| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.531 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "glinting" | | 5 | "raced" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "glint" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "anticipation" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1071 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Veil Market" | | 1 | "Veil Compass" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.35% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 776 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Tube | 1 | | Dave | 14 | | Justice | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Ignoring | 1 | | Compass | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Dave" | | 3 | "Compass" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.534 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if echoing past secrets" |
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| 13.26% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.867 | | wordCount | 1071 | | matches | | 0 | "not cash or cards, but an old photograph" | | 1 | "not from a struggle but from something more deliberate" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 28.95 | | std | 16.88 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "Her sharp jaw clenched; this wasn't just any murder." | | 1 | "The positioning of the body, the sheer isolation of the location—it screamed of something darker." | | 2 | "The victim didn’t belong here—not in this forsaken hole beneath Camden." | | 3 | "She flipped the photograph, and there it was—a small brass object tucked into another man's hand, glinting with a verdigris patina." | | 4 | "Dark stains marred the floor; they didn’t feel like mere blood." | | 5 | "Quinn turned back to the body, observing the thin lines that traced along the victim's arms—these were scratches, not from a struggle but from something more deliberate." | | 6 | "She knelt, heart hammering as she brushed aside a layer of dust, revealing a small brass object—the **Veil Compass**." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 784 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.02806122448979592 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012755102040816327 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 12.9 | | std | 6.55 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 71.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.43373493975903615 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 57.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Her sharp jaw clenched; this" | | 1 | "She hadn’t seen anything like" | | 2 | "She turned to see Dave," | | 3 | "His loose-fitting shirt contrasted sharply" | | 4 | "He had a way of" | | 5 | "She palmed her badge and" | | 6 | "she muttered, eyes narrowing" | | 7 | "He grinned, but Quinn wasn’t" | | 8 | "Her fingers brushed against the" | | 9 | "She pried it open, revealing" | | 10 | "She could feel Dave's gaze" | | 11 | "She snapped, words slicing through" | | 12 | "She flipped the photograph, and" | | 13 | "Her mind raced back to" | | 14 | "She tucked the photo into" | | 15 | "she continued, scanning" | | 16 | "She inched closer, tracing patterns" | | 17 | "she whispered, mostly to herself" | | 18 | "She pointed at the markings" | | 19 | "He frowned, brows knit." |
| | ratio | 0.406 | |
| 6.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into" | | 1 | "The flickering fluorescent lights cast" | | 2 | "A shiver slithered up her" | | 3 | "Quinn surveyed the scene." | | 4 | "A body lay sprawled across" | | 5 | "Her sharp jaw clenched; this" | | 6 | "The positioning of the body," | | 7 | "She hadn’t seen anything like" | | 8 | "a voice interrupted her thoughts" | | 9 | "She turned to see Dave," | | 10 | "His loose-fitting shirt contrasted sharply" | | 11 | "He had a way of" | | 12 | "Quinn said, kneeling by the" | | 13 | "She palmed her badge and" | | 14 | "she muttered, eyes narrowing" | | 15 | "The victim didn’t belong here—not" | | 16 | "Dave leaned closer, gesturing to" | | 17 | "Quinn shot him a look." | | 18 | "He grinned, but Quinn wasn’t" | | 19 | "Her fingers brushed against the" |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A shiver slithered up her spine as she pulled her leather jacket tighter, the worn watch on her wrist catching the light, its ticking a reminder of time passing…" | | 1 | "Quinn turned back to the body, observing the thin lines that traced along the victim's arms—these were scratches, not from a struggle but from something more de…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, eyes narrowing" | | 1 | "She snapped, words slicing through the dimness" | | 2 | "Dave peered, his curiosity piqued" | | 3 | "she whispered, mostly to herself" | | 4 | "He took, hands raised defensively" | | 5 | "He frowned, hands tense at his sides" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice interrupted (interrupt)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "She snapped (snap)" | | 3 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "she continued (continue)" | | 5 | "Dave insisted (insist)" | | 6 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.875 | | effectiveRatio | 0.438 | |