned too bright, too fast. “Rory,” he said, his voice low, almost pleading. “I didn’t want to hurt you.” “Then why did you?” The question hung in the air, heavy with the weight of their shared history. “You could have at least said goodbye.” “I thought it was for the best.” He ran a hand through his hair, frustration etched on his face. “I thought you’d be safer without me.” “Safer?” She scoffed again, the bitterness spilling over. “You think I’m some fragile thing that needs protecting? I’m not a damsel in distress, Lucien.” “I never said you were.” He stepped closer, his gaze intense, searching her face for something—understanding, forgiveness, or perhaps a flicker of the connection they once shared. “But you don’t know what I’m involved in. It’s dangerous.” “Dangerous?” She took a step back, her heart racing. “You think I can’t handle danger? I’ve been living in London, working for a restaurant, dodging the likes of you and your kind. I can take care of myself.” “Is that what you think?” He moved closer, his voice dropping to a whisper. “You think you can just walk away from this? From me?” The air crackled with tension, and she felt the heat radiating from him, a magnetic pull that made her heart race despite herself. “I didn’t walk away. You did.” “Because I had to.” His voice was low, almost a growl. “I didn’t want to see you hurt. I didn’t want to be the reason you got dragged into my world.” “And yet here you are.” She crossed her arms, trying to maintain her composure, but the way he looked at her made her heart flutter. “You’re back, unannounced, and expecting what? That I’ll just welcome you with open arms?” “I’m not expecting anything.” He stepped back, hands raised in mock surrender, but the intensity in his eyes remained. “I just wanted to see you. To know you’re okay.” “Why now?” She narrowed her eyes, suspicion creeping in. “What’s changed?” “Nothing.” He ran a hand through his hair, frustration evident. “Everything. I don’t know. I just… I needed to see you.” “Needed?” The word hung in the air, heavy with implications. “You don’t get to just waltz back into my life and act like nothing happened.” “I’m not acting like nothing happened.” He stepped closer again, his voice dropping to a whisper. “I’m here, aren’t I? I’m risking everything to be here.” “Risking everything?” She scoffed, the bitterness rising again. “You think this is some grand romantic gesture? You think I’m just going to fall into your arms because you decided to show up?” “Maybe I’m hoping for a chance to explain.” His eyes bore into hers, a mixture of desperation and longing. “To make things right.” “Right?” She shook her head, incredulous. “You can’t just erase the past, Lucien. You can’t just pretend it didn’t happen.” “I’m not pretending.” He stepped closer, his breath warm against her skin. “I’m here, Rory. I’m here because I can’t stop thinking about you.” The words hung in the air, heavy with unspoken desire. She felt her resolve wavering, the walls she had built around her heart beginning to crumble. “Lucien…” she started, but he cut her off, his voice low and urgent. “Just give me a chance. Let me explain. Please.” The plea in his voice sent a shiver down her spine, and for a moment, she was lost in the depths of his heterochromatic gaze. The world around them faded, leaving only the two of them, suspended in a moment that felt both electric and terrifying. “Fine,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “Explain.” He took a step back, the tension in the air shifting as he gathered his thoughts. “I got involved with some people I shouldn’t have. Dangerous people. I thought I could handle it, but it spiralled out of control. I didn’t want you caught in the crossfire.” “Is that why you left?” She searched his face for answers, for the truth hidden behind those carefully crafted words. “Because you were scared?” “Scared?” He laughed, a bitter sound that echoed in the small flat. “I was terrified. I still am. But it’s not just about me. It’s about you, too. I couldn’t bear the thought of you getting hurt because of my choices.” “Then why come back?” She pressed, her heart racing. “Why now?” “Because I can’t stay away.” His voice dropped to a whisper, the intensity of his gaze holding her captive. “I need you to understand that I care about you, Rory. More than I should.” The admission hung in the air, heavy with unspoken feelings. She felt her heart race, the walls she had built around her heart beginning to crumble. “Lucien…” she started, but the words caught in her throat as he stepped closer, the heat radiating from him enveloping her. “Just let me in,” he said, his voice low and urgent. “Let me show you I’m not the same man I was before.” Before she could respond, the door burst open, and a tabby cat darted in, weaving between their legs. Ptolemy meowed loudly, breaking the tension like a fragile glass shattering on the floor. “Ptolemy!” Aurora exclaimed, startled. The moment shattered, and she stepped back, her heart racing. Lucien chuckled, the tension easing slightly. “Looks like your feline friend has impeccable timing.” “Yeah, well, he’s not the only one.” She shot him a look, her heart still pounding. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” “Just a chance.” He stepped closer again, his voice low and earnest. “To prove that I can be the man you deserve.” The air crackled with unspoken words, and she felt the weight of their history pressing down on her. The attraction was still there, simmering beneath the surface, but the hurt ran deep. “Prove it,” she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. “Show me you’re not the same man who walked away.” He nodded, determination flashing in his eyes. “I will. Just give me time.” “Time?” She raised an eyebrow, crossing her arms. “You think that’s all it takes?” “It’s a start.” He stepped back, giving her space, but the intensity in his gaze remained. “I’ll show you I’m worth it.” The challenge hung in the air, and for the first time in months, she felt a flicker of hope. But the shadows of their past loomed large, and she knew the road ahead would be anything but easy. “Fine,” she said, her heart racing. “But don’t think I’ll make it easy for you.” “Wouldn’t dream of it.” He smirked, the tension easing slightly as he took a step back. “I wouldn’t want it any other way.” As the door clicked shut behind him, the weight of their shared history hung in the air, a promise of what was to come.
total_cost0.0018924

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags44
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"She scoffed again [again]"
2"He stepped back [back]"
3"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences92
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.087
87.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1575
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1575
totalAiIsms52
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count4
2
word"tension"
count7
3
word"down her spine"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count2
7
word"race"
count3
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"eyebrow"
count2
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"weight"
count3
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count2
14
word"racing"
count4
15
word"whisper"
count4
16
word"intensity"
count3
17
word"desire"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"wavering"
count1
20
word"depths"
count1
21
word"electric"
count1
22
word"shattered"
count1
23
word"pounding"
count1
24
word"simmering"
count1
25
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"unspoken"
2"tension"
3"down her spine"
4"scanning"
5"charged"
6"magnetic"
7"race"
8"echoed"
9"eyebrow"
10"silence"
11"weight"
12"etched"
13"flicker"
14"racing"
15"whisper"
16"intensity"
17"desire"
18"resolve"
19"wavering"
20"depths"
21"electric"
22"shattered"
23"pounding"
24"simmering"
25"loomed"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches9
maxInWindow7
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count6
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a shiver down"
2"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1572
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount943
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.21
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
Carter1
Moreau1
Silence1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Silence"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1572
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
71.42% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean25.77
std10.31
cv0.4
sampleLengths
058
112
240
321
438
516
625
727
841
930
1025
1112
1236
1317
1436
1514
1625
1726
1824
1937
2038
2125
2229
2331
2439
2529
2611
2721
2825
2926
3032
3123
3220
3324
3426
3513
369
3746
3810
3947
4024
4141
4211
4334
4426
4521
4623
4732
4814
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
94.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences118
ratio0.017
matches
0"The memories flooded back—late nights spent talking, laughter shared over takeout, the way his fingers had brushed against hers, igniting a fire that had burned too bright, too fast."
1"“I never said you were.” He stepped closer, his gaze intense, searching her face for something—understanding, forgiveness, or perhaps a flicker of the connection they once shared."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount946
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.0306553911205074
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007399577167019027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean13.32
std6.85
cv0.514
sampleLengths
014
131
213
312
421
519
616
75
824
914
1010
116
1217
138
1422
155
1631
1710
1815
1915
2014
2111
227
235
2418
2518
2614
273
287
2929
308
316
3218
337
3419
357
368
3716
3827
3910
409
4129
4214
4311
4423
456
4611
4720
4825
4914
60.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3983050847457627
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences71
matches
0"she breathed, the name slipping"
1"His voice was smooth, but"
2"He stepped inside, the door"
3"She crossed her arms, trying"
4"he replied, his amber and"
5"She scoffed, the bitterness rising"
6"He leaned against the doorframe,"
7"She stepped back, creating distance,"
8"He pushed off the door,"
9"She laughed, a sharp sound"
10"He raised an eyebrow, a"
11"She shook her head, incredulous"
12"He stepped forward, closing the"
13"She glared at him, her"
14"he said, his voice low,"
15"He ran a hand through"
16"She scoffed again, the bitterness"
17"He stepped closer, his gaze"
18"She took a step back,"
19"He moved closer, his voice"
ratio0.69
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences71
matches
0"The door swung open, and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably"
2"The air thickened with unspoken"
3"she breathed, the name slipping"
4"His voice was smooth, but"
5"He stepped inside, the door"
6"She crossed her arms, trying"
7"he replied, his amber and"
8"She scoffed, the bitterness rising"
9"He leaned against the doorframe,"
10"She stepped back, creating distance,"
11"He pushed off the door,"
12"She laughed, a sharp sound"
13"He raised an eyebrow, a"
14"She shook her head, incredulous"
15"He stepped forward, closing the"
16"She glared at him, her"
17"Silence hung between them, thick"
18"The memories flooded back—late nights"
19"he said, his voice low,"
ratio0.958
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Before she could respond, the"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame just right, his slicked-back platinum blond hair glinting under …"
1"He stepped inside, the door clicking shut behind him with a finality that sent a shiver down her spine."
2"The memories flooded back—late nights spent talking, laughter shared over takeout, the way his fingers had brushed against hers, igniting a fire that had burned…"
3"The air crackled with tension, and she felt the heat radiating from him, a magnetic pull that made her heart race despite herself."
4"The world around them faded, leaving only the two of them, suspended in a moment that felt both electric and terrifying."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags44
uselessAdditionCount24
matches
0"she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret"
1"She scoffed, the bitterness rising in her throat"
2"She shook, incredulous"
3"She glared, her blue eyes flashing with defiance"
4"he said, his voice low, almost pleading"
5"She scoffed again, the bitterness spilling over"
6"She took, her heart racing"
7"He moved, his voice dropping to a whisper"
8"She narrowed, suspicion creeping in"
9"He stepped, his voice dropping to a whisper"
10"She scoffed, the bitterness rising again"
11"His eyes bore, a mixture of desperation and longing"
12"She shook, incredulous"
13"He stepped, his breath warm against her skin"
14"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
15"She pressed, her heart racing"
16"His voice dropped, the intensity of his gaze holding her captive"
17"she started, but the words caught in her throat as he stepped closer, the heat radiating from him enveloping her"
18"he said, his voice low and urgent"
19"She shot, her heart still pounding"
20"He stepped, his voice low and earnest"
21"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
22"she said, her heart racing"
23"He smirked, the tension easing slightly as he took a step back"
95.65% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"He laughed (laugh)"
3"She pressed (press)"
4"Aurora exclaimed (exclaim)"
dialogueSentences92
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.239
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.109
72.6560%