Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNZ75RG0JSGY2DYHP7T

Run Details

Duration:
32.3s
Cost:
$0.001014

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, the stale air prickling her skin. The flickering fluorescent lights cast erratic shadows across crumbling tiles, revealing graffiti tags that told stories of long-forgotten commuters. A shiver slithered up her spine as she pulled her leather jacket tighter, the worn watch on her wrist catching the light, its ticking a reminder of time passing. Quinn surveyed the scene. A body lay sprawled across the platform, eyes wide in shock, pools of crimson growing around it, soaking into the cracked concrete. Her sharp jaw clenched; this wasn't just any murder. The positioning of the body, the sheer isolation of the location—it screamed of something darker. She hadn’t seen anything like this in her long career. "Looks like someone didn't get the message about the Underground being closed," a voice interrupted her thoughts. She turned to see Dave, a colleague from the precinct. His loose-fitting shirt contrasted sharply with her military precision, and the stubble on his chin seemed like a permanent fixture. He had a way of shrugging off the world’s horrors, as if they were just another day at the office. "Funny, considering the last train ran years ago," Quinn said, kneeling by the body. Justice, as the reports would call it, lay here lifeless, but the silence conspired against them. She palmed her badge and surveyed the grisly scene. "Something feels off," she muttered, eyes narrowing. The victim didn’t belong here—not in this forsaken hole beneath Camden. Dave leaned closer, gesturing to the ground. "Maybe a simple mugging gone wrong? No cash, no phone." Quinn shot him a look. "You think he came down here for fun?" "People do weird things in London. I once found a guy in a shark costume digging for tubes." He grinned, but Quinn wasn’t in the mood for jokes. Her fingers brushed against the wallet clasped tightly in the victim’s hand. She pried it open, revealing not cash or cards, but an old photograph. A crescent moon hung above a weathered marketplace, the **Veil Market**, if she wasn’t mistaken. She could feel Dave's gaze on her, curious yet dismissive. "Just some strange fellow," Dave shrugged. "Could be a drug deal gone bad." Quinn glared at the photo, her instincts kicking in. "You think people end up dead here from simple theft?” She snapped, words slicing through the dimness. She flipped the photograph, and there it was—a small brass object tucked into another man's hand, glinting with a verdigris patina. "What's that?" Dave peered at it, his curiosity piqued. "Looks like a Compass," Quinn muttered. Her mind raced back to whispers she had overheard at the precinct, names like Shade artisans floated through her memory. She tucked the photo into her pocket. "Could be part of a larger operation. You know how notorious these markets can be," she continued, scanning. The cloaked figure emerged again and again in her thoughts, the one who had slipped past her the night before, only as a shadow behind a curtain. Was it a coincidence? "Or a coincidence, Quinn. You’re reading too much into this," Dave insisted, scratching his head. Ignoring him, she focused on her surroundings. The walls of the station felt alive, as if echoing past secrets. Dark stains marred the floor; they didn’t feel like mere blood. She inched closer, tracing patterns with her gaze, deducing connections in the chaos. "This isn't right," she whispered, mostly to herself. "Sure it’s not just remnants from some punk showing off?" Dave attempted to lighten the mood, crossing his arms. Quinn's eyes flared, and she straightened, looking Dave square in the eye. "This isn’t art made by a vandal. Look at this." She pointed at the markings on the walls, strange sigils, their meanings lost to time yet undeniably unsettling. "These are protective rites. Something—someone—wanted this place hidden, even from the dead." He frowned, brows knit. "What are you suggesting?" Quinn turned back to the body, observing the thin lines that traced along the victim's arms—these were scratches, not from a struggle but from something more deliberate. "This isn't just murder, Dave. It's a warning." "Whoa, you’re reaching." He took a step back, hands raised defensively. Quinn pointed at a corner where shadows clung heavier than the others. "Check over there. Do you see how the light barely touches that space?" Dave squinted. "The shadows are thicker. So what? It’s an abandoned station. Light doesn’t have much real estate down here." Quinn’s heart raced. “Light can reveal truths. Sometimes it’s what lurks in the corners that holds the answers.” She stepped into the dark, every step a challenge against the sensation of being watched. A chill crept closer here. A glint of metal caught her eye, half-hidden beneath debris. She knelt, heart hammering as she brushed aside a layer of dust, revealing a small brass object—the **Veil Compass**. “Quinn, don’t touch that!” Dave’s voice sliced through the air, panic creeping into his tone. She clutched it tightly, feeling the weight of its significance. “This was no ordinary crime. Whoever did this wanted to bury it deep, away from prying eyes.” “Some occult freak that got greedy?” Dave took a step closer, eyes darting between the Compass and the markings on the wall. Quinn held the Compass up, its needle quivering slightly. “No. Look. It’s pointing somewhere.” Dave scoffed. “It’s broken. Junk from some weirdos. We should call for backup and get outta here.” But Quinn pressed her lips together, instincts sharper than before. “I need to see where it leads.” She stepped carefully toward the edge of the platform, the Compass directing her deeper into the shadow. A swirling knot of anticipation formed in her gut as she glanced back at Dave. “You’re not really going to follow that lead, are you?” He frowned, hands tense at his sides. A moment passed, the thin bead of fear clinging to the air. Quinn stood resolute, feeling the weight of the night envelop her. “You can wait above ground if you’d like. I’ll find out exactly what darkness lurks down here.” Dave hesitated, then took a breath. “Fine, but I’m not leaving you alone.” As they moved forward into the swirling dark, Quinn’s heart raced, drawn toward the secrets hidden in the shadows. Something told her this would be the start of a chase for truths untold, and each step echoed her partner's memory, urging her to make sense of the chaos.
total_cost0.0010142999999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.531
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1081
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"tightly"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1081
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"raced"
count3
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"glint"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"anticipation"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"jaw clenched"
2"silence"
3"could feel"
4"glinting"
5"raced"
6"scanning"
7"echoing"
8"tracing"
9"traced"
10"chill"
11"glint"
12"weight"
13"anticipation"
14"echoed"
15"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1071
ratio0.004
matches
0"Veil Market"
1"Veil Compass"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount776
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn15
Tube1
Dave14
Justice1
Camden1
Shade1
Ignoring1
Compass4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Dave"
3"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.534
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if echoing past secrets"
13.26% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.867
wordCount1071
matches
0"not cash or cards, but an old photograph"
1"not from a struggle but from something more deliberate"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean28.95
std16.88
cv0.583
sampleLengths
063
160
267
314
425
518
617
713
828
950
1013
1147
129
1333
1449
1515
1651
1719
1852
198
2035
2111
2225
2320
2418
2549
2615
2727
2822
2914
3017
3117
3232
3317
3440
3513
3648
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences83
ratio0.084
matches
0"Her sharp jaw clenched; this wasn't just any murder."
1"The positioning of the body, the sheer isolation of the location—it screamed of something darker."
2"The victim didn’t belong here—not in this forsaken hole beneath Camden."
3"She flipped the photograph, and there it was—a small brass object tucked into another man's hand, glinting with a verdigris patina."
4"Dark stains marred the floor; they didn’t feel like mere blood."
5"Quinn turned back to the body, observing the thin lines that traced along the victim's arms—these were scratches, not from a struggle but from something more deliberate."
6"She knelt, heart hammering as she brushed aside a layer of dust, revealing a small brass object—the **Veil Compass**."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount784
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02806122448979592
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012755102040816327
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean12.9
std6.55
cv0.507
sampleLengths
015
119
229
34
422
59
615
710
817
910
1020
1120
1214
1316
149
157
1611
177
1810
195
208
2128
2212
2313
2415
2510
266
277
289
2917
3021
319
326
3320
347
3518
3627
374
3815
397
4012
4111
4213
438
4419
4512
4628
4712
484
494
71.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.43373493975903615
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her sharp jaw clenched; this"
1"She hadn’t seen anything like"
2"She turned to see Dave,"
3"His loose-fitting shirt contrasted sharply"
4"He had a way of"
5"She palmed her badge and"
6"she muttered, eyes narrowing"
7"He grinned, but Quinn wasn’t"
8"Her fingers brushed against the"
9"She pried it open, revealing"
10"She could feel Dave's gaze"
11"She snapped, words slicing through"
12"She flipped the photograph, and"
13"Her mind raced back to"
14"She tucked the photo into"
15"she continued, scanning"
16"She inched closer, tracing patterns"
17"she whispered, mostly to herself"
18"She pointed at the markings"
19"He frowned, brows knit."
ratio0.406
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences64
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The flickering fluorescent lights cast"
2"A shiver slithered up her"
3"Quinn surveyed the scene."
4"A body lay sprawled across"
5"Her sharp jaw clenched; this"
6"The positioning of the body,"
7"She hadn’t seen anything like"
8"a voice interrupted her thoughts"
9"She turned to see Dave,"
10"His loose-fitting shirt contrasted sharply"
11"He had a way of"
12"Quinn said, kneeling by the"
13"She palmed her badge and"
14"she muttered, eyes narrowing"
15"The victim didn’t belong here—not"
16"Dave leaned closer, gesturing to"
17"Quinn shot him a look."
18"He grinned, but Quinn wasn’t"
19"Her fingers brushed against the"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A shiver slithered up her spine as she pulled her leather jacket tighter, the worn watch on her wrist catching the light, its ticking a reminder of time passing…"
1"Quinn turned back to the body, observing the thin lines that traced along the victim's arms—these were scratches, not from a struggle but from something more de…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she muttered, eyes narrowing"
1"She snapped, words slicing through the dimness"
2"Dave peered, his curiosity piqued"
3"she whispered, mostly to herself"
4"He took, hands raised defensively"
5"He frowned, hands tense at his sides"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"a voice interrupted (interrupt)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"She snapped (snap)"
3"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
4"she continued (continue)"
5"Dave insisted (insist)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.875
effectiveRatio0.438
69.5478%