Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNYV88H0R031KFXV0VR

Run Details

Duration:
12.4s
Cost:
$0.023690
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in her kitchen, rinsing out a coffee mug, when she heard the knock on the door. She froze, soap suds clinging to her fingers, and glanced at the clock on the wall. It was a bit late for visitors. Ptolemy, lounging on the window sill, perked his ears up at the sound. The cat's curiosity mirrored hers. Wiping her hands on a dish towel, she moved towards the front door, absently patting the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Another knock, three sharp raps. Her heartbeat quickened. Maybe it was Silas, needing to borrow something again. But a whisper of intuition told her otherwise. She activated each of the three deadbolts with deliberate care, swung the door open, and there he stood. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, his imposing figure framed by the dim light from the hallway. His presence exuded the same intense, magnetic energy it always had. He looked at her with those heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—like twin embers burning with old secrets and a world-weary wisdom. His tailored charcoal suit was immaculate, naturally, and the ivory handle of his cane gleamed. "Bonsoir, Rory," he greeted, his voice smooth, cultured, with just a trace of fatigue. "Lucien," she replied, struggling to keep her composure. It had been six months since their last tense encounter at Silas' bar. She leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed, trying to steady her breathing. "What are you doing here?" Undeterred by her defensive posture, he gently shifted the cane in his hand and stepped inside, forcing her back a step. "I need to discuss something with you. Something important." With a hesitant sigh, she closed the door behind him. "You always need something. Typical Lucien." He turned to face her, a faint smile on his lips. "Typical Rory, always a sharp tongue." She moved to the tiny living room, feeling his gaze linger on the overloaded bookshelves. "So, what is it this time? Demons in the Underground? Fallen angels in Piccadilly?" His laughter echoed in the small space, rich and unguarded. "Actually, it's a bit more personal than that." "Personal, huh?" She raised an eyebrow, feeling the old hurt simmer beneath her cool exterior. "You sure you want to tread that ground?" Lucien walked over, the subtle tap of his cane on the floorboards a rhythm that had once been comforting. "Do I have much of a choice?" "I guess not," she said, resigning herself to the inevitable. She sank into the worn armchair, motioning for him to take a seat opposite her. "Start talking." He remained standing, a flicker of unease crossing his features. "It's about Evan." The name hit her like a physical blow, stirring up buried memories. "Evan?" Her voice tightened. "Why are you bringing him up?" "Because he's back in town." Lucien's gaze softened, and for a moment, she glimpsed the vulnerability he rarely showed. "And he's looking for you." Aurora felt the room close in around her. "Why would he do that? I'm done with him," she insisted, though her voice betrayed the fear lurking within. "I know you are," Lucien said, stepping closer. "But he has a stake in something I'm currently keeping from the wrong hands. I need your help to keep it that way." "Let me guess—this something is dangerous," she muttered, pinching the bridge of her nose. "Why involve me?" "Because no one else can do what you do," he replied, a hint of admiration in his tone. "You're smart, resourceful, and you know how Evan thinks." The backhanded compliment made her stomach churn. She looked up at him, searching for sincerity. "And what about us?" The question escaped her lips before she could stop it. Lucien's expression softened. "I thought about you every day, Rory. About what we could have been if things were different." "Is that supposed to make me feel better?" Her voice cracked, the hurt resurfacing. "You walked away." "It wasn't that simple," he argued, his facade slipping just a touch. "Protecting you meant distancing myself." "I never wanted protection," she shot back, rising from her seat. "I wanted you. All of you." Their faces were inches apart now, the tension between them taut like a bowstring. "And you still do," he said quietly. "I don't know, Lucien," she admitted, the words heavy. "It's been so long." He reached out, let his fingers brush against her arm ever so lightly. "Let me prove it to you. Let me make up for everything." Ptolemy mewed from the window sill, an unexpected reminder of the normalcy she sought. Aurora sighed, looking away from Lucien's intense gaze. "Can you really protect me this time? Without leaving?" He stepped closer, closing the remaining gap between them. "Yes," he whispered fiercely. "Let me prove it to you." Placing a hand on his chest, she felt his heartbeat, strong and steady. "Alright." She looked up at him, unsure but willing to try. "We'll do this. Together." His smile was a mix of relief and something deeper. "Merci, Rory." "Don't thank me yet," she warned, but there was the smallest hint of a smile tugging at her lips. "We have a lot to figure out." "But tonight," Lucien said, casting a glance around the cluttered flat, "tonight let's just have peace." Despite everything, she laughed. "In this place? You're dreaming, Frenchman." "Then let me dream," he replied, a rare, unguarded warmth in his eyes. They stood there in the dim light, the unspoken promise of old wounds beginning to heal filling the space between them. Both knowing it wouldn’t be easy, but maybe, just maybe, they could find their way back to each other.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"he whispered fiercely [fiercely]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.083
84.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"lightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"quickened"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"imposing"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"encounter"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"churn"
count1
11
word"facade"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"normalcy"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"quickened"
1"whisper"
2"imposing"
3"magnetic"
4"encounter"
5"echoed"
6"eyebrow"
7"comforting"
8"flicker"
9"stomach"
10"churn"
11"facade"
12"tension"
13"reminder"
14"normalcy"
15"warmth"
16"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences61
matches
0"a flicker of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords940
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Despite everything, she laughed."
96.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount656
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Moreau1
Lucien7
Aurora3
Placing1
Despite1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.966
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount940
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
90.23% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean24.74
std11.52
cv0.466
sampleLengths
059
122
243
363
414
538
630
716
817
929
1018
1123
1226
1327
1413
1522
1624
1727
1831
1917
2027
2129
2220
2317
2417
2517
2621
2713
2825
2931
3019
3128
3212
3326
3416
3510
3613
3740
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs121
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences88
ratio0.011
matches
0"He looked at her with those heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—like twin embers burning with old secrets and a world-weary wisdom."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount409
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same intense, magnetic energy"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.03667481662591687
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.009779951100244499
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean10.68
std5.35
cv0.501
sampleLengths
018
116
27
313
45
522
65
73
89
98
1018
1116
1211
1321
1415
1514
168
1713
1812
195
2021
219
2210
236
2411
256
2615
2714
2810
298
3015
318
3219
337
3410
3515
362
3710
383
3912
404
416
4219
435
448
4519
468
4723
4814
493
84.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5113636363636364
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners45
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Maybe it was Silas, needing"
ratio0.016
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences61
matches
0"She froze, soap suds clinging"
1"It was a bit late"
2"Her heartbeat quickened."
3"She activated each of the"
4"His presence exuded the same"
5"He looked at her with"
6"His tailored charcoal suit was"
7"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
8"she replied, struggling to keep"
9"It had been six months"
10"She leaned against the doorframe,"
11"He turned to face her,"
12"She moved to the tiny"
13"His laughter echoed in the"
14"She raised an eyebrow, feeling"
15"she said, resigning herself to"
16"She sank into the worn"
17"He remained standing, a flicker"
18"Her voice tightened"
19"she insisted, though her voice"
ratio0.607
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences61
matches
0"Aurora stood in her kitchen,"
1"She froze, soap suds clinging"
2"It was a bit late"
3"Ptolemy, lounging on the window"
4"The cat's curiosity mirrored hers."
5"Another knock, three sharp raps."
6"Her heartbeat quickened."
7"She activated each of the"
8"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
9"His presence exuded the same"
10"He looked at her with"
11"His tailored charcoal suit was"
12"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
13"she replied, struggling to keep"
14"It had been six months"
15"She leaned against the doorframe,"
16"He turned to face her,"
17"She moved to the tiny"
18"His laughter echoed in the"
19"She raised an eyebrow, feeling"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien walked over, the subtle tap of his cane on the floorboards a rhythm that had once been comforting."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he greeted, his voice smooth, cultured, with just a trace of fatigue"
1"she replied, struggling to keep her composure"
2"she insisted, though her voice betrayed the fear lurking within"
3"he replied, a hint of admiration in his tone"
4"Her voice cracked, the hurt resurfacing"
5"he argued, his facade slipping just a touch"
6"She looked up, unsure but willing to try"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she insisted (insist)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"he argued (argue)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"he whispered fiercely (whisper)"
5"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.271
leniency0.542
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.25
78.5353%