Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSP0WHSQEN5YF01ZB770

Run Details

Duration:
22.9s
Cost:
$0.015780
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing Aurora Carter standing on the threshold of Eva's flat. Her bright blue eyes met the mismatched gaze of Lucien Moreau, who stood in the dimly lit hallway, his silhouette framed by the flickering light of the stairwell. The air between them crackled with unspoken tension, a tapestry woven from threads of past encounters and unresolved emotions. "Rory," Lucien's voice was smooth, like velvet draped over steel. He leaned casually on his ivory-handled cane, the blade within a silent reminder of his dual nature. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steady, though her heart raced beneath her calm exterior. She stepped aside, allowing him entry into the cramped flat. The scent of curry from the restaurant below mingled with the musty aroma of old books and parchment. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched from his perch atop a stack of leather-bound tomes, his green eyes narrowing as Lucien entered. The cat's tail flicked, a silent judge of the unexpected visitor. Lucien's gaze swept the room, taking in the cluttered chaos of Eva's research. "Still living above a curry house, I see." "Some things never change," Rory replied, closing the door behind him. The three deadbolts clicked into place, a fortress against the world outside. He turned to face her, his heterochromatic eyes searching hers. "I didn't expect to find you here." "Eva's out of town," Rory explained, crossing her arms. "I'm just keeping an eye on things." "Convenient," Lucien remarked, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Or perhaps fate." "Fate's never been kind to us," she countered, her voice tinged with a bitterness that surprised even her. Memories of their last encounter surfaced, a whirlwind of passion and pain that had left them both scarred. Lucien's expression softened, the mask of the suave information broker slipping for a moment. "I never meant to hurt you, Rory." "Didn't you?" Her words were sharp, a defensive shield against the vulnerability that threatened to surface. "You walked away." "I had my reasons," he said, his tone earnest. "Reasons I couldn't explain then." "And now?" she challenged, her eyes locked onto his, daring him to reveal the truth. He hesitated, the weight of his secrets pressing down on him. "Now, I find myself here, standing in front of you, wondering if it's too late to make amends." Rory's heart ached at the sincerity in his voice, but the wounds of the past were not so easily healed. "Why now, Lucien? Why after all this time?" "Because I can't stop thinking about you," he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper. "Every time I close my eyes, it's your face I see." The confession hung in the air between them, a fragile bridge over the chasm of their shared history. Rory's resolve wavered, the walls she had built around her heart beginning to crumble. "Lucien..." she began, but the words faltered, caught in the tangle of her emotions. He took a step closer, the distance between them shrinking. "I know I don't deserve your forgiveness, but I'm asking for a chance. A chance to prove that I've changed." Rory's gaze dropped to the floor, her mind a whirlwind of conflicting thoughts. She had spent so long trying to forget him, to move on from the shadow he had cast over her life. Yet here he was, standing before her, offering a glimmer of hope amidst the darkness. "How do I know you won't disappear again?" she asked, her voice laced with uncertainty. "You don't," Lucien replied, his honesty disarming. "But I promise you this: I will do everything in my power to stay." The sincerity in his eyes was undeniable, a beacon of truth in a world of deception. Rory felt the pull of his words, the magnetic force that had drawn them together time and again. "You're asking a lot," she said, her voice softening. "I know," he acknowledged, his gaze unwavering. "But I'm willing to fight for it. For us." The room seemed to shrink around them, the clutter and chaos fading into the background as they stood on the precipice of something new. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, a drumbeat of possibility and fear. "Alright," she said finally, her voice steady. "One chance, Lucien. That's all you get." A smile broke across his face, genuine and warm, a rare glimpse of the man beneath the polished exterior. "Thank you, Rory." She nodded, a tentative smile tugging at her lips. "Don't make me regret it." "I won't," he promised, the weight of his words a solemn vow. Ptolemy leapt down from his perch, weaving between their legs with a soft purr, as if offering his own form of approval. Rory reached down to scratch behind the cat's ears, her touch gentle and familiar. Lucien watched her, his heart swelling with a mixture of relief and hope. He had been given a second chance, a rare gift in a world where such opportunities were few and far between. "Tea?" Rory offered, breaking the silence that had settled over them. "Tea sounds perfect," Lucien agreed, his voice light with newfound optimism. As Rory moved to the small kitchenette, Lucien took a seat on the worn sofa, the springs creaking beneath his weight. He watched her with a quiet admiration, the simple act of making tea a balm to his weary soul. The kettle whistled, steam rising in a gentle plume. Rory poured the hot water over the tea leaves, the aroma filling the room with a comforting warmth. She handed him a mug, their fingers brushing in a fleeting touch that sent a shiver down her spine. Lucien cradled the mug in his hands, the heat seeping into his skin. "To new beginnings," he toasted, raising his mug in a gesture of hope. "To new beginnings," Rory echoed, clinking her mug against his. They sipped their tea in companionable silence, the past a shadow that lingered but no longer defined them. In that moment, they were simply two people, bound by a shared history and the promise of what might be. The future stretched out before them, uncertain and full of possibility. But for now, they had each other, and that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.541
leniency1
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.05
95.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1036
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1036
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"unspoken"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"encounter"
count1
9
word"weight"
count3
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count1
13
word"amidst"
count1
14
word"beacon"
count1
15
word"magnetic"
count1
16
word"unwavering"
count1
17
word"familiar"
count1
18
word"silence"
count2
19
word"perfect"
count1
20
word"newfound"
count1
21
word"comforting"
count1
22
word"warmth"
count1
23
word"fleeting"
count1
24
word"down her spine"
count1
25
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"unspoken"
1"tension"
2"tapestry"
3"velvet"
4"reminder"
5"raced"
6"flicked"
7"tinged"
8"encounter"
9"weight"
10"whisper"
11"resolve"
12"wavered"
13"amidst"
14"beacon"
15"magnetic"
16"unwavering"
17"familiar"
18"silence"
19"perfect"
20"newfound"
21"comforting"
22"warmth"
23"fleeting"
24"down her spine"
25"echoed"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
4
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"the weight of his words"
2"hung in the air"
3"sent a shiver down"
4"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1034
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount837
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Eva2
Lucien11
Moreau1
Memories1
Ptolemy2
Rory12
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.783
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if offering his own form of approval"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1034
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
90.93% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.62
std11.53
cv0.468
sampleLengths
061
127
242
332
421
523
617
716
815
936
1021
1119
1214
1315
1429
1528
1626
1732
1814
1930
2049
2115
2221
2334
249
2516
2636
2714
2822
2914
3012
3136
3234
3311
3411
3540
3627
3732
3813
3910
4038
4122
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was, standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences78
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount839
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01907032181168057
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007151370679380214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
97.79% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.26
std5.23
cv0.394
sampleLengths
014
128
219
310
417
514
610
718
821
911
1013
118
1211
1312
1410
157
169
177
1812
193
2018
2118
2214
237
2416
253
269
275
2815
2911
3018
3120
328
3315
3411
3518
3614
3714
3810
3920
4013
4121
4215
4315
447
4514
4616
4718
489
497
74.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes met"
1"He leaned casually on his"
2"she replied, her voice steady,"
3"She stepped aside, allowing him"
4"He turned to face her,"
5"she countered, her voice tinged"
6"Her words were sharp, a"
7"he said, his tone earnest"
8"she challenged, her eyes locked"
9"He hesitated, the weight of"
10"he admitted, his voice barely"
11"she began, but the words"
12"He took a step closer,"
13"She had spent so long"
14"she asked, her voice laced"
15"she said, her voice softening"
16"he acknowledged, his gaze unwavering"
17"she said finally, her voice"
18"She nodded, a tentative smile"
19"he promised, the weight of"
ratio0.403
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences62
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Her bright blue eyes met"
2"The air between them crackled"
3"Lucien's voice was smooth, like"
4"He leaned casually on his"
5"she replied, her voice steady,"
6"She stepped aside, allowing him"
7"The scent of curry from"
8"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched"
9"The cat's tail flicked, a"
10"Lucien's gaze swept the room,"
11"Rory replied, closing the door"
12"The three deadbolts clicked into"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"Rory explained, crossing her arms"
15"Lucien remarked, a hint of"
16"she countered, her voice tinged"
17"Memories of their last encounter"
18"Lucien's expression softened, the mask"
19"Her words were sharp, a"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes met the mismatched gaze of Lucien Moreau, who stood in the dimly lit hallway, his silhouette framed by the flickering light of the stairwel…"
1"Memories of their last encounter surfaced, a whirlwind of passion and pain that had left them both scarred."
2"Ptolemy leapt down from his perch, weaving between their legs with a soft purr, as if offering his own form of approval."
3"She handed him a mug, their fingers brushing in a fleeting touch that sent a shiver down her spine."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Lucien remarked, a hint of a smile playing on his lips"
1"he said, his tone earnest"
2"he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper"
3"she began, but the words faltered, caught in the tangle of her emotions"
4"Lucien replied, his honesty disarming"
5"she said, her voice softening"
6"he acknowledged, his gaze unwavering"
7"she said finally, her voice steady"
8"he promised, the weight of his words a solemn vow"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory explained (explain)"
1"she challenged (challenge)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
3"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
4"he promised (promise)"
5"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.351
leniency0.703
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.324
72.1493%