Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSP07VANKJ8AWTVNXN2C

Run Details

Duration:
12.3s
Cost:
$0.000656
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The low hum of conversations filled the air, punctuated by the clink of glasses and the occasional murmur of a piano in the corner. Shadows stretched across the walls of The Raven’s Nest, where photographs of wartime London and old city maps lined the dark wood panels. The green neon sign flickered softly above the entrance, casting a pallid glow that made the whole place seem like some secret alcove from another life. Aurora Carter stepped inside, her footsteps silent on the worn stone floor. She kept her eyes low, scanning for familiar faces, unaware that all the years of distance barely changed the steady pounding of her chest. She clutched her coat tighter around her, the weight of expectation pressing down. The bar was quieter than usual, the usual crowd drowsing in their own private worlds. At the far end, Silas Blackwood was seated, hunched slightly over a glass of dark amber whiskey. His hazel eyes were fixed on something distant, the lines of his face more drawn than she remembered, sharper around the cheekbones. His grey-streaked auburn hair was tousled, as if he’d run a hand through it too many times. The silver signet ring on his right finger caught a flicker of the bar’s dim light. Rory hesitated just within the doorway before forcing her steps forward. The air was thick with the scent of oil and old leather, nostalgia and secrets clinging to every breath. She saw him glance up, recognizing her immediately. The moment their eyes met, a strange silence fell, as if the years had collided into an unspoken storm. Silas set down his glass with a gentle tap, rising slowly, his limp evident as he moved toward her. His face softened, but not enough to hide the years carved into his features. "You look… different," he said, voice gravelly but steady. She gave a faint nod, eyes flickering with memories she had tried to bury. "Same to you." He extended a hand, but she stepped in first, hesitating before settling into a brief, tense hug that seemed to stretch longer than it should. When they parted, she noticed the slight tremor in his grip. "Been a while," Silas murmured, voice low. "Too long," Rory responded, voice steady, though her hands itched to clasp her own arms. The weight of their silence pressed on her. She glimpsed the faint scar on her wrist, hidden beneath her sleeve, a remnant of childhood reckless curiosity and later, her escape from chaos. She found an empty seat beside him, and after a quiet nod, he nodded back, signaling to the bartender. Silas ordered a bourbon and a water, a ritual she’d seen before, as if trying to settle old ghosts. “So,” he finally said, taking a slow sip. "What brings you back here?" "Work." She shrugged, feeling a little hollow. "A friend mentioned you’re still running this place. Thought I’d say hello." He studied her face, the cool brightness of her eyes, the way her shoulder-length black hair framed her face. “You’ve changed,” he said softly. Her lips pressed into a thin line. “Life does that.” He flicked a look toward the wall behind her, where a faded photo captured a younger Rory, grinning with reckless abandon, arms around friends at some dusk-lit pub. The girl in the picture looked joyful, unburdened. The woman sitting beside him looked distant, guarded, her eyes holding stories she hadn’t yet shared. “Time doesn’t always forgive,” Silas said, voice low. “And some things you can’t take back.” She turned to face him fully. “Is that what you’re saying? That I should have stayed the same?” He chuckled softly, noting her defensiveness. “No, Rory. Just… that the past shapes us. Sometimes cuts deeper than we like to admit.” She looked away, fingering the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. “Maybe. Or maybe I just got tired of pretending I wasn’t running from myself.” Silas studied her, knowing the story was hiding behind her words. Her bright blue eyes, the way she carried herself with that quiet confidence, masked a well-worn sorrow. She’d always been sharp, quick to adapt, but now her edges seemed sharpened even further. “You’re not here to relive old memories,” he said softly. “Could say I’m here to make new ones,” she replied, voice sharper than intended. He nodded, understanding the undertow of her words. “You’ve come a long way from Cardiff. Not many would’ve survived what you did.” “Surviving’s all I’ve managed.” She paused, searching his face. “I heard you opened this place. Figured you’d given up the spy stuff.” He chuckled dryly. “Retired but not gone. Keeps the mind busy, I suppose.” “Like a front,” Rory guessed. He smiled gently, a flicker of pride in his hazel eyes. “Maybe. Keeps me involved without getting into too much trouble.” She looked around, the memories flooding thick. She wondered if he sensed the ghosts that haunted her, or if she’d built these walls so high she was lonely even in a crowd. Silas leaned in slightly, his voice dropping. “You look different, Rory. More than just the scars. There’s something else behind those eyes now.” She didn’t respond immediately. Instead, she took a long breath, as if to steady herself. When she finally spoke, it was quiet, deliberate. “I’ve learned to protect myself better since we last met. That’s all.” He studied her without judgement. “That’s what we all do, in the end.” The bartender placed their drinks on the table, and Rory reached out, taking the glass of water. The whiskey sat untouched for a moment, a silent witness to their exchanged truths. “You ever think about going back?” Silas asked suddenly. She looked at him sharply. “Back where?” He shrugged, gaze drifting towards the photographs on the wall, as if remembering a different life. “To the old days. Before all this.” His hand swept vaguely at the bar, the city beyond. She hesitated, the muscles in her jaw tightening. “I don’t think I belong there anymore.” He nodded, slowly, as if weighing her words. “Good. Maybe that’s for the best.” For a moment, neither spoke. The distant hum of the bar rebounded softly around them, thick with unspoken regrets and silent acknowledgements. Outside, the London night pressed on in its endless murmur, but inside, the space between them held a different kind of quiet — full of stories still waiting to be told.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
3"Silas asked suddenly [suddenly]"
4"His hand swept vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.323
43.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"softly"
count5
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"gently"
4"suddenly"
5"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"footsteps"
2"scanning"
3"familiar"
4"pounding"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"silence"
8"unspoken"
9"flicked"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"The weight of their silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences67
matches
0"a flicker of pride"
1"was lonely"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1066
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount845
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Carter1
Silas8
Blackwood1
Rory5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"hug that seemed to stretch longer than it should"
1"as if trying to settle old ghosts"
2"seemed sharpened even further"
3"as if remembering a different life"
4"as if weighing her words"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1066
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean27.33
std18.15
cv0.664
sampleLengths
073
164
272
357
433
59
617
736
87
947
1038
1113
1219
1324
1410
1552
1615
1718
1822
1925
2043
2110
2214
2322
2422
2513
265
2721
2832
2923
3035
3113
3231
339
347
3533
3615
3714
3853
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"were fixed"
1"was tousled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was hiding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences85
ratio0.012
matches
0"Outside, the London night pressed on in its endless murmur, but inside, the space between them held a different kind of quiet — full of stories still waiting to be told."
89.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount849
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04004711425206125
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.02591283863368669
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean12.54
std6.46
cv0.515
sampleLengths
024
123
226
312
424
513
615
717
822
917
1016
1111
1219
138
1419
1519
1614
179
1814
193
2025
2111
227
2315
248
2524
2619
2719
288
295
307
3112
3219
335
347
353
3628
378
3816
398
407
416
4212
436
4416
4511
4614
4711
4817
4915
65.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43529411764705883
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners37
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Instead, she took a long"
ratio0.015
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences66
matches
0"She kept her eyes low,"
1"She clutched her coat tighter"
2"His hazel eyes were fixed"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
4"She saw him glance up,"
5"His face softened, but not"
6"he said, voice gravelly but"
7"She gave a faint nod,"
8"He extended a hand, but"
9"She glimpsed the faint scar"
10"She found an empty seat"
11"he finally said, taking a"
12"She shrugged, feeling a little"
13"He studied her face, the"
14"he said softly"
15"Her lips pressed into a"
16"He flicked a look toward"
17"She turned to face him"
18"He chuckled softly, noting her"
19"She looked away, fingering the"
ratio0.561
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences66
matches
0"The low hum of conversations"
1"Shadows stretched across the walls"
2"The green neon sign flickered"
3"Aurora Carter stepped inside, her"
4"She kept her eyes low,"
5"She clutched her coat tighter"
6"The bar was quieter than"
7"His hazel eyes were fixed"
8"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
9"The silver signet ring on"
10"Rory hesitated just within the"
11"The air was thick with"
12"She saw him glance up,"
13"The moment their eyes met,"
14"Silas set down his glass"
15"His face softened, but not"
16"he said, voice gravelly but"
17"She gave a faint nod,"
18"He extended a hand, but"
19"Silas murmured, voice low"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered softly above the entrance, casting a pallid glow that made the whole place seem like some secret alcove from another life."
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was tousled, as if he’d run a hand through it too many times."
2"He extended a hand, but she stepped in first, hesitating before settling into a brief, tense hug that seemed to stretch longer than it should."
3"He shrugged, gaze drifting towards the photographs on the wall, as if remembering a different life."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice gravelly but steady"
1"Silas murmured, voice low"
2"Silas said, voice low"
3"she replied, voice sharper than intended"
53.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory responded (respond)"
2"Rory guessed (guess)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.194
68.9768%