| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1414 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1414 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "trembled" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "gloom" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 194 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 21 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1400 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1397 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 28 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Seer | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 16 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Petals | 3 | | Branches | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "Petals" | | 8 | "Branches" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.498 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like whispered names" | | 1 | "felt like a summons" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1400 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 26.42 | | std | 16.33 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 55 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 59 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 39 | | 49 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 257 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 194 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Light fractured into stained-glass shards—emerald, amber, and violet." | | 1 | "It fractured—her bright blue eyes stared back, then reversed, staring past her." | | 2 | "The world warped around her—colors throttled, the hush stilled into a ringing silence." | | 3 | "Tiny lights drifted above them—will-o’-the-wisps or something older." | | 4 | "Then another—Isolde’s lavender eyes glowed back, framed by silver hair." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 829 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.024125452352231604 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0024125452352231603 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 194 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 194 | | mean | 7.22 | | std | 3.74 | | cv | 0.518 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 51.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.34536082474226804 | | totalSentences | 194 | | uniqueOpeners | 67 | |
| 93.11% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "Soft, distant, and undecipherable." | | 1 | "Only the Seer could speak" | | 2 | "Then another—Isolde’s lavender eyes glowed" | | 3 | "Then it stained their skin," | | 4 | "Somewhere in the grove the" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "Their branches arched overhead and" | | 1 | "She traced the rim of" | | 2 | "She wondered whether it pulsed" | | 3 | "We’re inside now." | | 4 | "Their boots sank into a" | | 5 | "It carried the scent of" | | 6 | "They paused beneath a tangle" | | 7 | "They seemed to rearrange themselves," | | 8 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade," | | 9 | "She ran a fingertip along" | | 10 | "It hummed against her skin," | | 11 | "You’d know better." | | 12 | "She swallowed hard and tucked" | | 13 | "They emitted a pulse of" | | 14 | "She expected ripples, but the" | | 15 | "Their shadow form swelled across" | | 16 | "It fractured—her bright blue eyes" | | 17 | "She jerked back." | | 18 | "She nodded, though the sound" | | 19 | "Their glow turned from blue" |
| | ratio | 0.196 | |
| 38.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 151 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora hesitated at the threshold." | | 1 | "Their branches arched overhead and" | | 2 | "Moss draped their bark like" | | 3 | "She traced the rim of" | | 4 | "The surface felt cool, as" | | 5 | "Nyx slipped across the boundary" | | 6 | "The air around them trembled," | | 7 | "She wondered whether it pulsed" | | 8 | "The Heartstone never lay silent." | | 9 | "We’re inside now." | | 10 | "Rory, watch your step." | | 11 | "Their boots sank into a" | | 12 | "Petals glowed in twilight, though" | | 13 | "Aurora pressed her hand to" | | 14 | "The earth bore no mark" | | 15 | "These wildflowers bloom year-round, wasn’t" | | 16 | "A breeze curled through the" | | 17 | "It carried the scent of" | | 18 | "Nyx drifted ahead." | | 19 | "Lampshade shadows clung to their" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 27.93% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "If the Seer ever spoke" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Vines snaked around the trunks, their tips sprouting buds that opened to reveal pale, mothlike faces." | | 1 | "The floor pulsed beneath her feet, as though the grove itself drew breath." | | 2 | "Then it stained their skin, leaving a ring of glowing runes around their wrist." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |