| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called softly [softly]" | | 1 | "it crooned again [again]" | | 2 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 76.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1071 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1071 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "imposing" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "resolve" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "echoing" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "warmth" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "lurch" | | 19 | "echoes" | | 20 | "resonated" | | 21 | "vibrated" | | 22 | "rhythmic" | | 23 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 93.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1056 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1041 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed fixed in time" | | 1 | "something like breathing, deep and laboured" | | 2 | "as if swallowing it whole" | | 3 | "not quite right" | | 4 | "seemed absent the clearing empty except for her" | | 5 | "seemed layered with a thousand other echoes, all tangled and unresolved" | | 6 | "quite reconcile her senses" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.841 | | wordCount | 1056 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual rustle of branches or distant birdcall, but a hollow, unnatural sound" | | 1 | "not with a deliberate stride, but a slow, jerking lurch, like a puppet half-dangled from its s" | | 2 | "Not just in the shadows, but inside her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.20% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 39.11 | | std | 16.02 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 43 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "was supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | 0 | "was shifting" | | 1 | "was trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.116 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant—a small crimson gem on a silver chain—hung against her chest, faintly pulsing with an inward glow that made her fingertips tingle." | | 1 | "She’d come, thinking maybe this time she’d make sense of something—anything—beyond the constant fog of doubt that cloaked her mind." | | 2 | "Not the usual rustle of branches or distant birdcall, but a hollow, unnatural sound—something like breathing, deep and laboured." | | 3 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—just at the edge of her vision, a sway of dark shapes." | | 4 | "She caught glimpses of movement—an unnatural flicker or perhaps a trick of the eye, but something was shifting just at the perimeter of her vision." | | 5 | "A figure, motionless, standing just beyond the boundary—half-hidden behind the towering oak at the grove’s edge." | | 6 | "The figure moved—not with a deliberate stride, but a slow, jerking lurch, like a puppet half-dangled from its strings." | | 7 | "From the corner of her eye, she saw it—the figure at the boundary shift, bending in unnatural ways, limbs elongating, head tilting at an impossible angle." | | 8 | "Its eyes glinted—glowed even—small points of crimson that flickered like dying embers." | | 9 | "It was wrong—so wrong she couldn’t quite reconcile her senses." |
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| 89.43% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1056 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.052083333333333336 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014204545454545454 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12.28 | | std | 6.35 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 60.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3953488372093023 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, her skin prickled with" | | 1 | "Normally, they stood silent and" | | 2 | "Then, from nowhere, a whisper" | | 3 | "Just the faint rustle of" | | 4 | "Instead, she took a slow" | | 5 | "Somewhere deep inside her, a" |
| | ratio | 0.073 | |
| 59.02% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been told the Grove" | | 1 | "She crouched beside the ancient" | | 2 | "He’d sounded urgent, alarmed even," | | 3 | "She’d come, thinking maybe this" | | 4 | "They looked wrong tonight." | | 5 | "She froze and strained to" | | 6 | "she whispered, voice sharp with" | | 7 | "She looked around, but the" | | 8 | "She clutched the pendant tighter," | | 9 | "She spun around." | | 10 | "Her heart hammered irregularly, pushing" | | 11 | "She exhaled, seeing her breath" | | 12 | "she called softly, voice trembling" | | 13 | "Her eyes flicked to the" | | 14 | "It blinked, once, then steadied." | | 15 | "She whipped her head around." | | 16 | "She caught glimpses of movement—an" | | 17 | "She tugged it lightly, feeling" | | 18 | "She clutched it tight, trying" | | 19 | "She thought of the Fae" |
| | ratio | 0.402 | |
| 51.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter moved cautiously through" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant—a small crimson" | | 2 | "The sky above was a" | | 3 | "She'd been told the Grove" | | 4 | "She crouched beside the ancient" | | 5 | "Terrence had told her to" | | 6 | "He’d sounded urgent, alarmed even," | | 7 | "She’d come, thinking maybe this" | | 8 | "They looked wrong tonight." | | 9 | "Tonight, one of the stones" | | 10 | "Noises floated from the woods." | | 11 | "She froze and strained to" | | 12 | "she whispered, voice sharp with" | | 13 | "She looked around, but the" | | 14 | "She clutched the pendant tighter," | | 15 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 16 | "She spun around." | | 17 | "The trees remained still, shadows" | | 18 | "Her heart hammered irregularly, pushing" | | 19 | "The air grew colder, a" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant—a small crimson gem on a silver chain—hung against her chest, faintly pulsing with an inward glow that made her fingertips tingle." | | 1 | "She’d come, thinking maybe this time she’d make sense of something—anything—beyond the constant fog of doubt that cloaked her mind." | | 2 | "Her heart hammered irregularly, pushing her toward the boundary stones, her senses prickling." | | 3 | "Tall, elongated, with limbs that seemed too thin, too sharp." | | 4 | "Its silhouette flickered strangely, as if it was a shadow cast by flickering candlelight on a broken lantern." | | 5 | "A cold sweat broke out on her forehead as the whispering intensified, swirling into a chorus of voices, voices that slithered into her mind like coils of smoke." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, voice sharp with suspicion" | | 1 | "she called softly, voice trembling just enough to betray her" | | 2 | "she demanded, voice sharp but hesitant" | | 3 | "she called again, voice cracking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |