Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNYGTDH4G1YJ8ADG3NB

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Duration:
9.5s
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$0.026695
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest, the familiar green neon sign casting a soft glow on her face. The bar was dimly lit, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to whisper stories of the past. She took a deep breath, the scent of aged wood and whiskey filling her lungs, and stepped inside. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light as he polished a glass. He looked up, his hazel eyes meeting hers, and a small smile tugged at the corners of his mouth. "Rory," he greeted, his voice warm and gravelly. "It's been a while." "Hey, Si," she replied, her own smile mirroring his. "Thought I'd drop by for a drink." "Always welcome here," he said, setting the glass down and reaching for a bottle of whiskey. "The usual?" "Yeah, thanks." As Silas poured her drink, Aurora scanned the room. It was a quiet night, a few regulars scattered at the tables, lost in their own worlds. She took a seat at the bar, her eyes lingering on the hidden bookshelf door that led to the secret room. Memories of clandestine meetings and whispered conversations flooded her mind. Silas slid the glass across the bar to her. "How's life treating you?" "Same old," she replied, taking a sip. The whiskey burned pleasantly down her throat. "Delivering food, trying to keep my head above water." He nodded, his gaze thoughtful. "You always were a fighter." Before she could respond, the door swung open again, and a figure stepped inside. Aurora's heart skipped a beat as she recognized the tall, broad-shouldered man with sandy hair and piercing green eyes. It was Evan, her ex. The man she had left behind in Cardiff. Evan's eyes scanned the room, landing on her. For a moment, they both froze, the weight of unspoken words hanging heavy in the air. Then, he walked over, his steps measured and deliberate. "Rory," he said, his voice a mix of surprise and something else she couldn't quite place. "It's been a long time." "Evan," she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside. "What brings you to London?" "Work," he said, taking a seat next to her. "Got transferred here a few months ago. Didn't expect to run into you." "Small world," she said, taking another sip of her drink. Silas watched the exchange with a keen eye, his presence a comforting anchor in the storm of emotions swirling around her. "So, how have you been?" Evan asked, his tone casual but his eyes searching. "Good," she replied, meeting his gaze. "Busy. You?" "Same," he said, a hint of a smile on his lips. "Life's been... interesting." They fell into an uneasy silence, the years of separation and the pain of their past hanging between them like a ghost. Silas cleared his throat, breaking the tension. "Can I get you a drink, mate?" "Sure," Evan said, glancing at the menu. "I'll have a pint of lager." As Silas moved to pour the drink, Aurora turned to Evan. "So, what kind of work brought you here?" "Corporate law," he said, his tone almost apologetic. "Not exactly thrilling, but it pays the bills." "Sounds... stable," she said, her voice tinged with irony. He chuckled, a sound that was both familiar and foreign. "Yeah, I guess it is." Silas placed the pint in front of Evan, giving Aurora a reassuring nod before moving to attend to another customer. Evan took a sip of his beer, his eyes never leaving hers. "You look good, Rory. Different, but good." "Thanks," she said, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "You too." He leaned back, studying her. "I heard about what happened with your dad. I'm sorry." She nodded, the memory of her father's passing still a raw wound. "Thanks. It was... hard." "I can imagine," he said softly. "He was a good man." "Yeah, he was," she agreed, her voice barely above a whisper. They lapsed into silence again, the noise of the bar fading into the background. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flashing before her eyes. The good times, the laughter, the love. And the bad times, the arguments, the pain. "Do you ever think about Cardiff?" Evan asked suddenly, his voice breaking the spell. "Sometimes," she admitted. "But it's in the past. I've moved on." "Have you?" he asked, his eyes searching hers. She met his gaze, her heart pounding. "Yes, I have." He nodded, a shadow of regret passing over his face. "I guess I haven't." The admission hung in the air, heavy and unspoken. Aurora felt a pang of sympathy for him, but also a sense of relief. She had made the right choice, leaving him and the life they had built together. "I'm sorry, Evan," she said softly. "But I can't go back." "I know," he said, his voice resigned. "I just... I had to see you. To know that you're okay." "I'm okay," she assured him. "Better than okay, actually." He smiled, a genuine smile that reached his eyes. "I'm glad to hear that." They sat in silence for a while, the weight of their past slowly lifting. Aurora felt a sense of closure, a chapter of her life finally coming to an end. Silas returned, his presence a comforting reminder of the life she had built in London. "Everything alright here?" "Yeah," Aurora said, smiling at him. "Everything's fine." Evan stood, finishing his beer. "I should go. It was good seeing you, Rory." "You too, Evan," she said, standing as well. "Take care of yourself." "You too," he said, giving her one last look before turning and walking out of the bar. Aurora watched him go, a sense of peace settling over her. She turned back to Silas, who was watching her with a knowing look. "Closure?" he asked, raising an eyebrow. "Yeah," she said, smiling. "Closure." Silas nodded, a small smile playing on his lips. "Good. You deserve it." Aurora took a deep breath, feeling lighter than she had in years. She raised her glass to Silas, a silent toast to new beginnings. "To the future," she said, her voice filled with hope. "To the future," Silas echoed, clinking his glass against hers. As they drank, Aurora felt a sense of contentment wash over her. The past was behind her, and the future was full of possibilities. And for the first time in a long time, she felt ready to embrace it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"Evan asked suddenly [suddenly]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.092
77.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count2
3
word"clandestine"
count1
4
word"skipped a beat"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"comforting"
count2
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"pang"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count4
17
word"reminder"
count1
18
word"eyebrow"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"whisper"
2"scanned"
3"clandestine"
4"skipped a beat"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"measured"
8"comforting"
9"silence"
10"tension"
11"tinged"
12"tracing"
13"raced"
14"pounding"
15"pang"
16"sense of"
17"reminder"
18"eyebrow"
19"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
1"hung in the air"
83.33% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences80
matches
0"a pang of sympathy"
1"a sense of relief"
2"filled with hope"
3"d with hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1086
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount837
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Silas12
Aurora12
Evan9
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.783
windowScore0.833
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"photographs that seemed to whisper stories of the past"
1"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.921
wordCount1086
matches
0"Not exactly thrilling, but it pays the bills"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean18.41
std11.9
cv0.647
sampleLengths
062
137
212
316
418
52
657
713
823
910
1046
1133
1221
1315
1422
1510
1621
1714
188
1914
2022
2114
2213
2319
2416
259
2615
2720
2819
2913
3015
3116
3211
3311
3441
3514
3611
378
3810
3914
4038
4111
4219
439
4414
4530
4618
478
4814
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences115
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount841
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tall, broad-shouldered man"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.022592152199762187
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01070154577883472
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean9.44
std5.04
cv0.533
sampleLengths
022
122
218
318
419
58
64
79
87
916
102
112
129
1317
1421
1510
169
174
187
197
209
215
225
2314
2419
255
268
278
2816
299
3016
315
3210
335
349
3513
3610
3721
3814
396
402
4111
423
4322
447
457
467
476
4811
498
66.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.41739130434782606
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners48
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then, he walked over, his"
ratio0.013
7.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences79
matches
0"She took a deep breath,"
1"He looked up, his hazel"
2"he greeted, his voice warm"
3"she replied, her own smile"
4"he said, setting the glass"
5"It was a quiet night,"
6"She took a seat at"
7"she replied, taking a sip"
8"He nodded, his gaze thoughtful."
9"It was Evan, her ex."
10"he said, his voice a"
11"she replied, her voice steady"
12"he said, taking a seat"
13"she said, taking another sip"
14"she replied, meeting his gaze"
15"he said, a hint of"
16"They fell into an uneasy"
17"he said, his tone almost"
18"she said, her voice tinged"
19"He chuckled, a sound that"
ratio0.532
10.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences79
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
1"The bar was dimly lit,"
2"She took a deep breath,"
3"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
4"He looked up, his hazel"
5"he greeted, his voice warm"
6"she replied, her own smile"
7"he said, setting the glass"
8"It was a quiet night,"
9"She took a seat at"
10"Memories of clandestine meetings and"
11"Silas slid the glass across"
12"she replied, taking a sip"
13"The whiskey burned pleasantly down"
14"He nodded, his gaze thoughtful."
15"Aurora's heart skipped a beat"
16"It was Evan, her ex."
17"The man she had left"
18"Evan's eyes scanned the room,"
19"he said, his voice a"
ratio0.899
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Before she could respond, the"
ratio0.013
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The bar was dimly lit, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to whisper stories of the past."
1"She took a seat at the bar, her eyes lingering on the hidden bookshelf door that led to the secret room."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"he greeted, his voice warm and gravelly"
1"she replied, her own smile mirroring his"
2"she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside"
3"Evan asked, his tone casual but his eyes searching"
4"he said, a hint of a smile on his lips"
5"he said, his tone almost apologetic"
6"she said, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass"
7"she agreed, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"Evan asked suddenly, his voice breaking the spell"
9"he asked, his eyes searching hers"
10"he said, his voice resigned"
11"she said, smiling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags28
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
2"she assured (assure)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.431
leniency0.862
rawRatio0.107
effectiveRatio0.092
78.7480%